[AGI-SENT]Margathe - Restricted Archer

Night Reaper · 06-22-2010, 08:07 AM

Restricted Archer
Margathe

Strength - 15 + [1.6]
Agility - 24 + [2.5]
Intelligence - 20 + [2.1]

Affiliation:	Sentinel
Damage:	50-53
Armor:	4
Movespeed:	305
Starting HP/MP:	435/260
Attack Range:	600
Roles:	Carry

Pishogue Arrows - (Active, Auto Cast)

____________________ Margathe shot her powerful wizardly arrows, changes her attack damage type to magic and destroys the target's magic resistants.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 25 0 sec 600/(650-800*) - 5 sec Changes attack damage type into magic damage. Decrease the target's magic resistants by 2% per stack. Stacks a maximum of 4 times.
2 25 0 sec 600/(650-800*) - 5 sec Changes attack damage type into magic damage. Decrease the target's magic resistants by 4% per stack. Stacks a maximum of 4 times.
3 25 0 sec 600/(650-800*) - 5 sec Changes attack damage type into magic damage. Decrease the target's magic resistants by 6% per stack. Stacks a maximum of 4 times.
4 25 0 sec 600/(650-800*) - 5 sec Changes attack damage type into magic damage. Decrease the target's magic resistants by 8% per stack. Stacks a maximum of 4 times.

Notes:
Damage type: magical

The casting range is depending to Margathe's attack range. (*During 2nd skill's duration)

Pishogue Arrows are Orb Effects and Buff Placers.

Gatling Shot - (Active)

____________________ Margathe strike the enemies with her focus and rage. Increase her attack speed, attack range, and magically splits her shot into three arrows. These arrows deal a lower percent of her normal damage. She can't walk during this skill's duration.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 120 30 sec - 650 4 sec Can't walk. Increase AS by 45%, attack range by 50. Splits her shot into three arrows, each arrows deal 50% damage.
2 140 30 sec - 700 6 sec Can't walk. Increase AS by 90%, attack range by 100. Splits her shot into three arrows, each arrows deal 60% damage.
3 160 30 sec - 750 8 sec Can't walk. Increase AS by 135%, attack range by 150. Splits her shot into three arrows, each arrows deal 70% damage.
4 180 30 sec - 800 10 sec Can't walk. Increase AS by 180%, attack range by 200. Splits her shot into three arrows, each arrows deal 80% damage.

Notes:
Margathe can not walk during this skill's duration.

All target will recieve attack effects like bash, orb effects, or Pishogue Arrows.

Secondary targets will be the two closest enemy units excluding the primary target.

Precision of Archery - (Passive)

____________________ Margathe has high technique of archery. Each attack will make Margathe braver, causing subsequent attacks to deal increased damage. Give some bonus damage for each attack.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 - - - - - Give 6 bonus damage per attack and max of 5 attacks. Bonus damage gets reset to 6 after 5 attacks.
2 - - - - - Give 9 bonus damage per attack and max of 5 attacks. Bonus damage gets reset to 9 after 5 attacks.
3 - - - - - Give 12 bonus damage per attack and max of 5 attacks. Bonus damage gets reset to 12 after 5 attacks.
4 - - - - - Give 15 bonus damage per attack and max of 5 attacks. Bonus damage gets reset to 15 after 5 attacks.

Notes:
Damage type: magical

Bonus damage can't be reduced by Gatling Shot's effect.

at lvl 4, the calculation will be like this: +15 damage at 1st attack, +30 at 2nd attack, and +75 damage at 5th attack.

at lvl 4, 6th attack's bonus damage will be reset to +15

Manacle Strafe - (Active)

