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Old 04-14-2012, 11:52 AM   #1
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Wink Item Creation Contest 11



Hello folks and welcome to the 11th edition of
Item Creation Contest


Contest status: Finished


Phase 1: Warmup
This will be till we have at least 9 people that like the challenge. PM me your opinion/suggestion about it.
Phase 2: Registration(current phase)
This will be till we have 7 contestants and 2 judges.
Phase 3: Editing
5 days after the last contestant arrives. This should give time for contestants to polish up their items.
Phase 4: Judging
This is when contestants stop editing and judges get to work. Lasts until all judges finish
Phase 5: Finished
In this phase winners are announced. Lasts till playdota dies


Da rulez:

Contestants must:
Make an item that fulfills the main challenge
AND
Send me a PM with a link to their entry
AND
Write a short explanation on how their item is used.

Judges must:
Send me reviews of 2 random items
AND
Have more than 200 posts
AND
Be reliable
AND
Not get lazy
AND
Not fuck up


The challenge
Main:
The item must have a passive ability that has a unique triggering mechanism.
Bonus:
The ability shouldn't have a cooldown (5 points)
Extra:
Has a price tag less than 3.5k (5 points)






The rubric:
Balance (xx/20) : explanation

Originality (xx/20) : explanation (how new the effects are in DotA)

Effectiveness in Game (xx/10) : explanation

Niche(xx/10) : explanation (what the item is supposed to do, and how well it accomplishes it)

Fun Factor (xx/5) : explanation

Simplicity (xx/5) : explanation

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Bonus (xx/5)

Extra (xx/5)

Overall Score: xx/80


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Old 04-14-2012, 11:54 AM   #2
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Default Re: Item Creation Contest 11

First! Ideas for Extra challenge appreciated.
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Old 04-14-2012, 11:58 AM   #3
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OMG!! Contest again...xD
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Old 04-14-2012, 02:30 PM   #4
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At least it's better than waiting for the result of the old contest and doing nothing. Sadly, I'm too busy to join it now.
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Old 04-14-2012, 02:37 PM   #5
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At least it's better than waiting for the result of the old contest and doing nothing.
The reason i have the 3 last rules for the judges
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Old 04-14-2012, 02:49 PM   #6
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Lol. So as I see you decided to host it again. Also it's better to have 3 judges (1 of them can be you yourself)

Also Extra challenge looks really dull.

Edit: This ICC is too similar to ICC9 (I mean consumable, scouting, etc). I expected smth more unique and interesting. Probably I won't join nor as a contestant neither as a judge.
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Default Re: Item Creation Contest 11

I want to keep the main challenge simple and the bonus and extra hard to fulfill. Also i usually don't limit stuff with time. The ICC9 was to make a consumable, and this bonus requires you to use a consumable. Rly, two different things. I might judge it, but 2 judges are enough IMO.

For challenge i also had: New raw item, and Item with 2 ogre axes.
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Old 04-14-2012, 04:12 PM   #8
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Despite of being different they feel similar to me. No inspiration at all.
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Old 04-14-2012, 05:23 PM   #9
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are the suggestions of these contests used for brainstorming in the real game or are these threads just for fun?
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Old 04-14-2012, 05:28 PM   #10
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O_xD, so you can host a new one even without the old isn't finished yet?

Anyway I will try to think an idea for this contest =)
And I hope that this one finishes well...
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Old 04-14-2012, 06:05 PM   #11
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Default Re: Item Creation Contest 11

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are the suggestions of these contests used for brainstorming in the real game or are these threads just for fun?

Might as well get implemented, but rly odds are little

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O_xD, so you can host a new one even without the old isn't finished yet?

Anyway I will try to think an idea for this contest =)
And I hope that this one finishes well...

you can host when the last contest is in judging.
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Can i join now? Because it will be a busy week for me after this day.
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Old 04-15-2012, 12:40 PM   #13
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Default Re: Item Creation Contest 11

Just post your item here and send me a pm with it, confirming thatyou will join. You must fulfull the main challenge and write a short explanation. I don't get how you can possibly be busy after easter, but, who cares?
You will have 5 days after we have all contestants and judges to edit up your item and make it as balanced as possible.
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=.=. In my country, there is no Easter vacation. When u are in Easter vacation, we have an exam here. !@!@#.
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nope, we just got the 4 days, the friday before easter, and 1 day after. Thing is, most people get their work done before that.
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Old 04-15-2012, 02:28 PM   #16
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^Luck you. We have no extra days.
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Old 04-15-2012, 03:41 PM   #17
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^don't go anymore off-topic, plz.

