[ITEM]Biscuit with unsatisfactory Death

[Punj,Love Hater]

Wanna eat biscuit in Dota!!!

BISCUIT/LEMBAS BREAD(Dota-ish name) (Consuable)(Upgradable)



Just simple fast food.

Cost : 23 Gold

Effects on Consuming :

1. Gives instatly 1 to all stats for 5sec.

2. Heals u for 15 H.P. on use.

Notes:


1. Can carry more than one in one slot maxium 4 allowed.

Upgrade :

BISCUIT PACK/LEMBAS BREAD PACK(Dota-ish name) (Consuable at some times)(Upgradable)



Simple food with lot of importance.

Cost : 423 Gold

Requirments:

1. BISCUIT/LEMBAS BREAD(1 Piece)(23 gold)

2. RECIPE OF BISCUIT PACK/LEMAS BREAD PACK (400 gold)

Effects :

1. For each 70 hp lost u get a charge on biscuit/lembas bread pack.

2. Charge is used same like Magic stick's charge i.e. you use all charges at one click.

3. Per charge u get 15hp healed and 1 to all stats for 10 sec.

4. Charges capped at 10.

5.THIS INVENTORY DOES NOT STACK WITH MAGIC STICK NOR MAGIC WAND.

Notes:


1. Mana cost : 3 (everytime u click on invent)

2. Cooldown : N/A second

3. Charges are also credited when u r damaged minimum 70hp or u lose min. 70 hp. For each 70 hp lost u get 1 charge.

4. For a spell casted on you which damages u, u will recieve 1 charge. Not less than that, not more than that.

Upgrade :

BISCUIT /LEMBAS BREAD(Dota-ish name) BOX (Consuable at some times)



Food melded with magic.

Cost : 2578 Gold

Requirments:

1. BISCUIT/LEMBAS BREAD PACK(423 gold)

2. 1 WRAITH BAND(460 gold)

3. 1 BRACER(510 gold)

4. 1 NULL TALISMAN(485 gold)

5. RECIPE OF BISCUIT/LEMBAS BREAD BOX(700 gold)

Effects :

1. You get 12 to all to stats and bonus 5 dmg permanently.

2. You get a passive "UNSATISFACTORY DEATH".

3. For each 80 hp lost u get a charge on biscuit/lembas bread Box.

4. Charge is used same like Magic stick's charge i.e. you use all charges at one click.

5. Per charge u get 25hp healed and 1 to all stats for 10 sec and 1 bonus to damage.

6. Charges capped at 15.

7. For a spell casted on you which damages u, u will recieve 2 charges. Not less than that, not more than that.

8. For any hit u recieve from enemy will credit u only 1 charge.
Notes:


1. Mana cost : 6 (everytime u click on inventory)

2. Cooldown : 1 second

3. Charges are also credited when u r damaged min. 80 or u lose 80 hp.

4. THIS INVENTORY DOES NOT STACK WITH MAGIC STICK NOR MAGIC WAND

UNSATISFACTORY DEATH..

When ever you die, a unit is summoned at ur dying place and lasts 10 sec. It is controllable.

Dmg(Chaos) : 25-30
BAT : 1.5
Range : 425
Health Point : 400
Mana Point : 125.
H.P. Regen : 0.86/sec.
M.P. Regen : N/A
Armour(Normal) : 5
Skills : 1
MS : 480
Bounty : 10-12 gold

SKILLS


WAVE:

Realeases a red coloured wave in 500 range in front of him. AOE 175. Dealing Pure Damage 150. He dies after casting this wave.

MANACOST : 50

* You can imagine any hero with it and you will find that it is suitable for all heroes*

* Best use with Heroes with who dmg themselves like Huskar , Abaddon , Centaur or Pudge. Best for all Tankers and Rambo style heroes*

THANKS TO :-

1. Averrios.

2. Carloparis.

3. E-2motion.

4. Ace-tobi

5. To all guys who replied to my suggestion.

[cp14]

there is now way to detect if damage is physical or magical. I suggest whenever you receive xx amounts of damage. This item in its current state counters all forms of harassment. othar than that numbers are off, way off, sooooo off.

T-up on biscuit idea but i dislike combining wraiths, bracers and nulls.

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by carloparis14

there is now way to detect if damage is physical or magical. I suggest whenever you receive xx amounts of damage. This item in its current state counters all forms of harassment. othar than that numbers are off, way off, sooooo off.

T-up on biscuit idea but i dislike combining wraiths, bracers and nulls.

thanks for review. I will edit it.

[cp14]

Dark Magician
Zalero




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MoveStopHold PositionAttack
PatrolAttribute BonusHero Abilities
Dark CurseEssence GripDark Magic AuraBlack Lightning

• Information
• Advance Statistics
• Changelog

The Dark Magician is a powerful support hero. His regeneration aura can be channeled to increase it's range to global. His Dark Curse can really cripple enemies early game by drastically reducing their physical damage and spellcasting. His Essence Grip is used to disable enemy hero or carry, it also protects the dark magician from damage by temporarily removing him from the field. Finally his Black Lighttning ultimate is an allpurpose spell which can cripple spellcaster and non-spellcasters alike by destroying their mana pool. With his ability to cripple enemies early, mid and late game , the Dark Magician is a budget pack of support.


