Zephyr - Tempest Ranger

[alleria_249]

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• HERO MODEL
• HERO SKILLS
• STORY AND INTRODUCTION
• SOUNDS

ZEPHYRUS
TEMPEST RANGER

PLEASE GIVE ME THE PROPER ICON. Zephyrus Tempest Ranger

STATS	ADVANCE STATISTICS
Strength = 15+2.5 Agility = 17+1.4 Intelligence=22+2.9	Affiliation: Sentinel Attack Animation: 0.55 / 0 Damage: 44-56 Casting Animation: 0.3 / 0.5 Armor: 1.3 Base Attack Time: 1.7 Movespeed: 300 Missile Speed: 1125 Attack Range: 600 Sight Range: 1800 / 800

• FIRST SKILL
• SECOND SKILL
• THIRD SKILL
• ULTIMATE SKILL

SHOWER ARROW

Ability Type: Active

Targeting Type: Point

Hot key: W

Zephyrus imbues herself with the power of wind making her fire 5 arrows at the speed of light. All enemy hit will deals 75 damage per unit.

Level	Mana Cost	Cooldown	Casting range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	150	18 seconds	600	110 (Starting AoE) / 700 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE)	2 seconds	Enemy Unit	Shoots 5 arrows twice.
2	170	18 seconds	600	110 (Starting AoE) / 700 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE)	3 seconds	Enemy Unit	Shoots 5 arrows 3 times
3	190	18 seconds	600	110 (Starting AoE) / 700 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE)	4 seconds	Enemy Unit	Shoots 5 arrows 4 times
4	200	18 seconds	600	110 (Starting AoE) / 700 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE)	5 seconds	Enemy Unit	Shoots 5 arrows 5 times

TORNADO WALL

Ability Type: Active

Targeting Type: Point

Hot key: E

Generates a wall of 5 tornadoes. The devastating wind emanating from it greatly slows nearby enemies and deals damage each second for up to 12 seconds. The tornadoes can be attack by Zephyrus, if she attack the tornado it will move in a straight line within 600 range and deals 100 damage to the enemy hit plus the damage per second. Also if Zephyrus use shower arrow the five tornadoes will move and deals 150 damage to all enemy hit plus the damage per second

Level	Mana Cost	Cooldown	Casting range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	130	20 seconds	600	120	12 secs.	Enemy units	5 damage per second and slows movement speed by 20% and attack speed by 10%.
2	150	20 seconds	600	120	12 secs.	Enemy units	10 damage per second and slows movement speed by 20% and attack speed by 10%.
3	170	20 seconds	600	120	12 secs.	Enemy units	20 damage per second and slows movement speed by 20% and attack speed by 10%.
4	200	20 seconds	600	120	12 secs.	Enemy units	30 damage per second and slows movement speed by 20% and attack speed by 10%.

Note:
• Damage type: magical

VANISHING WIND

Ability Type: Passive

Targeting Type: N/A

Hot key: K

Rangers are most fearsome at night and with the power of wind, she herself will become part of the wind making her invisible and all her skill become invisible at night and with her power of wind the arrows become sharper and the tornadoes become bigger making all her skills damage increase.

Level	Mana Cost	Cooldown	Casting range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	5 seconds fade time, increase 7 damage per unit in shower arrow, increase 5 damage per second in tornado wall and increase 25 damage in tornado shield.
2	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	3 seconds fade time, increase 13 damage per unit in shower arrow, increase 10 damage per second in tornado wall and increase 50 damage in tornado shield.
3	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	1 second fade time, increase 19 damage per unit in shower arrow, increase 15 damage per second in tornado wall and increase 75 damage in tornado shield.
4	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	no more fade time even if she cast a spell or attack, increase 25 damage per unit in shower arrow, increase 20 damage per second in tornado wall and increase 100 damage in tornado shield.

TORNADO SHIELD

Ability Type: Active

Targeting Type: Instant

Hot key: D

Summon tornadoes that Zephyr can control. The summoned tornadoes will be circling around Zephyr making their attacks bounce back to them.

Level	Mana Cost	Cooldown	Casting range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	260	100 seconds	N/A	N/A	Infinite	Enemy unit	Summon 1(*2) tornadoes that will be circling around Zephyr.
2	350	100 seconds	N/A	N/A	Infinite	Enemy unit	Summon 2(*3) tornadoes that will be circling around Zephyr.
3	500	100 seconds	N/A	N/A	Infinite	Enemy unit	Summon 3(*5) tornadoes that will be circling around Zephyr.

Notes:
> 1 tornado is equal to 10% damage deduction that Zephyr will take and it will be bounce back to the enemy that attack him
> Attack whose damage type is magical is not affected by this skill.
> The tornadoes will be gone only when used or when Zephyr dies.


RELEASE TORNADO

Ability Type: Active

Targeting Type: Point

Hot key: R

The tornado can be release to damage enemy unit.

Mana Cost	Cooldown	Casting range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
0	0 seconds	1200	N/A	N/A	Enemy units	Deals 400 damage to enemy unit [1(*2) tornado/es can be hit per unit.]

Note:

>Can be improved by Aghanim's Scepter (* shows the improved values).

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[E02K]

Originally Posted by alleria_249

• 
• 

• HERO MODEL
• HERO SKILLS
• STORY AND INTRODUCTION
• SOUNDS
• 
  

ZEPHYR
TEMPEST RANGER

• FIRST SKILL
• SECOND SKILL
• THIRD SKILL
• ULTIMATE SKILL
• 
  

SHOWER ARROW

WIND ARROW

Note:
• Damage type: magical
• Slows movement speed by 30% and attack speed by 20%.
• The one in front of the enemy targeted will not take damage.

