Remake The Ancients II

Kira` · 11-10-2010, 03:13 PM

Saving spot

Remake progress:
1. Ulti: Sonic Wave --> Mental Disruption
2. Description and Background Story
3. Shadow Strike
4. Blink --> Threesome
5. Scream of Pain
6. ....

I think I'm done

Queen of Pain
Akasha

Description: The new Queen of Pain will be more focused on giving "pain" and "torments". She loves pain very much, even the one she suffered.

Background Story: Akasha is one of the many souls claimed by the blade, Frostmourne. Raised to serve the Lich King as a Banshee, she desired to become pure substance once more. Driving deep into the forests, she was able to subdue and possess a Succubus minion. Rightly bearing the title, Queen of Pain, she enjoys nothing more than inflicting pain on her foes. She laugh devilishly for any kind of pain she can do, even if she must cut her own wrist. Akasha becomes a horrible masochist that loves to see any suffer, any pain, any blood, and tortures in front of her eyes. She would crack your ear-drum by her devastating scream, cut through your lung with her dagger, and most of all, she really love to see her enemies become insane by excruciating pain on their mental, and they will start to torture themself, in front of the Queen of Pain

Strength - 16 + [1.7]

Agility - 18 + [2]

Intelligence - 24 + [2.5]

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Affiliation:	Scourge
Damage:	45-53
Armor:	1.6
Movespeed:	300
Attack Range:	550

Shadow Strike

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit
Hotkey: D
Hurls a poisoned dagger which deals large initial damage and make the wound very hard to heal. The more the victim try to fight, the more pain it will recieve. Additionally, the dagger can split to hit more target

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 100 20 seconds 600 575 15 seconds 50 strike damage, 5% initial slow, deals additional 20 damage and 5% slow anytime the victim attack or cast spell
2 125 18 seconds 600 575 15 seconds 70 strike damage, 5% initial slow, deals additional 30 damage and 5% slow anytime the victim attack or cast spell
3 150 16 seconds 600 575 15 seconds 90 strike damage, 5% initial slow, deals additional 40 damage and 5% slow anytime the victim attack or cast spell
4 175 14 seconds 600 575 15 seconds 120 strike damage, 5% initial slow, deals additional 50 damage and 5% slow anytime the victim attack or cast spell
Damage type: magical

Additional damage and slow added when the victim added, stacked indefinitely.

Affected units regain their original movement speed after the spell ends.

Can split to 2 more targets in 575 AoE around the original target, deal same effect

Units afflicted by Shadow Strike can be denied by their allies when their HP drops below 25% of their maximum health.

Threesome

Type: Active
Targeting: Point
Hotkey: R
Akasha Blinks to target point and creates 2 illusion along her path. She can switch position with any of her illusion whenever she wants.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 60 12 seconds Global N/A 8 seconds 200 - 700 Range Teleportation, leaves 2 illusions every 1/3 of distance travelled. Illusions deals 33% damage and share received damage among three of them
2 60 12 seconds Global N/A 8 seconds 200 - 900 Range Teleportation, leaves 2 illusions every 1/3 of distance travelled. Illusions deals 33% damage and share received damage among three of them
3 60 12 seconds Global N/A 8 seconds 200 - 1100 Range Teleportation, leaves 2 illusions every 1/3 of distance travelled. Illusions deals 33% damage and share received damage among three of them
4 60 12 seconds Global N/A 8 seconds 200 - 1300 Range Teleportation, leaves 2 illusions every 1/3 of distance travelled. Illusions deals 33% damage and share received damage among three of them
Most projectiles can be evaded if Blink is used before they collide.

If targeted further away than the maximum distance, Akasha will only teleport 80% of the maximum distance.