____________________ Margathe shots her enchanted magical chain arrow, all nearby enemies will be pulled along with the arrow to the destination. Deals some damage and stuns the target. Units pulled with the arrow will be leashed by a magical chain.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 150 120 sec 1000 200 1 sec, 3 sec Deals 200 initial damage and all nearby enemies will be pulled along with the arrow to the destination. Give 25 bonus damage to the primary target for every units that pulled. Stuns the target for 1 sec. The enemies will be leashed, making them unable to move more than 450 distance away from the point of impact for 3 sec.
2 200 100 sec 1250 200 2 sec, 4 sec Deals 275 initial damage and all nearby enemies will be pulled along with the arrow to the destination. Give 30 bonus damage to the primary target for every units that pulled. Stuns the target for 2 sec. The enemies will be leashed, making them unable to move more than 400 distance away from the point of impact for 4 sec.
3 250 80 sec 1500 200 3 sec, 5 sec Deals 350 initial damage and all nearby enemies will be pulled along with the arrow to the destination. Give 35 bonus damage to the primary target for every units that pulled. Stuns the target for 3 sec. The enemies will be leashed, making them unable to move more than 350 distance away from the point of impact for 5 sec.

Notes:
Damage type: magical

All nearby enemies will be pulled along with the arrow to the destination.

The arrow initially moves at a rate of 1000 units per second.

Magic immune units cannot be leashed.

Blinking or teleporting away will break the leash.

This spell destroys trees.

Skill Usage and Synergies

____________________ Pishogue Arrows: this skill is Margathe primary attack, making her as an orbwaking carry. Changes her attack damage type into magic and also decrease enemy's magic resistants. This skill is absolutely increasing Margathe damage output. This skill has a good synergy with the 2nd skill. She can attack multiple targets quickly and kill them with her insane damage output.
____________________ Gatling Shot: this skill is increasing Margathe attack speed and attack range temporaly. She can easily hit many enemy's heroes during team battle. Decrease some of damage output and makes her can't walk. Have a very good synergy with 1st skill. The 3rd skill will recover her damage output from 2nd skill's reduction.
____________________ Precision of Archery: this skill gives some bonus damage fo each attack that Margathe did, like ursa's fury swipes. The bonus damage will be reset after 5 hits. This skill will protect from 2nd skill's damage reduction. The bonus damage type is magical, that means it will do more damage with the 1st skill's effect.
____________________ Manacle Strafe: this ultimate skill is like Old Storm's ultimate, but in an arrow. Pull all enemy units along with the arrow to the destination. This skill will collect the enemies in one spot, and Margathe can finish them by using the 2nd and 1st skill.

I'M SORRY FOR MY BAD ENGLISH

Punj,Love Hater · 06-22-2010, 12:18 PM

1st skill : nice skill
2nd skill : complety OP
3rd skill : OMGWTF!!! Just think it is even OP than ulti of any hero.
4th skill : no synergy.
Statgain : Too much.
Comments : worst hero. Better say u put the highest of everything and post. Need too much nerfing and some sort of synergy between skills.

Night Reaper · 06-22-2010, 01:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by punj

1st skill : nice skill
2nd skill : complety OP
3rd skill : OMGWTF!!! Just think it is even OP than ulti of any hero.
4th skill : no synergy.
Statgain : Too much.
Comments : worst hero. Better say u put the highest of everything and post. Need too much nerfing and some sort of synergy between skills.

Thanks for the review.

Hmm, I think I should reduce the 2nd skill and stats gain.

Btw, 3rd skill is not OP. Naga's Crit strike is 45% to deal 1.5x damage. This skill just give 1.1x-1.3x crit strike. Although, crit strike can only dealt once per attack.

Ulti + 2nd skill.

Drikam · 06-22-2010, 04:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by punj

1st skill : nice skill
2nd skill : complety OP
3rd skill : OMGWTF!!! Just think it is even OP than ulti of any hero.
4th skill : no synergy.
Statgain : Too much.
Comments : worst hero. Better say u put the highest of everything and post. Need too much nerfing and some sort of synergy between skills.

Yes, yes.. and this skill is a max of +73% dmg...

look at vengeful aura.

Punj,Love Hater · 06-22-2010, 05:59 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Night Reaper

Thanks for the review.

Hmm, I think I should reduce the 2nd skill and stats gain.

Btw, 3rd skill is not OP. Naga's Crit strike is 45% to deal 1.5x damage. This skill just give 1.1x-1.3x crit strike. Although, crit strike can only dealt once per attack.

Ulti + 2nd skill.

u dont get it. Your 2nd skill has 100 % chance to hit crit. Just calucate urself. Naga has 45% chance to hit crit 1.5 times. And urs 100% chance to hit 1.25 time crit. Compare it.

