Originally Posted by Wo2-KRONOS
:/ thats ur comment seriously i wrote this to get that comment !!
Oh goodness, this made my day :>
ot: It was definitely a good effort. There's plenty of room for improvement though. Proper punctuation and dividing the whole piece in stanzas would make it much better. There also don't seem to be consistent rhyming patterns, or maybe I'm just missing it. Also, we have a proper forum for this kind of stuff.