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THE REVENGE OF THE TAUREN CHAPTER 1: SETTING SAIL It had been almost one month since the brutal event had occurred at Icecrown. The macabre scenario still vivid in his thoughts, Kardel wished it would all just go away. Unfortunately, it wasn’t that easy. Kardel had been atop Icecrown that fateful day, as he had a funny feeling when Chen raced for the Glacier. Kardel decided that it would be safer for Chen if he would follow the old orc. Never did he knew that he would be able to do nothing as the bloody events unfolded. Kardel shook his head. It was time to forget all that and focus on the mission at hand. Kardel decided to side with Cairne as soon as he learned that the chieftain would go on a quest to destroy the Frozen Throne for the last time. He looked over at the final preparations being made at the ship. A grunt walked towards him. “The final preparations are almost complete, captain. I shall now inform the chieftain.” Kardel nodded and the grunt walked away towards Cairne’s burrow. Kardel was about to go to his tent, that old tent he used together with Trogdor and the others, when they stayed here at the oasis months ago during their quest towards Northrend… Kardel sighed. “Everything had changed.” Kardel entered the tent and went towards his chair. He sat and then laid back towards it. He rubbed his eyes and tried to rest his nerves for a while. He was about to drift in sleep when someone entered the tent. “Sharpeye.” Kardel immediately stood up at the call of his name. He looked at the entrance of the tent. It was Daelin Proudmoore. Kardel was about to salute when Proudmoore shook his head and raised his hands in a hushing manner. “No, please. Don’t do that anymore. I’m no longer an admiral.” Kardel’s eyes squinted in confusion. “Why? What happened? You got kicked out of the Army?” “No.” Kunkka smiled. “I quit. I decided to join Cairne instead.” Kardel smiled back. “This is interesting. You see, around here, I am a captain…” “Really?” Kunkka laughed. “I can accept that.” “No, don’t mind it. You shall always be a mentor to me.” Kardel returned to his seat and was about to recline back when his eyes took notice of something in the table. He looked at that direction and saw Lothar’s book: The Tactics of Espionage. Kardel was immediately saddened. Why, Trogdor? Why did you do this? A grunt peered through the tent and called Kardel. “Captain Sharpeye? The ship’s set, and the chieftain is already at the harbor.” Kardel looked at the grunt with half-focused eyes and nodded subconsciously. “I’ll be right there.” The grunt left. Kunkka, meanwhile, noticed the sudden change in Kardel’s affect and inquired about it. “What’s wrong, Kardel?” Kardel threw the book in the Admiral’s direction. Proudmoore caught it and looked at it. “I remember this. It’s Lothar’s book! I actually have a copy of this back at home.” “Yes. That’s Trogdor’s.” Daelin looked at Kardel and immediately understood. “I see.” He then tossed the book back to the sniper. Kardel placed it back on the side table, where it had been placed ever since. “Enough about that.” Kardel muttered while he tried to wipe the coming tears of his eyes. “Let’s go to the harbor now.” Proudmoore nodded and they left. They reached the harbor and saw Cairne. Cairne immediately welcomed the two. “Kardel, Daelin, nice to see both of you here. We’re about to leave in a while. Why don’t you pack your things so you could already put them aboard the ship?” Both nodded and left. Kardel re-entered the tent and started packing up his things. He filled up his luggage with his cloaks, tunics and other clothes. He also packed several boxes of ammo for his blunderbuss. He was about to leave when he saw the Lothar’s book sitting silently but alluringly atop the bedside table. Kardel sighed. “Damn it, Trogdor.” The sniper shook his head and stuffed the book in his bag. He packed it in, closed the bag and left the tent. Kardel arrived at the harbor, and saw that Proudmoore and Cairne were already there, getting ready to aboard the ship. Proudmoore noticed the dwarf and waved his hand. "You all set up, Kardel?” Kardel nodded. “Well, let’s go!” The three boarded the ship. “Alright, Proudmoore. You’re in charge of this ship. Let’s set sail, admiral.” Cairne said as he walked to his quarters. Proudmoore went to the helm of the ship and becked his final orders. After a few more adjustments, the ship had finally set sail. Kardel was at the deck, looking towards the horizon. He was silent and deep in thought. Everything has indeed changed… …and it’s all because of you, Trogdor. |
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Nice opening, awaiting to see more
![]() For some reason, main title of your stories seems to be familiar to some of the books/movie I know... The rise of the --- reminds me of Harry Potter Revenge of the tauren --- reminds me of Transformers
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Wow, that was fast.
Solid opening chapter
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“Enough about that.” Kardel muttered while he tried to wipe the coming tears of his eyes. “Let’s go to the harbor now.”
Kardel is crying... Man, this is going to be interesting. |
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i was planning to write... but school days is back so i would be very busy to update it
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I thought Kardel might start drinking to ease his pain.
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A new, amazing story has been started
you are so prolific, Fuhrer.
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i thought kardel will suicide and assassinate himself
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Great opening.
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Here's chapter 2. Hope y'all like it.
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>>> Proceed to next chapter: Chapter 3: Surging Emotions
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cool, I need to read the next chapter now! o.o
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NIce ending to the chapter!
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Very nice sequel
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I worship you Fuhrer..
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^ he is not God or whatever
but if youre a atheist, get out of here... hell just joking you just adore him, do not worship him
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and that come from a man with the username kingarthas25
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what the? Balanar should have killed DK by now....
IMBALANAR sucks... why are you called IMBALANAR for?
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