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Old 01-25-2012, 01:47 PM   #161
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well, its hard to think a story about 'her' because we have broodmother to put in consideration ._.
how bout after broodmother was overthrown she (my hero) becomes the queen
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Old 01-26-2012, 01:22 AM   #162
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I'll try to do it.

E: quite busy, this is what I come up to ._. maybe you will want another writer to correct some part.
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A replacement of Black Arachnia, Anub'ankhptah is the last queen of Nerubians. Slain while defending of her kingdom, she resurrected and enslaved by the Lich King. Summoned to battle the Sentinels, she still retain capability in battle. Summon a living gateway to aid her allies, forming blight at most sacred land, paralyze her adversaries with powerful poison, even create a clone of herself to succeed her. Many have fallen to her, and only few manage to defeat her; None ever actually kill her.
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Old 01-26-2012, 12:27 PM   #163
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I'll try to do it.

E: quite busy, this is what I come up to ._. maybe you will want another writer to correct some part.
Not bad, but i don't like the replacement for brood part. How bout this: she was the true heir to the throne but brood usurp it and she takes advantage when brood falls in love with anu'barak, and she was responsible for banishing brood in the first place when she regains the title
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^ can anyone please rework on this
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Anub’ankhptah. Mother to Anub’arak – the last queen of Ahn'kahet: The Old Kingdom. Believed to have been slain during the War of the Spider she has returned once again. Though now allied with the Scourge, she fights not for the Lich King but to defend the catacombs that are her home. Those who enter her crypts are confronted with hordes able to appear and disappear seemingly at will. Her attacks are as subtle as she is devious often only showing an enemy his true mortality long after it is too late. At first believed to be immortal, her immediate return to battlefields after rare confirmed kills has led the Sentinel to believe that the Nerubian Queen is not one - but many.
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Revised from the previous one.

Note: Anub'ankhptah (my thats a mouthful) could possibly have existed within Warcraft Lore, and there is no conflict with Broodmother. The Nerubian queen held the title before her time, and technically Anub'arak was a Nerubian prince who fell in the Second War of the Spider. He was then resurrected and turned by Arthas.

I strongly suggest you read this page and maybe change the name of the hero into something that might be recognized as I believe the Anub' title is for males.

Perhaps Nezar'Azret who already exists within Warcraft Lore and is currently unused by anything. But then I doubt, although still possible, that she could have mothered Anub'arak. (Actually still possible).

http://www.wowwiki.com/Nerubian_queen
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Old 01-28-2012, 08:01 AM   #166
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http://www.playdota.com/forums/showthread.php?t=614103

Hi I need a bg story for this hero. It'll be nice if you could somewhat follow my old one to some extent thanks

Just alil mindblocked to write for it.
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Anub’ankhptah. Mother to Anub’arak – the last queen of Ahn'kahet: The Old Kingdom. Believed to have been slain during the War of the Spider she has returned once again. Though now allied with the Scourge, she fights not for the Lich King but to defend the catacombs that are her home. Those who enter her crypts are confronted with hordes able to appear and disappear seemingly at will. Her attacks are as subtle as she is devious often only showing an enemy his true mortality long after it is too late. At first believed to be immortal, her immediate return to battlefields after rare confirmed kills has led the Sentinel to believe that the Nerubian Queen is not one - but many.
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Revised from the previous one.

Note: Anub'ankhptah (my thats a mouthful) could possibly have existed within Warcraft Lore, and there is no conflict with Broodmother. The Nerubian queen held the title before her time, and technically Anub'arak was a Nerubian prince who fell in the Second War of the Spider. He was then resurrected and turned by Arthas.

I strongly suggest you read this page and maybe change the name of the hero into something that might be recognized as I believe the Anub' title is for males.

Perhaps Nezar'Azret who already exists within Warcraft Lore and is currently unused by anything. But then I doubt, although still possible, that she could have mothered Anub'arak. (Actually still possible).


http://www.wowwiki.com/Nerubian_queen
Hmm maybe that will do. Thanks for the story
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Old 02-01-2012, 06:17 AM   #168
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LINK: http://www.playdota.com/forums/showt...88#post4123288
THEME: Evil brother of santa,sower of dread
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Old 02-02-2012, 03:56 AM   #169
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You should fix your hero before asking for a background story, its skills and name kinda weird.
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Old 02-03-2012, 01:04 PM   #170
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can someone create an epic hero introduction and background story for this hero? the flavor is depends on your own creativity, as long as the story is being holy-ish. hahaha well, he is the heaven guardian anyway.

