[Sent-Int] Tarvallon, Healer of the Wild

HELLRAISER · 09-02-2009, 07:20 AM

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INTRODUCTION

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Tarvallon

Tarvallon ist the long forgotten Brother of Illidan and Furion. Never seeking after any fame Tarvallon retreated himself into the deepest forest studying the secret healing techniques of the ancient wisps watching over the World Tree. When the Burning Legion attacked Ashenvale, chopping down his beloved trees and wiping out his old teachers, Tarvallon decided that its about time to use his power to stop the Scourge at any cost.
Credits for story and name go to Wh1sper

Strength - 19 + 2
Agility - 18 + 1,9
Intelligence - 22 + 2,6 (Main Attribute)

Learns Tree of Life's Power, Nature's Judgement, Violent Rejuvenation and Tranquility

Attack Range of 450
Movement Speed of 305

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HERO INFORMATION
Affiliation: Sentinel
Role: Supporter
Theme: <Theme>

Tarvallon

Starting Hitpoints: 511
Starting Mana: 286
Starting Damage: 32 - 36
Starting Armor: 1.5

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HERO ABILITIES

Tree of Life's Power

Channeling Chain AoE.
He links his soul with the tree of life gaining power and channeling it to damage foes or heal allies.

Level 1 - 30 heal or 60 dmg, Use 30mana per second of casting
Level 2 - 45 heal or 90 dmg, Use 35mana per second of casting
Level 3 - 60 heal or 120 dmg, Use 40mana per second of casting
Level 4 - 75 heal or 150 dmg, Use 45mana per second of casting
Damage type: magic.

In Depth Explanation
-This skill is used by activation. A sort of a damaging/healing wave that jump from target to target healing allies or dmging enemies at each jump.
If just 1 target then wave WON'T stop. Will damage or heal him till you run out of mana or turn it off.
-It use 36/42/48/54mana per second of channeling.
-Won't target ally units at full hp.
-This skill have 400 jumping range between targets.
-Healing and damage is done per 1second intervals, starting with 0second for the first.
-A new target is added to wave every 0.4second.
-You can't target self, but you can be included in the jumps(its random)

Duration is N/A
Casting Range is 700
Casting Time is 0[/i]

Cooldown: 0/0/0/0
Mana Cost: 36/42/46/54 per second
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Nature's Judgement
Single Target instant cast.
Tarvallon use his soul link with Nature to, invoke Nature's care or wrath.
Heals an ally Hero or damages an enemy Hero. In addition if cast on enemy it purge him, for 80% slow at move speed and 40% slow at attack speed for 1.5seconds.

Level 1 - 90+4% of max hp

Level 2 - 120+6% of max hp

Level 3 - 150+8% of max hp

Level 4 - 180+10% of max hp
Damage type: magic.

In Depth Explanation
Can only be cast on Heroes including himself.

Duration is 0
Casting Range is 550
Casting Time is 0[/i]

Cooldown: 35/30/25/20
Mana Cost: 90/130/170/210
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Violent Rejuvenation

A single target heal over time that damages enemies around the target in 550radius.

Level 1 - 6 heal on target and 8 AoE damage, per second.
Level 2 - 10 heal on target and 16 AoE damage, per second.
Level 3 - 14 heal on target and 24 AoE damage, per second.
Level 4 - 18 heal on target and 32 AoE damage, per second.
Damage type: Pure.

This skill can be purged.

Duration is 9/11/13/15
Casting Range is 800
Casting Time is 0[/i]

Cooldown: 30/25/20/15
Mana Cost: 80/120/160/200
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Tranquility

Moves at 522 speed to a targeted area (invulnerable during the movement), He moves max 1400 distance
when caster reach the targeted location it cause Tranguility rain to fall of the sky at 650AoE around the caster.

While tranguility is casted, Tarvallon moves at 60% of his move speed.

Level 1 - Healing all allies in range for 90 per second while healing himself for 110 hp per second for 4 seconds
Level 2 - Healing all allies in range for 120 per second while healing himself for 145 hp per second for 5seconds
Level 3 - Healing all allies in range for 150 per second while healing himself for 180 hp per second for 6 seconds

In Depth Explanation
Tarvallon can perform actions, use skills and items, while this is on effect.

Duration is 4/5/6
Casting Range is 0
Casting Time is 0[/i]

Cooldown: 100/90/80
Mana Cost: 240/320/400
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Notes
This is work in progress, judge concept and give feedback to skills and their numbers as they are easily changed.

How this Hero works

Changelog

Credits

Thanks for reading my new Hero suggestion and any feedback is appreciated.

