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[Zuul]

Just a plce to post some thoughts/lyrics/poems or whatever you feel like.

I KNOW ILL KNOW:

Today, at last I'm not alone,
Sharing the world with people unknown
Maybe I will find you, my love
Walking through that door.

{chorus}
When I see you
When I feel you
I know, I'll know

I won’t open my eyes to anyone,
Till you're staring back at me.
Your pretty face I know I’ll know,
Just looking at you will free my soul.

{chorus}

Everyday the wait goes on,
I see you in my mind, I have you in my dreams.
If the sentence is life without you,
Then you must come and set me free


I’ll look for you through time itself,
‘Coz your pretty face, I know I’ll know.

[Zuul]

The Joy OF Murder:

Together we shall fall, through this night of eternity.
No more remorse, no more pain is what's in store for you and me.
The sky shall burn in your wretched face
We long for the killing of the dominant race.

Side by side they will fall to the ground,
and there is no one left to help them up.
All has been killed, there is nothing left,
You can scurrle through the ashes for that someone saved.

The blood in the streets is a sign of relief,
the Heathens is extinct is what I believe.
The Joy Murder can bring is devastating to most,
but I cant complain now that the Heathans is lost

Put down your guns, put down your bombs,
for the light in the sky is turning blue again

Happy we go home to rest for the night,
coz tomorrow at dawn, its the N****** we fight!

[Zuul]

Edgar Allan Poe:
Spirits of the Dead

Thy soul shall find itself alone
'Mid dark thoughts of the grey tomb-stone;
Not one, of all the crowd, to pry
Into thine hour of secrecy.

Be silent in that solitude,
Which is not loneliness - for then
The spirits of the dead, who stood
In life before thee, are again
In death around thee, and their will
Shall overshadow thee; be still.

The night, though clear, shall frown,
And the stars shall not look down
From their high thrones in the Heaven
With light like hope to mortals given,
But their red orbs, without beam,
To thy weariness shall seem
As a burning and a fever
Which would cling to thee for ever.

Now are thoughts thou shalt not banish,
Now are visions ne'er to vanish;
From thy spirit shall they pass
No more, like dew-drop from the grass.

The breeze, the breath of God, is still,
And the mist upon the hill
Shadowy, shadowy, yet unbroken,
Is a symbol and a token.
How it hangs upon the trees
The Mystery of Mysteries

[Zuul]

- Personal Demon -

She Wakes Up To Wake It Up
And Dresses To Disguise It,
Feeding It Not All The Time
But Keeping It From Dying.

Faith, Just A Word, Word Just A Book

It Wakes Up To Wake Her Up
And Dresses To Disguise It
Keeping Him Not Just Alive , But
Feeding All The Time

Talk To Her, It "Knows The Way"
Burning Him Onto Another

Dont Give Him Grip, Dont Tempt To
Stray, He'll Keep You Alive Till Death You Will Pay...

[Pikula]

The Treason Wall

Let me tell you about the loss of all
The failing of all that we hold dear
Wrapped up nicely in ourselves

Chaos resolves
That which order defiles
Worthless lives
Are ordered blind

I don't believe
Taste and you will see
That all belongs to me
I don't believe
I won't believe

I raise my hand against it all
For those who don't recognize the call
Will the sense to overcome these nestled walls
Going to break it down

Let me nail you to the treason wall
Stab the night and the day from your sight
And set the thought to flame

Feeble devout
Nothing resides
Break it to pieces
That obstinate mind

I raise my fist to hold the line
Against those who set themselves on high
Going to break it down

[lacquerhead]

Originally Posted by Zuul

Just a plce to post some thoughts/lyrics/poems or whatever you feel like.

I KNOW ILL KNOW:

Today, at last I'm not alone,
Sharing the world with people unknown
Maybe I will find you, my love
Walking through that door.

{chorus}
When I see you
When I feel you
I know, I'll know

I won’t open my eyes to anyone,
Till you're staring back at me.
Your pretty face I know I’ll know,
Just looking at you will free my soul.

{chorus}

Everyday the wait goes on,
I see you in my mind, I have you in my dreams.
If the sentence is life without you,
Then you must come and set me free


I’ll look for you through time itself,
‘Coz your pretty face, I know I’ll know.

Is there any music to accompany this?

[FundamentalUnit]

The Dance of the Dead

The warder he gazes o' the night
On the graveyards under him lying,
The moon into clearness throws all by her light,
The night with the daylight is vying.
There's a stir in the graves, and forth from their tombs
The form of a man, then a woman next looms
In garments long trailing and snowy.

They stretch themselves out, and with eager delight
Join the bones for the revel and dancing --
Young and old, rich and poor, the lady and the knight,
Their trains are a hindrance to dancing.
And since here by shame they no longer are bound,
They shuffle them off, and lo, strewn lie around
Their garments on each little hillock.