Working on the banner. I will get the one pinopi made if i am not satisfied with what i can do.

Added banner. If you have smth better than this post here
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Old 04-16-2012, 06:20 AM   #18
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Well, I'm busy to prepare my national exam in next week xD

Maybe I'll join if I can.
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^Don't you worry, you aren't limited with time.
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As for the extra challenge, does bottle and animal/flying courier count as consumables?
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Created by an ancient seer, this orb contains the knowledge and foresight of the one who created it. Grants +12 to all attributes, +12 damage, +125% mana regeneration, and has the abilities, Prophet's Insight (Passive Aura) and Foresee (Active Ability).

Ancient Janggo of Endurance (1725)
Sentry Ward (200)
Void Stone (875)
Nathrezim Buckler (803)
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Place WardForesee
Endurance AuraProphet's Insight
Armor Bonus 
Foresee
  • The spirit of the seer that created this orb grants you vision of an area (800 AoE, global range) and reveals invisible units for 20 seconds. All allied heroes in the area gain +15% MS, but +15% AS to any enemies inside the AoE as well, both for 10 seconds.
  • Manacost: 50
  • Cooldown: 45
Prophet's Insight (Aura)
  • Merely holding the Seer's Orb grants you nigh prophetic vision, enabling you to warn your allies of impending danger.
  • 900 AoE
  • +8 AS
  • +5% MS
  • +4 armor


This item's capabilities cover multiple areas. It can be used to reveal sections of neutral creep spawn, to set up a gank, or it can be used to chase down an invisible unit that is trying to escape. Be careful who you reveal though, because the +15% AS that is granted to any enemy in the range of the AoE could be devastating to your team, depending on the hero (or heroes!) that receive the buff. All this, while supporting your allies with the aura, Prophet's Insight.

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Seer's Orb
Created by an ancient seer, this orb contains the knowledge and foresight of the one who created it. Grants +15 to all stats, +150% mana regeneration, and has the ability Foresee (Active/Consumable) 5 Charges. Buying the Recipe resets the number of charges.

Foresee: The spirit of the seer that created this orb grants you vision of an area (800 AoE, global range) and reveals invisible units for 30 seconds. All allied heroes in the area gain +15% MS for the duration, but +15% AS to any enemies inside the AoE as well.

Recipe
Ultimate Orb: 2100 gold
Gem of True Sight: 700 gold
Void Stone: 875 gold
Recipe: 700 gold

TOTAL COST: 4,375 gold

Going for both the optional and extra challenges.

ICON: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/i...Dlist%26r%3D20
This isn't bonus or extra challenge. Gem isn't a consumable item, sorry. Consumable itens are these that you can use, spenting it, right? Like wards, scrolls of town portal, potions, etc.

My idea is almost ready for entry in this ICC. Just wait me thinking more about my plans of my entry....
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This isn't bonus or extra challenge. Gem isn't a consumable item, sorry. Consumable itens are these that you can use, spenting it, right? Like wards, scrolls of town portal, potions, etc.

My idea is almost ready for entry in this ICC. Just wait me thinking more about my plans of my entry....
oh, i thought it meant the item itself had to be consumable, not what goes into making it. easily tweaked though.

EDIT: entry has been changed to accommodate the fact that i failed to read >_>
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The Bonus and extra challenge aren't necessary, but if they are fullfiled you gain a good amount of points...But for joining the contest is necessary atleast fullfiling the main challenge.

Just clarifying you guys that....
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The Bonus and extra challenge aren't necessary, but if they are fullfiled you gain a good amount of points...But for joining the contest is necessary atleast fullfiling the main challenge.

Just clarifying you guys that....
I know that. I read it all, just misread the description for the bonus challenges. I figured accomplishing them is good, so that's what I went for.
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might join.
The 2 ogre axe idea seemed nice (as there is Diffu and Rod), I would join as well if you decide to go for it.
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@Darth_Vader: Courier is a consumable(if you want to make a scouting bur or chicken). Bottle isn't.

Anything that is not in your inventory after you use it is a consumable, even wards, dust... (u don't have to eat it).