Illusion last for 8 seconds

Will gain sub-skill: Change, to switch between you and one of your illusion, without destroying the illusion

Sub-skill: Change

Type: Active
Targeting: Point
Hotkey: C
Akasha switch position with one of her illusion.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
N/A 2 seconds N/A N/A N/A Switch position with one of the illusion without destroying it
Instant switch without any animation, so only you and your teammate can see which one is real

Works on other kind of Illusion from rune or Manta

Scream of Pain

Type: Active
Targeting: Instant
Hotkey: F
The Queen of Pain lets loose a piercing scream that goes stronger when she got more pain on her body, damaging nearby enemies and disable them for a while.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 110 7 seconds N/A 400 1 sec 85 damage per target, deals 50 bonus damage if your HP is below 50%. Disables for 1 seconds
2 120 7 seconds N/A 425 1.5 sec 135 damage per target, deals 55 bonus damage if your HP is below 50%. Disables for 1.5 seconds
3 130 7 seconds N/A 450 2 sec 185 damage per target, deals 60 bonus damage if your HP is below 50%. Disables for 2 seconds
4 140 7 seconds N/A 475 2.5 sec 225 damage per target, deals 65 bonus damage if your HP is below 50%. Disables for 2.5 seconds
Damage type: magical

Units not visible by Akasha will not be affected, even if they are within the range of the skill

Disable means affected enemies unable to attack, but still can cast spell

Her Threesome illusions will cast the spell at the same time you cast it, but will only deal 20% of total damage

Mental Disruption

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit/Point
Hotkey: T
Sends out a curse on her enemies that will take them into excruciating pain in their mind, corrupting their mental and make them damage their own body desperately

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 150 100 (80*) seconds 700 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) 3 seconds 180 (230*) initial damage, make the enemies affected uncontrollable and attack their own body while giving them 20% bonus damage
2 300 100 (60*) seconds 700 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) 3 seconds 250 (300*) initial damage, make the enemies affected uncontrollable and attack their own body while giving them 25% bonus damage
3 450 100 (40*) seconds 700 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) 3 seconds 320 (375*) initial damage, make the enemies affected uncontrollable and attack their own body while giving them 30% bonus damage
Damage type: magical

Can be improved by Aghanim's Scepter (* shows the improved values).

Can hit units up to 1200 range away.

Affected unit will be uncontrollable and attack themselves, while in this state, they got bonus damage

PS: the same animation and casting mechanism with Sonic Wave

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SimplyCrazy · 11-10-2010, 07:07 PM

entry here. Still brainstorming some aspects and waiting for critics ^^'

ParaDise.- · 11-10-2010, 11:17 PM

We can see your entry in OP don't need to do publicity of yourself

Kira` · 11-11-2010, 08:19 AM

I'm aiming for a winning spree

Nevfigalo · 11-11-2010, 09:43 AM

Updated.

There is no more judge slots (except one for darkhunter).
11 days left.

kaintz · 11-12-2010, 08:23 AM

reserving this space for my entry:

1st skill					Total Remake
2nd skill					Blink and Sonic Wave combined
3rd skill					Unchanged
Ultimate					Total Remake
Others					Armor

Queen of Pain
Akasha

Description: The Queen of Pain excels at mobility, area of effect damage, and ambushing enemy heroes. Although she is fairly fragile, her Blink skill allows her to dodge in and out of combat freely, making her deadly on offense and nearly impossible to catch. When ambushing many heroes, the Queen of Pain often uses Hands of Death, which disables movement speed of all units in the area and absorbs their power over time. Scream of Pain is an area of effect offensive spell centered on the Queen of Pain. Blink, Hands of Death, and Scream of Pain make a deadly combination, allowing the Queen of Pain to do a lot of damage quickly to any nearby target. Since she can disable their movement or use Blink to catch up to retreating enemies, escaping the Queen of Pain is nearly impossible. Her final spell, Curse, is a one of the most powerful ultimate in the game, and can be used to soften up an enemy in large battles. The Queen of Pain is a powerful and versatile spellcaster, and due to her high mobility and strong offensive spells she is a favorite of many more experienced players.

Background Story: Akasha is one of the many souls claimed by the blade, Frostmourne. Raised to serve the Lich King as a Banshee, she desired to become pure substance once more. Driving deep into the forests, she was able to subdue and possess a Succubus minion. Rightly bearing the title, Queen of Pain, she enjoys nothing more than inflicting massive damage on her foes, using her demonic hands to disable enemies' movement and the vicious howls retained from her Banshee nature. Akasha breaks her enemies' eardrums with torturing screams, some so loud they manifest into powerful waves that ripple across the lands, shattering all in their wake.

