[Sen-Agi]Time's Victim

[Flame13]

Nertrop is an Marine from the future, but the scourge exists even there, only few living people survived the endless war.The scientists wanted to create an time machine to make this not happen.Nertrop was the only marine who accepted the quest.Accidents occured and he was teleported too far in time,so he reached the ancient times.His human form was lost however in the process.The sentinels saw that he is an great warrior and had teach him the ways of magic.Now he wants to spend his life to stop the scourge for his fallen comrades in the future and his Sentinel friends in the ancient times.

• Starting Statistic
• Statistic Level 16
• Statistic Level 25

Strength Agility Intelligence 20 + [2.1] 18 + [2.2] 23 + [2.4]

Starting HP/MP: 480/299 Base Stats: 61 Stats Gain: 6.7 Primary Role: Nuker

Affiliation:	Sentinels		Health Reg:	0,60
Damage:	29-47		Mana Reg:	0,92
Armor:	3		Base Attack Time:	1.6
Movespeed:	300		Missile Speed:	1200
Attack Range:	550		Sight Range:	1600 / 1000

Strength Agility Intelligence 51.5 54 53.5

Starting HP/MP: 1025/695 Base Stats: 161.5 Stats Gain: 6.7 Primary Role: Nuker

Affiliation:	Sentinels		Health Reg:	1,545
Damage:	60-68		Mana Reg:	2.36
Armor:	7,7		Base Attack Time:	1.6
Movespeed:	300		Missile Speed:	1200
Attack Range:	550		Sight Range:	1600 / 1000

Strength Agility Intelligence 70.4 70.8 80.6

HP/MP: 1437/1047.8 Base Stats: 221.8 Stats Gain: 6.7 Primary Role: Nuker

Affiliation:	Sentinels		Health Reg:	2.112
Damage:	87-101		Mana Reg:	3.224
Armor:	10.54		Base Attack Time:	1.6
Movespeed:	300		Missile Speed:	1200
Attack Range:	550		Sight Range:	1600 / 1000

• Plasma Grenade
• Portal Strike
• Bullet Time
• Death Sentence
• Skill Synergy
• Hero Synergy
• Item Synergy

Area of effect,enemy targeted active spell.
Summons and throws an Grenade at target Location dealing damage and melting the enemy armor.The affected area becomes poisoned, enemy units which enter got poisoned too for the remaining seconds.The armor and damage stacks with other grenades.

You also gain the Global Grenadier sub-skill

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	120	60 seconds	600	150	3 seconds	Deals 90 instant damage, reduces affected units armor by 2 and deals 20 DPS.
2	140	50 seconds	650	175	4 seconds	Deals 110 instant damage, reduces affected units armor by 3 and deals 30 DPS.
3	160	40 seconds	700	200	4 seconds	Deals 130 instant damage, reduces affected units armor by 5 and deals 30 DPS
4	180	30 seconds	750	225	5 seconds	Deals 150 instant damage, reduces affected units armor by 7 and deals 40 DPS

The marine opens an portal and throws the grenade through it.After 2 seconds an portal will open near the targeted place and the grenade will fly to the targeted place and explode.Deal same damage at global range and has same effects but has 180 cooldown and costs double the normal mana.

Here shows the grenade and the explosion.The explosion is created by an simple dummy unit as the effect is the death of an sentinel building.

Ground targeted active spell.
Sends out an shockwave-like portal which pulls all affected units (enemies and allies too) towards the caster.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	Width	Duration	Effects
1	90	25 seconds	900	150	N/A	Pulls each affected unit randomly by 100-300 units towards the caster.
2	120	22.5 seconds	1000	150	N/A	Pulls each affected unit randomly by 200-300 units towards the caster.
3	150	20 seconds	1100	150	N/A	Pulls each affected unit randomly by 200-400 units towards the caster.
4	180	17.5 seconds	1200	150	N/A	Pulls each affected unit randomly by 300-400 units towards the caster.

Notifications:
-You pull allies too-
-Pull distance varies between max and min-

The simple blink effect while dragged with high speed...not really complicated and it is in game so no msi...

