[WALLPAPER] Know Your Limits

Daily Vitamin · 02-07-2010, 09:07 PM

Know Your Limits
By: Daily Vitamin

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-DV

Nerevarie · 02-07-2010, 09:17 PM

I dont like the way as it stays in one place it would be cooler if you added some moving effects to it. And the renders are not the greatest TBH. 3/6

Daily Vitamin · 02-08-2010, 01:51 AM

Well I was aiming for the free-falling effect. I wanted a cool windtrail behind him and I wanted to look like he was hanging in the sky.

Moridin239 · 02-08-2010, 09:50 AM

Okay. My 10 cents:

The Good:
1) The render along with the nicely done text. I like the caption. It fits the render. The render is also a pretty good one by itself.
2) The colours on the render.

The Bad:
1) I don't really get the designs behind him. I understand you wanted a kind of wind flow effect....but the lines behind him don't have much flow and are too solid to be any kind of after-image or wind
2) The text's orientation. Do NOT use the curved orientation. It doesn't fit the render and it doesn't fit the caption.

The Ugly: (Yes i just had to put this section :P)
1) This is probably just me but I prefer much darker wallpapers in general. The blue/white theme is nice...but it burns my eyes.

Lycan · 02-08-2010, 04:48 PM

He's jumping in plain air ?

Give him some buildings orsomething in the background... it doesn't show movement like this. Sure the "wings"/"Airtreks" are there and they look really good but still i'm missing the movement.

Nerevarie · 02-08-2010, 05:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Daily Vitamin

Well I was aiming for the free-falling effect. I wanted a cool windtrail behind him and I wanted to look like he was hanging in the sky.

If hes freefalling why there is only a trail behind him? makes no sense.

nitsthegame · 02-09-2010, 12:46 PM

i just hav 2 things to say abt this :

1. dont u think the render and the effect shld hav been a little larger?

2. the text, i am no expert in this but the text doesnt go well with the asssasin creed character

Wyk · 02-10-2010, 04:17 AM

Bad Text. The placement of the scenario should have been a lil bit lower. It being a bit high is leaving out too much space for the eye to catch. The rest is all fine. xD

02-07-2010, 09:07 PM	#1
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02-07-2010, 09:17 PM	#2
Nerevarie Banned Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Never say my anus again. Posts: 1,846 Blog Entries: 1	Re: [WALLPAPER] Know Your Limits I dont like the way as it stays in one place it would be cooler if you added some moving effects to it. And the renders are not the greatest TBH. 3/6

02-08-2010, 01:51 AM	#3
Daily Vitamin Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 316 Blog Entries: 4	Re: [WALLPAPER] Know Your Limits Well I was aiming for the free-falling effect. I wanted a cool windtrail behind him and I wanted to look like he was hanging in the sky. __________________ ----- Graphics Requests Finished: 3 » -- My Graphics Profile / My DeviantART Profile -- « REPULSIVE DREAMS FILL THE HEAD OF THE MAKER. -----

02-08-2010, 09:50 AM	#4
Moridin239 Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 440	Re: [WALLPAPER] Know Your Limits Okay. My 10 cents: The Good: 1) The render along with the nicely done text. I like the caption. It fits the render. The render is also a pretty good one by itself. 2) The colours on the render. The Bad: 1) I don't really get the designs behind him. I understand you wanted a kind of wind flow effect....but the lines behind him don't have much flow and are too solid to be any kind of after-image or wind 2) The text's orientation. Do NOT use the curved orientation. It doesn't fit the render and it doesn't fit the caption. The Ugly: (Yes i just had to put this section :P) 1) This is probably just me but I prefer much darker wallpapers in general. The blue/white theme is nice...but it burns my eyes. __________________ Visit my Graphics Portfolio by clicking my signature! And Comment!

02-09-2010, 12:46 PM	#7
nitsthegame Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: India Posts: 428	Re: [WALLPAPER] Know Your Limits i just hav 2 things to say abt this : 1. dont u think the render and the effect shld hav been a little larger? 2. the text, i am no expert in this but the text doesnt go well with the asssasin creed character __________________ a lesson without pain is meaningless, for you cannot gain something without sacrificing something else in return, but once you have overcome it and made it your own..... you will gain an irreplaceable fullmetal heart visit me at facebook and orkut Click to go to my deviantart page

02-10-2010, 04:17 AM	#8
Wyk Forum Staff Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: India / U.K. Posts: 3,546	Re: [WALLPAPER] Know Your Limits Bad Text. The placement of the scenario should have been a lil bit lower. It being a bit high is leaving out too much space for the eye to catch. The rest is all fine. xD __________________ LIKE It For 72 Virgins / Immortality / Large Tools of Trade