[W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple

Sgt Failure · 06-25-2010, 09:25 PM

Twin Disciple
Hakkah

Strength - 18 + 1.8
Agility - 22 + 2.2
Intelligence - 22 + 2.2

Affiliation:	Neutral
Damage:	44-55
Armor:	2.2
Movespeed:	305
Starting HP/MP:	492/286
Attack Range:	100 (Melee)

Vortex of Faith - (Active, Point-Target)

____________________ Hakkah creates a magical Vortex of the split elements, firing it off against a target location. Enemies hit will have some of their health stolen, slowing them briefly, and whenever an ally is hit, all stolen health will be transfered. If the Vortex is still loaded when arriving to cast point, it explodes dealing additional damage. The Vortex starts with 100 health stored.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 80 5 1000 200 3 Slows enemies by 20% and steals 20 health. Allied units hit will have their health replenished by the amount currently stolen, reseting it to 0.
2 100 5 1200 200 3 Slows enemies by 30% and steals 30 health. Allied units hit will have their health replenished by the amount currently stolen, reseting it to 0.
3 120 5 1400 200 3 Slows enemies by 40% and steals 40 health. Allied units hit will have their health replenished by the amount currently stolen, reseting it to 0.
4 140 5 1600 200 3 Slows enemies by 50% and steals 50 health. Allied units hit will have their health replenished by the amount currently stolen, reseting it to 0.

Notes:
Visual is two orbs, one white and one black, orbiting around eachother. When health is stolen, a small green ball is formed in the middle.

Damage type is Pure

AoE of Explosion is 300, and deals damage equal to the current load of stolen health

Does not heal allied creeps, but steals enemy creeps health aswell

Balance of Powers - (Active, AoE-Target)

____________________ Hakkah uses her powers and calls down ancient powers in a target area. For the duration of the active balance, any enemy who attacks will be silenced, and a unit foolish enough to cast spells will be unable to attack. All enemies take more damage inside the area.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 150 30 500 300 5 Attacking will silence for 1 second. Casting a spell will disarm for 2 seconds. Amplifies all damage taken by 20%.
2 150 25 500 300 6 Attacking will silence for 1.5 seconds. Casting a spell will disarm for 3 seconds. Amplifies all damage taken by 25%.
3 150 20 500 300 7 Attacking will silence for 2 seconds. Casting a spell will disarm for 4 seconds. Amplifies all damage taken by 30%.
4 150 15 500 300 8 Attacking will silence for 2.5 seconds. Casting a spell will disarm for 5 seconds. Amplifies all damage taken by 35%.

Notes:
Not dispellable

Affects an Area, moving into it will give the debuff, moving out will remove it

Moving out will NOT remove Silence/Disarm

Disciples of Chaos - (Active, Point-Target)

____________________ Every user of mana, and every holder of a weapon is a Disciple of chaos, and if the target have been rapidly using one art of combat over the other, they are an even greater threat to a balanced world. If a unit have casta spell but not attacking or vise versa for a set amount of time, Hakkah will purge them on attacks, causing extra damage. The Vortex of Faith inhabits this power aswell.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 N/A N/A N/A N/A 2 If enemy have only attacked/casted spells for 7 seconds, next attack will purge them, slowing all their actions by a factor of 3, and causing 50 extra damage.
2 N/A N/A N/A N/A 2 If enemy have only attacked/casted spells for 6 seconds, next attack will purge them, slowing all their actions by a factor of 4, and causing 70 extra damage.
3 N/A N/A N/A N/A 2 If enemy have only attacked/casted spells for 5 seconds, next attack will purge them, slowing all their actions by a factor of 5, and causing 90 extra damage.
4 N/A N/A N/A N/A 2 If enemy have only attacked/casted spells for 4 seconds, next attack will purge them, slowing all their actions by a factor of 6, and causing 110 extra damage.

Notes:
Also triggers if the enemy haven't cast nor attacked for the set time.