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Old 02-28-2012, 12:06 AM   #171
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LINK: http://www.playdota.com/forums/showp...&postcount=328
THEME: Holy
SKILLS:
Holy Slash: Anchor Smash that stuns
Dash: Blink, but can be interrupted by stun
Rejuvenate: Each time cast spells, increase the mana regen
Combust: Pulse Nova that silence, and the damage is based on her manapool
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OTHER: Maybe focus the story on her speed and intelligence..
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Old 02-28-2012, 10:06 AM   #172
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Ghostwing - The Frost Wrym

i need some awesome Hero Introduction and Background Story here. The BG must be stating that he is being reincarnated by Lich King and because of that he is willing to serve Lich King to destroy Sentinel. He is basically an ice dragon, with an ice manipulation. Also, if you're kind enough to help me rephrase the spell description, it is more than appreciated.

Spells: Crystal Shatter, Blizzard, Chilling Presence and Cold Flight

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Old 03-06-2012, 03:48 PM   #173
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Need a name and story for an item I am suggesting (and icon but this thread isnt for that), it is Orb of Venom plus Mask of Death, you get lifesteal and also a dmg over time, the dmg dealt to the enemy hero comes back as a lifesteal.
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Old 04-01-2012, 10:04 AM   #174
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Hi. Can you check this out and add a background story...based from what you see in this hero? Thanks, and btw the name says the theme.XDD
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LINK: Here
THEME: tortured vengeance greed lust and hatred
SKILLS: skill 1 dark sanctuary: make enemy can't move from 350 aoe(like kinetic flied), silince them and after disable it will explode dealing damage to enemy and heal allies inside AoE
Skill 2 Curse of Hollow: make enemy loss mana, get damage equal with mana loss and reduce their magic resistance
Skill 3 Power of Derpair: heal him every time get attacked by enemies
ultimate Dark ritual: summon meteor to damage in 1000 AoE around him
PRIMARY ATTRIBUTE: STR
AFFILIATION: Scourge
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Old 04-27-2012, 11:03 AM   #176
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Hur'kan the Savage

Theme: Some sort of a berserker

Skills:
  1. Necro-cannibalize: Eats corpse to heal and increase Max HP.
  2. Crushing Strike: Increase damage and ministun target but also damages self.
  3. Auto-Berserk: Cast Bloodlust every 5 seconds.
  4. Death Tag: Increase receive damage at this state and tags target. Can deal critical damage if receive required damage.

Affliation: Scourge or Dire

Main Attribute: Str

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Hi there,

This is not directly a request for a new hero background story, but much more to extend an existing one.
More to the point, i'd like to create a wc3 cinematic map about a DotA hero (an existing one), but i'm not good at making up stories. So i thought i'd ask for help in here.
Also, i don't need a well-formulated text, but an interesting story that can be visualized.

I already picked some heroes that might have a nice background story to extend: Slardar, Lifestealer, Slark, Skeleton King, Necrolyte and Bone Fletcher.

I might also need some nice dialogues later on, but for now i need a story.

Thanks in advance!

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Old 05-02-2012, 06:08 AM   #178
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^
got some small picture for clinkz and slardar;
clinkz is a high elf spy that executed when (s)he is discovered.
slardar fell during battle at frozen throne (the last stage at campaign) and resurrected
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Thanks for those, could you extend them a bit?
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I'm not a very good writer so i will make this simple, and its a scenario for the cinematic. And I assume you know the wc3 lore.

Clinkz: A high elf fight at battle of sunwell, he make a pact to be a spy for exchange of his freedom. He left to kalimdor as a high elf survivor. Later make a battle scene that goes bad for the sentinels thanks to the leaked information. The sentinels leader have a meeting to conclude spy possibility, and dispatch the wardens to investigate (can use mortred, shendelzare, lanaya, whatever). In short, clinkz caught copying the document and refuse to give himself up. He windwalk away badly wounded, and die at the scourge camp/woods. He is (found then) resurrected as a deadly fletcher he known today.

