[INT-NEUT] Haze, the Occultist

NoThlnG · 03-26-2010, 04:56 AM

the Occultist
Haze

Strength - 20 + 2.1
Agility - 9 + 1.2
Intelligence - 31 + 2.7

Affiliation:	Neutral
Damage:	36-50
Armor:	2
Movespeed:	290
Starting HP/MP:	530/403
Attack Range:	600

Telekinesis - (Active, Point Target)

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Haze damages an targeted enemy by moving it to a point. The enemy will get bonus damage based on number of units it collides with.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	75	12 seconds	1000	200 AoE (Collision)	N/A	Moves 300 unit. 100 initial damage + 20 each collision
2	100	12 seconds	1000	200 AoE (Collision)	N/A	Moves 400 unit. 150 initial damage + 30 each collision
3	125	12 seconds	1000	200 AoE (Collision)	N/A	Moves 500 unit. 200 initial damage + 40 each collision
4	150	12 seconds	1000	200 AoE (Collision)	N/A	Moves 600 unit. 250 initial damage + 50 each collision

Notes:

Max bonus damage for collision is 5 times
Gain "Set Target" as subskill

Set Target - (Active, Enemy Target)

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Set a target enemy for telekinesis

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	N/A	1 seconds	700	N/A	N/A	None

Notes:

Gain automatically when you level up "Telekinesis"
You can see small visual above the targeted enemy (allied only)

Imprecation - (2Type)

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Haze uses curse on enemies in the targeted area. After 3 seconds, all cursed enemies will be unable to cast spell for a duration. When the duration over, the enemies will get percentage of received damaged as bonus damage.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	100	20 seconds	700	500	3 seconds	15% amplification
2	110	20 seconds	700	500	4 seconds	20% amplification
3	120	20 seconds	700	500	5 seconds	25% amplification
4	130	20 seconds	700	500	6 seconds	30% amplification

Notes:

2Notes

Mystical Barrier - (Active, Toggle-able)

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Haze summons mystical barrier that will knockback and damages enemies who attempt to cross it. Haze will lose 20 + 5% of max mana per second until deactivated

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	N/A	N/A	N/A	300 AoE	N/A	50 damage and 200 knockback
2	N/A	N/A	N/A	400 AoE	N/A	90 damage and 200 knockback
3	N/A	N/A	N/A	500 AoE	N/A	110 damage and 200 knockback
4	N/A	N/A	N/A	600 AoE	N/A	150 damage and 200 knockback

Notes:

Enemies still can go in and go out via blink like moves (leap, pounce, etc. are not included)

Hallucination - (Active, Instant)

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Haze creates powerful hallucination that will cause mental damages to nearby enemies. Enemies in AoE will be disabled for a duration. Haze will absorb hp and mana from the enemies every seconds for the duration. The duration of hallucination depends on Haze's intelligence. Channeling

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	200	120 seconds	N/A	600 AoE	5% of Haze's Intelligence	Drain 40 hp and mana per seconds
2	200	90 seconds	N/A	600 AoE	5% of Haze's Intelligence	Drain 60 hp and mana per seconds
3	200	60 seconds	N/A	600 AoE	5% of Haze's Intelligence	Drain 80 hp and mana per seconds

Notes:

The hp and mana gain of Haze will not increase as the number of enemies in AoE increase
Enemies that enters the AoE before the duration finish will be damaged and disabled also

OMGitsPAPI · 03-26-2010, 05:57 AM

Can you fix it up a bit, Barely understand the skills >.<

1st Post!!

NoThlnG · 03-26-2010, 06:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MKBCruise

Can you fix it up a bit, Barely understand the skills >.<

1st Post!!

Which one? I think the 1st skill is clear enough...

sandwichmelek · 03-26-2010, 09:08 AM

Here are the icons, they are all blue and meh, mana was always blue.

OMGitsPAPI · 03-26-2010, 09:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NoThlnG

Which one? I think the 1st skill is clear enough...

nvm its fine now

probably me

I always see [.img][./img] everyone lol

carlvic · 03-26-2010, 09:54 AM

uhmm whats 2nd spell?

NoThlnG · 03-26-2010, 10:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by carlvic

uhmm whats 2nd spell?

That's why this hero is still in progress... Because I don't have 2nd skill

Kanashimi · 03-26-2010, 09:49 PM

What will happen if you use Set Target before "Telekinesis"?
And what do you mean by "Disabled" in Hallucination?
I mean, that are an infinity of disables.