Here rises a shank, and a leg wobbles there
With lewd diabolical gesture;
And clatter and rattle of bones you might hear,
As of one beating sticks to a measure.
This seems to the warder a laughable game:
Then the tempter, low whispering, up to him came:
"In one of their shrouds go and wrap thee."

'Twas done soon as said; then he gained in wild flight
Concealment behind the church portal,
The moon all the while throws her bright beams of light
On the dance where they revel and sport all.
First one, then another, dispersed all are they,
And donning their shrouds steal the spectres away,
And under the graves all is quiet.

But one of them stumbles and fumbles along,
'Midst the tombstones groping intently;
But none of his comrades have done him this wrong,
His shroud in the breeze 'gins to scent he.
He rattles the door of the tower, but can find
No entrance -- good luck to the warder behind! --
'Tis barred with blest crosses of metal.

His shroud must he have, or rest can he ne'er;
And so, without further preambles,
The old Gothic carving he grips then and there,
From turret to pinnacle scrambles.
Alas for the warder! all's over, I fear;
From buttress to buttress in dev'lish career
He climbs like a long-legged spider.

The warder he trembles, and pale doth he look,
That shroud he would gladly be giving,
When piercing transfixed it a sharp-pointed hook!
He thought his last hour he was living.
Clouds cover already the vanishing moon,
With thunderous clang beats the clock a loud One --
Below lies the skeleton, shattered.

[Zuul]

Originally Posted by laquerhead

Is there any music to accompany this?

Ive got Accoustic music for this , but its not exactly what I had in mind.
Why? It any good?

[Zuul]

1:1 Ratio

My mind suffers. I feel like I'm walking over to the asylum everyday.
I can’t really express the feeling of this solitude that I am damned to go through.
Not because I am indifferently different – or more correct, choose to be, but because I see life differently than the stereotypical, hypocritical John on the bus. I hope.
Try making friends when you feel that people can not communicate with you on an intellectual level. Are their brains not functioning properly? Do they choose to be so dull-witted?
Again, I feel like I'm morphing into a sole crazy soul. I'm no addict, well… maybe a bit of an addict. Rather put it in proper terms, I’ve developed an addiction to learn. I want to understand more. I don’t feel fit enough to live with myself. Give me something that will actually end. A challenge. No more measly petty trivia’s.
Regrettably we have to live in this time capsule.
The boundaries of time limit me to reach my full potential.
Maybe, just maybe, I have to figure out how to deceive time.
Just imagine, a multi-colored luminescent stream of eternal knowledge will spurt Instantaneously into the new found world, schooling the imbecilic and enhancing the shrewd.

Don’t you Want to live here with me?

[ILikeYou]

Listen to the tales and romanticize,
How we follow the path of the hero

Boast about the day when the rivers overrun,
How we'll* rise to the height of our halo.

Listen to the tales as we all rationalize
Our way into the arms of the savior
Feigning all the trials and the tribulations,

None of us have actually been there,
Not like you...

Ignorant siblings in the congregation
Gather around spewing sympathy,
Spare me...

None of them can even hold a candle up to you,
Blinded by choices these hypocrites won't see

But enough about the collective Judas
Who could deny you were the one who illuminated
my* little piece of the divine

This little light of mine, the* gift you passed onto me,
I'm gonna let it shine,
to guide you safely on your way

Your way home...

[The Observer]

I didn't make this, just watched charlie the unicorn earlier and so far in all my life, this has been one of the best things that I would love to quote,

"What is the door?"
"The door is everything. All that once was and all that will be. The door controls time and space, love and death. THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR MIND. THE DOOR CAN SEE INTO YOUR SOUL."
"Really? The door can do all that?"
"Hehe, no."

Concept is old, but it was pretty good for me.

[Mr. Foxxie]

Mary had a little lamb, little lamb, little lamb,
Mary had a little lamb, its fleece was white as snow.

Everywhere that Mary went, Mary went, Mary went,
Everywhere that Mary went the lamb was sure to go.

It followed her to school one day, school one day, school one day,
It followed her to school one day, it was against the rules.\

It made the children laugh and play, laugh and play, laugh and play,
It made the children laugh and play to see a lamb at school.

[Shadow Fury]

Mortal Sin

A poem based on the concept that the very thing holding us back from perfection and immortality is our mortality itself, potrayed here as a sin. I give you the eighth, and literally most deadly, sin.