Active,global area of effect spell.
An special marine equipment, the Time Vial makes them able to slow the time while they remain unchanged.This vial is now powered through magical means.Also gives chance to teleport back with 300 units when you are attacked by melee units.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	180	150 seconds	N/A	Global	3	Globally slows down all units speed by 50%.Gives you 25% to evade attacks and 15% to teleport back with 300 units when attacked by melee.The teleport only works when hunter stance is not active.
2	120	135 seconds	N/A	Global	3.5	Globally slows down all units speed by 60%.Gives you 35% to evade attacks and 20% to teleport back with 300 units when attacked by melee.The teleport only works when hunter stance is not active.
3	90	120 seconds	N/A	Global	4	Globally slows down enemy units speed by 60% and friendly units speed by 50%.Gives you 45% to evade attacks and 25% to teleport back with 300 units when attacked by melee.The teleport only works when hunter stance is not active.
4	75	105 seconds	N/A	Global	5	Globally slows down enemy units speed by 70% and fiendly units speed by 55%.Gives you 50% to evade attacks and 30% to teleport back with 300 units when attacked by melee.The teleport only works when hunter stance is not active.

Notifications:
-Allies does not gain evasion-
-Mana cost decrease halves for each level-
-Cooldown should make you think when you use it-
-Allies can be mad at you if you miss-use this spell-
-Projectiles should be slowed down too but that I think cannot be coded-
-Evasion does not stack with items-
-The strike deals no damage when you teleport back-

The classic invisibility spell at Sorceress in warcraft 3...bit old school but fits the theme.Also shows the mana touch effects, the blue circle at the feet of the caster.

Ground targeted,area of effect spell.
Nertrop's evolved mind can understand the tricky incantations and his iron will makes him able to learn these spells very fast.This spells summons corrupting flames that damage everyone in the area.After enemies get exposed to these flames for enough time they will become infected and will take higher damage even outside the flames.Re-entering the flames refreshes the duration.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	220	120 seconds	600	300	10	Deals 45 DPS to units that stand in the ignited area.Damage is dealt to friendly units as well.After 5 seconds of standing in area, enemy creatures become infected and will take 75 DPS even if they leave the area.Infection lasts 5 seconds after the unit leaves the area.The duration refreshes if the unit re-enters of remains in the area.
2	160	150 seconds	600	400	10	Deals 60 DPS to units that stand in the ignited area.Damage is dealt to friendly units as well.After 4 seconds of standing in area, enemy creatures become infected and will take 85 DPS even if they leave the area.Infection lasts 7 seconds after the unit leaves the area.The duration refreshes if the unit re-enters of remains in the area.
3	100	180 seconds	600	500	10	Deals 75 DPS to units that stand in the ignited area.Damage is dealt to friendly units as well.After 3 seconds of standing in area, enemy creatures become infected and will take 95 DPS even if they leave the area.Infection lasts 9 seconds after the unit leaves the area.The duration refreshes if the unit re-enters of remains in the area.

Notifications:
-Has 3 seconds channeling(cast time!)-
-Infects only enemies-
-Flames burns allies too-

Here is shown the area effect and the infection effect the units take.The area effect is again an simple dummy unit dying.Set duration of death animation to 10 seconds and it is done.Units get the simple death coil special animation on them.I know the undead building death animation is a bit blinding but this has to be so.

Well,well what can be easier then the synergy?I'll show you the base...
Base combos:
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Plasma Grenade+Global Grenadier
If you have enough mana you can throw 2 grenades one at close range and one at global.As armor and poison stacks you can kill them quickly.
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Plasma Grenade+Portal Strike
Simple,efficient combo at early game.Decrease enemy armor by grenade and drag him back and attack him.Easy enough...
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Plasma Grenade+Portal Strike+Gun Run
This is the expansion of the previous combo,you slow the enemy down after you weaken the enemy.Makes him unable to escape or unable to fight back.Use it when allies aren't nearby or they can't help you.
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Plasma Grenade+Global grenadier+Bullet Time
If you have very much mana and enemy is quite hard to kill then throw a grenade attack him then global grenade and he is almost dead because of high armor reduction and the damage now slow him with the Bullet Time and finish him.
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Plasma Grenade+Bullet Time+Death Sentence+Global Grenade
An base combo for fast kills, weaken enemies with grenade then slow them so you become able to channel the Death Sentence and keep them enough in the flames and finish them with the global grenade when they try to escape.
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Death Sentence+Portal Strike
My favorite combo, ignite the area and drag enemies back in flames if they try to leave it OR if they are already infected you can drag them to refresh the infection's duration.This is mostly for fast ambushes...
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Death Sentence+Portal Strike+Bullet Time
Death Sentence+Bullet Time+Portal Strike
You can chose the order in which you cast them, it will help you anyway.The previous combo lacks the slow effect,people can run out of the flaming area quite fast but the Gun Run changes this.These two spells are used to keep people in the flaming area.Drag and slow or slow then drag.

