[HERO] Neu[AGI]-Makura

[sandwichmelek]

This is only an idea to counter range heroes and give melee some way to kick their asses when they start to harass.


As Ice Frog publishes Nightcrawler, the model cannot be exact. He has to be small like rikimaru and melee. The murloc models are perfect but i cannot use them because of Ngihtcrawler.

Summon Makura
Mur'gul assasin

Background Story: A Mur'gul that survivded the attack of Elven rangers and gargoyels on his tribe. He is now specialized in killing all range enemies, killing in fury to revenge the deaths of his fellow friends, swifting faster then the wind while centering his eyes on his prey, never losing sight of them. He is a force to be reckoned with, and he aids anyone for the right price, as long as it serves his vengeance.

Strength - 15 + [1.5]
Agility - 22+ [2.5]
Intelligence - 18 + [2.0]

Affiliation:	Neutral
Damage:	45-56
Armor:	6
Movespeed:	300
Starting HP/MP:	460/185
Attack Range:	100-meele

Walk on the edge - (active)

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Every time an range attack strikes the Mur'gul, he is able to retrace it and strike the attacker. He gains true sight of the enemy.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	25Mana	10Cooldown	n/a	melee	instant	Blinks next to the target dealing 50 bonus damage and giving true sight of the enemy for 2 seconds.
2	50Mana	10Cooldown	n/a	melee	instant	Blinks next to the target dealing 100 bonus damage and giving true sight of the enemy for 3 seconds.
3	75Mana	10Cooldown	n/a	melee	instant	Blinks next to the target dealing 150 bonus damage and giving true sight of the enemy for 5 seconds.
4	100Mana	10Cooldown	n/a	melee	instant	Blinks next to the target dealing 200 bonus damage and giving true sight of the enemy for 5 seconds.

Notes:

• Basically its a blink strike that only works on range heroes. It also counters those tiresome windwalkers

Reverse damage - (active)

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The Mur'gul mastered the art of spliting range attacks, learned from Medusa from their brief encounter. He can split any attack and amplify it for the range it has to travel. ONLY works on range attacks.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	50Mana	15Cooldown	n/a	600AoE	5sDuration	Redirects 50% damage from the attacks and adds bonus damage for 2% distance traveled. Takes 50% damage.
2	55Mana	15Cooldown	n/a	600AoE	5sDuration	Redirects 50% damage from the attacks and adds bonus damage for 5% distance traveled. Takes 50% damage.
3	60Mana	15Cooldown	n/a	600AoE	5sDuration	Redirects 50% damage from the attacks and adds bonus damage for 5% distance traveled. Takes 50% damage.
4	65Mana	15Cooldown	n/a	600AoE	5sDuration	Redirects 50% damage from the attacks and adds bonus damage for 10% distance traveled. Takes 50% damage.

Notes:

• Makes you're enemies cry as their attacks come back when they try to harass you.
• Amplifies damage both from the coming of the arrow and returning.
• Does not stack with blade mail. Pure damage.

Mur'gul rage- (passive,triggered)

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With each attack received Makura enters a rage unitl he expands his rage onto a unit.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	n/a	n/a	n/a	n/a	4s	For each 5 attacks received you gain 25% AS and 5% move speed for 5 seconds
2	n/a	n/a	n/a	n/a	4s	For each 5 attacks received you gain 30% AS and 10% move speed for 5 seconds
3	n/a	n/a	n/a	n/a	4s	For each 5 attacks received you gain 35% AS and 15% move speed for 5 seconds
4	n/a	n/a	n/a	n/a	4s	For each 5 attacks received you gain 40% AS and 20% move speed for 5 seconds

Notes:

• Works on range and melee attacks.
• When you receive 5 hits while Murgul rage is on, it will reset the duration.
• Synergises with first and second skill while Walk on the edge is on cooldown so you accumulate as and ms, and second skill reverses half of the damage you take.

Arena of the gladiators - (Active)

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Perfecting his skills in earth magic, Mur'gul raises an arena and forces his foes to fight on melee. They gain bonus damage but are not able to wield their weapons well.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	150Mana	80sCooldown	600	600AoE	10s Duration	30 bonus damage to all units and slows all range units for 30%. Range units cannot attack beyond 350 range.
2	200Mana	70sCooldown	600	600AoE	15s Duration	60 bonus damage to all units and slows all range units for 40%. Range units cannot attack beyond 250 range.
3	25Mana	60sCooldown	self	600AoE	20s Duration	90 bonus damage to all units and slows all range units for 60%. Range units cannot attack beyond 150 range.

