[AGI-NEU] Great Paw, Furbolg Shaman

[Ryugo]

Furbolg Shaman
Great Paw

Background Story: BackgroundStory

Strength - 22 + [1.6]
Agility - 16 + [2]
Intelligence - 16 + [2.15]

Affiliation:	Neutral
Damage:	36-41
Armor:	3
Movespeed:	290
Starting HP/MP:	568/208
Attack Range:	100

Bear Hug - (Active, Channeling, Single-Target, Affects Enemy Units)

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The Shaman holds a foe within his arms with all his strength, dealing damage per second and disabling his opponent for some time. Channeling.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	80	20 seconds	200	N/A	2 sec	Disables a target for 2 seconds, dealing 30 DPS.
2	95	20 seconds	200	N/A	2.75 sec	Disables a target for 2.75 seconds, dealing 35 DPS.
3	110	20 seconds	200	N/A	3.5 sec	Disables a target for 3.5 seconds, dealing 40 DPS.
4	125	20 seconds	200	N/A	4.25 sec	Disables a target for 4.25 seconds, dealing 45 DPS.

Notes:

• In this state, you are unable to move or cast spells.

• Damage dealt is physical.

Storm Caller - (Toggle-able and Passive, Instant, Affects Enemy Units and Heroes)

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Calling the power of the ancient, Great Paw presents his enemies with a storm that seeks any single being that is fighting against him. When activated, the spirits grant the Shaman a barrier of lightning bolts.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	100 to activate; 50 per second	N/A	N/A	350	Until deactivated	When activated, calls down 1 lightning that deals 45 damage to a random target every 2 seconds. Passively calls down a lightning that deals 80 damage to a random visible unit in the map every 4 seconds.
2	100 to activate; 55 per second	N/A	N/A	375	Until deactivated	When activated, calls down 1 lightning that deals 55 damage to a random target every 1.6 seconds. Passively calls down a lightning that deals 90 damage to a random visible unit in the map every 3 seconds.
3	100 to activate; 60 per second	N/A	N/A	400	Until deactivated	When activated, calls down 1 lightning that deals 65 damage to a random target every 1.3 seconds. Passively calls down a lightning that deals 100 damage to a random visible unit in the map every 2 seconds.
4	100 to activate; 65 per second	N/A	N/A	425	Until deactivated	When activated, calls down 1 lightning that deals 75 damage to a random target every second. Passively calls down a lightning that deals 110 damage to a random visible unit in the map every 2 seconds.

Notes:

• Damage dealt is magical.

Hallowed Paws - (Passive, Affects Self)

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The ancient spirits have hallowed the will to fight of the shaman. Now, everytime he justly attacks a foe, the ancients grant him energy to clear his path to victory.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	Every successful attack to an enemy unit will grant 6 mana.
2	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	Every successful attack to an enemy unit will grant 8 mana.
3	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	Every successful attack to an enemy unit will grant 10 mana.
4	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	N/A	Every successful attack to an enemy unit will grant 12 mana.

Weather Essence - (Passive, Affects Enemy Units and Heroes)

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Great Paw is capable of absorb the properties of the weather depending on the time. Effect ends if manapool is under 20% of its max.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	N/A	N/A	N/A	380	N/A	If it’s day, nearby enemies will receive 20 damage per second. If it’s night, nearby enemies’ attack speed will be lowered by 10%. Also slows movespeed by 10% everytime.
2	N/A	N/A	N/A	380	N/A	If it’s day, nearby enemies will receive 35 damage per second. If it’s night, nearby enemies’ attack speed will be lowered by 15%. Also slows movespeed by 20% everytime.
3	N/A	N/A	N/A	380	N/A	If it’s day, nearby enemies will receive 50 damage per second. If it’s night, nearby enemies’ attack speed will be lowered by 20%. Also slows movespeed by 30% everytime.

Notes:

• Damage dealt is magical.

[cp14]

1st skill: dismember OP
2nd skill: nice
3rd skill: niceGREAT
ultimate: Degen aura? with lass AoE and minor damage or as slow?

[Pingus!]

Seems like a fun hero so I will write a review.

Stats
He is AGI, but has more INT gain than AGI gain?
Interesting,

Bear Hug
Faggy name ._.
I suggest you making the mana scale, It is like a dismember but with higher disable time, instant damage and less damage.
Can be used for ganking.
This skill is meh. Needs a rebalance and more originality.

Storm Caller
Passively calls down lightning? Fuck no. Even tough the damage is small and unreliable it can be a pain in the ass.
But that same fact makes it balanced (sort of).
I suggest you changin the damage of the lighting when activated and the passive.
I can not write lightning for shit.
Sort of balanced.[

Hallowed Paws
WHAT!? You gain mana with every attack? I like it :3 but needs a rebalance, I think 40 mana is too much for a skill like that.
Rebalance, otherwise cool skill.

