Gaivan Shadewalker - General Graymane

[razifkamil]

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Changelog:

Added "Taboo of Tranquility".

Shadewalker scales per level reduced from:
30/45/60 ms, as and magic resistance to 20/30/40 ms, as and magic resistance

Battle Cry scales per level reduced from:
16/19/22/25 hp/second and as to 6/9/12/15 hp/second and as

Battle Cry lasts increased from:
8 seconds to 10 seconds

Changed ability name:
From "Prowling" to "Shadow Warrior". Hotkey is still the same.


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Ladies and Gentlemen! I present to you.....!!




Gaivan Shadewalker
( General Greymane )


Hero Introduction:

Simply, Gaivan shadewalker is the only greymane exist in his clan. He was somehow survived by the assault of the scourge when he was just a young greymane. He then got adopted by the sentinel, became a hero and once victorious against the Broodmother's army. Because of his warrior talent and true loyality, Elune rewarded him with blessings and power of claw druids. He then became a General of his own kind. Commanding through the magic of the moon. He also has a great potential to become a warmaster. Together with the blessing of the elune herself, he gives a true fear to anyone who witness the nights of the General Greymane.


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Data Statistics:

Gaivan Shadewalker - General Greymane
Primary: Strenght
Affliation: Sentinel
Str: 22 + 2.2
Agi: 19 + 1.9
Int: 16 + 1.6
Damage: 52 – 62
Armor: 6
Range: 100
Move Speed: 305
Missile Speed: Instant
Sight Range: 1800 / 800





If you're WoW players, you must have seen him before


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ABILITIES:




- Moon's [T]ranquility -
Increase movement speed and hp regeneration of a unit for a short time.
Unit also receive "Taboo of Tranquility" to take 30% more damage if get hit
Level 1: + 15% ms and 30 hp regeneration / second, 8 seconds duration.
Level 2: + 20% ms and 45 hp regeneration / second, 7 seconds duration.
Level 3: + 25% ms and 60 hp regeneration / second, 6 seconds duration.
Level 4: + 30% ms and 75 hp regeneration / second, 5 seconds duration.
Manacost: 70/75/80/85
Cooldown: 20 seconds

*Note:
Cast range is global. (The cast range, man! not the effect!!)


- Taboo of Tranquility -



Unit unders effect of Taboo Tranquility take 30% more damage than normal




- Shado[w] Warrior -
Slow movement speed but gains invisibility to search enemy. Sneak to deal a very deadly backstab!
Level 1: Slow 25% own ms, backstab deals 3.75 x physical damage
Level 2: Slow 20% own ms, backstab deals 4.00 x physical damage
Level 3: Slow 15% own ms, backstab deals 4.25 x physical damage
Level 4: Slow 10% own ms, backstab deals 4.50 x physical damage
Manacost: 70/75/80/85
Cooldown: 45 seconds

*Note:
The duration is infinite (Until it breaked).



- [B]attle Cry - (Passive)
Everytime Gaivan kill a unit, he gains hp regen and attack speed. Lasts for 10 seconds
Level 1: 6 hp/second and +6 attack speed
Level 2: 9 hp/second and +9 attack speed
Level 3: 12 hp/second and +12 attack speed
Level 4: 15 hp/second and +15 attack speed

*Note:
The effect infinitely stacks if gaivan kills in the duration.
Deny a unit also trigger Battle Cry


Ultimate Ability:



- Shadewalke[r] - (Passive)
When the moonlight is out, gains movement speed, attack speed and magic resistance.
Level 1: 20 ms and as and 20% magic resistance
Level 2: 30 ms and as and 30% magic resistance
Level 3: 40 ms and as and 40% magic resistance

*Note:
Eclipse from Luna Moonfang (Moon Rider) and Darkness from Balanar (Night Stalker) also
trigger shadewalker. Sooo much profits!!


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HERO QUICK EXPLANATION:

Tank hero. A very potential of semicarry. A ganker. Not a nuker. Has a very high base damage. Mobile with ms skills. Has invisibility with backstab. Feared at night. Low mana but also low usage of mana. Good MS and AS but lack of chasing (stun/slow) skill. Can support with Moon's Tranquility. Cant initiate and also lack of magical ability. Concept of the hero is easy to use for all level of gamers including newbies >_<
No, just kidding.
This hero supposed to be general of the team. A general who can be a shield for entire team, can set ganks and ready to catch up and support his mates from everywhere. The success of his carry depends on the success of his supports.


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ABILITY SYNERGIES:

+ = Less slow ms side effect

+ + = Greater less slow ms side effect

+ = Great movement speed

+ = HP Regens. Anti nuke spammer in early game


+ + = Mobile Tank


GOD! ICEFROG! ANYONE! PLEASE MAKE THIS HERO COMES TRUE!! IT IS VERY KIND OF YOU TO MAKE THE TEST MAP
It's quite a while to did this too!!



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[sonalheng]

Overpowered. Overpowered. Overpowered. Plz think of keeping dota balanced when you create a new hero and not make it unplayable.

[yui92]

I think the skills are ok.. not so much overpowered and stuff.. just reduce the figures.

[razifkamil]

Thank you. Let see what I can do for that!

[razifkamil]

I think Aghanim's Scepter would be good on him? Yes? No? Any suggestions or even criticism?

[Razorwind]

I want to review this

Okay, so basically we can all agree that the numbers are waaaaaay out of hand. Only your first skill will keep another unit alive for the rest of his life. Seriously :P
And unfortunately, I can't see any originality in any of your abilities, maybe a little in the Moon's Tranquility. However, I really wouldnt have appreciated 30% damage taken increase unwillingly that could cause my death if its for instance miscommunicated. Maybe it could activate when the unit attacks?

The second spell, Shadow Warrior, is to me like a mixture of Ghost Walk and Vendetta and I for sure dont want another invis burster hero in the game xD

Battle Cry is okay, a different version of Bloodbath - but the numbers are here as well quite imbalanced. I like the stacks

Your ultimate is basically another Night Stalker, only much more tanky. I mean, 40% spell resistance? Combined with a pipe / hood, it will give you 70% spell resistance (if they stack of course) - making you quite unstoppable. The keyword here is NUMBERS, reduce them to ash, do something about it.

Overall a quite... well - boring hero who comes with close to nothing new. Can you imagine this hero and Night Stalker or another invis hero dual-ganking around the map for the entire game? I do

[Lord_Talron]

hero brings nothing new to the table. his spells are incredibly boring.

theres multitudes of better heroes in this forum. why the fuck do you think your sub-par hero would interest icefrog? can you imagine if everyone who thought there hero was amazing got it in dota? the game would be terrible.

http://www.playdota.com/forums/56291...ro-truly-need/

here have a guide

[pigi_rylai]

ok the first spell is too OP and I can tell you why : it's a non-ultimate global skill which uses almost no mana and can give 3 free salves every minute so that's bad...