I am.
But of course redundancy does
Hang my head in shame. For if I
Were not, would I? Eternal loss weighed
Along would fill not a thimble, nor the said
Golden spoon that feeds the best in us.
I am trapped. Now circular logic does
Less harm to me; I use him less
And so potray more meaning in my selfsaid grace:
The area around my space. Of course,
To add would grow my sphere, and to exponent
Far greater than mere volume's thrice tenant
Factored. Surrounded by the edges of
Free space; built of reality as far as
I conceive. The walls are set.
They cover me in shadow. Although,
More accurately, they hide the sun from me
And me, from bright day-ness so free;
To be vexed in a coffin for my soul.
The hours pass, and I submit my toll
To heavy masses of lethargy, boredom
And still, so much so, I would
Lend my kingdom for a gap
In this abysmal bliss of ignorance.
I do begin to learn to tap the
Solitary rays of light that dwell
In the corners of my mind. And well,
Must I say, they grant me sight
Far beyond the pitiful plight
Of darkened eyes and forethought's lore.
And though it was this seeing wore
Me out, although, I did not rest
My mind; no surrender at my feeble
Body's behest - I could see from
The inside. Darkness was my dawn.
And I began to see, distinctively, these
Little cracks upon those walls entombing
Might that far outshone the decays
Of your stone-cold tomb. Because, you see,
Discernibly, these cracks formed patterns, one for one;
Aligned in perfect, they seemed to form
A language most oft forgotten before discovered.
And I found these cracks did cover
All the witness of my cell. They spoke out
Once, and spoke a word; A word forever,
Tales to tell. They were "bricks", I guess:
Little shaped casts of stone that modelled
My world. And time passed nought, I worried less,
And hoped for more. Comprehension shone forth,
Ceil' to floor, embalming me in nothing less
Than a cask of droughty water's nests.
No breaks, I tried forevermore to comprehend
The nature of my captive's deeds [and motives abound]
And concluded by my firm and sound logic
That I could break free.
A word here, though, on logic. It was
A word on whom I built implicit trust, depending
On the world to take its course: It must
Follow logic, by logic itself! An illogical
Point of redundancy must remain to counter
Unsurmountable trains of thought. Unmount her,
And lay her bare for all to see, this
The best will be taken, and what will remain
Is logic's dark and ugly stain. But enough,
The world turns; time flies and my tale falls
Short, I did find that I could effort the
Building blocks of nature, were it
Against the very purpose. And I tried, and I
Worked to gain the light to supplement my
Inner one that blazed content. Time ran still,
And breaths ran quick, I scratched the
Surface, nothing more. My wit was matched
By equal dullness from the stone: No spark
Could from this flint atone. But yet I am,
And so I was, a purpose blinder to
The stars than the day herself. Her
Memory shone on me and strength flowed through
My pains. I was rewarded finally, when I
Burst through a crack, and light spilled from
The other end. I did bend my motives wrong
To gluttony of the savoured light - The day
Of my eternal might. I had found the way!
I had struck gold. Figuratively,
Gold meant no more than a drink to a parched
Throat to me. My grappling hands searched
Only for the light that set me free. I
Redoubled my strokes upon my tomb; which
Grew brighter with my every strike to
Leash the light less, divinely combed through
My body, and set it free.
I broke through! The gap was wide. A man
Could pass through, but I did not. The sight
Beheld me captive, as I looked full upon myself;
Through me; through the wall, across the
Guard that had held me back from
The bitterest truth: The light I had sought
In reflection of doubt, it was nought but a glimmer
Of stray hope, And as I stared, I knew
It was my own; and the light grew dimmer.

[Captain Planet]

@OP: They're beautiful... Mind if I share something?

I Can Still Remember

I can still remember that day
The day that we first met
Can you remember that day?
When we first looked into each other’s eyes?

I knew it at first sight
That someday we might
Be as one forever
You and me joined together

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can still remember that day
The day that you proposed
Can you remember that day?
When we were first engaged?

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can still remember that day
The day that shook our world
Can you remember that day?
The day that tore us apart?

I can’t remember the name
A name I am glad I forgot
Can’t remember the name
The name that tore us up

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can still remember
The day you left forever
I don’t know how I coped
The loss of you was deep and sore


But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can remember,
The day you passed away
And though you have left me behind,
You take my love with you while I stay behind

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity
And while these wounds are forever sore
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

But dude, those are some seriously good piece of work IMO. Nice one

Also, a collective of poetry/lyrics...stickiness?

[Shadow Fury]

Originally Posted by The_Juggernaut

@OP: They're beautiful... Mind if I share something?

I Can Still Remember

I can still remember that day
The day that we first met
Can you remember that day?
When we first looked into each other’s eyes?

I knew it at first sight
That someday we might
Be as one forever
You and me joined together

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can still remember that day
The day that you proposed
Can you remember that day?
When we were first engaged?

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can still remember that day
The day that shook our world
Can you remember that day?
The day that tore us apart?

