[SENT-AGI]Serene Whisperhunt, the Huntress Ranger

[invul_nerable]

My first Hero Suggestion

i need a more better hero model that looks like half human, half elf


Serene WhisperHunt
Huntress Ranger



(credits on darth pogi for the model)

Hero Story- Whisperhunt being a hybrid of an elf and a human , strikes in battle with everything she has got since she had pledged to remove scourge form root. She will take revenge for her parents. She will use whatever she learns from her parents. Whisperhunt has got all qualities to rule in battle by using her poisonous skills mixed with her arrow. She learns skills named Entangle Trap, Envenomed Arrows, Multiple Shooter, and Archery Mastery.
(credits on Punj for the story)

Role: Ganker, Carry, Initator

Life: 486/486
Mana: 241

Strength: 18 + (1.9)
Agility: 20 + (2.5)
Intelligence: 18 + (1.7)

Advance Statistics
Affilation: Sentinel
Armor: 2.8
Damage: 43-49
Attack Range: 625
Movement Speed: 320
Attack Type Model: Normal Arrow
Sight Range: 1700/1700
Casting Animation: 0.5/0.5
Skills
Learns Entangle Trap, Envenomed Arrows, Archery Mastery, and Vital Interfere

Entangle Trap

Description- being a half human, half elf makes Lissete have the power to control roots disabling the enemies for a short duration of time

Lvl 1- holds for 3 sec. does 40 damage per second. max traps 3
Lvl 2- holds for 3 sec. does 50 damage per second. max traps 4
Lvl 3- holds for 3 sec. does 60 damage per second. max traps 5
Lvl 4- holds for 3 sec. does 70 damage per second. max traps 6
Manacost: 110/120/130/140
Cooldown: 15 sec
Casting Range: 800
Damage Type: Magical
Area on Effect: 300

Envenomed Arrows

Description- Her elf mother taught her all kind of poisons, his father thought her about archery. She used both what she learned on his parent and applying it on combat.

Lvl 1- adds 0.2 agility as bonus damage, and 12% ms slow
Lvl 2- adds 0.3 agility as bonus damage, and 16% ms slow
Lvl 3- adds 0.4 agility as bonus damage, and 22% ms slow
Lvl 4- adds 0.5 agility as bonus damage, and 25% ms slow
Manacost: 8/8/8/8
Cooldown: 3/2/1/0
Casting Range: 600
Damage Type- Physical
Note-
Orb effect
Slow lasts in 1.5 sec

Sub Skill:Multi-Shooter

Description- his father thought him all about archery including how to hit multiple enemies at on shot, and she applies it on battle

Lvl 1- can hit 3 enemies in every shot, lasts in 8 sec
Lvl 2- can hit 4 enemies in every shot, lasts in 8 sec
Lvl 3- can hit 5 enemies in every shot, lasts in 8 sec
Lvl 4- can hit 6 enemies in every shot, lasts in 8 sec
Manacost: 90/80/70/60
Cooldown: 25/25/25/25
Damage type Physical

Ulti:Archery Mastery

Description: Aided by her father, Lissete is now mastered archery which she uses to kill enemies on her way. she can hit vital targets on the enemy, she can hit the throat of her enemy in order to silence it, in each battle passed her agility is being increased from the experience she got on battle

Lvl 1- has 5 sec fade time if Lissete stays put, every 5 successive hits on the enemy silences them for 1 sec. every enemy dies within 1000 AoE nearby Serene increases her agility by 1.2
Lvl 2- has 4 sec fade time if Lissete stays put, every 5 successive hits on the enemy silences them for 2 sec. every enemy dies within 1000 AoE nearby Serene increases her agility by 2
Lvl 3- has 3 sec fade time if Lissete stays put, every 5 successive hits on the enemy silences them for 3 sec. every enemy dies within 1000 AoE nearby Serene increases her agility by 2.2

Manacost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A

Skill Synergy

1st combo
+
The more he/she stays entangled, the more damage he/she takes
+
multiple targets get the effect of envenomed arrows, how beautiful
Full Skill Combo
+++
can do rampage on enemies in just a matter of seconds

[willalwaybenoob]

1.A new trap similiar to Lanaya. Nothing much there.
2.An arrow that is similiar to Traxex ice arrow slow.
3.Medusa's arrow skill.
4.This ulti...is pretty powerful, and the only original skill.

[invul_nerable]

^i know that....but there is a slight difference on each skills
1. the lanaya part. it does not slow but damages per second while in there and enemy is being disabled
2. trax arrows, but with bonus damage
3. not really similar, because it releases full damage, and it has a duration
4. yes, i know it is my only original skill
thanx for the review...

please suggest some skills if you want too...