Night Reaper · 06-22-2010, 11:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Drikam

Yes, yes.. and this skill is a max of +73% dmg...

look at vengeful aura.

Quote:

Originally Posted by punj

u dont get it. Your 2nd skill has 100 % chance to hit crit. Just calucate urself. Naga has 45% chance to hit crit 1.5 times. And urs 100% chance to hit 1.25 time crit. Compare it.

Thanks for the review.
Oh, I'm sorry, I get it now. Thanks for the correction.

I've reduced the stats gain and 2nd skill effect and I've changed the 3rd skill. Check it out.

Punj,Love Hater · 06-23-2010, 11:41 AM

Statgain is too much. Make it 6.1 or 6.2. It is 6.5

cp14 · 06-23-2010, 12:18 PM

i think 1st skill is antisynergetic with the gatling stuff

one skill will most probably be inactive while the other is. The ultimate reminds me of primal roar. what i like about the hero is her third skill.

Night Reaper · 06-23-2010, 01:12 PM

thanks for the review....

Quote:

Originally Posted by punj

Statgain is too much. Make it 6.1 or 6.2. It is 6.5

Oh my gosh....

Quote:

Originally Posted by carloparis14

i think 1st skill is antisynergetic with the gatling stuff

one skill will most probably be inactive while the other is. The ultimate reminds me of primal roar. what i like about the hero is her third skill.

Antisynergetic? how come?

Hmm, I'll change the ult debuff effect. Thanks....

Captain Planet · 06-24-2010, 02:53 PM

@punj: 6.5 is not too much. Not too much at all in fact. Rooftrellen and Sniper both have 7.2...6.5 is fine. So, OP, you can revert your stats to whatever they were before, because 6.2 is BELOW average (normal is 6.3

)

Skill 1: Specify whether the resistance is reduced before or after attack damage is dealt, otherwise it's counter-synergetic if it doesn't reduce before damage is dealt. Because if reduction is first, the damage is amplified with the first arrow. Nice skill though, but reduce the cost to about 10-15 because no actual damage is dealt.

Skill 2: 10 seconds without being able to move? Also, dynamically modifying attack range is uncodeable. Check the Big List of Uncodeable Things.

Skill 3: Not bad. Simple skill that encourages high AS. I like it

Ultimate: Um...ok...I think this is a bit of a stretch of the archer/arrow theme but I suppose it's not bad.

Overall, I have to say, it's probably not one of your best efforts but it's by no means a bad hero. Needs some improvement though.

06-22-2010, 12:18 PM	#2
Punj,Love Hater Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: In 5th dimension Posts: 1,744	Re: [AGI-SENT]Margathe - Restricted Archer 1st skill : nice skill 2nd skill : complety OP 3rd skill : OMGWTF!!! Just think it is even OP than ulti of any hero. 4th skill : no synergy. Statgain : Too much. Comments : worst hero. Better say u put the highest of everything and post. Need too much nerfing and some sort of synergy between skills. __________________ [HERO][STR-NEU]Gwentyn,the Harpy Witch,Testmap loaded [ITEM]Wanna eat biscuit in dota [Remake] Io's Buffs and Nerfs [ULTI]Reincarnating Summon REVIEW REQUESTS ON

06-23-2010, 11:41 AM	#7
Punj,Love Hater Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: In 5th dimension Posts: 1,744	Re: [AGI-SENT]Margathe - Restricted Archer Statgain is too much. Make it 6.1 or 6.2. It is 6.5 __________________ [HERO][STR-NEU]Gwentyn,the Harpy Witch,Testmap loaded [ITEM]Wanna eat biscuit in dota [Remake] Io's Buffs and Nerfs [ULTI]Reincarnating Summon REVIEW REQUESTS ON

06-23-2010, 12:18 PM	#8
cp14 Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: suramar Posts: 1,664 Blog Entries: 1	Re: [AGI-SENT]Margathe - Restricted Archer i think 1st skill is antisynergetic with the gatling stuff one skill will most probably be inactive while the other is. The ultimate reminds me of primal roar. what i like about the hero is her third skill. __________________ Awesome and Eyecatching avatar removed due to popuular demand BARA CLUB