Strength - 16 + [1.7]

Agility - 18 + [2]

Intelligence - 24 + [2.5]

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Affiliation:	Scourge
Damage:	45-53
Armor:	2.5
Movespeed:	300
Attack Range:	550

Hands of Death

Type: Active
Targeting: Area
Hotkey: D
Summons hands of death from the ground making the enemies in the area unable to move. Absorbing base damage from each enemy affected by this skill and doing damage per second. Lasts 3 seconds.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 90 25 seconds 400 250 3 seconds 20 dps. Absorbs 2 base damage for each unit affected by this skill.
2 105 20 seconds 400 325 3 seconds 35 dps. Absorbs 3 base damage for each unit affected by this skill.
3 120 15 seconds 400 400 3 seconds 50 dps. Absorbs 4 base damage for each unit affected by this skill.
4 135 10 seconds 400 445 3 seconds 65 dps. Absorbs 5 base damage for each unit affected by this skill.
Damage type: magical

Duration (absorbed base damage): 24 / 36 / 48 / 60

Affected units can neither attack nor use spells.

Blink Wave

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit/Point
Hotkey: W
Akasha disappears in combat for a while leaving a gigantic wave of sound which deals damage to all units in a line. She will appear again after the wave reach the end point and will appear in that end point.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 100 14 seconds Global 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) N/A 90 damage. 200 - 700 Range Teleportation
2 100 12 seconds Global 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) N/A 145 damage. 200 - 850 Range Teleportation
3 100 10 seconds Global 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) N/A 200 damage. 200 - 1000 Range Teleportation
4 100 8 seconds Global 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) N/A 255 damage. 200 - 1150 Range Teleportation
Most projectiles can be evaded if Blink is used before they collide.

Damage type: magical

If targeted further away than the maximum distance, Akasha will only teleport 80% of the maximum distance.

Scream of Pain

Type: Active
Targeting: Instant
Hotkey: F
The Queen of Pain lets loose a piercing scream, damaging nearby enemies.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 110 7 seconds N/A 400 N/A 85 damage per target
2 120 7 seconds N/A 425 N/A 165 damage per target
3 130 7 seconds N/A 450 N/A 225 damage per target
4 140 7 seconds N/A 475 N/A 300 damage per target
Damage type: magical

Units not visible by Akasha will not be affected, even if they are within the range of the skill

Curse

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit
Hotkey: W
Casts a powerful demonic spell that curses enemy unit. Cursed unit loses armor and magic resistance.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 240 80 seconds 700 N/A 20 Reduces armor by and magic resistance by 65%. Everytime the cursed unit took damage, 25% of that damage will add to Akasha’s hp.
2 280 70 seconds 700 N/A 20 Reduces armor and magic resistance by 90%. Everytime the cursed unit took damage, 50% of that damage will add to Akasha’s hp.
3 320 60 seconds 700 N/A 20 Reduces armor and magic resistance by 115%. Everytime the cursed unit took damage, 75% of that damage will add to Akasha’s hp.
15% of the total physical damage received in the first 3 seconds will be become slow for the target unit that lasts for 5 seconds.

Aghanim's Scepter upgrade: Akasha will have an increased armor and magic resistance equal to the reduced magic resistance and armor to the target unit. This will continue to take effect unless this spell is off.

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Nevfigalo · 11-12-2010, 01:36 PM

Daily update/bump.

Added darkhunter as a judge.
Added Kaintz as a contestant.

@Kaintz
Blink/skill changing position cannot have more than 8 seconds cooldown at level 4. I know it is only 1s difference however you should change it. Rest looks fine.

kaintz · 11-12-2010, 02:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evfeed

Daily update/bump.

Added darkhunter as a judge.
Added Kaintz as a contestant.

@Kaintz
Blink/skill changing position cannot have more than 8 seconds cooldown at level 4. I know it is only 1s difference however you should change it. Rest looks fine.

Thanks for the reminder. edited.