I can’t remember the name
A name I am glad I forgot
Can’t remember the name
The name that tore us up

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can still remember
The day you left forever
I don’t know how I coped
The loss of you was deep and sore


But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

I can remember,
The day you passed away
And though you have left me behind,
You take my love with you while I stay behind

But now on these dark and lonely nights,
I can still see you and me
For while we are no more
And though the wounds are raw,
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity
And while these wounds are forever sore
My love for thee shall go on for all of eternity

But dude, those are some seriously good piece of work IMO. Nice one

Also, a collective of poetry/lyrics...stickiness?

Spoiler doesn't work, but your poem would really make a great song!

[Zuul]

@The_Juggernaut:

Is your writing out of personal experience or just a thought?
Its a sad scenario. Sorry to hear.

it was a kinda hard for me to feel it as a song. but poem, well done.
Post some more, i like your writing. One can feel emotion while reading it. Kudos.

[Captain Planet]

Originally Posted by Zuul

@The_Juggernaut:

Is your writing out of personal experience or just a thought?
Its a sad scenario. Sorry to hear.

it was a kinda hard for me to feel it as a song. but poem, well done.
Post some more, i like your writing. One can feel emotion while reading it. Kudos.

Just a thought. But it's how I feel sometimes...

No matter and thanks ^_^

This one isn't as good I think but I'll still share it anyway:

Ode to Sally

We thought it would last forever
You and me together
We had each other, nothing more
And for both of us ‘twas enough

Life’s not easy, when you love another
And no one supports you
Like a slap in the face,
All to try and put you in your place

Oh Sally why did you jump?
We had all we needed
We had the most important thing in the world
We always had each other

They drove you over the edge
They have your blood on their hands
We were like ugly ducklings
Rejected and unloved by all,
Except by each other

Oh Sally why did you jump?
We had all we needed
We had the most important thing in the world
We always had each other

“Oh Tara where were you when I jumped?
You should have been there to pull me back,
You should have been there, to pull me into your loving arms”

Oh Sally this is my tribute to thee
You have left me behind and with no choice
Were you go I go
Where you jump I jump

Oh Sally why did you jump?
We had all we needed
We had the most important thing in the world
We always had each other

We always had each other
But now you’re gone
There’s nothing for me
Nothing keeping me here
You have left me feeling hollow
You have jumped
Now I shall follow

[Zuul]

A Perfect Circle - the Pakage

Clever got me this far
Then tricky got me in
Eye on what i'm after
I don't need another friend
Smile and drop the cliche
'Till you think I'm listening
I take just what I came for
Then I'm out the door again

Peripheral on the package
Don't care to settle in
Time to feed the monster
I don't need another friend
Comfort is a mystery
Crawling out of my own skin
Just give me what I came for, then I'm out the door again

[chorus]
Lie to get what I came for
Lie to get just what I need
Lie to get what I crave
Lie and smile to get what's mine

Eye on what i'm after
I don't need another friend
Nod and watch your lips move
If you need me to pretend
Because clever got me this far
Then tricky got me in
I'll take just what I came for
Then I'm out the door again

[chorus]

Give this to me
Mine, mine, mine
Take what's mine
Mine, mine, mine
Take what's mine
Mine, mine, mine

[chorus]

Give this to me
Take what's mine
Mine, mine, mine
Take what's mine
Give this to me

Take what's mine, take what's mine, mine...

[The Observer]

i have some crappy poem here.

Change of topic.

I was caught by surprise,
turns out you're an angel in disguise.
Fell onto your feet,
kissed your lips so sweet.

Heaven's above,
You fly like a dove.
Forgot the words to say,
all I can do is pray.

An angel in my sight,
kissed her lips so tight.
An angel in my sight,
hugged her oh so tight.

Lured her into temptation,
led her to the right direction.
North, east, west, south,
keeping the words inside my mouth.

Pulled her hand into my heart,
it's as if we can never be apart.
Whispering to her what love can create,
the key which would open this broken heart's gate.

An angel in my sight,
kissed her lips so tight.
An angel in my sight,
hugged her oh so tight.

Keeping her closer next to my chest,
making her listen to my heartbeat at it's best.
Forgot to say that I love her so,
Forgot to say that i'll never let go...

more on my blog.

[Bad Apple]

She chose to walk alone
Though others wondered why
Refused to look before her,
Kept eyes cast upwards,
Towards the sky.

She didn't have companions
No need for earthly things.
Only wanted freedom,
From what she felt were
Puppet strings.

She longed to be a bird. That she might fly away.
She pitied every blade of grass
For planted they would stay.

She longed to be a flame,
That brightly danced alone.
Felt jealous of the steam
That made the air its only home.

Some say she wished too hard.
Some say she wished too long.
But we awoke one autumn day
To find that she was gone.

The trees, they say stood witness.
The sky refused to tell.
But someone who had seen it said
The story played out well.

She spread her arms out wide.
Breathed in the break of dawn.
She just let go of all she held...

And then she was gone.