Timer resets whenever triggering

Can activate from both Normal attacks and Vortex

Does NOT purge magic immunity

Damage type is pure, instantly kills illusions

Slows Movement, Attackspeed and Castspeed (Animationspeed)

Twin Powers - (Active)

____________________ Hakkah splits his soul and body, creating two replicates of himself, with all items and skills, but with modified effects. The body is unable to take Magical damage, while the soul cannot recieve Physical damage. If the Body recieves more damage then the soul, he will become resistance and lose power, while the soul becomes vulnerable and grows in power, and vice versa.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 150 120 N/A N/A 20 Splits the body and soul. Body and soul recieves 100% damage and deals 50% from start.
2 200 100 N/A N/A 25 Splits the body and soul. Body and soul recieves 100% damage and deals 75% from start.
3 250 80 N/A N/A 30 Splits the body and soul. Body and soul recieves 100% damage and deals 100% from start.

Notes:
Each part have 100% of Hakkah's max health, and they will awlays be at the same amount.

If one dies, both dies.

AoE's can affect both units, doubling their power. (But only if they are Pure/Mixed damage)

AoE heals can affect both targets, doubling their power.

The Soul only takes Magical damage, The body only Physical.

For every 50 damage taken more by either body or soul, it loses 10/15/20% damage and takes 20% less damage, while the other takes 20% more damage and deals 10/15/20% more.

They cannot use active items, but gain all other benefits (Even Immolation Aura etc.)

The Body and Soul have same skills as Hakkah, but altered a bit.

Advanced info on skills:

The body have Vortex of Faith (Normal) while the soul have Vortex of Faith (Reversed) who instantly heals allies it touches, and deals damage to enemies based on the health restored. (Both have normal cooldown/manacost etc.)

The Body have a Balance of Powers, who amplifies damage by 8/12/16/20% and silences for 2/3/4/5 seconds when an enemy attacks. (AoE/Duration etc. is same as normal) (Stacks with Soul's Balance of Powers)

The Body have a Balance of Powers, who amplifies damage by 8/12/16/20% and disarms for 1.2/1.8/2.4/3 seconds when an enemy casts a spell. (AoE/Duration etc. is same as normal) (Stacks with Body's Balance of Powers)

The Body's Disciple of chaos triggers if the enemy have not attacked the last 7/6/5/4 seconds, and deals same damage as normal, but physical, with an identical purge. (Duration is same as normal)

The Soul's Disciple of chaos triggers if the enemy have not casted a spell the last 7/6/5/4 seconds, and deals same damage as normal, but magical, with an identical purge. (Duration is same as normal)

carlvic · 06-26-2010, 04:37 AM

I want to see this completed.
I am always excited to see those "twin" themed heroes.
Esp. From people like the OP.

Sly_theK1ng · 06-26-2010, 12:20 PM

man can u make skills ?

Sgt Failure · 06-26-2010, 07:02 PM

MAde some inital scetches

AlterDevil76 · 06-26-2010, 07:26 PM

ooohhh. I love the 1st Skill and Ultimate. Looking forward for it

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Sgt Failure · 06-28-2010, 04:43 PM

Completed with quick skills. Possible changes, give me suggestions please!

FallinDevast · 06-29-2010, 05:02 AM

Heres a quick review:

I find the stats wierd, was it intended?

1st skill - neat skill mechanics, I like it. Maybe you can make it into a nuke since it looks weak atm (I know its a support heal skill, but still..). One question: what happens if it hits an ally hero first? maybe you can add an initial heal amount. Also, you can lower the slow and increase the damage, since you already have purge from 3rd skill.

2nd skill - its like an upgraded version of silence and effective at that, restricts dpsers to cast skills and prevents nukers to attack. Good in a team clash and works wonders with your passive 3rd skill. I usually ignore numbers but the cooldown is way too long imo.

3rd skill - good harrasment for early-mid laning, would've been great if Hakkah were ranged though. Again, syncs very well with 2nd skill, guaranteed purge when both are maxed.

Ultimate - maybe you can elaborate more, giving a sample scenario would help. Do you control 2 heroes similar to Meepo? What if the other half dies?

Overall - It's a good start, a little polishing and its a solid hero. The 3rd skill is optimized if Hakkah were ranged, 2nd and 3rd syncs very well with each other and 1st skill could use a little buff. GJ, T-null for now since its not quite finished.

NoThlnG · 06-29-2010, 06:48 AM

Well, I'm not in mood to give review. Maybe later.

