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Old 05-23-2010, 03:52 PM   #1
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Default [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up)


A tribute for Gigant Builders by Erico



Erico, Forsaken Architect


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Strength: 19 + (2)
Agility: 18 + (1.5)
Intelligence: 24 + (3.2)

Affilation: Neutral
Damage: 41-47
Armor: 1.4
Movement Speed: 320
Attack Range: 600



Batch of Repairman


Description: Erico calls on his loyal repairmans, to operate the buildings he wanted for them to build.

Lvl 1: Summons 3 repairman
Lvl 2: Summons 5 repairman
Lvl 3: Summons 7 repairman
Lvl 4: Summons 10 repairman

Manacost: 100/100/100/100
Cooldown: 30 seconds

Note
- repairman can repair buildings, 1 peasants means 1 hp per second
- repairman gives 5 gold bounty


Peasant Stats
HP: 350
Damage: 12-15
Armor: 1(light)
Movement Speed: 300


Order Build Structures


Description: Erico orders his loyal peasants to build the building he ordered. The buildings can become hidden or show it self on the battlefield

Lvl 1: Relief Tent- has 350 hp. you can travel on other Relief tents, you can enter on relief tents, has 5 seconds travel time. Armor Type: Building. max building can be created is 12
Lvl 2: Arrow Tower- has 350 hp. can do 40-50 damage, has poison attack. decreases ms and 5 dps per seconds lasts in 2 seconds. Armor Type: Building. max building can be created is 12
Lvl 3: Arcane Tower- has 350 hp. does 40-50 damage, has feedback, burns 24 mana per hit. Armor Type: Structure. max building can be created is 12
Lvl 4: Seige Tower- has 350 hp. does 40-50 splash damage, has seige ability, does 1.8x damage on towers. Armor Type: Structure. max building can be created is 12

Manacost:
Relief Tent- 100
Arrow Tower- 150
Arcane Tower- 150
Seige Tower- 150

Cooldown: None
Cast range: 2000

Note
- all buildings has 15 armor
- building time of buildings is 5 seconds.
- each peasant can reduce building time by 1 sec
- you can only build structures if you have a peasant
- all buildings can become invisible by toggling it on and off
- you do not to build the building instead it will make itself automatically
- each building gives 100 bounty


Fortify Structures

Description: Erico can use his intelligence to make an emergency method. adding all the structures armor to 9999.
Lvl 1: lasts in 2 seconds. 1 seconds other structures
LVl 2: lasts in 4 seconds. 2 seconds on other structures
Lvl 3: lasts in 6 seconds. 3 seconds on other structures
Lvl 4: lasts in 8 seconds. 4 seconds on other structures
Manacost: 100/110/120/130
Cooldown: 150/125/100/75


Ulti: Detonate Building


Description: Erico has a power to detonate buildings. the building he created shall explode that has 400 AoE.

Lvl 1: Does 275 mix damage
Lvl 2: Does 375 mix damage
Lvl 3: Does 475 mix damage

Subskill: Detonate


Effect: Detonates the building selected

Manacost: 50/50/50 per building
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Old 05-23-2010, 04:15 PM   #2
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

If i can be honest, i don't wanna bother you, but i think that you are taking this thread without seriousness.
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Old 05-23-2010, 07:14 PM   #3
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

agreed.
there is nothing more to say. sorry
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Old 05-23-2010, 09:31 PM   #4
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

Oh my god! i go die! i am a pessant! or a .... idea!

but this hero now no have some future, bad model. or bad texture.

First skill- sumons pessants... so so.. 5/10

Second skill- build ! t-up... but imba he or me can build some structures... need review 7/10

3 skill- good idea- 9/10

detonate- ult is good kill the towers ... sorry i prefer the build brother sistem 6/10

Need review! now for myself is t-down! laught!
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Old 05-24-2010, 01:30 AM   #5
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect



use this model! is betther
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Old 05-24-2010, 10:37 AM   #6
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

you gotta realize... you cant build any buildings... it will only automatically build by itself...

this is a new play style hero..

say some imbalances if there is any
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Old 05-24-2010, 01:32 PM   #7
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

Have the model animated or just go for a Wc3 Knight model or a Blood Elf Smarty-Pants Engineer
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Old 05-24-2010, 01:36 PM   #8
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

Sorry this can only be a joke ... buildings can only imbalance DotA ... we have no other builders ingame and thats for a good reason
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Old 05-24-2010, 01:52 PM   #9
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

The third skill seems like a Glyph of Fortification with a 1 minute and 15 second cooldown. The ultimate can blow buildings up. I'd like to have this hero on my team. But I still think he can be a little bit more balanced.

BTW, can the ultimate blow any building up? And it has no cooldown?
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Old 05-24-2010, 05:23 PM   #10
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect

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Sorry this can only be a joke ... buildings can only imbalance DotA ... we have no other builders ingame and thats for a good reason
BIG T-down
P.S. The Idea of Builders are used severall times and it is boring
Aint techies a laying mine hero? can he be called boring? you can say that because you didnt even tried it out... why do icefrog created a laying mine hero(that even damages towers. FTW!)? isnt it good to have a building making hero? we will never know it unless we didnt tried it out...

and as for the top.... the ulti has no cooldown for it is a passive skill that is giving the buildings a suicide skill. it cannot detonate towers and other allied building except the ones you created

can someone suggest a more better hero icon and model? thanks in advance
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Old 05-26-2010, 09:22 PM   #11
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

Re-updated, hope some comments or reviews will be done
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Old 05-26-2010, 11:00 PM   #12
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

but this is some kind of techis too. place some towers, turn them invi, wait for enemy - booooom. nice hero, but too much techis.
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Old 05-27-2010, 09:11 AM   #13
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

dude... if you create towers that is attacking why dont make it attack the enemies... and tower destroying is very situational for it gives 100 bounty when destroyed
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Old 05-27-2010, 11:05 PM   #14
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

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and as for the top.... the ulti has no cooldown for it is a passive skill that is giving the buildings a suicide skill. it cannot detonate towers and other allied building except the ones you created
you dont say that in original skill.

Ulti: Detonate Building - for me detonate build is skill to detonate all builds. if is a skill to detonate only he creates you need say that there.
This skill need cooldown!
You can creat some explosive on one build.


Why you not imput this hero in your hero suggestion?


Where is Forsaken???
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Old 05-28-2010, 02:06 AM   #15
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

Erico,Erico... my dear i already inputted it there....
in the description below detonate

ok inputted manacost there
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

i'm really having a hard time understanding eric here.


back to business. now that i checked him out again, he seem to be more intriguing than i though. fix a few numbers and i'll give my review. T-null for now.
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

what number fix do you mean? i think this is balanced
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Old 06-02-2010, 01:03 AM   #18
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Default Re: [Neut-Str] Erico, the Forsaken Architect(Re-Up

12 structures is not some? 8 make betther i think. not equal tekies explode and end the hability.


Fortify Structures- i loved!



Batch of Repairman- i dont have idea how make this skill and not lost money or wood.
i go make a test map afther one job i need do here in home.
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Youre makin a test map for me? how nice
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Old 06-03-2010, 03:24 PM   #20
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builders are forbidden in dota. there has been a thread about it, search for it.
i doubt this will ever be in dota to be honest
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