SimplyCrazy · 11-12-2010, 03:00 PM

@kaintz 2nd skill.. lol, Break-in ;D

SpiderPig · 11-12-2010, 03:05 PM

please change the challange from QoP remake to Sentinel Remake , PLEASE!
Reason: no need to change a good hero

hellkn · 11-12-2010, 03:58 PM

My Idea for akasha remake - A sonic theme - Role as damage dealer and blink hero - Need to add icons

Blink - Akasha blink into a target position / Same unchanged blink

Sonic Shield - Akasha becomes magical immune and damage protected. She also releases 1 pulse for each 0.75s while shield is active.
- Each pulse deal a 0.1 second ministun on all nearby enemy units in 200 AoE
- Lvl1: 40 pure damage per pulse, up to 180 damage absorved
- Lvl2: 60 pure damage per pulse, up to 220 damage absorved
- Lvl3: 80 pure damage per pulse, up to 260 damage absorved
- Lvl4: 100 pure damage per pulse, up to 300 damage absorved
- Mana cost is 100
- Duration is 4 seconds
- Cooldown is 12 seconds
- Sonic Shield is deactivated when Akasha is stuned or silenced
- Sonic Shield is deactivated after absorving a limited amount of damage from any number of sources

Sonic Wave - Akasha releases a sonic wave
- Lvl1: 160 pure damage and 130 Mana cost
- Lvl2: 220 pure damage and 150 Mana cost
- Lvl3: 280 pure damage and 170 Mana cost
- Lvl4: 360 pure damage and 190 Mana cost
- Tweaks (Old) Sonic Wave so it is not an ulti and also replaces (Old) Scream of Pain
- Cooldown: 9

Scream of Pain - Akasha releases a scream that amplifies any damage taken by all enemy heroes on map
- Lvl 1: 40% damage amplification, 250 mana cost
- Lvl 2: 60% damage amplification, 325 mana cost
- Lvl 3: 80% damage amplification, 400 mana cost
- Replaces (Old) Sonic Wave
- Duration is 8 seconds
- Amplified damage dealt at end of duration as magical damage
- Cooldown 120 seconds
- Works on invisible units
- Works on magic immune units
- Destroy all enemy illusions/summons
- Aghanim Upgrade reduces cooldown to 25 seconds

ParaDise.- · 11-12-2010, 07:06 PM

PLease use the template given in OP to make easier to see what have you changed otherwise your remkae would be count in the contest

Nevfigalo · 11-12-2010, 08:52 PM

@hellkn
http://www.playdota.com/forums/5494/...tion-template/
I would like you to edit your entry/ideas a bit.
I can't teach you how to use it. You have to learn it by your own. Use preview post/changes option to see effects. Try do your best.

/updated

kaintz · 11-13-2010, 12:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SimplyCrazy

@kaintz 2nd skill.. lol, Break-in ;D

hmm... i didnt see your post... anyways.. ill try to replace it as soon as i think of another skill

Nevfigalo · 11-13-2010, 02:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kaintz

hmm... i didnt see your post... anyways.. ill try to replace it as soon as i think of another skill

I have checked both skills. There are enough differences (AoE, damage). You don't have to change this skill if you don't want.

kaintz · 11-13-2010, 02:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Evfeed

I have checked both skills. There are enough differences (AoE, damage). You don't have to change this skill if you don't want.

oh yeah.. i rechecked it... hahaha! i think somewhat ties between our skills is the concept (not fully, but a part of it)... but the way it is executed and the calculations etc are in different way

teng) · 11-13-2010, 03:48 PM

so what's the rubric of the main challenge "shadow strike" remake and "other skills" remake?

Sgt Failure · 11-13-2010, 04:58 PM

Caused her to become more of a Disabler/Support rather then a pure chaser
Increased Int gain, reduced Agi gain
Shadowstrike major rework, now with a different aiming, and no slow
Blink have got a total remake
Scream off Pain is reworked, and changed a bit
Added a disable and changed name of ultimate

Queen of Pain
Akasha

Description: Bla bla bla... The new QoP will not be so much a chaser in the area of slowing and fast blinking, but rather a positioner that can turn almost every situation if used right. I have added some difficulty to players controlling her, making her more rewarding. Also, i have kept the Sonic Pain theme more focused.

