(str-neutral-push-gank)Slave warrior queen

[erico]

Slave warrior queen
Sekunda

Background Story: In Tokimion all half-elves are slaves. This was not a different reality for Sekunda. Daughter of a half-elf and a half-orc she was born as a slave. But fate had other plans for her than a life of pain and suffering. With the death of King Tokimion the next king would be chosen by their most powerful artifact, the sword Bucherten. An item with own intelligence that chose the kings of the past 1000 years. Amid the bustling crowd Sekunda was chosen. This choice meant that the nobles wanted to kill her and not accepted as queen of her people. So Sekunda Bucherten learned the art and elemental properties of the struggle, where one day she will return to pick up his throne and perhaps freeing all slaves.

Strength - 20 + [1,8]
Agility - 20 + [1,8]
Intelligence - 20 + [1,8]



Other skin and attracments

Affiliation:	Neutral
Damage:	34-60
Armor:	2
Movespeed:	305
Starting HP/MP:	300/300
Attack Range:	110(melle)

[indent]Change element - (instant-constant efect-self)

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Sekunda can change the basic element of she sword, causing a different effect for each. Light, Nature, Shadow

__	____.	________.	_______.	___.	_______.	__________________________.
	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	60	10	-	-	-	Element: light, 5% miss, Nature, 20% chance to entangle is 2seconds, Shadow, when killing an enemy unit relies on a skeleton.
2	60	5	-	-	-	Element: light, 10% miss, Nature, 25% chance to entangle is 2seconds, Shadow, when killing an enemy unit raises two skeleton.
3	60	0	-	-	-	Element: light, 15% miss, Nature, 30% chance to entangle is 2seconds, Shadow, when killing an enemy unit relies on third skeleton.
4	60	0	-	-	-	Element: light, 20% miss, Nature, 35% chance to entangle is 2seconds, Shadow, when killing an enemy unit relies on four skeleton.

Notes:

• in entangle the hero cant use blinks or invisble
• the skeletons have 10-46 atack damage, 300hp and die in 5 seconds
• skeletons have 400 move speed and atack every 0.5 seconds
• kill a sheleton give 3 gold for oponent

Nature Essence - (self-buff-autoactive-region)

____	Within the water Sekunda can recover more quickly thanks to the great elemental forces and purity available.

__	____.	________.	_______.	___.	_______.	__________________________.
	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	-	-	-	-	-	Increases 2hp/s and 2mp/s in the water/river
2	-	-	-	-	-	Increases 3hp/s and 3mp/s in the water/river
3	-	-	-	-	-	Increases 4hp/s and 4mp/s in the water/river
4	-	-	-	-	-	Increases 5hp/s and 5mp/s in the water/river

Notes:

• works only in the Dota River

Boomerang Elements - (active-point)

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Sekunda magician throws a boomerang that goes in a certain direction and then returns to her.The boomerang is delighted with the strength of his sword.Depending on the active element of the boomerang had led to a different effect.

__	____.	________.	_______.	___.	_______.	__________________________.
	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	60	5	600	-	While the boomerang is in the air. maximum of 20 seconds	45 damage per hit-elemental efect
2	60	5	700	-	While the boomerang is in the air. maximum of 20 seconds	60 damage per hit-elemental efect
3	60	5	800	-	While the boomerang is in the air. maximum of 20 seconds	85 damage per hit-elemental efect
4	60	5	900	-	While the boomerang is in the air. maximum of 20 seconds	100 damage per hit-elemental efect

Notes:

• if the boomerang not back in 20seconds he erase youself
• in the Ligth element make hit unit lost 30 mana
• in the dark element make hit unit silenced per 1second
• in the nature element hit unit get poison and take 30damage/second per 3 second and slow 10% per 3 second
• boomerang bounce in the hit going 100 distance points from him in back
• all efects not stack witch yourselfs
• Does not bounce to unrevealed invisible units
• Traveling speed is 900 units per second
• after the back bounce he search the caster hero if found other unit he bounce back again
• the missile did not chase your target
• if the caster evade the boomerang he go half discance fron initial cast distance.

Ricochet - (Active - Single Target)

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Going rapidly towards a target unit, then bounces off to nearby units for a duration. Can bounce to allies and deals damage when bouncing to enemies.

__	____.	________.	_______.	___.	_______.	__________________________.
	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	160	150	800	-	4	80 damage
2	160	125	800	-	5	150 damage
3	160	100	800	-	6	220 damage

Notes:

• Becomes invulnerable during the duration of the spell
• Heros movement becomes uncontrollable
• Casting other spells and using items is allowed during the duration
• Can bounce to both allied and enemy units
• Bounce search AoE is 600
• Cancels when there are no more units to bounce to
• Does not bounce to unrevealed invisible units
• Traveling speed is 600 units per second
• Damage type is magical
• Bounces off 250 units from the last target
• Destroys trees
• Can hit a target more than once
• completed the skill she loses half its armor per 5 seconds

change log

--------------------------------3/julho-------------------------
damage increass to 34-60

[doomed2die]

I don't see much synergy ._.

[Nightlynx]

I agree with doomed2die. There isn't really any synergy here. Actually, it feels like 4 random skills...There isn't even a theme. Slave warrior Queen, I was thinking some Amazon tribe.

