[STR/SCO] Cyrus Therepentous,the Black Dragonspawn

[MarcOlle]

Help me with any suggestion, because I'm not so familiar with the matter, any suggestion to suggest improvements in my "creations" is accepted.
And apologize for any problem in the "utterance", I'm not familiar with the English language.
And please, no complaining about the icons, I'm not good for making custom icons, rather than criticize, suggest a better.




Black Dragonspawn
Cyrus Therepentous

Background Story: After being expelled from his tribe, Cyrus seeks revenge after those who brought his humiliation. United with the Scourge, has several powers that help your allies, as has fear of being expelled from here too. With your powers burning enemies and another that melt enemies and heal friends. With a hit in the ground produces a large sphere of sand that makes it impossible to see through, and their skin is specially coated with a reflective scales.

Strength - 20 + [+2.60]
Agility - 18 + [+1.80]
Intelligence - 18 + [+2.00]

Affiliation:	Scourge
Damage:	46-67
Armor:	3
Movespeed:	295
Starting HP/MP:	560/300
Attack Range:	100

Mystical Steps - Trail

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After using this ability, Cyrus produces a trail acid for their enemies and healing to your allieds

Level	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Targets	Effects
1	85	30	N/A	250	10	Allied/Enemy Units	Heals / Damages 8 hit points per second
2	90	30	N/A	250	12	Allied/Enemy Units	Heals / Damages 12 hit points per second
3	95	30	N/A	250	15	Allied/Enemy Units	Heals / Damages 15 hit points per second
4	95	30	N/A	250	15	Allied/Enemy Units	Heals / Damages 18 hit points per second

Notes:

• Damage Type: Magical
  The damage is affected by the armor

Focus Stroke - AOE

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Cyrus concentrates your strength to launch a powerful stroke to stun and causes a "crack" in the natural armor of his opponents, leaving their weak to physical damages.

Level	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Targets	Effects
1	80	45	128	N/A	3.25*	Enemy Units	Damages 90, crack 20% of the armor, make immune to spells and stun for 1.25 sec
2	80	45	128	N/A	3.5*	Enemy Units	Damages 120, crack 35% of the armor, make immune to spells and stun for 1.75 sec
3	80	45	128	N/A	3.75*	Enemy Units	Damages 160, crack 50% of the armor, make immune to spells and stun for 2.25 sec
4	80	45	128	N/A	4*	Enemy Units	Damages 190, crack 65% of the armor, make immune to spells and stun for 2.75 sec

Notes:

• Damage Type: Physical
  The concentration does not prevent him from walking
  (*) Duration of concetration

Scales Reflectors - Passive

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Always a unit use a spell in the direction of Cyrus, he has a chance to reflect it to a random nearby unit, getting part of the effect of the spell cast on him.

Level	Mana	Cooldown	C.Range	AoE	Duration	Targets	Effects
1	N/A	N/A	N/A	650*	N/A	Any Unit	Cyrus has 15% chance to reflect the spell, taking 60% of its damage or effect
2	N/A	N/A	N/A	700*	N/A	Allied Units and Heroes / Enemy Heroes	Cyrus has 18% chance to reflect the spell, taking 50% of its damage or effect
3	N/A	N/A	N/A	750*	N/A	Allied Units / Enemy Heroes	Cyrus has 20% chance to reflect the spell, taking 40% of its damage or effect
4	N/A	N/A	N/A	800*	N/A	Enemy Heroes	Cyrus has 23% chance to reflect the spell, taking 30% of its damage or effect

Notes:

• Passive Skills aren't reflected by the scales
  Just Enemy Spells are reflected
  The casting hero can be the target of the reflection
  (*) The AoE are the "nearby units"

Immolation - Active/Deactive Ability

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Engulf Cyrus in flames, causing damage to nearby enemy heroes.Drains mana every time burns a hero.

