[STR-neutral] Hitsuji the shepherd

[Cpt Bogdan]

• Hero Introduction
• Attributes
• Skills
• Synergy
• Credits

• Hero Model
• Introduction
• Background Story

Shepherd Hitsuji

HeroIntroduction

Hitsuji was not always an orinary shepherd Azeroth. Before the 2nd war he was a novice in magic in Dalaran , during an expedition with his companions he and his group were ambushed by heinous creatures.His companions didn't survive the attack because they were petrified in fear. Hitsuji tried in to cast a spell but in vain it didn't seem to do anything , cornered and alone around the corpses of his friends he felt like he was going to die. When suddenly, a horde of rabid sheep came in his direction and killed the creatures in an epic slaughter. Unknowingly he had called these beasts which responded to this call. Showing his gratitude to the once pieceful farm animals Hitsuji clensed the sheep out of their madness and promise them to guid them to green grazings. Since this day Histsuji is a magic shepherd who have lose a part oh him for become a sheep.

• Statistics
• Advanced Statistics

Strength Agility Intelligence 21 + 1.9 12 + 1.1 21 + 2.1

Starting HP/MP: 549/273 Base Stats: 54 Stats Gain: 5.1 Primary Role: Disabler

Affiliation:	Neutral		Attack Animation:	x / y
Damage:	45-52		Casting Animation:	x / y
Armor:	3		Base Attack Time:	1.7
Movespeed:	310		Missile Speed:	-
Attack Range:	280		Sight Range:	1800 / 800

• Chaos theory
• Alpha male
• Herd protection
• Attack of the lamb

Type: Active Targeting: ground Hotkey: hotkey

Histuji forces a huge amount of mixed energy into his enemies , squishing their body into the form of small compact sheep .

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	65	16	600	500	1	hex and deal 60 dmg
2	70	16	600	500	1.5	hex and deal 80 dmg
3	75	16	600	500	1.75	hex and deal 100 dmg
4	80	16	600	500	2	hex and deal 120 dmg

• magic damage
• -

Type: Active Targeting: point Hotkey: hotkey

Hitsuji use the Alpha male of his herd for harras hero and deal dmg, release a small force field and ministun by hit in AoE.

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	55	10	700	250	-	0.5 sec ministun and 25 damage + 5 aoE damage by hit , 3 max hit
2	55	10	700	250	-	0.5 sec ministun and 35 damage + 10 aoE damage by hit , 3 max hit
3	55	10	700	250	-	0.5 sec ministun and 45 damage + 15 aoE damage by hit , 4 max hit
4	55	10	700	250	-	0.5 sec ministun and 55 damage + 20 aoE damage by hit , 4 max hit

• physical damge for initial damge and magic damage for AoE damage
• 0.5 delay under each hit
• ''Mechanical Alpha Male'' Att time : 1.1/1.0/0.9/0.8
• 1000 range sight and need 3 hits for be destroy, spell imunise

Type: Passive Targeting: self Hotkey: hotkey

Hitsuji is a guide and that need to have good eyes. And sheeps defend Hitsuji if an enemy cast a disable on him.

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	-	-	-	-	-	Give 100 extra vision and 10% chance to dodge a disable
2	-	-	-	-	-	Give 150 extra vision and 12% chance to dodge a disable
3	-	-	-	-	-	Give 200 extra vision and 14% chance to dodge a disable
4	-	-	-	-	-	Give 250 extra vision and 16% chance to dodge a disable

• Only stun and silence are count as disable.
• When you a spell sheep appeared and explose on the caster for dogde the same effect.

Type: Active Targeting: point Hotkey: hotkey

Hitsuji use his bell for launch an attack of angry lambs. lambs will deal DPS in AoE and slow on a constant line for the duration.

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	110	80	2000	450	4	75 DPS and slow by 50%
2	120	80	2000	450	4	100 DPS and slow by 50%
3	130	80	2000	450	4	125 DPS and slow by 50%

• magical damage
• lambs have 500 MS and travel walls/trees/doddads
• 2000 max range for effect

• Skill Synergy
• Hero Synergy
• Item Synergy

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Credits:

[Sven2k]

lol I like it and yay you implemented my skill suggestion
I'll review him later , I ain't feelin' good today

[Cpt Bogdan]

Originally Posted by Sven2k

lol I like it and yay you implemented my skill suggestion

obviously

[Ryugo]

Hitsuji, the Shepherd

Mass Hex: I think everyone here has thought about this skill at last once. Finally I see a hero with that skill, that fits. But it has chance to deal damage, too. This is nice. A funny AoE disable. I suggest a CD increase (maybe 16 seconds), because it damages/disables more than one hero.