Background Story: Akasha is one of the many souls claimed by the blade, Frostmourne. Raised to serve the Lich King as a Banshee, she desired to become pure substance once more. Driving deep into the forests, she was able to subdue and possess a Succubus minion. Rightly bearing the title, Queen of Pain, she enjoys nothing more than inflicting massive damage on her foes, using both the poisonous strikes of her succubus host and the vicious howls retained from her Banshee nature. Akasha breaks her enemies' eardrums with torturing screams, some so loud they manifest into powerful waves that ripple across the lands, shattering all in their wake.

Strength - 16 + [1.7]

Agility - 18 + [1.8]

Intelligence - 24 + [2.8]

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Affiliation:	Scourge
Damage:	45-53
Armor:	1.6
Movespeed:	300
Attack Range:	550

Shadow Strike

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit
Hotkey: D
Launces a deadly projetile towards a target location. The first unit it hits will take initial damage, aswell as beeing poisoned, causing them to attack slower aswell as taking damage. Duration is reset if the target tries to run away. This skill cannot be cast without charges. Max of 4 charges.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 25 0.5 1200 N/A 3 seconds 10 Damage on hit. Deals 11 damage per second, slows IAS by 5. Duration resets every time the target moves 750 units.
2 30 0.5 1200 N/A 3 seconds 30 Damage on hit. Deals 14 damage per second, slows IAS by 10. Duration resets every time the target moves 600 units.
3 35 0.5 1200 N/A 3 seconds 50 Damage on hit. Deals 17 damage per second, slows IAS by 15. Duration resets every time the target moves 450 units.
4 40 0.5 1200 N/A 3 seconds 70 Damage on hit. Deals 20 damage per second, slows IAS by 20. Duration resets every time the target moves 300 units.
Damage type: Magical

Each hit have it own duration, and they stack fully.

No cap of damage or IAS reduction.

Can hit creeps, have a detectionradius of 50, and travel at 1000 speed.

Gains one charge every 10/8/6/4 seconds.

Units afflicted by Shadow Strike can be denied by their allies when their HP drops below 25% of their maximum health.

Soundstep

Type: Active
Targeting: Point
Hotkey: B
Akasha splits her beeing into to orbs of pure energy, traveling to target point over 0.5 second. Units hit will become cursed, and whenever they take damage, a soundwave will emmit, causing damage to nearby enemies. The strength of the pulse depends on the amount of damage taken.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 100 10 seconds 200-800 50 (Orbs) / 300 (Arc at middle) 3 Splits self, moving to target location. The curse deals 20% of damage taken in 250 AoE.
2 100 8 seconds 200-800 50 (Orbs) / 300 (Arc at middle) 3 Splits self, moving to target location. The curse deals 20% of damage taken in 290 AoE.
3 100 6 seconds 200-800 50 (Orbs) / 300 (Arc at middle) 3 Splits self, moving to target location. The curse deals 20% of damage taken in 330 AoE.
4 100 4 seconds 200-800 50 (Orbs) / 300 (Arc at middle) 3 Splits self, moving to target location. The curse deals 20% of damage taken in 370 AoE.
Akasha is invulnerable during the travel, and moves like Wild Axes, only she does not return.

This buff can not under any ways stack.

Only disperses 10% of damage taken when a non-player-owned unit takes damage.

All units gains a dispersion that does not reduce damage taken, and does not affect themself.

Damage caused by the curse is not reflected again.

Damage type is pure, the buff can be purged.

Scream of Pain

Type: Active
Targeting: Instant
Hotkey: F
The Queen of Pain lets loose a piercing scream, damaging nearby opponents and pacifiying them briefly.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 50 7 seconds N/A 400 N/A Deals 60 damage and pacifies for 1 second.
2 60 6 seconds N/A 400 N/A Deals 90 damage and pacifies for 1.3 second.
3 70 5 seconds N/A 400 N/A Deals 120 damage and pacifies for 1.6 second.
4 80 4 seconds N/A 400 N/A Deals 150 damage and pacifies for 1.9 second.
Damage type: Pure

Pacified units have all their damage done reduced by 100%, including dots and auras. They may still trigger bashes, heal and escape etc... (Triggered heals, does not affect any effects the skills may have)

Does not have a castanimation, but cannot be cast without breaking channelings.

