[AGI - NEUTRAL] Azure, The Forest Warden

[adityacakasana]

Forest Warden
Azure

Background Story:backgroundstory

Strength - 14 + 1.4
Agility - 20 + 2.2
Intelligence - 14 + 1.4

Affiliation:	Sentinel
Damage:	46-54
Armor:	3
Movespeed:	280
Starting HP/MP:	416/182
Attack Range:	600
Role:	Carry

Lethal Shot - [E] - (Active, Single - Target)

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Azure focusing his mind, launching a deadly shot that causing additional pain and bleeding. Channeling.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	120	24 seconds	900	N/A	3 seconds	Gives 105% Pure damage, and maim the enemy by 25% for 3 seconds. 2 seconds Channeling.
2	120	20 seconds	900	N/A	3 seconds	Gives 120% Pure damage, and maim the enemy by 25% for 3 seconds. 2 seconds Channeling.
3	120	16 seconds	900	N/A	3 seconds	Gives 135% Pure damage, and maim the enemy by 25% for 3 seconds. 1.5 seconds Channeling.
4	120	12 seconds	900	N/A	3 seconds	Gives 150% Pure damage, and maim the enemy by 25% for 3 seconds. 1.5 seconds Channeling.

Notes:

• For example you have Level 4 Lethal Shot, and your damage is 150. When you activate this skill, you will give the enemy 150 + 75 pure damage, and Maim(25%) for 3 seconds

Archer's Rule - [R] - (Passive)

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As an expert archer, Azure knows that attacking while running is the worst way to give death to her enemy. So she realized that she must maximize her attacking while standing, and vice versa.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	When not attacking for 1.75 seconds, increase Movement Speed by 20. When not running for 1.75 seconds, increase Attack Speed by 30
2	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	When not attacking for 1.5 seconds, increase Movement Speed by 30. When not running for 1.5 seconds, increase Attack Speed by 45
3	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	When not attacking for 1.25 seconds, increase Movement Speed by 40. When not running for 1.25 seconds, increase Attack Speed by 60
4	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	When not attacking , increase Movement Speed by 50. When not running for 1 second, increase Attack Speed by 75

Notes:

• notes

Unforgettable Glimpse [F] - (Passive)

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Living in forest for hundread years, Azure use her keen eye to observe whole forest. She uses her experience to watch out her enemies so that she will never forget them.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	6 seconds	Gives true sight for every enemy heroes who is revealing itself on her sight range, and also gives extra sight for every hero who left Azure's sight.
2	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	9 seconds	Gives true sight for every enemy heroes who is revealing itself on her sight range, and also gives extra sight for every hero who left Azure's sight.
3	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	12 seconds	Gives true sight for every enemy heroes who is revealing itself on her sight range, and also gives extra sight for every hero who left Azure's sight.
4	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	15 seconds	Gives true sight for every enemy heroes who is revealing itself on her sight range, and also gives extra sight for every hero who left Azure's sight.

Notes:

• The duration starts when the enemy unit revealing itself(for invisible units), or leaving Azure's sight range.
• The sight is like Bloodseeker's Styrgwyr's Thirst.

Nature's Aid - [D] - (Single-Target)

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One of her special knowledge is her ability to communicate with nature. Azure can ask the nature to relay her attack somewhere far away, eliminating her enemies

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	150	80 seconds	Global	N/A	6 seconds	60% damage can be relayed to enemies within 350 range from any trees.
2	175	80 seconds	Global	N/A	8 seconds	70% damage can be relayed to enemies within 400 range from any trees.
3	200	80 seconds	Global	N/A	10 seconds	80% damage can be relayed to enemies within 450 range from any trees.

Notes:

• This skill can only attack the enemy that Azure and allies has sight of.

Changelogs:

• March 8, 2010. Tweak the 2nd skill
• March 9, 2010. Tweak the 1st and 3rd skill

Hope you'll like it!
Please give a honest feedback, and also correction to my English

[TwoClips]

Hmm, quite a weak hero.

The spells tie into the concept decent enough but are far from original. Also they are quite weak when considering you want hero to be a carry. Another archer hero is often frowned upon too =/

[dugalla]

She should be a dam-dealer too, i think..

[MarcOlle]

Good skills, but I think the Lethal Shot is too weak and the Archer's Rule has too much attack speed...

With some adjustments the hero can be a lot of better

[adityacakasana]

Originally Posted by MarcOlle

Good skills, but I think the Lethal Shot is too weak and the Archer's Rule has too much attack speed...

With some adjustments the hero can be a lot of better

1st skill: Lethal Shot is too weak? OK I'll remake it soon..
2nd Skill: This skill is to make this hero balance due to her low AGI gain.

[kanzakill]

Archer's Rule:
Can you even attack while running to begin with? This is a skill that gives straight bonus attack speed and movement speed whichever way I see it.

And I don't support it.

[Armymen]

Why would you give an icon of a crossbow for "Archers rule"?
And I guess numbers on that one will need tweaks.
About "Unforgettable Glimpse". It will sure render Lothar's Edge useless as an escape mechanism from her. Or I didn't really understand it?

[adityacakasana]

Originally Posted by kanzakill

Archer's Rule:
Can you even attack while running to begin with? This is a skill that gives straight bonus attack speed and movement speed whichever way I see it.

And I don't support it.

Well, maybe you start with standing. But when the enemy run, if you chase him/her, you'll get your attack speed decreased(a lot). When you stop, your attack speed will be increase again(but soon you should run again).

