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Join Date: Jul 2011
Location: Somewhere in Asia
Posts: 6,137
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Exactly my point. CC got a small review......
Ok , I read it........much of things were just out of my mind , including how it was sucide mission or why did the man at last felt a death situation. But if something , your descriptive skills are at their best. The way you potray character emotions and all is something to learn. |
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