Goes through magic immunity

Sonic Terror

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit/Point
Hotkey: W
Creates a wave of sonic terror, causing heavy damage to all units in a line, disorienting them briefly, rendering them running in circles.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 250 80 (55*) seconds 700 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) 1.25 (2*) 300 damage
2 360 65 (40*) seconds 700 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) 1.75 (2.5*) 400 damage
3 500 50 (25*) seconds 700 100 (Starting AoE) / 800 (Distance) / 300 (Final AoE) 2.25 (3*) 500 damage
Damage type: Magical

Units hit run around randomly at 522ms for the duration stated, this effect can be purged and does not affect magic immune units.

Can be improved by Aghanim's Scepter (* shows the improved values).

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ChaoS_ThronE · 11-14-2010, 05:32 AM

Sonic Temptress
Akasha

Description: The Sonic Temptress excels at mobility, area of effect damage, and ambushing enemy heroes. Although she is fairly fragile, her Sonic Displacement skill allows her to dodge in and out of combat freely and impairs their attacks further. When ambushing lone heroes, the Sonic Temptress often uses Octave Pins, which slows the target's movement speed and makes it difficult for them to escape. Soprano Discord is an area of effect offensive spell centered on the Sonic Temptress. Sonic Displacement, Octave Pins, and Soprano Discord make a deadly combination, allowing the Sonic Temptress to do a lot of damage quickly to any nearby target and degenerates them. Since she can slow and blink to catch up to retreating enemies, escaping the Sonic Temptress is nearly impossible. Her final spell, Coloratura Sonata, is a one of the most powerful area of effect spells in the game, and can be used to finish off injured heroes or soften up the enemy team in large battles. The Sonic Temptress is a powerful and versatile spellcaster, and due to her high mobility and strong offensive spells she is a favorite of many more experienced players.

Background Story: Once a famous singer who lead a tranquil live in Dalaran, until she married with someone he loved most, then her life was ruined by her husband itself, Nai'x who was aiming for the indefinite riches, he sold Akasha. Then, Akasha became one of many Elven Slaves working for the Orcs, her influence of angelic voices are still renown by a lot of people there until the bearer of Frostmourne, came to annihilate the Orcs and those slaves, realizing potential of Akasha to serve the Lich King, Abaddon took her body to be altered by necromancers. Raised as a Banshee, and retaining the pain of the forced necrolitic alteration, she desired to become pure substance once more, but possess no heart. Driving deep into the forests, she was able to subdue and possess a Succubus minion. Rightly bearing the title, Sonic Temptress, she enjoys nothing more than inflicting massive damage on her foes, using both the poisonous strikes of her succubus host and the vicious howls retained from her nature. Akasha breaks her enemies' eardrums with torturing screams, some so loud they manifest into powerful waves that ripple across the lands, shattering all in their wake.

Strength - 16 + [1.9]

Agility - 18 + [1.4]

Intelligence - 24 + [2.6]

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Affiliation:	Scourge
Damage:	41-50
Armor:	2
Movespeed:	300
Attack Range:	550

Octave Pins

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit
Hotkey: D
Hurls a sharp needle imbued by corrupted essence of necromancy, along with a high pitched scream, causing the foes to tremble and weaken them.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 80 9 seconds 600 N/A 10 seconds 40 strike damage, causes 150% degeneration. 10% initial slow
2 80 8 seconds 600 N/A 10 seconds 60 strike damage, causes 180% degeneration. 13% initial slow
3 80 7 seconds 600 N/A 10 seconds 80 strike damage, causes 210% degeneration. 16% initial slow
4 80 6 seconds 600 N/A 10 seconds 100 strike damage, causes 240% degeneration. 19% initial slow
Damage type: magical

Degens only Hit Point. Degeneration is counted by x% * the unit's current HP Regen.

Affected unit is slowed by 3% per seconds.

Also silences them if they receive any other instance of Akasha's spell for 1.5 seconds.