Level	Mana	Cooldown	C.Range	AoE	Duration	Targets	Effects
1	9 per sec	N/A	N/A	175	N/A	Enemy Heroes	Activate Immolation to engulf this unit in flames, causing 25 damage per second to nearby enemy heroes. Drains mana every time burns a hero.
2	8 per sec	N/A	N/A	175	N/A	Enemy Heroes	Activate Immolation to engulf this unit in flames, causing 55 damage per second to nearby enemy heroes. Drains mana every time burns a hero.
3	7 per sec	N/A	N/A	175	N/A	Enemy Heroes	Activate Immolation to engulf this unit in flames, causing 85 damage per second to nearby enemy heroes. Drains mana every time burns a hero.

Notes:

• Damage Type: Magical
  Mana minimum: 180
  The Immolation can be deactived at any time
  Any Silence skill deactive Immolation
  Damage considers only half of the armor

Changelog:

03/07/10

• Changelog created
• Sand Dome replaced by Focus Stroke
• Mystical Steps: changed the heal to be equal to the damage and small cooldown
• Immolation: Mana Cost small

[Skynetsvk]

I hate that icon, it is in too blackned color

1. I think that cd is too big and that heal is too big too

2. hate that spell icon, highly unwarcraftis, 1. spell rank is better then 4. rank spell if on 1. rank spell allies will be invis within 0.6 sec and on 4. rank they will be invisibled in 1.2 sec, so then is 1. rank better, change it and too change that mana cost, too low

3. he will reflect 70% of done dmg? this spell is good I think

4.85 dmg/s for 9ms/s , naive, phatetic, impossible mana cost for use this spell is where ? if it is that 180 mana then it is really low

I like this hero nothing whaau special but he is good, I dont like color of that spells they are completly unharmony

[MarcOlle]

Originally Posted by Skynetsvk

I hate that icon, it is in too blackned color

1. I think that cd is too big and that heal is too big too

2. hate that spell icon, highly unwarcraftis, 1. spell rank is better then 4. rank spell if on 1. rank spell allies will be invis within 0.6 sec and on 4. rank they will be invisibled in 1.2 sec, so then is 1. rank better, change it and too change that mana cost, too low

3. he will reflect 70% of done dmg? this spell is good I think

4.85 dmg/s for 9ms/s , naive, phatetic, impossible mana cost for use this spell is where ? if it is that 180 mana then it is really low

I like this hero nothing whaau special but he is good, I dont like color of that spells they are completly unharmony

• I know my icons is bad, but is better than post (needed icon), I think...
• And the first skill will be better with the heals equal the damage and the cooldown halved?
• In the second spell, I think you understand wrong, I means - after the unit get out of the dome it will continue invisible for more X time
• Third Skill is exactly this
• If him ignores the armor and the mana cost for the 9/8/7 per sec will be better?

[Sanushama]

T-up

olha o poder do brasilllllllllllllllllllllll

ese kra dece forum sao mtu tao com mtu invej dos hero do br

[dixing]

I see you have some brazilian mafia here that votes T-up without really looking into the hero.

Anyway back onto the hero - some nice ideas for skills.
First skill is ok, really nothing special but ok.
Second skill is nice! special, a quick Mirana's ulti in a small aoe, very nice concept! however it doesnt really work with anything else.
Third skill seems unrelated, lets pretend its in level 1 or 2, it works AGAINST your second skill, you hide your allies but in the same time you might reflect a spell against you onto them! nonetheless the skill itself is ok.

Ultimate is a very big disappointment, most blant skill in the world, existing both in WC3 and in dota in the infernals and fire panda.

Now setting aside those problems, this hero has no synergy, meaning his skills dont really go together, for example : His ultimate is immolation, how do you get enemy heroes to get close to him? he is a STR melee hero, he wont be the first to be attacked in a team fight anyway, in order to make better use of immolation you either need to speed yourself up, or slow the enemies down, or somehow get enemies to attack you or something.
Same with the passive, why would enemies need to cast spells on you? you could make it so that the second skill is channeling so enemies would have to cast a skill on you to stun you and thus you create a sort of synergy!

Are you getting what I'm saying? Skills should rely on each other.

[MarcOlle]

Hero Updated!

[dixing]

updated... you took the only worthwhile skill and changed it, good job.

[Magnet199]

nice nice but 2 much cd