AmplifyDamage · 09-02-2009, 07:35 AM

I think as a concept this hero doesn't belong in DotA.

Although I like the ult that's pretty cool.

HELLRAISER · 09-02-2009, 08:46 AM

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Originally Posted by AmplifyDamage

I think as a concept this hero doesn't belong in DotA.

Although I like the ult that's pretty cool.

How so?

He is a support Hero. I will add later synergy with heroes and skills. For now i will mention that,

His first skill is his farm tool and with combination with 2nd and 3rd skill he can do considerable dps to kill a hero early game. Later all his skills are purely support and addition dps for the team.

Example, Centaur blink in, malfurion cast his Violent Rejuvenation skill for aoe dps so centaur gets additionally targeted as tank. You channel Tree of Life Power skill to support the team from some distance as heal and minor dps since the waves will jump all over but also urgently rush in to cast Ultimate which is purely a full 5vs5 team gang skill as you rush in and try to heal your team. Ultimate can also be used as escaped mechanism but will require some skill since you get slowed by 60% once you reach targeted location. Nature's Judgement can be used in synergy to all above as single target urgent heal, to save an ally, your self or kill/briefly slow a run away enemy Hero.

warp0 · 09-02-2009, 08:59 AM

Malfurion = Furion. IMO needs a different model and name to start, way to close to prophet.

HELLRAISER · 09-02-2009, 03:43 PM

The model is different, maybe at wc3 is the same guy but thats irrelevant. You got any model suggestion or name?

triavatar · 09-02-2009, 03:49 PM

umm 4 heals ........ ok np with that

3 of them which damage enemies .... not so ok

2nd skill is really imba pure damage ftw ....

if u want him considered ... add somthing unique .. ulti is cool ( WoW much?)

btw furion ( malfurion) has a brother .... its illidan .. so lorewise its not working

HELLRAISER · 09-02-2009, 03:58 PM

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Originally Posted by triavatar

umm 4 heals ........ ok np with that

3 of them which damage enemies .... not so ok

2nd skill is really imba pure damage ftw ....

if u want him considered ... add somthing unique .. ulti is cool ( WoW much?)

btw furion ( malfurion) has a brother .... its illidan .. so lorewise its not working

Are my skills not unique? Who other hero have the skills(or skill set or even execution) that i suggest?

3 of them damage, but the damage is low and complex to achieve, except from 2nd skill which only scales up at late game to be any good. He have low natural damage. He in, NO way, can be a "hero" killer or even a ganker, just supplementary dps to team and good supporting healing.

Many Heroes have pure dmg(example enchantress, at autoattack even)

I have never played WoW nor that i intent to, i watched a friend of mine play once and find it total crap + the monthly fee concept is hilarious for me. There is Tranquility in ladder, but just the theme is same with my proposal.

The story can be changed, name also, but this is dota, he is who we say he is

triavatar · 09-02-2009, 05:01 PM

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Are my skills not unique? Who other hero have the skills(or skill set or even execution) that i suggest?

proper review:

1st skill : Well on demand . Null

2nd skill : Purge and pure damage. null / t-down

3rd skill : ur target becomes a walking necro :S ima imagining necro with this :S t-up/ null

4th skill: null/ t-up . good idea

im all for implementing a hero solely used for healing, but work on it. maybe u should change 2nd or third skill to somthing that has to do with mana . maybe a passive that increases his mana for every target healed??? or sumthing like that since the mana costs are pretty big

HELLRAISER · 09-02-2009, 07:44 PM

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Originally Posted by triavatar

proper review:

1st skill : Well on demand . Null

You are null on this? One could say, its pugna's life drain w/o the drain, dazzles healing that jumps on allied units but w/o the AoE damage on each jump, zeus arc lighting that have long range and and jumps on enemies and its active like witch doctor's voodoo restoration. Yeah, seen it before.

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Originally Posted by triavatar

2nd skill : Purge and pure damage. null / t-down

Yeah, this is like, the healing of Chen, but single target, but it also scales with % its like, just pick any with %base, and additionally you can use it to damage like omni purification since is healing, but not on AoE as you can't heal with it and damage all around you and its like impetus, or arcane orb, since its pure damage. In addition is like a having a mini diffusal blade that don't work on summons with attack speed reduction, or better yet Razor's unstable current but not passive that activates on spell cast by enemies and won't give bonus move speed. EXACTLY the same with something.