BTW, here's the animated gif from my thread (http://www.playdota.com/forums/12179...ft-iii-models/)

Shadow Fury · 06-29-2010, 06:53 AM

It's "Vortex"

Sgt Failure · 07-04-2010, 07:26 PM

Thanks everyone, and thanks alot for the GIF

Alibi1 · 07-14-2010, 01:23 PM

It's unbalanced.?!

Sgt Failure · 10-18-2010, 02:44 PM

Bump

Sgt Failure · 04-12-2011, 07:32 AM

Bump? T.T

06-26-2010, 04:37 AM	#2
carlvic Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: In the sky... with Bob Posts: 1,812 Blog Entries: 6	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple I want to see this completed. I am always excited to see those "twin" themed heroes. Esp. From people like the OP. __________________

06-26-2010, 12:20 PM	#3
Sly_theK1ng Member Join Date: May 2010 Location: Croatia Posts: 3,281	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple man can u make skills ?

06-26-2010, 07:02 PM	#4
Sgt Failure Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,717	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple MAde some inital scetches __________________

06-26-2010, 07:26 PM	#5
AlterDevil76 Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Baguio Posts: 140	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple ooohhh. I love the 1st Skill and Ultimate. Looking forward for it . __________________ Review or Die! Heroes:

06-28-2010, 04:43 PM	#6
Sgt Failure Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,717	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple Completed with quick skills. Possible changes, give me suggestions please! __________________

06-29-2010, 05:02 AM	#7
FallinDevast Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Manila, PH Posts: 334 Blog Entries: 1	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple Heres a quick review: I find the stats wierd, was it intended? 1st skill - neat skill mechanics, I like it. Maybe you can make it into a nuke since it looks weak atm (I know its a support heal skill, but still..). One question: what happens if it hits an ally hero first? maybe you can add an initial heal amount. Also, you can lower the slow and increase the damage, since you already have purge from 3rd skill. 2nd skill - its like an upgraded version of silence and effective at that, restricts dpsers to cast skills and prevents nukers to attack. Good in a team clash and works wonders with your passive 3rd skill. I usually ignore numbers but the cooldown is way too long imo. 3rd skill - good harrasment for early-mid laning, would've been great if Hakkah were ranged though. Again, syncs very well with 2nd skill, guaranteed purge when both are maxed. Ultimate - maybe you can elaborate more, giving a sample scenario would help. Do you control 2 heroes similar to Meepo? What if the other half dies? Overall - It's a good start, a little polishing and its a solid hero. The 3rd skill is optimized if Hakkah were ranged, 2nd and 3rd syncs very well with each other and 1st skill could use a little buff. GJ, T-null for now since its not quite finished. __________________ Highlight Awards Morrigan, the Bird of Prey "The Perfect Anti-Ranged Hero, Exactly What DotA Needs!" > marvel at my beautiful banners here <

06-29-2010, 06:48 AM	#8
NoThlnG Forum Staff Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Nowhere Posts: 14,371 Blog Entries: 8	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple Well, I'm not in mood to give review. Maybe later. BTW, here's the animated gif from my thread (http://www.playdota.com/forums/12179...ft-iii-models/) __________________ Assassin's Creed Helpful Links Suggestions Epic Quotes . Credits to Lotus V Eater . . How to Get Your Suggestion Implemented Custom Model GIF Request Suggestion Assisstor's Thread Guides, Lists and Templates How to Become a Moderator . . Suggestion Portfolio My Ability Collections .

06-29-2010, 06:53 AM	#9
Shadow Fury Banned Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: Draining Your Life Juice. Posts: 10,204 Blog Entries: 2	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple It's "Vortex"

07-04-2010, 07:26 PM	#10
Sgt Failure Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,717	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple Thanks everyone, and thanks alot for the GIF __________________

07-14-2010, 01:23 PM	#11
Alibi1 Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 9	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple It's unbalanced.?!

10-18-2010, 02:44 PM	#12
Sgt Failure Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,717	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple Bump __________________

04-12-2011, 07:32 AM	#13
Sgt Failure Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,717	Re: [W.I.P][Agi-Neut] Hakkah - Twin Disciple Bump? T.T __________________