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Old 06-17-2011, 02:44 AM   #1
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Default A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Lycan!



Lycanthrope
Banehallow


Background Story : Banehallow is an avatar of bestial fury created by the scourge. For years he has dwelled in the dark forests of the world, hunting those that are wander therein. Now he is called to aid his masters. He revels in blood and battle, using his wolfish persona to draw the feral beasts to his side and imbue them with his flesh-shredding strength. The story of werewolves are never fake, everytime Banehallow releases a terrible curse on any innocent beings, the next full moon will curve the blood of the unfortunate one, transforming them into werewolves which are only commanded by the Lycanthrope himself. He is unnaturally quick and agile. Some said Lycanthrope was cursed by some sort of demonic magic that are so powerful even a blazing noon can be instantly turn into full moon, transforming him into a giant wolf which granted more durability and the speed to gouge and maim with near impunity.




Type: Active
Targeting: Self(Instant)
Hotkey: E
Banehallow splits his own essence into 2 equal strength wolves which are prohibited from using item but do not share cooldown on their spells. If any of them die, Banehallow will return to its Eredar form with only 60% current hp of the living wolf and takes its position. The wolves are chained by a deadly curse which prohibited them from leaving each other more than 1000 range.


 ManaCooldownRangeAoEDurationEffects
15040sec--Until 1 of them die / Rebond / Last 30sec
50% current HP/mana is split between 2 wolf.
Each wolf has 13-18 CHAOS attack.
Each wolf has 2hp/1mp regen per sec and 320ms.
25040sec--Until 1 of them die / Rebond / Last 40sec
60% current HP/mana is split between 2 wolf.
Each wolf has 23-28 CHAOS attack.
Each wolf has 4hp/2mp regen per sec and 340ms.
35040sec--Until 1 of them die / Rebond / Last 50sec
70% current HP/mana is split between 2 wolf.
Each wolf has 33-38 CHAOS attack.
Each wolf has 6hp/3mp regen per sec and 360ms.
45040sec--Until 1 of them die / Rebond / Last 60sec
80% current HP/mana is split between 2 wolf.
Each wolf has 43-48 CHAOS attack.
Each wolf has 8hp/4mp regen per sec and 380ms.
  • Lycanthrope can choose to rebond its essence if and only if 2 wolves are close to each other (within 400aoe at least).
  • If they rebond, HP is restore with the ratio of 1:1.
  • If 2 wolves die together, so does the Lycanthrope himself.
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Old 06-17-2011, 06:02 AM   #2
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

Time to review!

Notice : This is somehow complicated but once you understand it's actually synergy which each other very well and themetically fit better =)
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Old 06-17-2011, 07:40 AM   #3
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

T-D for reviving as werewolf :P
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Old 06-17-2011, 07:48 AM   #4
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

you gave him another imba escape mech: Cast wolves, run with one of them, by the time enemy kills the first, the second is far far away in some woods, farming
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Old 06-17-2011, 09:00 AM   #5
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

T-Down, I like Lycan as he is now. oh wai-
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Old 06-17-2011, 09:14 AM   #6
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

Shouldn't you give more stats about the reviving werewolves?

So you actually limit his jungle, scouting, and partially affect pushing capabilities. Also
Each wolf has 8hp/4mp regen per sec and 380ms.
I think that such regen considering the skill has no duration, just the condition to stay alive, it is a bit overpowered. Also, Lycan was VERY dependant on his ultimate, which is the reason he was given 40 seconds cooldown on it. Either reduce the cooldown (not to 40 seconds of course since it will be overpowered as hell with the new buff), or increase the duration.

T-null for me. IMO it needs some balance.
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Old 06-17-2011, 09:35 AM   #7
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

T-d for 1st skill IMO don like it if he splits into 2 wolves ... Epic panda style
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Old 06-17-2011, 10:27 AM   #8
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

T-null, I think the current one is more balanced than this

The First is quite a good concept as an improvised escape mech, let's say that you're being ganked
to do:
1. use 1st skill
2. split the two wolves into different path
3. if either one dies, you'll replace the living one

Epic Puck Illusion Orb-like skill
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Old 06-17-2011, 11:24 AM   #9
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

Too imba, nerf the numbers.
Or even better remake it into Vampire and suggest it in suggestion forums.
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Old 06-17-2011, 12:38 PM   #10
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

T-down on everything

Yes i read everything
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Old 06-17-2011, 12:38 PM   #11
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

This is actually rather interesting!!
Would turn a mediocre summon/transformer hero into something much more fun to play!!

People just can't manage to think out of the box, sure he'll gain a nifty escape mech, but that can be balanced in another region like stats..

I do have a great idea for though!
In Lycan lore, people bitten by a werewolf don't die and then become a werewolf, they become werewolves while still very much alive.
So I suggest you make the Curse work on living creeps: any creeps afflicted with the curse transform into werewolves during the full moon.
After its duration, they simply transform back to normal creeps!!

Also, rename Shapeshift to ''Full Moon'' would be great IMO!!

Massive t-up on concept!!
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Old 06-17-2011, 12:48 PM   #12
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

the only thing I liked was the reviving as wolves thing, but T-D anyways.

seriously, supports have been buffed like 20 times already, while these unplayable heroes have always been nerfed.
now you want to change one fun and easy hero into something complicated just for the sake of it?
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Old 06-17-2011, 01:56 PM   #13
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

First Skill is uncodable.

There's no way to accurately get a units base damage in DotA, so there's no way to know what the wolves attack damage should be set to.
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Old 06-17-2011, 03:39 PM   #14
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

interesting as a concept, numbers need reworking and in light of the comment above the first skill need to be changed entirely
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Old 06-17-2011, 04:14 PM   #15
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

The ressurection as werewolf theme is not bad...
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Old 06-17-2011, 05:12 PM   #16
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

Essence Split - T-down!
This skill doesn't fit him in any possible way actually (when did you see a werewolf that splits himself in two, it also has anti-synergy with the ultimate).

Howl - T-down!
Nukes are not his stuff.
He is physical DPS hero, not nuker.
Also, this skill reminds me too much of Whirling Axes (melee).
Only different part (except numbers) is that it has synergy with other wolves.

Feral Curse - This skill is OK, T-null.
I would like if something like this replaces his current 1st skill, only that it's active.
For example, name skill Infection Bite (or something like that), make it deal some physical damage and maim, but if target dies while under the effect of that skill, it will actually turn into a werewolf.
Werewolves will not have duration, but he has only a limited number of them he can control.

Shapeshift - T-up!

Overall, it's T-down.
I just think that he should get more werewolf-like skill to replace his current 1st skill and that's that (I think that Infection Bite would be a good one).
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Old 06-17-2011, 05:15 PM   #17
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How will Essence split interact with exp gain?
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Old 06-17-2011, 06:15 PM   #18
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Needs nerf. T-up on concept.
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Old 06-18-2011, 01:21 AM   #19
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

change first skill, uncodable as snow said, t-null, bit i love the synergy <3
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Old 06-18-2011, 01:56 AM   #20
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Default Re: A new era for werewolf has come! Show them, Ly

I thnk it is better for Lycanthrope have no summoning at all. Do you ever see on movies or storybook a werewolf summoning wolves? Even in Harry potter you will not find that.

So, after reviewing yours, i think it i better to remove the summoning.
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