Weather Essence
Nice skill. Also pretty balanced IMO.
Good Skill

Overall
Leoric in bear form?
Kind of boring to play hero, altough interesting skills, needs a rebalance.

[Ryugo]

Thanks, guys.

Bear Hug: I will try to find a better name. XD Reducing holding time to 2/2.75/3.5/4.25 seconds.

Storm Caller: If its to decrease both damages, it's fine for the passive. About active, I will make it having 2 sec CD.

Hallowed Paws: Reducing mana gain per attack to 12/16/20/24.

Weather Essence: It seems fine to me until now.

Waiting for more reviews.

[Pingus!]

Originally Posted by Ryugo

Thanks, guys.

It is.

Waiting for more reviews.

Ololols in red.

[Ryugo]

Storm Caller: If I had left the spell like it was, the damage while active would be higher than in passive form at levels 3 and 4. =.=

I will change some things.

Hallowed Paws: I will do a test with this skill.

Bear hug is original.
Only Pudge does something alike.

[Pingus!]

Originally Posted by Ryugo

[nqb]Storm Caller: If I had left the spell like it was, the damage while active would be higher than in passive form at levels 3 and 4. =.=

That is what I meant.
The passive damage should be lower.

Maybe I am understanding the skill wrong tough.

[Ryugo]

The answer you want is on the frequence of the lightnings.

Active: Each 2/1.6/1.3/1 seconds dealing 45/55/65/75.

Passive: Each 4/3/2/2 seconds dealing 80/90/100/110.

In 4 seconds, at level 1, 2 lightnings fall dealing 90 damage.
In ~3 seconds, at level 2, 2 lightnings fall dealing 110 damage.
In ~2 seconds, at level 3, 2 lightnings fall dealing 130 damage.
In 2 seconds, at level 4, 2 lightnings fall dealing 150 damage.

[Unan1mous]

In a good mood to review after playing 6.69

1. Rhasta Shackles
2. Love it!
3. Reverse Diffusal Blade!!! AWESOME....But you don't need that much mana, one togglable skill and 1 active(Might want to replace with new skill...)
Ult. Another passive? I actually made a skill like this before . Has close to 0 synergy with other skills though, apart from setting up bear hug and landing lightning strikes.

Sorry for the short review, I want to play 6.69 again. Nice support overal though .

[Straight Flush]

Nice, unique hero, although I don't know what role he fits into (I would love to steal hero kills with Storm Caller though)

Rubric Judging

Great Paw, Furbolg Shaman
Story 0/5
You have none

Stats 5/5
Good, balanced stats

Bear Hug 4/10
Just a copy of Shackles/Dismember and IMO, unsynergetic. Sorry. You get bonus points for the cool name

Storm Caller 9/10
Awesome McAwesomeAwesome! I absolutely love this skill. KSing from fountain is now even more annoying! But besides that, it's a solid skill and obviously Great Paw's signature skill.

Hallowed Paws 9/10
Now it has no late game scaling but it's an awesome skill for most of the game

Weather Essence 8/10
Synergises with the rest of the skillset but it reminds me of Omniknight's Degen Aura a little. It doesn't seem too... original... But then again, nothing is anymore. Entered in CTA2 by any chance?

All in all
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0 + 5 + 4 + 9 + 9 + 8 = 35/50
Needs a bit of work, T-Null

I recommend reworking or remaking Bear Hug.

[Ryugo]

Originally Posted by Unan1mous

In a good mood to review after playing 6.69

1. Rhasta Shackles Ow. I forgot Rhasta's Shackles.
2. Love it! 'Kay!
3. Reverse Diffusal Blade!!! AWESOME....But you don't need that much mana, one togglable skill and 1 active(Might want to replace with new skill...)
Less mana gain, got it.

Ult. Another passive? I actually made a skill like this before . Has close to 0 synergy with other skills though, apart from setting up bear hug and landing lightning strikes. You saw through the walls! That's it.

Sorry for the short review, I want to play 6.69 again. Nice support overal though .

Ow. :/

Originally Posted by ShadowKnight172

Nice, unique hero, although I don't know what role he fits into (I would love to steal hero kills with Storm Caller though)

Rubric Judging

My lovely Bear Hug.
Hallowed Paws will be tweaked.
Thanks, Knight172!