Slardar: Make a scene when illidan summon him and the other naga from the depth. Then make series of small flash of battle of slardar, from guarding illidan's boat, claiming eye of sargeras, saving tyrande, and stop at preparations for icecrown glacier's battle. Make a scene of battle between naga and undead (Illidan - arthas, Slardar - Anub'arak, Kael - Lich, Vashj - anyone). End with Illidan, kael and slardar's defeat, Vashj and what remain of the naga minion fled, carrying illidan and leaving the rest. Then, arthas resurrect Slardar as his minion, and the scene black away with slardar set a chase to the fleeing naga. (Slardar start with normal naga royal guard color, and after resurrection become the current color)
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That sounds good! Although the story for clinkz is really interesting, i think i'll go with slardar. I read up on the wc3 lore this weekend, and i thought about starting with the destruction of the first well of life and/or the maelstrom where the naga came from.

Basically, i want to lay some focus on creating intense visual effects, which is why the story for slardar is probably more fitting.

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Hur'kan the Savage

Theme: Some sort of a berserker

Skills:
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  2. Crushing Strike: Increase damage and ministun target but also damages self.
  3. Auto-Berserk: Cast Bloodlust every 5 seconds.
  4. Death Tag: Increase receive damage at this state and tags target. Can deal critical damage if receive required damage.

Affliation: Scourge or Dire

Main Attribute: Str

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Once was a warrior of the Red Mist, Hur'kan, believed to have been a spawn of a demented necromancer, was not one to have been fully embraced by his band of brothers. Cast formed from the corpse of a fallen general, heart taken from that of a madman, and hunger equal to that of a cannibal, one cannot simply deny his indifference with that of a Hellspawn. Though his spirit is strong, for he was once an Axe before his death, his now puzzle-formed body simply contradicts his will. Seeking revenge to whomever took his place, he wages in battle over battle, feeding on the bodies of the ones he'd slain, filling his heart with ecstasy as the madman within him, masochist as it is, gains pleasure over pain. And pain he will bring, for he would not have been an Axe in his past life if he were not known for his "unforgiving" ways. With his newly-formed body, that grows ever so stronger with each victory, he knows that he is now by far ten times a monster than the one who took his place could have ever been. A double-edged Axe, that he is.
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Hey guys I designed a hero for CTH 24 and I'd like to know if anyone could help me building a background story.

Hero name: King Norfolk
Skill theme: Money
http://www.playdota.com/forums/showp...&postcount=208

It doesn't have to be any shakespearish, a basic story will do. I really suck at writing stories.
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I'll see what I can do.

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Born in a royal bloodline, young Norfolk's early life is filled with hefty wealth and fortune. As he descend to the throne, he keep his aristocracy lifestyle to such an extreme that even his kingdom is unable to pay the ever increasing tax. King Norfolk may be greedy, but he is never a fool. Keeping his kingdom from rebelling against him, he set off for battle of the ancients with the best equipment his wealth can provide, hoping to gain enough gold to please him for his remaining life. He is not afraid to spend the gold he earned, as it ends with destruction of his foe and ultimately pay back a much higher fortune to himself.


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Just about what I wanted, Strange_Kid: a reason for him to join the sentinel(radiant) without losing his greediness. He may be fighting for the good side, but the reasons are his own. Thank you very much!
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Hi I'm joining the CTH25 and I wonder if you can help me create a lore for my hero. Here's my request

LINK: http://www.playdota.com/forums/showp...5&postcount=36
THEME: Divine Powers, Runes
SKILLS: Skills are pretty much based on runes and light elements.
PRIMARY ATTRIBUTE: Intelligence
AFFILIATION: Sentinel
OTHER: I would like a lore that is on a first person perspective if possible.

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Hi I'm joining the CTH25 and I wonder if you can help me create a lore for my hero. Here's my request

LINK: http://www.playdota.com/forums/showp...5&postcount=36
THEME: Divine Powers, Runes
SKILLS: Skills are pretty much based on runes and light elements.
PRIMARY ATTRIBUTE: Intelligence
AFFILIATION: Sentinel
OTHER: I would like a lore that is on a first person perspective if possible.

Thanks in advance!
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The hero is complete now. I just need a backstory for him
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