[invul_nerable]

added change

skill 2
instead of 10/15/20/25 bonus damage
changed it to o.2/o.3/o.4/o.5 x agility

please review

[Punj,Love Hater]

i will help u with everything i have got execpt icons.
But first u will have to explain ur ultimate.

[Punj,Love Hater]

Now there i have got a story for ur hero. Here it goes(forgive me for spelling mistake since i am typing for my mobile)


Whisperhunt being a hybrid of an elf and a human , strikes in battle with everything she has got since she had pledjed to remove scourge forn root. She will take revenge for her parents. She will use whatever she learnt from her parents. Whispperhunt has got all qualities to rule in battle by using her poisonus skills mixed with her arrow. She learns skills named (now write the names of skills).

[invul_nerable]

ok ill explain it.... but my first Q in here is it codable
ok now example you activated ulti(lvl 3), then shoot up 10 envenomed(2nd skill) arrows on the enemy. you click it again(just like ancient appa)...50 x 10= 500 pure damage, as easy as that.....formula is (damage(X) x Times got hit(Y) (X) x (Y)=Z)

[Punj,Love Hater]

Hmmm i get ur ultimate now .

[Punj,Love Hater]

All skills are nice now . I review ur hero later

[invul_nerable]

Please review....
wait how do i make a changelog that is you know, you click and it will show because i do no know how to do it

[Punj,Love Hater]

Sorry bro i donot know to do that since i am online on this site through my mobile but i guess the command for that is named as spoiler in big bracket. Just try it

[Darth pogi]

First of all, here's a model!

Second, re-color dude
Third of all, Lissete sounds too modern of a name
Fourth of all, I think you should credit the guys who made those icons (and me for the model)

EDIT
Fifth of all - There are too many archers in DotA

[Punj,Love Hater]

My rates for this hero
1st skill 9/10
2nd skill 8/10
3rd skill 8.5/10
Ultimate + subskill 8/10 + 4/5 =12/15
Synergy +statgain 8/10+4/5 = 12/15
Icons+model 8/10
Presentation and font 16/20
Story+creativity 9/10 +9/10
Total rates by me 8.3 /10 [91.5/110]

[NHP54]

There are various archer heroes into the game, so when I look at an archer hero suggestion, I look for what this archer hero will bring to the table to differentiate itself from the others.

Anyway, on with the review.

Skill 1 - The skill fits the concept, but the numbers are overpowered. A 1000-range, 300-AoE disable that does damage for a cheap 100 mana with a 10-second cooldown is too good. Other heroes have to get close to land an effect that is not even one-fourth as powerful as this. Decrease the range, increase the mana cost and cooldown by significant amounts.

Skill 2 - It's a mix between Drow's Frost Arrows and Silencer's Glaives of Wisdom, except it is for the Agility stat. Nothing bad to say here.

Skill 3 - This is overkill. You are piling way too many effects into one skill slot. Splitting this up into two selectable skills along with the passive is seriously overpowered. Make this skill have at most one sub-skill, plus sub-skills are not supposed to overshadow the actual skill itself. Sub-skills are meant to complement the skill.

Skill 4 - The skill name is bad. Forced synergy is iffy. Though the initial effect is fine, the concept of the effect reactivating does not make sense. Why not just make the poison from Envenomed Arrows just do some DoT? Furthermore, you should change the concept to the hero like dousing an area with a substance that triggers the Envenomed Arrows' poison to a deadlier level. It currently does not make sense.

Overall, you have some issues with the presentation of the hero. I realize English is not your main language, but it wouldn't hurt to go through and change things like "him" to "her" for the sake of making things easier to read. The hero design has some decent properties, though the third skill is absurdly overpowered. This third skill alone holds back the hero from being balanced in design.

[SpiderPig]

T-UP very nice hero

[invul_nerable]

NHP54 change some of the skills and ulti is now modifying the skill 2.....
i decreased range, higher manacost and cooldowns... is it enough? or still imba?
what? want for me to modify skill 1? i know it might be forced synergy, but i cannot think of any at this time.....

[SpiderPig]

why dont u ask icefrog?

[SpiderPig]

he is the final judger

[invul_nerable]

well icefrog is a busy man.... i mean that he is almost not available at all times...and i do not want to be banned for that deed.....asking icefrog for something not really important

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by XGod|

why dont u ask icefrog?

are u serious? He never replies. He only accepts frnd requests and post some threads