Sonic Displacement

Type: Active
Targeting: Point
Hotkey: B
Akasha uses a quick step unto a point area, upon reaching, She release deafening wave that causes the enemy to be unable to attack for a set duration

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 50 4 seconds Global 300 N/A 600 Range Teleportation, Disables attack for 1 seconds.
2 55 4 seconds Global 300 N/A 600 Range Teleportation, Disables attack for 1.2 seconds.
3 60 4 seconds Global 300 N/A 600 Range Teleportation, Disables attack for 1.4 seconds.
4 65 4 seconds Global 300 N/A 600 Range Teleportation, Disables attack for 1.6 seconds.
Most projectiles can be evaded if Sonic Displacement is used before they collide.

If targeted further away than the maximum distance, Akasha will still blink to the maximum distance.

Soprano Discord

Type: Active
Targeting: Instant
Hotkey: F
Sonic Temptress lets loose a High-Pitched Scream that impairs Enemies.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 120 7 seconds N/A 400 N/A 60 damage to Heroes, 120 to Creeps. Unit with Octave Pins attached gain extra degeneration, equal to 1% of it's max HP
2 125 7 seconds N/A 425 N/A 120 damage to Heroes, 190 to Creeps. Unit with Octave Pins attached gain extra degeneration, equal to 1.6% of it's max HP
3 130 7 seconds N/A 450 N/A 180 damage to Heroes, 260 to Creeps. Unit with Octave Pins attached gain extra degeneration, equal to 2.2% of it's max HP
4 135 7 seconds N/A 475 N/A 240 damage to Heroes, 330 to Creeps. Unit with Octave Pins attached gain extra degeneration, equal to 2.8% of it's max HP
Damage type: Pure

Units not visible by Akasha will not be affected, even if they are within the range of the skill

Degen lasts as long as Octave Pin is still active.

Coloratura Sonata

Type: Active
Targeting: Unit/Point
Hotkey: W
Akasha screams two times for a finishing strike, a greater scream pierces through enemy while lesser scream stabs through their souls.

Mana Cooldown Range AoE AoE 2 Effects
1 300 120 (100*) seconds 700 300 AoE 400 AoE 200 (280*) damage (First Wave), Degens their HP/Mana equal to current degeneration * 2.5 (* 3) for 2.5 seconds (Second Wave)
2 450 120 (70*) seconds 700 350 AoE 450 AoE 350 (430*) damage, Degens their HP/Mana equal to current degeneration * 2.75 (* 3.5) for 4 seconds (Second Wave)
3 600 120 (40*) seconds 700 400 AoE, 500 AoE 500 (580*) damage, Degens their HP/Mana equal to current degeneration * 3 (* 4) for 5.5 seconds (Second Wave)

Damage type: magical

Can be improved by Aghanim's Scepter (* shows the improved values).

Can hit units up to 1100 range away.

Second wave is shot after first wave resolves, in the same casting area (Gyro's Ulti)

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Old	New	Change Type
Theme - Pain	Theme - Sound	Skills now are more connected to sounds.
Nuker	Nuker - Late Game	Skills now have disables and Regen Killer.
Shadow Strike	Octave Pins	Tweaked to increase Spammability.
Blink	Sonic Displacement	Changed the cooldown and added effects.
Scream of Pain	Soprano's Discord	Tweaked number and added bonus effect.
Sonic Wave	Coloratura Sonata	Partially Remaked to be more vicious, two waves are released.

Feedback is very appreciated

Nevfigalo · 11-14-2010, 09:42 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by teng)

so what's the rubric of the main challenge "shadow strike" remake and "other skills" remake?

It depends on judge/remakes.

Updated.

@ChaoS_ThronE
Changing the title is highly unrecommended. There are additional points for NOT changing hero theme.

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11-10-2010, 07:07 PM	#22
SimplyCrazy Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Russia Posts: 471 Blog Entries: 1	Re: Remake The Ancients II entry here. Still brainstorming some aspects and waiting for critics ^^' __________________ It's been a long time...

