[WIP][AGI-SENT] Ariel, the Elune's Guardian

[NoThlnG]

Elune's Guardian
Ariel Windwood




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Moon DashAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Point
Ability Hotkey : D



Notes:

• Ariel is invulnerable during the dash
• There will be light from the Ariel to nearby allies to indicate healed allies

Elune's ProtectionAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Instant
Ability Hotkey : E



Notes:

• All nearby allies will get 100% magic reduction for 1 second on the cast
• Affects creep as well but only get half of the damage reduction and can't become magic immune

3SkillAbility Type: Passive
Targeting Type: N/A
Ability Hotkey : B



Notes:

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PrayerAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Instant
Ability Hotkey : R



Notes:

• Affects all allied hero units (global)
• The cooldown won't trigger if canceled during casting time (like Requiem of Souls)

[Sven2k]

seems like the hero is still in its works
but still from what I have seen I'm quite interested in the hero

1st skill is good (who am I kidding it's awesome , I love healer type heroes )
I suggest making Ariel run non-stop until the end of the duration (she may control her movemen and can only stop if she starts attacking a unit , this would make it a bit more interesting since it'll be a bit harder to land your heal )

2nd skill - lol I gave a hero suggestion a very simmilar spell suggestion (does the 1 sec magic immune remove effects like omni's repel ? )

3rd skill - still not ready (sad face )

4th skill - I like it ALOT .Temporary instant life/mana buff(which is added to your current lfe so it's like a heal sweet) 190(life buff)-140(mana buff)/380-280/570-420 - nyal nyal me like it
if you make agga work with her ulti it will be awesome 760-560

[NoThlnG]

Originally Posted by Sven2k

1st skill is good (who am I kidding it's awesome , I love healer type heroes )
I suggest making Ariel run non-stop until the end of the duration (she may control her movemen and can only stop if she starts attacking a unit , this would make it a bit more interesting since it'll be a bit harder to land your heal )

Hmm... Yeah, I'm planning to give more variety on first skill coz it's rather plain right now. I'll consider yours as well

Originally Posted by Sven2k

2nd skill - lol I gave a hero suggestion a very simmilar spell suggestion (does the 1 sec magic immune remove effects like omni's repel ? )

It's not magic immune but 100% magic reduction. I mean you can still targeted by magic, stunned, slowed, etc but got 0 damage.

Originally Posted by Sven2k

4th skill - I like it ALOT .Temporary instant life/mana buff(which is added to your current lfe so it's like a heal sweet) 190(life buff)-140(mana buff)/380-280/570-420 - nyal nyal me like it

Well, though I'm planning to nerf the number xD

[SpiderPig]

she gives herself allstats too?

[chessfreak]

what did you have in mind for the third skill?

[Sven2k]

Originally Posted by chessfreak

what did you have in mind for the third skill?

it's still in its works be patient

[NoThlnG]

Originally Posted by Prince Kassad

she gives herself allstats too?

Yes

Originally Posted by chessfreak

what did you have in mind for the third skill?

I'm planning an offensive passive skill. Probably something like Criticals since she is an AGI hero anyway.

EDIT:

Originally Posted by Sven2k

it's still in its works be patient

He asked what I have in my mind anyway..

[Sven2k]

pls don't add a crit spell

[NoThlnG]

Originally Posted by Sven2k

pls don't add a crit spell

I said similar to crits. I have no intention to make crits.

[Sven2k]

yea yea I know (it's called stategy adding more comment = more views and that = this hero in dota and that = me happy cuz of new healer hero ^_^)

[Jajeczko]

Maybe add her something like this one:

MoonblessAbility Type: Passive
Targeting Type: AoE
Ability Hotkey : whatever

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Ariel got bless from Elune. She's able to heal her and allies in around her for X points per each hit. However this skill deals this same amount damage enemies around Ariel.

__	____.	________.	_______.	___.	_______.	__________________________.
	Ragecost	Cooldown	C.Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	N/A	3s	N/A	400	N/A	Heal for Ariel's 1% str + 2% agi + 1% int her and allies around her.
2	N/A	2s	N/A	400	N/A	Heal for Ariel's 1% str + 2% agi + 1% int her and allies around her.
3	N/A	1s	N/A	400	N/A	Heal for Ariel's 2% str + 3% agi + 2% int her and allies around her.
4	N/A	0s	N/A	400	N/A	Heal for Ariel's 3% str + 3% agi + 3% int her and allies around her.

[NoThlnG]

IMO, she already have enough defensive skill. All defense could work but I think she needs at least 1 offensive skill

[SpiderPig]

think about refresher

[Jajeczko]

@Noob
For? First there is one refresher in skills, Tinker has it.
Second this skill would be useless, for what only ultimate? Better is create item refresher.