Alpha Male: Another funny skill. I can only imagine the mechanical sheep attacking an hexed hero. Why not make it hits four times at all levels?

Herd Protection: It's like if you are the center of the skills, right? Can you say what types of disable are you talking about? Nice choice here. If you're disabled there is a chance to disable enemies and keep your manapool safe. Am I right?

Attack of the Lamb: A funny ultimate. I thought about something similar, but with crows. I don't really know about the slow, though.

Overall: You hero doesn't deal lots of damage and seems like he is a little masochist. Or should I say pseudo-tanker? Just answer some of my questions and I can give you more than a T-NULL.

[Cpt Bogdan]

Originally Posted by Ryugo

Hitsuji, the Shepherd

thx for comment.

PS: i don't know if i keep is current range or not. If he 'll be ranged i give him a sheep projectile obviously.

[Ryugo]

Originally Posted by Zult

thx for comment.

PS: i don't know if i keep is current range or not. If he 'll be ranged i give him a sheep projectile obviously.

Give him some short range.

I like your hero, it's original.

[GenocYda]

Here I´am, as desired.

SKILL1
1. Please change description from "disable" to smthing more fancy with sheeps.
Like he tries to transform to them, but he has chance of failure.
2. I don´t like that 25% chance of DMG. It´s like little useless, boring, not synergic, so change it to like 50% 50% with some fancy effect. Also calculate effect FOR EVERY UNIT would make it fancy little more IMO.
3. Also leave duration same on all levels and increase CD to make it better on lower levels, also the manacost seems little low for taste of INT hero.

SKILL2
My little remake

Herd protectionAbility Type: Active AoE
Targeting Type: Enemy units
Ability Hotkey : H


Notes:

• WORKS WITH ALL HEXED UNITS

Need little change Wolves damage/bash.

SKILL3
Simply ramake this COMPLETLY.

Beware of animalsAbility Type: AoE Passive
Targeting Type: Enemy units
Ability Hotkey : H



Notes:

• Not sure about how should be calculated the amouth of animal/effect, but the concept is most important. I will have this like it is now for now.

ULTIMATE
I´ll leave this alone (lazy after hard brainstorming)

Now your hero would be good disabler/slower with grat impact in teamfight and some AoE presence.

WHERE IS Sven2K BTW????!!!!!!

And sorry, but I can´t find any icons for now.

[swindx]

most original and creative hero suggestion i seen so far, really liked it.
t-up

[Unan1mous]

Histuji is sheep in Japanese....soooooo

Sheep - The Shepard xD.

Sorry Gtg, took a glance at the spells, they look alright, will take a further look later.

[Sven2k]

1st skill hmm here's an idea for you :
50-50 is ok , BUT 1.75 dissable or 200 dmg still ain't nothing special for 16 CD even if it has great AOE .So I suggest the skill dealing dmg and turning the enemy into sheep
You can make the description like this :

Histuji forces a huge amount of mixed energy into his enemies , squishing their body into the form of small compact sheep .
Also keep the AOE at a constant 500

Pros:
- the skill will be much much much more useful
Cons:
- none (cuz the skill will still be balanced do to the small duration and high CD)

2nd skill - here's an idea that will increase the synegy of this and you 1st skill

Description :
Hitsuji uses a ''Mechanical Alpha Male'' (I'll try and make the skin it sounds like fun )
It will attack the selected target 4 times , each strike will damga the target and release a small force field in AOE wich deals some minor dmg and ministuns the targets

dmg to single target : 20/30/40/50 dmg (phisical dmg)
AOE dmg : 5/10/15/20 dmg (magical dmg)
the AOE of the AOE : 200/220/240/260 (it will look just like KotL's ''Blinding Light''
Over all dmg to the selected taget after 4 attacks will be 280 dmg

Mini stun duration : 0.5 sec at all lvs
''Mechanical Alpha Male'' Att time : 1.1/1.0/0.9/0.8

3rd skill :
I don't think that there's a way to detect wheather a skill is a dissable or not but Lemons (pew pew) will be the judge of that

Make the skill like this :
100/150/200/250 Extra vision at day
200/250/300/350 Extra vision at night

''mass hex''
- casting range increase by 50/100/150/200

''Mechanical Alpha Male''
-Mechanical Alpha male's AOE sight range to 1000/1200/1400/1600 at day and night