Anyway, I can see a common theme between 1st and 3rd (but that's because these two skills are used concurrently)

[erico]

Originally Posted by Nightlynx

I agree with doomed2die. There isn't really any synergy here. Actually, it feels like 4 random skills...There isn't even a theme. Slave warrior Queen, I was thinking some Amazon tribe

Anyway, I can see a common theme between 1st and 3rd (but that's because these two skills are used concurrently)

Amazon? Maybe a good idea and a comon, in the hitory i think change to not look equal a others historys.

1st and 3rd is a idea to mix skills and get more game play.
2sd skill make this hero good for solo mid. a tanker solo mid
4rd you can cast boomerang a same time, two skills make danger.

Originally Posted by doomed2die

I don't see much synergy ._.

not have some sinergia? game play or hero skills?

[PuЪLiㄷEиəℳy#1]

She doesn't look like a half-orc...

23-39 damage is small and the number leeway is terribly far...

[erico]

Originally Posted by PubLicEneMy#1

She doesn't look like a half-orc...

23-39 damage is small and the number leeway is terribly far...

she is a half-half-orc and a half-half-elf. 1/4orc 1/4elf 2/4human, she have goods canines.

23-39 i need agree

[Baldoro]

"Sekunda can change the basic element of his sword, causing a different effect for each. Light, Nature, Shadow"

SheMale O_O?

[erico]

Originally Posted by Baldoro

"Sekunda can change the basic element of his sword, causing a different effect for each. Light, Nature, Shadow"

SheMale O_O?

my bad ingleshy not help some time!

Is a woman!

[Khassar]

That face scared the shit out of me.

[Royal_Naga]

That Hero make my eyes bleed..

[erico]

Originally Posted by Khassar

That face scared the shit out of me.

Originally Posted by Royal_Naga

That Hero make my eyes bleed..

Can I think she began to fulfill his mission! Not thought about making it so hot if you know what I mean. Half-orc too, understood?

[Joker_DT]

change the elemental cost too much mana

[PuЪLiㄷEиəℳy#1]

Originally Posted by erico

she is a half-half-orc and a half-half-elf. 1/4orc 1/4elf 2/4human, she have goods canines.

Originally Posted by erico

Can I think she began to fulfill his mission! Not thought about making it so hot if you know what I mean. Half-orc too, understood?

I disagree...
this is female half-orc...



Night elf ancestry is also cannot be seen (very light skin color).

I don't like Nature Essence since it doesn't offer much chance to regenerate. Most of the time, the real action is not in the river especially after being pushed. People would not go there only to regenerate.

[erico]

Originally Posted by PubLicEneMy#1

I disagree...
this is female half-orc...



Night elf ancestry is also cannot be seen (very light skin color).

I don't like Nature Essence since it doesn't offer much chance to regenerate. Most of the time, the real action is not in the river especially after being pushed. People would not go there only to regenerate.

you say (female half-orc) i say (female half-half-orc)

blood line in Slave Warrior Queen: humam + orc = Half-Orc (father)
Humam + elf = Half-Elf (mother)
Half-orc+half-Elf= Half-elf-orc-humam(this is the Slave Warrior Queen)

She is more half-human by genetic and half-half-orc and half-half-elf.

is this!

[PuЪLiㄷEиəℳy#1]

Originally Posted by erico

you say (female half-orc) i say (female half-half-orc)

blood line in Slave Warrior Queen: humam + orc = Half-Orc (father)
Humam + elf = Half-Elf (mother)
Half-orc+half-Elf= Half-elf-orc-humam(this is the Slave Warrior Queen)

She is more half-human by genetic and half-half-orc and half-half-elf.

is this!

you got the phenotype wrong...
She looks too human to have all those impurities...
she's supposed to show up something physically from the other races she has. It's genetically impossible to have a creature that shows only the physical characteristics of only one parent (where would you expect the orc and night elf chromosomes to go?)

Bah... Focus more on the stats and skills rather than this MSI-dealing model. You made this too complicated, you can have an elementalist warrior without all those unnecessary racial over-saturation. Just suggesting. And yeah, the skills need tweaking,

[Sven2k]

I agree with PubLicEneMy#1 Nature Essence realy won't be very useful because you normaly don't spen much time on the river and make her skin more greenesh or blue cuz she realy doesn't look like a half-elf half-orc

BTW not important info : hah her name is sekunda ? (in bulgarian that means second not second as second place but second as rggg time 3minutes and 2 seconds )

[IVIr.PL0W]

Slave Warrior needs massive reworking. Too random.

Here's some points to consider in keeping with the theme.
Slaves went through a lot of hardship
They used song and melody to ease themselves
Possibly VoodooIf you could change specifically skill 2, that would be better. It sure as hell didnt help to cross water from Africa for the slaves. I like the 1st and 3rd abilities those are fine. Skeleton Voodoo, Entangle Voodoo, The miss effect I would actually change, whats the point if they're entangled. Your ultimate should incorporate some of the mentioned themese among slaves. Start brainstorming, there's potential here.

[Cainer]

4 random skills. No synergy at all.

[SpiderPig]

i hate the first picture

[erico]

some sugestions?