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Old 01-12-2012, 07:43 AM   #1
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Default [INT SCOURGE] Unknown Ghost: Edited#2


Ghost
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Normal Form Hollow Form (credit)
Ghost
Unknown

Background Story: Unknown yet

Strength - 20+ [2]
Agility - 20+ [2]
Intelligence - 20+ [2]


Affiliation:Scourge
Damage:46-56
Armor:2
Movespeed:300
Starting HP/MP:404/404
Attack Range:600
MoveStopHold PositionAttack
PatrolAttribute bonusHero Abilities
Hollow FormDimSoul StonePossess

Hollow Form - (active)
____________________The Unknown transforms into hollow form granting no collision and slows all enemy units in an area around her.

______.________._______.___._______.__________________________.
 ManaCooldownRangeAoEDurationEffects
110020-150/1501040%/40% Move Speed Reduction
215020-150/3001040%/20% Move Speed Reduction
320020-225/4501040%/20% Move Speed Reduction
425020-300/6001040%/20% Move Speed Reduction
Notes:
  • Goes through Cliffs/Trees/Units
  • Move Speed reduction depends on your distance from Unkown
  • transforms into this

Dim - (Active)
____________________After activating, Unknown will summon Darkness that reduce the vision of enemies around her to the minimum dealing damage/second

______.________._______.___._______.__________________________.
 ManaCooldownC. RangeAoEDurationEffects
114012-300340 dmg + reduced vision
214012-400360 dmg + reduced vision
314012-500380 dmg + reduced vision
414012-6003100 dmg + reduced vision
Notes:
  • It is an Aura that lasts for 3 seconds.
Soul Stone - (Active)
__________Unknown summons a Soul Stone which protects her from disables inside its AOE.

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 ManaCooldownC. RangeAoEDurationEffects
11402560060010Blocks 1 Disable
21502560060010Blocks 2 Disables
31602560060010Blocks 3 Disables
41802560060010Blocks 4 Disables
Notes:
  • It cant move, needs 3 hits to be destroyed
  • It expires after it reached the disable limit
  • Unknown should be in the Soul Stone`s AOE for it to work
  • Destroying the stone grants XP (melee creep) and 100 gold


Possess - (active)
____________________The Unknown channels all her energy giving her ally tremendous bonuses but makes her susceptible to death

______.________._______.___._______.__________________________.
 ManaCooldownC. RangeAoEDurationEffects
120090600-10max movement speed + 100% of Unknown`s stats / 500 damage penalty
230075600-10max movement speed + 100% of Unknown`s stats + Hollow Form / 1000 damage penalty
340060600-10max movement speed + 100% of Unknown`s stats + Hollow Form + Dim/ 1500 damage penalty
Notes:
  • Hollow Form and Dim depends on Unknown`s skill level
  • Channeling
  • When canceled, Unknown receives 500/1000/1500 damage and the possessed unit receives twice the disable duration from The Unknown
  • Disables can be hex/ministun/stun/esnare/sleep/bash/doom/silence
  • The Unknown is revealed while using this skill
  • Cannot be canceled by self
  • Possessed ally becomes semi transparent with a black aura
Edit:

Rescaled 1st skill
Increased Mana cost/cooldown and reduced AOE of 3rd skill
Added Hollow Form model

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Old 01-12-2012, 09:23 AM   #2
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Default Re: [INT SCOURGE] Unknown Ghost

your hero spell is awesome. i wonder why you choose that model to represent this hero. Ghoul is the most suitable one, though got no animation. If i was Icefrog, i would love to implement this hero. he has nice ganking ability and superb supportish spell combo, which fits the current meta-game rnowadays. hahaha. kudos bro.

though, the cooldown on your 3rd spell is too much. big AOE, moderate manacost, overrated effects yet low CD. it should be around 30 - 40 sec ish, i think...
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Old 01-12-2012, 09:41 AM   #3
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Old 01-12-2012, 09:52 AM   #4
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1st skill is kinda overpowered, i mean a 10 seconds 50% slow in 600 AoE ? you should do something about that.

in rest, the hero looks ok to me
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Old 01-12-2012, 12:53 PM   #5
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Thanks for all your replies, ill tweak the numbers a bit, and lets see your reaction to it
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Old 01-12-2012, 01:06 PM   #6
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Default Re: [INT SCOURGE] Unknown Ghost

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your hero spell is awesome. i wonder why you choose that model to represent this hero. Ghoul is the most suitable one, though got no animation. If i was Icefrog, i would love to implement this hero. he has nice ganking ability and superb supportish spell combo, which fits the current meta-game rnowadays. hahaha. kudos bro.

though, the cooldown on your 3rd spell is too much. big AOE, moderate manacost, overrated effects yet low CD. it should be around 30 - 40 sec ish, i think...
Can you suggest a model or give a link to it? that would be helpful
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Old 01-12-2012, 01:09 PM   #7
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look at this models :
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/m...Dlist%26r%3D20
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/m...Dlist%26r%3D20
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/m...ist%26page%3D2

or browse www.thehiveworkshop.com community for more models
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Old 01-12-2012, 01:33 PM   #8
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Numbers tweaked, any comment? ill find a better model, thanks
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Old 01-12-2012, 10:36 PM   #9
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Can you suggest a model or give a link to it? that would be helpful
i'm talking bout this model here:

other comment would be about his iconset. looks too random. if i have time, i will help you try to look for some suitable one...XD
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Old 01-12-2012, 11:11 PM   #10
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Default Re: [INT SCOURGE] Unknown Ghost: Edited#1

Normal Form
Hollow Form..
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Old 01-13-2012, 12:48 AM   #11
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Hollow Form..
Lotus, what do you think? i think this i awesome
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Old 01-13-2012, 01:17 AM   #12
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Default Re: [INT SCOURGE] Unknown Ghost: Edited#1

It's been lingering around my head even before i saw this...
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your hero spell is awesome. i wonder why you choose that model to represent this hero. Ghoul is the most suitable one, though got no animation. If i was Icefrog, i would love to implement this hero. he has nice ganking ability and superb supportish spell combo, which fits the current meta-game rnowadays. hahaha. kudos bro.

though, the cooldown on your 3rd spell is too much. big AOE, moderate manacost, overrated effects yet low CD. it should be around 30 - 40 sec ish, i think...
da fuck u see unique?i dont even understand the last part of the ultimate's effect
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Old 01-13-2012, 03:55 AM   #14
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Default Re: [INT SCOURGE] Unknown Ghost: Edited#1

first i don't mention this hero idea is unique...it is just awesome. and that literally doesn't means unique! zzz

lol...each person see things differently, lorr MORON! even if his spell is not that original, they combo-ed quite efficiently. you didn't understand that ultimate becoz of your own english retardness problem...
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Updated with hollow form model
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da fuck u see unique?i dont even understand the last part of the ultimate's effect
So please enlighten me which part isnt unique?

Ultimate powers up ally by giving him bonuses
lvl1 - Ally gains max ms + 100% of Unknown`s stats
lvl2 - Ally gains max ms + 100% of Unknown`s stats + hollow form effect
lvl3 - Ally gains max ms + 100% of Unknown`s stats + hollow form effect + dim`s effect
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