''Attack of the lambs''
- casting range increase by 100/150/200
-march range increase by 100/200/300 units


This will make your hero into a powerful scout as well , and it will increase his ganking potential alot

4th skill :
Is it just like tinker's ''March of the machines'' ?
and damn 2000 casting range 0_0 reduce it , 300 would be good (just like tinker's casting range for ''March of the machines'')

If you mean that the sheep will travel 2000 distance , then put that in the notes and change the casting range .If you'r using my suggestion for the 3rd skill then make the travel distance 1600 at first (with each upgrade it will turn to 2000)


lets calculate dmg
let's say you get hit by 2 sheep each second (this is an example not in a team fight)

the dmg you'll take will be 50x2 x 4 = 400 dmg - 300 dmg(with magic reducution)
the dmg you'll take will be 75x2 x 4 = 600 dmg - 450 dmg(with magic reduction)
the dmg you'll take will be 100x 2 x 4 = 800 dmg - 600 dmg(with magic reduction)

hmm I guess it's ok since you also slow the target for like 75% witch is massive
Or actually , maybe you should reduce the stun to 20/35/50 % cuz 75% is a lil' too much

Finall Thoughts
Change his attribute to int , cuz just look at his skills , massive casting skill with very low mana cost .
Turn him into a int hero and increase the mana cost of all his spells
also reduce his str gain by 0.2


Over all I like the hero alot , there's huge synergie between his skills t-up

[Cpt Bogdan]

Originally Posted by GenocYda

Here I´am, as desired.

SKILL1
1. Please change description from "disable" to smthing more fancy with sheeps.
Like he tries to transform to them, but he has chance of failure.
2. I don´t like that 25% chance of DMG. It´s like little useless, boring, not synergic, so change it to like 50% 50% with some fancy effect. Also calculate effect FOR EVERY UNIT would make it fancy little more IMO.
i have change it.

3. Also leave duration same on all levels and increase CD to make it better on lower levels, also the manacost seems little low for taste of INT hero.
ok

SKILL2
My little remake

Need little change Wolves damage/bash.
it's interesting but i think he useless if i only can use this spell with first spell.

SKILL3
Simply ramake this COMPLETLY.

Ok i see the obvious synergy with you suggestion...let me think about his.

ULTIMATE
I´ll leave this alone (lazy after hard brainstorming)
np ^^ , it's nice.

Now your hero would be good disabler/slower with grat impact in teamfight and some AoE presence.

WHERE IS Sven2K BTW????!!!!!!

And sorry, but I can´t find any icons for now.
Np , current iconset is fine imo

thx for you're review

Originally Posted by Sven2k

1st skill hmm here's an idea for you :
50-50 is ok , BUT 1.75 dissable or 200 dmg still ain't nothing special for 16 CD even if it has great AOE .So I suggest the skill dealing dmg and turning the enemy into sheep
You can make the description like this :

Histuji forces a huge amount of mixed energy into his enemies , squishing their body into the form of small compact sheep .
Also keep the AOE at a constant 500

Pros:
- the skill will be much much much more useful
Cons:
- none (cuz the skill will still be balanced do to the small duration and high CD)
ohhh , u want i mix my effects? it's a good idea.


2nd skill - here's an idea that will increase the synegy of this and you 1st skill

Description :
Hitsuji uses a ''Mechanical Alpha Male'' (I'll try and make the skin it sounds like fun )
It will attack the selected target 4 times , each strike will damga the target and release a small force field in AOE wich deals some minor dmg and ministuns the targets

dmg to single target : 20/30/40/50 dmg (phisical dmg)
AOE dmg : 5/10/15/20 dmg (magical dmg)
the AOE of the AOE : 200/220/240/260 (it will look just like KotL's ''Blinding Light''
Over all dmg to the selected taget after 4 attacks will be 280 dmg
ok why not. I don't see the synergy but that can be good.

Mini stun duration : 0.5 sec at all lvs
''Mechanical Alpha Male'' Att time : 1.1/1.0/0.9/0.8
ok

3rd skill :
I don't think that there's a way to detect wheather a skill is a dissable or not but Lemons (pew pew) will be the judge of that

Make the skill like this :
100/150/200/250 Extra vision at day
200/250/300/350 Extra vision at night

''mass hex''
- casting range increase by 50/100/150/200

''Mechanical Alpha Male''
-Mechanical Alpha male's AOE sight range to 1000/1200/1400/1600 at day and night

''Attack of the lambs''
- casting range increase by 100/150/200
-march range increase by 100/200/300 units
ok if my skill is uncodeable is will put this i guess.

