Decent guide. First of all, your stats joke wasn't very funny, maybe it lacked presenting or taste. Then your English was decent overall, few errors, but not really entertaining as well; no hints of humor to make reading more fun. I also missed pictures in the guide; while not necessary, you do have awfully much text and pictures always serve as a welcome change.
And the hero synergy section is also kind of weird: in general, any slowers, especially pudge, work great with bat on the same lane too. Also there is no clear split between enemies and allies; you can kind of guess by the green and red color, but it still feels bad.
The tips to play the hero are all decent and helpful, but it's just not as good as other great guides here.