Hello Mr. The One, here is my entry to your rev- err I mean my review to your entry.
Realising the Truth written by -T-tHeOnE-_-
- I know this is not a trope but hell do I need their expertise to confirm if someone could actually do any form of archery while being prone! (>_<)
Correct me if I'm wrong and in the spirit of the scientific facts, I shall revise my views if evidence could point out to me that one could use a bow while lying down flat on his stomach.
From what I've read, to fire an arrow from a bow, there is a technique for that according to wikipedia and .
To shoot an arrow, an archer first assumes the correct stance. The body should be perpendicular to the target and the shooting line, with the feet placed shoulder-width apart.
In proper form, the archer stands erect, forming a 'T'. The archer's lower trapezius muscles are used to pull the arrow to the anchor point. Some bows will be equipped with a mechanical device, called a clicker, which produces a clicking sound when the archer reaches the correct draw length.
- Come on guess who?
Mirana: BUT THAT's IMPOSSIBLE?! HOW COULD YOU BE STILL ALIVE?!
Lich: Uh tehnically I'm already dead my dear -err I mean I'm an undead which means I'm not totally dead but I'm not totally alive either. Also I still have my contract with Blizzrd and its says there I still have 2 years before it expires and I need to renew it so yeah. Tht explains why I'm still here... (-_-)
Kel'thuzad fired a bolt of ice at the surprised Mirana, but the fast-moving projectile was suddenly blocked by a treant who jumped in its way, absorbing the damage, leaving the priestess of the moon unharmed.
Yeah its totally justified so yeah, it is believable.
"Is that all you got, demon?" Furion mocked.
"No, I'm just warming up." Kel'thuzad replied.
Furion: <Monopoly style hat, monopoly style monocle, monopoly style moustache>
I say your brash nature offends me, Mr. Thuzad! I shall soon put an end to your impertinence by directing my powers in taunting you!
Is that all you got, demon?
Kel: <Just with monopoly style moustache and “nothing” else>
What an obnoxious insult! I shall reply to that slander with a witty remark and an obvious pun to my sub-zero motif!
No, I'm just warming up!
Why Don't Ya Just Shoot Him? - Television Tropes & Idioms
"It is not in my desires to kill you now, besides, I have taken one life already. Be thankful that I have spared your pathetic life, as I might be not as friendly the next we might happen to meet."
Lich: Kill her now? Why that is the most absurd and pathertic thing I have ever heard of!
- Not really the computer but some other guy.
Well folks what lesson do we have learn from here? Always play only official dota maps.
- I'm starting to think that maybe this competition promotes stuff other than writing.
So again we have another guy to be sent to the psychiatric ward ahahahaha! Anyways I like how the 2-1 fight went it was really fast and direct but that line with Mirana trying to fire an arrow from her bow while lying down is just mind boggling that I do not think that is possible and that really gave you minus points IMO.
Well anyways thanks for being a contestant and rest assured I also had a fun read with your entry.