This will make your hero into a powerful scout as well , and it will increase his ganking potential alot

sure ^^

4th skill :
Is it just like tinker's ''March of the machines'' ?
and damn 2000 casting range 0_0 reduce it , 300 would be good (just like tinker's casting range for ''March of the machines'')
yes...

If you mean that the sheep will travel 2000 distance , then put that in the notes and change the casting range .If you'r using my suggestion for the 3rd skill then make the travel distance 1600 at first (with each upgrade it will turn to 2000)


lets calculate dmg
let's say you get hit by 2 sheep each second (this is an example not in a team fight)

the dmg you'll take will be 50x2 x 4 = 400 dmg - 300 dmg(with magic reducution)
the dmg you'll take will be 75x2 x 4 = 600 dmg - 450 dmg(with magic reduction)
the dmg you'll take will be 100x 2 x 4 = 800 dmg - 600 dmg(with magic reduction)
ok

hmm I guess it's ok since you also slow the target for like 75% witch is massive
Or actually , maybe you should reduce the stun to 20/35/50 % cuz 75% is a lil' too much

Ok , i agree and thx for all calcul etc...but i think i will change effect for a thing most unique. I see a thing like a group of sheep who travel all ways deal damg and pushback all enemies they encounters.

Finall Thoughts
Change his attribute to int , cuz just look at his skills , massive casting skill with very low mana cost .
yes but i don't know if in a near futur new int slot will be add.

Turn him into a int hero and increase the mana cost of all his spells
also reduce his str gain by 0.2
k

Over all I like the hero alot , there's huge synergie between his skills t-up
cool thx sven ^^

Overall thx to all personw who let a post.

[Sven2k]

Originally Posted by GenocYda

WHERE IS Sven2K BTW????!!!!!!

Greetings

[GenocYda]

About 2nd skill RMK.
You could keep your alpha male bonuses like it's now, but transform them into my RMK casting system. Also this should work not only with your 1st skill, but also with your ultimate.

3rd skill RMK
Not sure about bonusus, maybe add little base reduction and exchange that for having manacost per sec and make it toogleable. Better for gangs, better for teamfights. PS: What about making that trigger even with neutrals? Some good HotD, Chen, Bambi Synergy.

[chansainlong]

Try to remake 1 of the skill and call it as "Black Sheep Wall"
Abilities : Cover whole map with fog of war and recover to original after several seconds.

[Cpt Bogdan]

Background story add, some spelling errors (english isn't my language)

[damN_Grave]

Bonjour!

Mass Hex: It's kind of hard to the enemies being sheeped for 2 seconds and sheeped again 14 seconds later (16-2). Increase CD to 25 seconds.

Alpha Male: I like it

Herd Protection: Kind of boring, but useful. Might be considered useless, but you would notice its use ingame.

Attack of the Lamb: Damage is too little. Make it 75/100/125 dps.

Overall, this sheep-based hero made me LOL. Especially the name of the ult.

T-up and good luck!

Gravedamn.

[Cpt Bogdan]

Originally Posted by Gravedamn

Bonjour!
ahaha ^^ bonjour

Mass Hex: It's kind of hard to the enemies being sheeped for 2 seconds and sheeped again 14 seconds later (16-2). Increase CD to 25 seconds.
really? I don't know...

Alpha Male: I like it
cool

Herd Protection: Kind of boring, but useful. Might be considered useless, but you would notice its use ingame.
Yes that very situational skill but can be usefull i guess.

Attack of the Lamb: Damage is too little. Make it 75/100/125 dps.
ok, btw effects are good for you? any suggestion?

Overall, this sheep-b
ased hero made me LOL. Especially the name of the ult.
ok thx

T-up and good luck!

Gravedamn.

thx a lot ^^

[Sven2k]

O no they're eating her , and then they're gonna eat me , OOO MY GOOOOOD

[GenocYda]

Originally Posted by Sven2k

O no they're eating her , and then they're gonna eat me , OOO MY GOOOOOD

Not troll 2

[damN_Grave]

Originally Posted by Zult

really? I don't know...

Yup. But get the opinion of others first.

Originally Posted by Zult

ok, btw effects are good for you? any suggestion?

Effects are good. Adding simple things such as ministuns might seem a bit imbalanced. But if you want an additional effect, armour or magic resistance can be considered.

T-up on this hero!

Gravedamn out.