Backgroundstory

Changelog

DD-MM-YYYY

• Changelog

DD-MM-YYYY

• Changelog

• Dark Curse
• Skill 2
• Skill 3
• Skill 4

Dark CurseAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Area of Effect
Target Ability Hotkey : D



Notes:

• Affected units regain 10 damage and attackspeed per attack.
• Does not kill. Direct HP and Mana removal.
• HP and mana removal requires at least 40 player based damage.

Essence GripAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Enemy
Ability Hotkey : R



Notes:

• The Dark Magician becomes "Imprisoned" for the duration of the spell. (Astral Imrisonment)

Dark Magic AuraAbility Type: Passive, Active
Targeting Type: Instant
Ability Hotkey : E



Notes:

• *AoE is the AoE while the skill is being channeled.

Black LightningAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Single Target
Ability Hotkey : T



Notes:

• Magical Damage, reduced by spell resistance.
• Direct Mana removal, unreduced by resistance and penetrates immunity.

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by carloparis14

here is an icon. Also for dota icons use this site
Warcraft III - Icon Maker

thanks again.

[Shadow Fury]

Lulzy item.

I like it. First is underpowered, though.

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by The Lord God

Lulzy item.

I like it. First is underpowered, though.

thanks for review. I made first one underpowered so that next two can be balanced.

[anonymus-萃香]

Great item
I can see this in lycan's core

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by anonymus-萃香

Great item
I can see this in lycan's core

ty. Dont forget huskar

[Averrios]

BUISCUITS FTW ... you should amke the receipe for a buiscuit bow consist of 10 Buiscuits and teh receipe

I would like to see a fortune cookie box as final upgrade after the cookie box

make it like the things before only better and then add the effect of the little Paper in the cookie where a sentence is written. The sentence says something like:

Be aware of the unforseen.

means you have 1 or more unseen heros around in 1000 AoE

Running is sometimes better then fight

if you have 2 seen Heros in 1000 AoE around

A healpot is sometimes useful

If you are low HP

Better help your allies then you

If an allie in 2000 AoE has less HP then you

Defense is a requirement for Offense

If your base is under attack

... things like that


this will be very funny ... for sure there should be some sentences that confuse the enemys more that this.

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by Averrios

BUISCUITS FTW ... you should amke the receipe for a buiscuit bow consist of 10 Buiscuits and teh receipe

I would like to see a fortune cookie box as final upgrade after the cookie box

make it like the things before only better and then add the effect of the little Paper in the cookie where a sentence is written. The sentence says something like:

Be aware of the unforseen.

means you have 1 or more unseen heros around in 1000 AoE

Running is sometimes better then fight

if you have 2 seen Heros in 1000 AoE around

A healpot is sometimes useful

If you are low HP

Better help your allies then you

If an allie in 2000 AoE has less HP then you

Defense is a requirement for Offense

If your base is under attack

... things like that


this will be very funny ... for sure there should be some sentences that confuse the enemys more that this.

lolz. I will be adding! Thanks!

[Flame13]

powerful little cookies...useful though...dunno...t-null I think...

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by Flame13

powerful little cookies...useful though...dunno...t-null I think...

t-null why?

[Truality]

Okay, the concept is good, I love biscuits, for the lulz of course.

It reminds me of one of my items, but oh well.

I wonder how can you change it to became warcraft-related.

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by NiKaNoRoU

Okay, the concept is good, I love biscuits, for the lulz of course.

It reminds me of one of my items, but oh well.

I wonder how can you change it to became warcraft-related.

i have an idea for converting it to warfact style.

[Lotus V Eater]

the biscuit itself and biscuit pack upgrade seems fine, but not the biscuit box. The latter upgrade is quite unneeded to me. since it is a food, and you combine it with items---->i think its quite weird though.

if you still wanna stick to the biscuit box upgrade, then make it consist of several biscuit pack then. maybe 2 or 3 biscuit packs + 1 biscuit box recipe = Biscuit Box. Thats sound more logic to me.

T-NULL for now...

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by Pink_Lotus

the biscuit itself and biscuit pack upgrade seems fine, but not the biscuit box. The latter upgrade is quite unneeded to me. since it is a food, and you combine it with items---->i think its quite weird though.

if you still wanna stick to the biscuit box upgrade, then make it consist of several biscuit pack then. maybe 2 or 3 biscuit packs + 1 biscuit box recipe = Biscuit Box. Thats sound more logic to me.

T-NULL for now...

the reason i added those are that this invent can be useful in late game. But yes u right i will be editing it.

[lordAether]

A combination of magic stick and tango....T-UP on Biscuit and T-Null on the box for now
since consumables are mostly useful in the early game and isnt much used in the late game...

T-UP overall

[Punj,Love Hater]

Originally Posted by lordAether

A combination of magic stick and tango....T-UP on Biscuit and T-Null on the box for now
since consumables are mostly useful in the early game and isnt much used in the late game...

T-UP overall

thanks. But i made box with essence to provide huge stat gains during ganks. U can easily get 34 bonus to all stats during gank if u store charge.

[Dzin-Zakk]

Well now, that is something reeeeaaally new)