Notes:

• Basically disables all range DPS heroes.
• Numbers can be changed.
• Note that the best way to code this would be to reduce the sight range of range heroes(by placing a buff) so they have to get close to attack, don't know if it's code able.

Reviews would be appreciated. If you have pictures to provide, please free to post. Any comment is appreciated.

[toscomovil.]

check your lvl 4 walk on the edge

[[Vl]Mr.Blue]

iceforg uses this model to make a new hero in 6.65!!!NIght crawler!!take a different pic!!

[sandwichmelek]

Well, i thought it was different. Nightcrawler looks black. I will see what i can find.
If you find something feel free to post it. Anyway i need suggestions how to balance the skills.

[sandwichmelek]

Thanks for spotting the mistake EyeSight. I'll edit it soon.

[max_goh99]

Makura= teh neutral lobster dudes from the frozen throne night elf campaign.DWUH use that model FFS!It fits totally with the defensive thing from your skills and "meet medusa". they're both sea creatures right? All you need is some name changes and a new bg story to get a more refined version of your current concept.

[sandwichmelek]

Could you be more specific, a link on a page or the model. Dunno. Background story suggestion? I really appreciate you're reply, i'll se if i can find it.

[sandwichmelek]

I see....you mean this.... Whell it kinda doesn't suit the theme. I see that the name Makura is already taken on another Forum (other page). Well he kinda should look like a Mur'log,-nightcrawler problem.
But still thanks for the thought, i will see maybe i can utilize the model.

[talkingmuffin]

You mean a Murloc?

[sandwichmelek]

Its some kind of corrupted Murloc like this. I spotted an unused model, that IS NOT an murloc because Ice Frog was making Nghtcrawler, but it seems that it looks to similar.
I was looking in http://www.playdota.com/forums/12179...ft-iii-models/ by nothing

[Shatterman]

is he strength hero with high agi gain? im asking because you high lighted strenght in the stats section. else you gotta swap the colour codes

[sandwichmelek]

No he is Agility, ill fix it. Thanks for spotting it.

[easy2kill123]

umm
dude you have wrong grammar
not really a good name for a murloc

[sandwichmelek]

umm
dude you have wrong grammar
not really a good name for a murloc

Did you see any Dota heroes that have the name of a character from single player campaign? No Jaina Proudmoore or Arthas Or Uther. The only heroes are Ballanar and Lucifer maybe... And i didn't proof read this, and it's far good as English is not my first language. He is not a murloc, he's a Mur'gul wahtever better serves the team. I just want the Murloc/Mur'gul model, but somebody doesn't like it cause of Nightcrawler. I don't know why, because you have two Pandas, two trolls, two orcs(Warlock, Cahos knight) and nobody did complain. The theme is very different from Nightcrawlers, the only connection is that he's an assasin. I don't know if Nightcrawler is an murloc or an Mur'gul, as the only difference is that Mur'guls are corrupted Murlocs, serving the Scourge.

[SpectreShadows]

Interesting idea for a hero. The doom of ranged agi carries (or anyone ranged for that matter if you farm early on). However the duration of the ultimate ability (as well as the concept) seems a bit ... imbalanced. You might wanna remove the part where they cant leave the area. It would be nice if ranged heroes had a chance to escape at all. He counters invisibility so disabling teleport is way overpowered.

[sandwichmelek]

SpectreShadows i edited it, thanks for the suggestion

[sandwichmelek]

I don't want to review myself, and i need an model for this hero(cause nightcrawler is a murloc, so no murlocs are going to get implented)
This is a bump

[l0r4k]

I like the concept of Reverse Damage, could be lovely to use it, afterwards to use Blademail against glasscannons ^,^
EDIT: I mean after 1st there comes another, I know, that it does not stack.

[Ravanasura]

This dudes ulti kicks ass.. imagine a zeus fighting meelee rofl.. n1

[darkhunter]

Originally Posted by sandwichmelek

Did you see any Dota heroes that have the name of a character from single player campaign? No Jaina Proudmoore or Arthas Or Uther. The only heroes are Ballanar and Lucifer maybe... And i didn't proof read this, and it's far good as English is not my first language. He is not a murloc, he's a Mur'gul wahtever better serves the team. I just want the Murloc/Mur'gul model, but somebody doesn't like it cause of Nightcrawler. I don't know why, because you have two Pandas, two trolls, two orcs(Warlock, Cahos knight) and nobody did complain. The theme is very different from Nightcrawlers, the only connection is that he's an assasin. I don't know if Nightcrawler is an murloc or an Mur'gul, as the only difference is that Mur'guls are corrupted Murlocs, serving the Scourge.

You forgot REXXAR