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Originally Posted by triavatar

3rd skill : ur target becomes a walking necro :S ima imagining necro with this :S t-up/ null

You didn't say all here, its just the same as necro aura, without the % and not passive, or like purge rot without losing life, or like voodoo restoration without being active, or like Ion Shell but without the ability to double cast or cast on enemies, and with less damage. Yeah, that have been done too

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Originally Posted by triavatar

4th skill: null/ t-up . good idea

Common now, thats the best you can do? Thats exactly the same as, Surge but you can't cast it on others, and its like omnislash of yurnero that goes invisible briefly, and its like Luna's Eclipse that you can do actions after cast it, but that won't damage or be slow while casting and its like upheaval's AoE but without the slow and the channeling. Further more is like a healing, well just pick any healing will do, and its over time, like heart of tarrasque but not item, its time based and its not %base healing over time. Verdict: seen it before too.

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Originally Posted by triavatar

im all for implementing a hero solely used for healing, but work on it.

At least you approve the concept, despite all skills are same with 100 other skills.

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Originally Posted by triavatar

maybe u should change 2nd or third skill to somthing that has to do with mana . maybe a passive that increases his mana for every target healed??? or sumthing like that since the mana costs are pretty big

Hmm will see how can i work with it, looks good, since all my skills are same with other skills, i'm so... unoriginal after all.

p.s It just stroke me, is it possible 90% of dota skills to have an element of some other skill? not sure need to check it out.
p.s2 i will really consider the mana thing you said, looks promising.

NoThlnG · 09-02-2009, 11:52 PM

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Originally Posted by warp0

Malfurion = Furion. IMO needs a different model and name to start, way to close to prophet.

Of course. He's brother of furion ^^

It's quite different though. The cloth (not cloth actually) color and this one rides a kind of goat...

For second skill, damage shouldn't be poor since it already deals quite a lot of damage + MS and AS slow....

HELLRAISER · 09-04-2009, 04:21 PM

*UPDATE*
*-Tweaked 2nd skill, to deal no Pure damage, increased the +dmg by a bit.
(*)Latest Update

triavatar · 09-05-2009, 02:41 PM

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It's quite different though. The cloth (not cloth actually) color and this one rides a kind of goat..

its called a talbuk

ok now we got the problems :

here are some statistics :

number of heroes mentioned in last post : 11

number of spells mentioned in last post: 15 or 16 not sure

items mentioned : 2

number of thw word "like" used in last post : 14

...........facepalm.........

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You are null on this? One could say, its pugna's life drain w/o the drain, dazzles healing that jumps on allied units but w/o the AoE damage on each jump, zeus arc lighting that have long range and and jumps on enemies and its active like witch doctor's voodoo restoration. Yeah, seen it before.

im not saying we didnt see it before its just many skills rolled into one .... thats why im null all u did was make a remix u never created a song.

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Yeah, this is like, the healing of Chen, but single target, but it also scales with % its like, just pick any with %base, and additionally you can use it to damage like omni purification since is healing, but not on AoE as you can't heal with it and damage all around you and its like impetus, or arcane orb, since its pure damage. In addition is like a having a mini diffusal blade that don't work on summons with attack speed reduction, or better yet Razor's unstable current but not passive that activates on spell cast by enemies and won't give bonus move speed. EXACTLY the same with something.

glad u fixed the pure damage .

other thank that this skill is abbadons heal + diff blade when used on enemy again its a remix not an original song.

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You didn't say all here, its just the same as necro aura, without the % and not passive, or like purge rot without losing life, or like voodoo restoration without being active, or like Ion Shell but without the ability to double cast or cast on enemies, and with less damage. Yeah, that have been done too

u said it urself .... "like" "like" "like" "like".... i meant that its like necros first skill not his passive in the way in which it damages / heals in an aoe centered around him

HELLRAISER · 09-05-2009, 03:06 PM

I wouldn't think that is possible for someone not to spot the sarcasm, yet you did. Anyway i will be more plain for you

. I disagree.

~Maktor~ · 09-08-2009, 01:01 AM

about the story

first, that doesnt respect the warcraft lore...malfurion = furion

second, we all are tired about "someones master" or "someone's bro" (PA and venge, terrorblade and magina, ...)

about the hero

he is pretty imba, tought...not original concept... jumping healing/damaging spells(but chanelling...GREAT DIFFERENCE), chuck norris nuke, wiht AWESOME damage and AWESOME SLOW, dps-shield...(ion shell with heal?), tranquility from wc3...(its an awesome spell...mayeb it could pass, but that would be thanbks to blizzard, and not thanks to you xD)

HELLRAISER · 09-08-2009, 01:56 AM

OK, if you say so. I already explained by position, read above.

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