[Sven2k]

1st skill - it's like rhasta's stun but with initial dmg less 0.50 lower duration and mana cost AND lowe range ... well I still like it though , if you change up your 2nd skill a lil' there'll be very good synergy

2nd skill - remove the part where the skill can dmg a unit with global range
-make the skill have AOE for each lightning (let me explain)

Units which are 800 units away have 10% chance to be struck by lightning

Units which are 600 units away have 15% chance to be struck by lightning

Units which are 400 units away have 25% chance to be struck by lightning

Units which are 200 units away have 50% chance to be struck by lightning

this will synergise well with your 1st skill (I haven't balanced the % chance very well IMO)

3rd skill - very good , it synergises great with your 2nd skill

4th skill - synegises great with your 1st , 2nd and 3rd skill



Increase his MS to atleast 290 , he's a melee hero after all
I'll check stat balance later

[Straight Flush]

maybe boost str by 0.1, and agi and int by 0.2. Or just somehow arrange 0.5 into the stat gains somehow...

[Ryugo]

Originally Posted by Sven2k

2nd skill - remove the part where the skill can dmg a unit with global range
-make the skill have AOE for each lightning (let me explain)

Units which are 800 units away have 10% chance to be struck by lightning

Units which are 600 units away have 15% chance to be struck by lightning

Units which are 400 units away have 25% chance to be struck by lightning

Units which are 200 units away have 50% chance to be struck by lightning

this will synergise well with your 1st skill (I haven't balanced the % chance very well IMO)

Sorry, but I think this is too much unreliable.

:/

Originally Posted by ShadowKnight172

maybe boost str by 0.1, and agi and int by 0.2. Or just somehow arrange 0.5 into the stat gains somehow...

Done.

[Straight Flush]

bumping nice suggestion

[Sven2k]

Change the damge from bear hug from instant to dps

[Ryugo]

Originally Posted by ShadowKnight172

bumping nice suggestion

Oh. Thank you, dude.

Originally Posted by Sven2k

Change the damge from bear hug from instant to dps

Roger!

[Windsong]

Bear hug: PedoBear strikes back! As above said Pudge has copied that skill for no reason - remake him!
Storm Caller: With proper amount of luck this could be crucial >..>, however i think it`ll lose it`s power in mid-late game, and by the way it`s one of the most original skills i`ve ever seen in suggestions. GJ <- Little sugg - you might find it worthy to base the passive, or active damage on Bear`s current mana for more syngery ^^
Micro icon suggestion (not recolored, nor bordered... - sry -.-")

Hallowed Paws: I don`t care about previous skill - this is an EPIC WIN! GJ x2! <- More true - i think you should change triggering conditions to "Whenever our plushie gives damage" for moar syngery (check below)
Weather Essence: The name`s little strange - somehow i can`t find any reason for such name :O Anyway the skill isn`t very original (Damn Omniknight TheSkillsReaper :x), and it don`t syngerize well with other skills (check my note about 3rd, and 2nd skill), so IMO this skill isn`t worth a Bear, nor even damn.
Another micro icon suggestion:

Finally:
T-up 4 PedoBear!

[Ryugo]

Originally Posted by Windsong

Bear hug: PedoBear strikes back! As above said Pudge has copied that skill for no reason - remake him!
Finally someone thought about this nickname. haha

Storm Caller: With proper amount of luck this could be crucial >..>, however i think it`ll lose it`s power in mid-late game, and by the way it`s one of the most original skills i`ve ever seen in suggestions. GJ <- Little sugg - you might find it worthy to base the passive, or active damage on Bear`s current mana for more syngery ^^
Micro icon suggestion (not recolored, nor bordered... - sry -.-")

Current mana, huh... nice idea. Icon looks good. Don't worry, I can change the borders.

Hallowed Paws: I don`t care about previous skill - this is an EPIC WIN! GJ x2! <- More true - i think you should change triggering conditions to "Whenever our plushie gives damage" for moar syngery (check below)
Hahahahaha! I know it' a nice skill, but alone it is only a counter against Magina. About the suggested change: He's an Agility hero, I think that only attacks is enough.

Weather Essence: The name`s little strange - somehow i can`t find any reason for such name :O Anyway the skill isn`t very original (Damn Omniknight TheSkillsReaper :x), and it don`t syngerize well with other skills (check my note about 3rd, and 2nd skill), so IMO this skill isn`t worth a Bear, nor even damn.
Another micro icon suggestion:

Reason: Furbolg Shaman! He's a shaman after all. Why would a bear call down lightning bolts, too?

About synergy: This ultimate turns the Shaman a dangerous melee caster. Keep enemies inside cast range, increases damage dealt at daytime and survival at night.

Finally:
T-up 4 PedoBear!

Thanks! Funny comment.

[Straight Flush]

Well Bear Hug is still a OP shackles here