I think hero synergy is obvious but damn it I will write it anyway...
Well our little Marine is fragile and has no stun or disable exept the Bullet Time which actually doesn't silence the casters.WooooW!!! we found his weakness...caster heroes tear him apart...but wait what if you have Trax,Tiny,Earthshaker or even Barathrum as allies?Well the marine uses Death Sentence and well lets say the target blinks away.You use mobile portal and drag him.What will stop him blinking again?Well the cooldown and trax who can silence or Tiny who can stun and keep him in the area or Earthshaker who stuns him for lots of seconds or even Bara who can charge and stun and use ulti.

Best allies:
Stunners and disables-Here are some but there are plenty more:


Best if you don't mess with:
Casters,silencers,illusionists,blinkers-These can tear Nertrop apart:

Well here is the Nightmare of Nertrop, Trax's silence makes him useless,Anti-Mage is like the fear's incarnate for him with mana burn and magic damage reduction,or Omni's repel which makes you useless again,Riki silence,blink and invis-the combo of death,Phantom Lancer is an multiple killer...properly...aaaand Earth is an half-caster who need's only an Kelen's dagger of escape and he can smash Nertrop in the ground.Ouch!

Oh yes...Item synergy was the hard to think of...
Well our marine is very very mana oriented so he needs one of these:

He is also fragile at close combat so one of these should help:

To explain:Poor man's shield is an early game item for agi heroes like our marine.
Force staff is for escapes or to drag enemy hero in your ulti, this should help you mid game.
Eul's Scepter is great to escape enemies and well enemies can use it to cancel your ulti or to evade it...
Vanguard is one of the best items you can buy and it is cheap too, helps you much...
Manta Syle is another item you can benefit from as illusions are great for evade and attack too but it costs much.

You should think of buying this if you think you can get enough mana...

With dual Plasma Grenade,Global Grenade,Gun Run and dual Death Sentence+Portal Strike combo you tear the enemies flesh from their soul...

Some high cost items,you can buy one of this...or both...

These help you slow down enemies and keep them in your ulti's area.
Maybe these can do the trick too...


Shiva can slow and deal damage,Blade of Alacrity can slow,Lothar's Edge can make you be better at sudden ambushes and can save your life plenty of times and well the classic Butterfly can make you deal high damage and evasion can prove usefull too.

These are the items, try them out and chose which ones you prefer...

• Closed
• Presentation 1
• Presentation 2
• Presentation 3
• Presentation 4

Plasma Grenade
Area effect ground target spell, affects enemies only!
The diagram is simple enough I think this shows the effects that the grenade has:

Portal Strike
Ground targeted forward wave style spell, affects both friends and enemies!
The diagrams show before and after the spell is cast, not that hard, affected units are pulled towards caster by an random amount that vary each level.First is before (it is aiming) and second is the effect.

Bullet Time
Global range aoe around caster spell, affects all units on map!
The Bullet Time is an simple time slow, the diagram shows the potential that this spell has, as friends are slowed by less amount than enemies at high level and the caster is not slowed at all!
Before and After spell diagram.

Death Sentence
Area Effect ground targeted spell, affects both allies and enemies!
Well this spell surely needed an explanation/presentation as nearly no one understood it correctly!
Here is an diagram it shows everything the most simple possible...This spell creates and area of flames which does not hold anyone it just that this has an effect which is named Infection, it occurs after enemy unit stays in flames for a consecutive of 5/4/3 seconds.

Credits

Model can be downloaded from here,the Hiveworkshop.If you don't like this one there is still the normal marine in the game.

Icons taken from hiveworkshop too.
Presentation made by myself.
Effects and projectiles are made by myself.
Thx to Jajeczco for template.
Thx to Nothing for GIF animation :D.
Testmap
I don't have testmap yet,and I don't really know how to create one so I would be pleased if someone who likes the idea to make an testmap for me thx in advance...

[Flame13]

No feedback at all...is this hero so good that it doesn't need anything fixed or it is so bad that no one can read it till the end?

[Nizaris]

It is too futuristic. How come futuristic guy who use blaster need a magic SPELL? This hero is good, but not fit the ANCIENT medieval of DotA mood. His presence will destroy the mood. The same with if put in Star Craft in DotA. Unless Blizzard want to create the same game like DotA but futuristic background then i cannot give T-Up....