NoThlnG · 03-27-2010, 02:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kanashimi

What will happen if you use Set Target before "Telekinesis"?

Err.. you have to "Set Target" before "Telekinesis" else you will have no target to move...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kanashimi

And what do you mean by "Disabled" in Hallucination?
I mean, that are an infinity of disables.

Like Fiend's Grip or Black Hole. They can't do anything for the duration

コクーン · 03-27-2010, 03:43 AM

What's [HIP]? Didn't read anything from OP.

JakiroONeal · 03-27-2010, 03:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Weedle

What's [HIP]? Didn't read anything from OP.

i believe it's Hero In Progress

carlvic · 03-27-2010, 04:33 AM

u shud have posted WIP instead^^
waiting for 2nd spell

NoThlnG · 03-27-2010, 04:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Weedle

What's [HIP]? Didn't read anything from OP.

You can read it below the title as thread description...

Idealistic · 03-27-2010, 05:13 AM

Use sandwichmelek's icons. They're nice.

Idealistic · 03-27-2010, 05:19 AM

1st skill is nice. But I think damage is too low.

2nd skill is mia.

I think the 3rd skill is nice also, but the manacost is too high.

Ulti is pretty lousy. Just compare it to Pugna's ulti. I think it should be 50/80/110 HP and mana at a 30 second cooldown.

Definitely needs some reworking.

---------- Post added at 01:19 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:18 PM ----------

What is the main role of this hero? This spells don't seem to synergise at all.

NoThlnG · 03-27-2010, 10:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Idealistic

1st skill is nice. But I think damage is too low.

2nd skill is mia.

I think the 3rd skill is nice also, but the manacost is too high.

Ulti is pretty lousy. Just compare it to Pugna's ulti. I think it should be 50/80/110 HP and mana at a 30 second cooldown.

Definitely needs some reworking.

---------- Post added at 01:19 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:18 PM ----------

What is the main role of this hero? This spells don't seem to synergise at all.

Increased the dmg of 1st skill and reduced a bit the mana cost of 3rd skill.

For ulti, I reduced the hp and mana absorb per second but make it constant AoE.

Remember that this disables enemies also unlike Pugna's ulti.

NeWnAr · 03-29-2010, 06:54 AM

I have an idea for the second skill. But you gotta find the icon yourself.

Pentalock (Passive; Self-centered AoE)

Tooltip: Haze emits an aura conjured through the image of a large Pentagram on the ground. Enemies caught in the pentagram will receive a debuff amplifying the magical damage done to them. Whenever Haze stops moving for more than 3 seconds, the pentagram increases in size up to a certain maximum and slows AS and MS for 20% of all enemy units within the total area. Effect dispels once Haze moves or if Haze dies.

Level 1: 300 aura AoE, amplifies for 5% of magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds upto 600 AoE.

Level 2: 400 aura AoE, amplifies for 10% of magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds upto 800 AoE.

Level 3: 500 aura AoE, amplifies for 15% of magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds upto 100 AoE.

Level 4 : 600 aura AoE, amplifies for 20% magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds up to 1100 AoE.

Note:

1) The AoE increase only depends on the time Haze stops moving AFTER he stands still for 3 seconds. Meaning for the first 3 seconds he doesn't move there is NOTHING. From the 4th second onwards the slow and AoE increase starts till the max AoE, where it then stays no matter how long you stand still.

2) Enemies CANNOT see the pentagram. But they WILL see a debuff on their status when they are affected by the passive.

NoThlnG · 03-29-2010, 10:27 AM

@newnar : It seems a bit complicated. It took a while for me to understand it completely. Hmm.... Idea is nice. But I already have 2 self-centered AoE... So, I'll try to find other skill for now

NeWnAr · 03-30-2010, 07:50 AM

If you are concerned with too many self-centered AoE spells, I recommend you changing Hallucination to something that produces invulnerable illusions(like death knight's ult in ladder).

chadpiety123 · 03-31-2010, 07:21 AM

This is hard. I must say. Maybe a delayed AoE silence + slow would be nice here. That one can synergize with most of your skills and will definitely make this hero a well-rounded support hero

03-26-2010, 05:57 AM	#2
OMGitsPAPI Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Canada,SK Posts: 1,055	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist Can you fix it up a bit, Barely understand the skills >.< 1st Post!! __________________

03-26-2010, 09:08 AM	#4
sandwichmelek Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 1,248 Blog Entries: 3	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist Here are the icons, they are all blue and meh, mana was always blue. Attached Images __________________ Disclaimer: Anything i post in a spoiler box is here only for info, read at your own risk. I do not take responsibility of you getting insulted.

