tags. Go Away & Banal

Amergin's Cola · 07-21-2010, 11:23 PM

Feel free to CnC.

悲しいバグ · 07-21-2010, 11:30 PM

Go Away: took me some time to discover her lips ... looked like an abstract at first, not in love with the colors, but the effects are nice

Banal: cool, but with the focal on the left and not much really going on in the right, it feels unbalanced. colors are really good though and so are effects as always

#e: 1000th post :>>>>

or should I say 7931st

-Shahzal · 07-22-2010, 11:28 AM

omg first one i thought was abstract until i read weedles coment.
wow its sexy enought both of them but i dont understand
why tehrs like a layer of white on the first one?
it doesnt make the face come out.

Amergin's Cola · 07-22-2010, 09:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 悲しいバグ

Go Away: took me some time to discover her lips ... looked like an abstract at first, not in love with the colors, but the effects are nice

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shahzal

omg first one i thought was abstract until i read weedles coment.
wow its sexy enought both of them but i dont understand
why tehrs like a layer of white on the first one?
it doesnt make the face come out.

2deep4u

Also, @Shahz, what do you mean "layer of white"? That's just her face.

Ignis · 07-22-2010, 10:17 PM

I think the only issue BOTH have is negative space. Try working on composition or try different canvas sizes. Go away is really really good lookin

develop this style man, I am beginning to love it!

-Shahzal · 07-23-2010, 07:39 AM

Well i duno how to explain it but it looks like u have put a gradient map of white colour and changed opaticy.

悲しいバグ · 07-23-2010, 11:48 AM

a white "sheen"

Amergin's Cola · 07-23-2010, 12:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shahzal

Well i duno how to explain it but it looks like u have put a gradient map of white colour and changed opaticy.

Pastel gradient set to... I think screen, since it's too bright for
luminosity. I think.

-Shahzal · 07-23-2010, 01:10 PM

Post a version without the gradient

07-21-2010, 11:23 PM	#1
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07-21-2010, 11:30 PM	#2
悲しいバグ Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Germany Posts: 2,707	Re: tags. Go Away & Banal Go Away: took me some time to discover her lips ... looked like an abstract at first, not in love with the colors, but the effects are nice Banal: cool, but with the focal on the left and not much really going on in the right, it feels unbalanced. colors are really good though and so are effects as always #e: 1000th post :>>>> or should I say 7931st

07-22-2010, 11:28 AM	#3
-Shahzal Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Homeless Posts: 5,748	Re: tags. Go Away & Banal omg first one i thought was abstract until i read weedles coment. wow its sexy enought both of them but i dont understand why tehrs like a layer of white on the first one? it doesnt make the face come out. __________________ Sig-Ronaldo PL! Want A DotA 2 Key? Click On Ronaldo To View My Gfx Portofolio! PM For A Sig Join Us At Pakistan Leauge for a better gaming experience! I've got an extra dota 2 key! PM Me for it!

07-22-2010, 10:17 PM	#5
Ignis Graphics Crew Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,537 Blog Entries: 10	Re: tags. Go Away & Banal I think the only issue BOTH have is negative space. Try working on composition or try different canvas sizes. Go away is really really good lookin develop this style man, I am beginning to love it! __________________ Motto Dotalicious Smile Hellspawn DeviantArt Nerd? We prefer the term "intellectual bad ass."

07-23-2010, 07:39 AM	#6
-Shahzal Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Homeless Posts: 5,748	Re: tags. Go Away & Banal Well i duno how to explain it but it looks like u have put a gradient map of white colour and changed opaticy. __________________ Sig-Ronaldo PL! Want A DotA 2 Key? Click On Ronaldo To View My Gfx Portofolio! PM For A Sig Join Us At Pakistan Leauge for a better gaming experience! I've got an extra dota 2 key! PM Me for it!

07-23-2010, 11:48 AM	#7
悲しいバグ Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Germany Posts: 2,707	Re: tags. Go Away & Banal a white "sheen"

07-23-2010, 01:10 PM	#9
-Shahzal Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Homeless Posts: 5,748	Re: tags. Go Away & Banal Post a version without the gradient __________________ Sig-Ronaldo PL! Want A DotA 2 Key? Click On Ronaldo To View My Gfx Portofolio! PM For A Sig Join Us At Pakistan Leauge for a better gaming experience! I've got an extra dota 2 key! PM Me for it!