[Flame13]

Well I hate the robotic things in DotA and these stuffs but well this is kind of time travel got his story how is he in ancient times and not like other robots and hi-tech heroes...anyway the medieval background remains as he can just be changed a bit to make it more fitting but spells effects remain the same...oh an I think that an Flamethrower (exits from medieval times but of course in different forms...) is more fitting than an goblin with laser gun or an robotic goblin or an helicopter named Aurel Vlaicu =)) ...

There are many weird things in this game but at least I got an story that makes this weird thing fit in theme...
Oh and he needs magic because he will run out of ammo and energy... so some summoned bullets and lightning spells could come useful for him XD =))

[Nizaris]

Well, as weird it is, i hope there will be no Pikachu or Doraemon in future DotA or i will stop playing Yeah...why not? Doraemon use his magic pocket....

I like your hero, just don't fit the theme...

[Flame13]

Should I change him in a hi-tech goblin?
I will try make something with it...maybe as he comes from future but his technology is defected,runs out of resources and the Sentinels want to show him the ways of ancient magics so he can live in these times...a kind of blocked here but at least I found my allies...so he learns the mobile portal which name should be changed in Portal Strike and change the Mirc Blast in Corrupted Hell...as he is an scientist and is an marine from future he is very smart so he learns fast...an will add an semi-scientistic model...but he should have his gun and grenades...
What do you guys think? Please respond...

[Flame13]

Remade it totally!

Changed the spell names,story and model!
Made it fit DotA...

[Yuri Bakura]

primary role = ganger lol

[Shadow Fury]

Nice backstory (:

[Flame13]

Originally Posted by Yuri Bakura

primary role = ganger lol

?Why lol?

Oh and thx Angel...I watch too many films...

Edit:I don't understand you but I changed it to Nuker...

[Nizaris]

Maybe you should use Tank? I think Tank is more suit the skills.

[Flame13]

No chance I use that...lol grenade with tank?Portal with tank?Gun Run with tank? How does he slow time to evade shots? wooow that would be weird and grenade is weird too...also I hate mechanic things as DotA clearly doesn't need them...

[Nizaris]

Well, it is a futuristic tank ...MBT today have grenades, CAS grenades to avoid missiles and mortar... MBT today can avoid attacks with speed. Tanks also have machine guns and different warhead...

[Flame13]

Well yes but it don't fits story at all...an Space Marine that returns in time by an portal within a tank? And tank needs fuel which is not found in the ancient times...I like the Witch Hunter model more...has handgun and a sword for spells...I think it is enough good...

[Jajeczko]

This hero has very good synergy. But ultimate as for me is over powered. It can deal 4400 damage... If I read it like you thought.
Original is that pull units to caster good to kill someone next to tower.
T-Up for concept, T-Up for skill synergy but T-Null for ultimate. Its overpowered.

[Flame13]

Thx for feedback...Well ulti is not so overpowered as 3 second is channeling from it and its easiest to evade...I reduced damage however...but it can only deal high damage if used correctly...

I also want to put in light that he is currently using 535 mana to cast all his spells at max level + 360 mana if he uses the Subskill,Global Grenade...

At lvl 1 ulti deals:
-450 damage from flames-allies take it too-
-375 infection damage-if 5 seconds in area-
-75 to 225 bonus if you make him refresh infection-
lvl 2 ulti deals:
-600 damage from flames-allies take it too-
-595 infection damage-if 4 seconds in area-
-85 to 340 bonus damage if refresh infection-
lvl 3 ulti deals:
-750 damage from flames-allies take it too-
-855 damage from infection-if 3 seconds in area-
-95 to 570 bonus if refresh the duration of infection-

All of these is damage over time,infection can be dispelled or removed and easy to get out of the area by blink or runing or force staff or can even use Eul's to escape infection...Most heroes have over 1500 hp at lvl 16 so you can kill them by your ulti and grenade if you risk the high cooldown of ulti...

[Flame13]

Take a review pls, changed lots of things, nerfed ulti changed model corrected some issues of typing,added to backstory...

[Nizaris]

It is OP

There is no damage for uti at level 1 more than 150-300

At level 6 you surely "FIRST BLOOOOOD!", at level 6 most heroes only have 500-700 HP. maybe not just first blood but double triple kill....

Then God-like

[Flame13]

Which idiot would stay in fire for 10 seconds?And when casting time begins most of enemies stun or intrerupt you...

Enigma's ulti is way more powerfull...
Doom's ulti is silence to but it is single target yet it is still more powerfull...
Tide's ulti has stun too...

[Nizaris]

well, got slowed, stunned, trapped, purged...by other heroes?

you make mistake at uti, 3001 AoE?