KEEN EYE

TORNADO SHIELD

Notes:
> 1 tornado is equal to 10% damage deduction that Zephyr will take and it will be bounce back to the enemy that attack him
> Attack whose damage type is magical is not affected by this skill.
> The tornadoes will be gone only when used or when Zephyr dies.


RELEASE TORNADO

Note:

>Can be improved by Aghanim's Scepter (* shows the improved values).

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Fixed Icons

[God of Death]

Icons are still ugly as shit with that pure green.

[E02K]

/\wana tint them?

[alleria_249]

Originally Posted by ShadowRo

/\wana tint them?

i tint because i want them to be color green and what happen to them.

do you have better tint site?

also can you please give me the proper icon for my hero.

[E02K]

/\also i fixed borders

[alleria_249]

thank you but god of death is right. even if you fixed the border it is still ugly so i change it but thanks anyway.

[E02K]

also where did you find the first 2 icons?

[alleria_249]

Originally Posted by ShadowRo

also where did you find the first 2 icons?

google. i just search it there.

[cairnebloodhoof]

please make it very light, like enchantress' Natures Attendants.

[alleria_249]

Originally Posted by cairnebloodhoof

please make it very light, like enchantress' natures attendants.

where? Which? What?

[V_N_C]

Second skill is like WR powershot and she is kinda vr like WR what is her story "doughter of Alleria" or "pupil of Alleria" .Her ulty... vr imba 500 dmg 1st rank with deff efect not to mention upper rank can hit with 2 tornados 1 target, that mean 1000 dmg mb 2 rank... Lina's ulty don't do such dmg 2nd rank.

[Wrooks]

Technically the hero your suggesting is already in dota theme wise. Which Windrunner is our semi-wind hero.

Give me more wind spells. The ultimate shouldn't be the only wind based spell on the hero.

the first spell is different but what does it have to do with wind.
the second skill is on windrunner (what does it have to do with wind)
The third spell is on dwarven sniper (what does it have to do with wind)

About the first skill - This is the only unique skill you have (and its more like medusa's split arrows) but what I will say is that its overpowered.

Maybe have it build up like Level 1 it shoots five arrows twice level 2 shoots five arrows three times. Level 3 shoots five arrows four times, Level 4 shoots arrows five times.

Lastly, about this skill is that well maybe it should shoot wind that deals harm to an enemy.

Lastly give her a healing spell, like water, wind is both destructive and soothing

for example the units that are blue are healed and the units that are red are not healed but both are allied units.

Lastly can you use a better model like harpy, dragonhawkrider or shandris, etc.

[MassBalance]

Lets see first nuke does 500 damage, the second skill does 300 and the ult can potentially do 1000 damage. so basically this hero can do 1800 damage to 1 unit. GGGGGG IMBA. nerf everything and come back with something reasonable.

[alleria_249]

Second skill is like WR powershot and she is kinda vr like WR what is her story "doughter of Alleria" or "pupil of Alleria"

i don't know i just saw it in the google and i think i can make it a wind hero because he looks like a wind hero.

vr imba 500 dmg 1st rank with deff efect not to mention upper rank can hit with 2 tornados 1 target, that mean 1000 dmg mb 2 rank... Lina's ulty don't do such dmg 2nd rank.

no, no, no 1st rank is to summon 1 tornadoes 2nd rank is to summon 2 tornadoes and 3rd rank is to summon 3 tornadoes and all rank and all rank only can only hit 1 tornado per unit and if you bought aghanim's scepter that will improve his ulti and summon more tornadoes and you can now hit 2 tornadoes in one target.

Technically the hero your suggesting is already in dota theme wise. Which Windrunner is our semi-wind hero.

Give me more wind spells. The ultimate shouldn't be the only wind based spell on the hero.

the first spell is different but what does it have to do with wind.
the second skill is on windrunner (what does it have to do with wind)
The third spell is on dwarven sniper (what does it have to do with wind)

okay i guess you were right i should think something to make my skill wind base.

About the first skill - This is the only unique skill you have (and its more like medusa's split arrows) but what I will say is that its overpowered.

Maybe have it build up like Level 1 it shoots five arrows twice level 2 shoots five arrows three times. Level 3 shoots five arrows four times, Level 4 shoots arrows five times.

Lastly, about this skill is that well maybe it should shoot wind that deals harm to an enemy.

i will edit it as soon as i think of something about my skill.
and also split shoot is sooo very not like split shoot.

i agree that wind is really soothing but if you combine it with your weapon that make this hero harmful and also archers or rangers are no healers.

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Lastly can you use a better model like harpy, dragonhawkrider or shandris, etc.

no, no, no, no

[NoThlnG]

Last warning. Do not do multiple posts. Use Edit instead.

Also, you can multiquote by using the "+ button beside the Quote button

[Wrooks]

Aside from the numbers of your entire suggestion your third skill needs changing. Its like a bad version of synergy and witchcraft. As if you put it in to just take up space. I like your second skill and your first The other to I am not to fond of - either way its better than with what you started with

[alleria_249]

Originally Posted by wrooks

aside from the numbers of your entire suggestion your third skill needs changing. Its like a bad version of synergy and witchcraft. As if you put it in to just take up space. I like your second skill and your first the other to i am not to fond of - either way its better than with what you started with

how about i remove the 3rd skill second effect that enhances all my skill and add some effects.
Okay about the ulti i guess i should change it. I will contact you again if i'm finished

[royalty9495]

FINALLY! The skills are *slightly okay, but the "MANA COST" is too high, please re-balance it.

[MassBalance]

Aight i re-reviewed this hero, but its still way far too strong. Over 700 damage in an aoe, for the first skill is far too strong. nerf it down to maybe 350 damage total or he is gonna be far too strong.
The second skill is ok.
The third skill is just forced synergy.
The last skill is far far too strong nerf the damage a lot.