@NoThInG
You know this skill fit into Elune concept, into Hero concept, Into hero skills and additional it is offensive skill. After count Ariel gets 480 stats at all with coreitems and with all att bonus. With this she deals/heals ~41 damage per hit. With radiance? With manta = copies?

[cp14]

i suggest the third skill becomes either an AoE Nuke or a disable

[chessfreak]

How about a passive that improves her AS, MS, and/or Attack based on the number of allies around her

[NoThlnG]

Originally Posted by Jajeczko

@NoThInG
You know this skill fit into Elune concept, into Hero concept, Into hero skills and additional it is offensive skill. After count Ariel gets 480 stats at all with coreitems and with all att bonus. With this she deals/heals ~41 damage per hit. With radiance? With manta = copies?

Yeah but

1. The name is rather overused and somehow similar to Elune's Protection

2. Will have too many healing skills

3. Rather useless without ultimate

Originally Posted by carloparis14

i suggest the third skill becomes either an AoE Nuke or a disable

There's reason why I want 3rd skill to be passive. Ariel is an AGI hero but already have 3 active skills with decent amount of mana cost.

Originally Posted by chessfreak

How about a passive that improves her AS, MS, and/or Attack based on the number of allies around her

Possible but rather oversuggested and doesn't really synergize with other skills.

[chessfreak]

I was thinking about your hero yesterday and here's what i came up for her passive:

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Type: Passive Targeting: AOE Hotkey:

Ariel strives to keep her comrades from danger. She has the ability to absorb any curse that is affecting her comrades and channel it into her own fury. Absorbs all debuffs from allied heroes in the AOE and turns it into additional damage that Ariel can is in one attack.

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	-	25	-	600	10 seconds or 1 attack	Gains +10 attack per debuff absorbed
2	-	20	-	600	10 seconds or 1 attack	Gains +20 attack per debuff absorbed
3	-	15	-	600	10 seconds or 1 attack	Gains +30 attack per debuff absorbed
4	-	10	-	600	10 seconds or 1 attack	Gains +40 attack per debuff absorbed

• This skill automatically absorbs all debuffs from allied heroes in a 600 AOE around Ariel. Ariel then gains +damage based on the number of debuffs absorbed.
• Absorb means that the debuffs will be removed from the allied hero and then be transferred to Ariel. Ariel will suffer all absorbed debuffs for 2 seconds. For example: Hero A is affected by poison nova and hero B is affected by poison gale. Ariels then absorbs both debuffs, thus they are removed from the two heroes. Ariel will then have the Poison nova and poison gale debuff applied to her for two seconds.
• Two instances of the same debuff will not stack when transferred to you. For example: You absorb all poison nova debuffs from three allied heroes, that will still count as three debuffs absorbed so you get +120 damage (skill level 4: +40x3=+120), but only one instance of poison nova will affect you.
• The passive cooldown is similar to Kunkha's tidebringer. Once the skill refreshes, it will automatically release a sort of wave(invisible or not?) in a 600 AOE around you. There is no way to stop this skill from activating.
• Once again only affects ALLIED HEROES, creeps will not be cleansed of debuffs.
• There will be a visual representation that both allies and opponents will see when: A. When debuffs have been absorbed from heroes (maybe a sort of light will shine on them like their being healed), and B. When Ariel has the damage buff.
• Debuffs will be described as anything harmful to allies. Some examples from the top of my head: Poison Nova, Poison Gale, Doom, Silence, Stun, Slow, and Armor Penalty.

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Why this skill will suit Ariel: You said you wanted her to have an offensive skill, but a pure offensive skill like +damage wouldn't really suit her role, so I came up with this so that she can still play out a strong support role but still be able to deal some damage herself.
Some pros of this skill:

1. It gives her a strong physical attack, this gives her an additional role as maybe a finisher or a chaser (coupled with the first skill).
2. It will make your opponents think twice about casting their debuffs, especially if your nearby, in fear of giving you a massive attack.
3. With the first and third skill, your team will be hard to kill.
Some Cons:
1. Its could be risky (especially in a team clash) because you will suffer all debuffs absorbed.
2. Its powerfull, maybe too power full. I suggest balancing it if you decide to use it.

So there it is my suggestion for your third skill, hope you like it.

[NoThlnG]

IMO, purely buff-removal-related skill doesn't really fit in DotA due to not all buffs are able to be removed...

Anyway, thx 4 the idea

[chessfreak]

Your welcome feel free to use the skill if you want.