That's why this skill is made like that

Originally Posted by Armymen

Why would you give an icon of a crossbow for "Archers rule"?
And I guess numbers on that one will need tweaks.
About "Unforgettable Glimpse". It will sure render Lothar's Edge useless as an escape mechanism from her. Or I didn't really understand it?

Icon: I just hoping if anybody could make a silhouette of archer..
Unforgettable Glimpse: Yup

[kanzakill]

Originally Posted by adityacakasana

Well, maybe you start with standing. But when the enemy run, if you chase him/her, you'll get your attack speed decreased(a lot). When you stop, your attack speed will be increase again(but soon you should run again).

That's why this skill is made like that

CAN YOU EVEN ATTACK WHILE MOVING AND VICE VERSA?
Lame.

[adityacakasana]

I just realize it.. I'll tweak it

[EDIT] I've tweak it.. Please give comment!

[Night Reaper]

Skill 1 : it's too weak I think.... 3 sec cooldown with 3 sec maim is good, but the mana cost it's too high for it....
Traxex's Frost Arrow is better than this....

Skill 2 : oh I see, I got this.... this is good for chasing hero and for 1vs1.... too plain....

Skill 3 : I don't like it.... too plain and weak....
Gem of True Sight is better than this....

Skill 4 : wow, too good for kill-stealing.... hahahaha....
okay, but it's still confusing.... think this, if the enemy hero is standing between 5 trees, he'll get 80%x5 of your attack...?

[AceOfJokers]

Don't have time to write a full review however two things

I like the ultimate, it's very cool!

With the third skill, I loathe the idea of it being a complete waste of 4 skill points if the enemy team has no invisible heroes. Honestly, it needs some other effects - of what kind I am unsure but having an ability being completely and utterly useless in most games is absurd

[adityacakasana]

Originally Posted by Night Reaper

Skill 1 : it's too weak I think.... 3 sec cooldown with 3 sec maim is good, but the mana cost it's too high for it....
Traxex's Frost Arrow is better than this....

Skill 2 : oh I see, I got this.... this is good for chasing hero and for 1vs1.... too plain....

Skill 3 : I don't like it.... too plain and weak....
Gem of True Sight is better than this....

Skill 4 : wow, too good for kill-stealing.... hahahaha....
okay, but it's still confusing.... think this, if the enemy hero is standing between 5 trees, he'll get 80%x5 of your attack...?

Skill 1: Hmm.. I'll tweak it later..
Skill 3: That's why you still need Gem!
Ultimate: Of course it's good.. but the attack is done by only 1 tree! If it's 5 trees, This will be the most-broken ultimate in DotA!

Originally Posted by Stix

Don't have time to write a full review however two things

I like the ultimate, it's very cool!

With the third skill, I loathe the idea of it being a complete waste of 4 skill points if the enemy team has no invisible heroes. Honestly, it needs some other effects - of what kind I am unsure but having an ability being completely and utterly useless in most games is absurd

3rd Skill: Hmm, actually i wanna say that this skill also gives extra 6/9/12/15 seconds vision for every hero that left Azure's sight. I'll change the description.

[shayayalee]

Skill 1 is fine.

Skill 2 needs the numbers checked, +50 MS/+75 AS with just 1 second switch time is too much. Either decrease the bonuses or increase the time it takes for them to activate. Or make it like when running, gets +10 MS each second up to 50 MS / While standing still gets +15 AS each second up to 75 AS.

I like the third skill, very powerful against invisible heroes and lothar, yet spesific enough not to make it OP.

The ultimate sounds cool, but i just dont get how it works, so no comments.

Overall, nice unique hero.

[adityacakasana]

Originally Posted by shayayalee

Skill 1 is fine.

Skill 2 needs the numbers checked, +50 MS/+75 AS with just 1 second switch time is too much. Either decrease the bonuses or increase the time it takes for them to activate. Or make it like when running, gets +10 MS each second up to 50 MS / While standing still gets +15 AS each second up to 75 AS.

I like the third skill, very powerful against invisible heroes and lothar, yet spesific enough not to make it OP.

The ultimate sounds cool, but i just dont get how it works, so no comments.

Overall, nice unique hero.

Skill 2: OK, I'll check it
Ultimate: Even I don't know.. Maybe I'll change it to be a Global Sight(Like when u activate iseedeadpeople) and increase range to 10000

[mxma]

Great skills weak stats.

Add stats points

[Jackalist]

Overall nice too. But it's very, very very very weak. T-Null for now

[Pomidor]

1st skill is too weak for channeling.
Maybe decrease mana cost to 90/80/70/65 and maim 25%/30%/35%/40% for 4 sec =)

When not attacking , increase Movement Speed by 50. When not running for 1 second, increase Attack Speed by 75

unit can't run in attack... so it will increase MS by 50? Maybe add delay like in 1-3 levels?

[lorejeff]

nyc hero,.,
but i think you have got an idea from alleria,.,ryt?

[Nizaris]

Skill 2 is +AS and +MS?I agree with kanzakill, archers don't shoot while running, that is why i suggest my archer hero can shoot while moving, but it is uncodeable

I don't understand what the ultimate is actually do? The trees become alive or what? Enememy heroes just got damage if going near trees? If the trees become alive it is The Prophet OP...

Well, i myself researching to create perfect archer...i find archer class is under power in anyway compared to melee and magic class heroes. If tweaking damage it become OP, if tweaking spell they are not archers anymore but a magician.

The way i see only Alleria seems as a decend archer but her skills are nothing for me...pin down enemies on trees? I still don't see what is the significant on that also her powershot against the nature of tree loving Elves.

Drow Ranger is my favorite, but she is consider as WEAKEST of all heroes.