@Propagate: Dude your suggested item isn't a consumable cus it doesn't disappear after you use up the charges. The bonus challenges are fulfilled tho.
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Just to be sure, the extra challenge means that there is a buff on enemy (so bad for you).
Don't really like it if it's the case but whatever.

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^A positive buff on enemy.

Brotip: State the critter's health.

And recipe uses 1 tango or 3?
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@Propagate: Dude your suggested item isn't a consumable cus it doesn't disappear after you use up the charges. The bonus challenges are fulfilled tho.
Derp. changed it to just an active ability that costs mana to use, with a medium-long cooldown.

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Well, here it is, although I do not want this to be implemented :P
Aiming for both Bonus and Extra Challenge.


Vial of the Wisps

1 x Belt of Giant Strength (450)
1 x Sobi Mask (325)
1 x Mantle of Intelligence (150)
1 x Clarity Potion (50)
1 x Recipe (200)
Total Cost: 1175


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+4 Intelligence
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Release Wisp (Active, 2 Charges)

  • 2 charges, consumes one per use.
  • Releases a wisp from the vial when activated, shooting it towards a targeted direction.
  • Wisp will grant 800/800 clearvision.
  • The wisp moves at a speed of 900 with a maximum range of 1800.
  • Upon contact with enemy heroes, wisp is consumed by them, granting them 100 MP over 4 seconds and 800 unobstructed vision.
  • Vision gained by the wisp lasts for 2 seconds after contact with enemy hero or after it reaches its maximum range.
  • Can be replenished by visiting the fountain or consuming a Clarity Potion (restores 1 charge each).
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omniknight and silencer in same team... silencer ulti stopps all spells and omniknight stops all incoming physical dmg.. both last forever.

it's still in rough stage so im not sure yet what other 3 heros fits best i guess depends on what enemy picks but need an initiator who can make sure enemy doesnt run away until godmode wears off.

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BUMP! come on peoPle, we need more contestants and judges!
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@Propagate11235 your item and recipe look very similar to linken's sphere, however, it is kinda a support item. I suggest you remake the components, so as it needs to become more viable for a support hero.
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omniknight and silencer in same team... silencer ulti stopps all spells and omniknight stops all incoming physical dmg.. both last forever.

it's still in rough stage so im not sure yet what other 3 heros fits best i guess depends on what enemy picks but need an initiator who can make sure enemy doesnt run away until godmode wears off.

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@Propagate11235 your item and recipe look very similar to linken's sphere, however, it is kinda a support item. I suggest you remake the components, so as it needs to become more viable for a support hero.
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made an awesome change that DEFINITELY suits the support item theme to the contest
While the change looks interesting, I suggest you to lessen the cost of the recipe. Even Mekasmn which costs 2k cannot be farmed by supports, thus it is farmed by utility heroes. Or probably remove the recipe and add Netherzim Buckler, pretty unused item and suits your +armor aura.
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omniknight and silencer in same team... silencer ulti stopps all spells and omniknight stops all incoming physical dmg.. both last forever.

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thats a good idea too.
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Not joining this. Frankly speaking, stupid bonus and extra challenges (which is unbalanceable) that worth more than 25% of the other scores.
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Old 04-20-2012, 11:23 AM   #38
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^If you go for it you can fuck up your balance and effectiveness ratings.
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Watcher's ring

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I can watch you, but you don't know that you are being watched.



+3 armor
+6 inteligence
Hidden Sight (active, based on charges)



Ring of Protection- 175
Mantle of Inteligence- 150
Mantle of Intelligence- 150
Observer Wards- 200
Total Cost (initial)- 675



Hidden Sight (active)-Spends one charge to mark an enemy hero, unit or even a tree. The ability takes 8 seconds for taking effect after cast. After the ability takes effect, you will have 1000 sight vision around the target. However, if any allied hero of the user of this ability comes within 1200 range of the target the effect instantly ends. Enemy cannot sense if it's marked. The ability is limited by charges and these charges can be replenished by 2 buying observer wards. Starts with 2 charges. The ability lasts up to 4 minutes. Does not provide true sight.

Things to note: Going for main and bonus challenges and not going for extra (I think that the extra is too weird and will make item concept worse)


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Old 04-27-2012, 09:08 AM   #40
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With the power that i have as host of this competition i declare this thread:
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Please wait till june for the reviving ritual.
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