11-10-2010, 11:17 PM	#23
ParaDise.- Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: SA please Posts: 2,724	Re: Remake The Ancients II We can see your entry in OP don't need to do publicity of yourself

11-11-2010, 08:19 AM	#24
Kira` Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: reality...I suppose... Posts: 994 Blog Entries: 1	Re: Remake The Ancients II I'm aiming for a winning spree __________________ Heroes Abilities Items Remakes

11-11-2010, 09:43 AM	#25
Nevfigalo Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Europe Posts: 1,153	Re: Remake The Ancients II Updated. There is no more judge slots (except one for darkhunter). 11 days left.

11-12-2010, 01:36 PM	#27
Nevfigalo Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Europe Posts: 1,153	Re: Remake The Ancients II Daily update/bump. Added darkhunter as a judge. Added Kaintz as a contestant. @Kaintz Blink/skill changing position cannot have more than 8 seconds cooldown at level 4. I know it is only 1s difference however you should change it. Rest looks fine.

11-12-2010, 03:00 PM	#29
SimplyCrazy Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: Russia Posts: 471 Blog Entries: 1	Re: Remake The Ancients II @kaintz 2nd skill.. lol, Break-in ;D __________________ It's been a long time...

11-12-2010, 03:05 PM	#30
SpiderPig Banned Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: In my home. Posts: 3,806	Re: Remake The Ancients II please change the challange from QoP remake to Sentinel Remake , PLEASE! Reason: no need to change a good hero

11-12-2010, 03:58 PM	#31
hellkn Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Brazil Posts: 231	Re: Remake The Ancients II My Idea for akasha remake - A sonic theme - Role as damage dealer and blink hero - Need to add icons Blink - Akasha blink into a target position / Same unchanged blink Sonic Shield - Akasha becomes magical immune and damage protected. She also releases 1 pulse for each 0.75s while shield is active. - Each pulse deal a 0.1 second ministun on all nearby enemy units in 200 AoE - Lvl1: 40 pure damage per pulse, up to 180 damage absorved - Lvl2: 60 pure damage per pulse, up to 220 damage absorved - Lvl3: 80 pure damage per pulse, up to 260 damage absorved - Lvl4: 100 pure damage per pulse, up to 300 damage absorved - Mana cost is 100 - Duration is 4 seconds - Cooldown is 12 seconds - Sonic Shield is deactivated when Akasha is stuned or silenced - Sonic Shield is deactivated after absorving a limited amount of damage from any number of sources Sonic Wave - Akasha releases a sonic wave - Lvl1: 160 pure damage and 130 Mana cost - Lvl2: 220 pure damage and 150 Mana cost - Lvl3: 280 pure damage and 170 Mana cost - Lvl4: 360 pure damage and 190 Mana cost - Tweaks (Old) Sonic Wave so it is not an ulti and also replaces (Old) Scream of Pain - Cooldown: 9 Scream of Pain - Akasha releases a scream that amplifies any damage taken by all enemy heroes on map - Lvl 1: 40% damage amplification, 250 mana cost - Lvl 2: 60% damage amplification, 325 mana cost - Lvl 3: 80% damage amplification, 400 mana cost - Replaces (Old) Sonic Wave - Duration is 8 seconds - Amplified damage dealt at end of duration as magical damage - Cooldown 120 seconds - Works on invisible units - Works on magic immune units - Destroy all enemy illusions/summons - Aghanim Upgrade reduces cooldown to 25 seconds

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11-12-2010, 07:06 PM	#32
ParaDise.- Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: SA please Posts: 2,724	Re: Remake The Ancients II PLease use the template given in OP to make easier to see what have you changed otherwise your remkae would be count in the contest

11-12-2010, 08:52 PM	#33
Nevfigalo Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Europe Posts: 1,153	Re: Remake The Ancients II @hellkn http://www.playdota.com/forums/5494/...tion-template/ I would like you to edit your entry/ideas a bit. I can't teach you how to use it. You have to learn it by your own. Use preview post/changes option to see effects. Try do your best. /updated

11-13-2010, 03:48 PM	#37
teng) Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 3,718	Re: Remake The Ancients II so what's the rubric of the main challenge "shadow strike" remake and "other skills" remake? __________________ <3 Comic Ms Paint Comic - The Juggernaut