03-26-2010, 09:54 AM	#6
carlvic Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In the sky... with Bob Posts: 1,812 Blog Entries: 6	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist uhmm whats 2nd spell? __________________

03-26-2010, 09:49 PM	#8
Kanashimi Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Brazil Posts: 1,254	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist What will happen if you use Set Target before "Telekinesis"? And what do you mean by "Disabled" in Hallucination? I mean, that are an infinity of disables. __________________ ~Kanashimi X Kanashimi~

Last edited by Kanashimi; 03-26-2010 at 10:14 PM.

03-27-2010, 03:43 AM	#10
コクーン Banned Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 6,282 Blog Entries: 3	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist What's [HIP]? Didn't read anything from OP.

03-27-2010, 04:33 AM	#12
carlvic Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In the sky... with Bob Posts: 1,812 Blog Entries: 6	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist u shud have posted WIP instead^^ waiting for 2nd spell __________________

03-27-2010, 05:13 AM	#14
Idealistic Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Singapore Posts: 185 Blog Entries: 1	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist Use sandwichmelek's icons. They're nice.

03-27-2010, 05:19 AM	#15
Idealistic Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Singapore Posts: 185 Blog Entries: 1	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist 1st skill is nice. But I think damage is too low. 2nd skill is mia. I think the 3rd skill is nice also, but the manacost is too high. Ulti is pretty lousy. Just compare it to Pugna's ulti. I think it should be 50/80/110 HP and mana at a 30 second cooldown. Definitely needs some reworking. ---------- Post added at 01:19 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:18 PM ---------- What is the main role of this hero? This spells don't seem to synergise at all.

03-29-2010, 06:54 AM	#17
NeWnAr Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The Nether Posts: 245	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist I have an idea for the second skill. But you gotta find the icon yourself. Pentalock (Passive; Self-centered AoE) Tooltip: Haze emits an aura conjured through the image of a large Pentagram on the ground. Enemies caught in the pentagram will receive a debuff amplifying the magical damage done to them. Whenever Haze stops moving for more than 3 seconds, the pentagram increases in size up to a certain maximum and slows AS and MS for 20% of all enemy units within the total area. Effect dispels once Haze moves or if Haze dies. Level 1: 300 aura AoE, amplifies for 5% of magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds upto 600 AoE. Level 2: 400 aura AoE, amplifies for 10% of magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds upto 800 AoE. Level 3: 500 aura AoE, amplifies for 15% of magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds upto 100 AoE. Level 4 : 600 aura AoE, amplifies for 20% magical damage. AoE increases by 10% for each second after Haze stops moving for 3 seconds up to 1100 AoE. Note: 1) The AoE increase only depends on the time Haze stops moving AFTER he stands still for 3 seconds. Meaning for the first 3 seconds he doesn't move there is NOTHING. From the 4th second onwards the slow and AoE increase starts till the max AoE, where it then stays no matter how long you stand still. 2) Enemies CANNOT see the pentagram. But they WILL see a debuff on their status when they are affected by the passive. __________________ I do reviews. Nope. I do good reviews. PM me for reviews.

03-29-2010, 10:27 AM	#18
NoThlnG Forum Staff Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Nowhere Posts: 14,371 Blog Entries: 8	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist @newnar : It seems a bit complicated. It took a while for me to understand it completely. Hmm.... Idea is nice. But I already have 2 self-centered AoE... So, I'll try to find other skill for now __________________ Assassin's Creed Helpful Links Suggestions Epic Quotes . Credits to Lotus V Eater . . How to Get Your Suggestion Implemented Custom Model GIF Request Suggestion Assisstor's Thread Guides, Lists and Templates How to Become a Moderator . . Suggestion Portfolio My Ability Collections .

03-30-2010, 07:50 AM	#19
NeWnAr Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: The Nether Posts: 245	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist If you are concerned with too many self-centered AoE spells, I recommend you changing Hallucination to something that produces invulnerable illusions(like death knight's ult in ladder). __________________ I do reviews. Nope. I do good reviews. PM me for reviews.

03-31-2010, 07:21 AM	#20
chadpiety123 Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 2,616	Re: [HIP][INT-NEUT]Haze, the Occultist This is hard. I must say. Maybe a delayed AoE silence + slow would be nice here. That one can synergize with most of your skills and will definitely make this hero a well-rounded support hero __________________ Hi, I'm new here. Hope people could help me out start a new suggestion!