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Old 03-01-2013, 12:07 PM   #361
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Default Epics and Legends Writing Battle XIII


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Here's the review:
Well I did see that, but I expected more.
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Old 03-01-2013, 12:18 PM   #362
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Default Re: Epics and Legends Writing Battle XIII

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Well I did see that, but I expected more.
Exactly my point. CC got a small review......

Ok , I read it........much of things were just out of my mind , including how it was sucide mission or why did the man at last felt a death situation.

But if something , your descriptive skills are at their best. The way you potray character emotions and all is something to learn.
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