Sage The Dragon Turtle [STR-Scourge]

Rathman55 · 11-16-2010, 03:27 PM

Changelog

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Sage the (Illidari) Dragon Turtle

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Summon Dragon Turtle

Scourge Story: Sage the leader of the Dragon Turtles embracing his shadow magic taught to him by the master Illidan. Matched with his manipulation of water and tough characteristics make him an unexpected force. Though his Leader Illadin died he remains with the scourge to this day and seeks vengeance on the slayers of Illidan.

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Stats
I'm not the greatest with numbers so these may need to be revised.
INT 17 + [2.1]
STR 23 + [2.5]
AGI 12 + [1.7]
Range: 100
Starting Health: 524
Starting Mana: 221
Armor: 2
Movespeed: 270

Learns Shell Knives, Shell Shock, Shadow Shell and Sea of Black Magic

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Abilities

Shell knives

Sage is capable of breaking razorsharp parts out of his shell, which he fires at nearby random enemies. Theres a base of 4 shell knives and a max cap of 20, the higher his STR is, the higher is the number of shell knives. Every 0.25 seconds, a shell knife is fired, which deals the normal damage of Sage. Any enemy who stays in the AoE at the end of the skill duration gets stunned.

Level 1 - Each 11 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 0.5s stun
Level 2 - Each 9 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 1s stun
Level 3 - Each 7 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 1.5s stun
Level 4 - Each 5 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 2s stun

Type: instant Active
Duration is 1s minimal, 5s maximal
Casting Range is Self
AoE is 500
Casting Time is Instant

Cooldown: 20
Mana Cost: 120

Thanks:

Special thanks to JJE92 for this spell. Check him out View Profile: JJE92 and JJE92 Skill Colelction.

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Shell Shock

Sage throws his shell at an enemy to damage and slows them. Can also be thrown at an ally to help save them. Sage loses 5 armor and gains 25% move speed. If Shadow Shell was activated before being thrown it deals 50% more damage, and holds the enemy in place for .5 second. If thrown at an allied unit with Shadow Shell activated they gain the effects of Shadow Shell

Enemy Effects
Level 1 - The enemy takes 50 damage and is slowed 20% for 2 seconds.
Level 2 - The enemy takes 100 damage and is slowed 25% for 3 seconds.
Level 3 - The enemy takes 150 damage and is slowed 30% for 4 seconds.
Level 4 - The enemy takes 200 damage and is slowed 35% for 5 seconds.

Ally Effects
Level 1 -The ally gains 2 armor and reflects 7% damage for 3 seconds.
Level 2 - The ally gains 4 armor and reflects 14% damage for 5 seconds.
Level 3 - The ally gains 6 armor and reflects 21% damage for 7 seconds.
Level 4 - The ally gains 8 armor and reflects 28% damage for 8 seconds.

Type: Active
Duration is ---
Casting Range is 800
AoE is 200
Casting Time is Instant ( Maybe like .5 seconds )

Cooldown: 25
Mana Cost: 100

Notes:

The Ally gains the effects of Shadow Shell
The targeting works like Svens Stormbolt.
It follows the hero and hits the hero and 200 AOE around the hero.
Damage with shadow shell equals to 75/150/225/300

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Shadow Shell

Sage channels shadow magic onto the exterior of his shell. Every time Sage is hit it heals Sage, reduces damage, and reduces the enemies armor.

Level 1 - Sage heals for 10% of the damage and reflects 7% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by 2 for 4 seconds.
Level 2 - Sage heals for 15% of the damage and reflects 14% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by 4 for 6 seconds.
Level 3 - Sage heals for 20% of the damage and reflects 21% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by for 8 seconds.
Level 4 - Sage heals for 25% of the damage and reflects 28% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by 8 for 10 seconds.

Type: Autocast
Duration is Lasts 10 seconds, or until Sage is hit.
Casting Range is Self
AoE N/A
Casting Time is Instant

Cooldown: 3/2/1/0
Mana Cost: 20

Notes:

Reflects all types of damage, but only heals back for physical damage.

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Sea Of Black Magic

In Outlands, Sages mysterious homeland the Sea Of Black Magic exists. It's only known to Dragon Turtles. Sage pulls a large circle wave out of the ground, the wave comes in to Sage. The remaining Shadow Water on the ground transfers enemies health to Sage.

Level 1 - Everyone in 500 AOE range is pulled towards sage by the wave. Every 100 range travelled on wave they take 50 damage. Sage steals 2% health of any enemy in 500 AOE range.
Level 2 - Everyone in 600 AOE range is pulled towards sage by the wave. Every 100 range travelled on wave they take 100 damage. Sage steals 4% health of any enemy in 500 AOE range.
Level 3 -Everyone in 700 AOE range is pulled towards sage by the wave. Every 100 range travelled on wave they take 100 damage. Sage steals 5% health of any enemy in 500 AOE range.

Type: Active
Duration is 15 ( Shadow Water ground length )
Casting Range is Self
AoE is 500/600/700
Casting Time is Instant

Cooldown: 60
Mana Cost: 200

Notes:

It'd be a bit like Shivas gaurd in effect, but waves that pull the enemies in.

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FAQ

I will answer a lot of the questions and concerns about this hero to the best of my abilities.

You are aware that STR Scourge is full?

Yes, but it's rather trivial. Not to mention it's been suggested for a while certain heroes got moved from their houses.

I don't understand the story

The story is mostly made up. While their is Dragon Turtles in Black Temple, that is about the most of it. I am up for the story being edited/changed

Is there a test map?

No. I'm not that great with the editor. However I am currently looking for someone who would be capable of making one.

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Thanks

Special thanks to JJE92 for their spell. Check him out View Profile: JJE92 and JJE92 Skill Colelction.

Rathman55 · 02-10-2012, 08:20 PM

I still think this is a great idea by the way.

deathkidkun · 02-11-2012, 12:35 PM

The f*cking heck!? No, I'm ok with the 1st, 2nd and Ultimate, but for the 3rd skill, seriously the f*cking heck!?
It's obvious what I'm going to do with it, buy a scythe and eul, (maybe orchid if I'm mad) autocast it and I'm pretty much immortal.....

QuESTION TIM[SIZE=5]E
[SIZE=2]
Soo......
For the 2nd skill, does Sage remain naked forever, or does the duration of the effect applies to how long Sage loses his shell too?

For the ultimate, does Sage keep that juicy stolen HP forever potentially making him the 2nd hero to be able to get

HP, except faster than pudge?

T-down at the moment, 3rd skill is seriously lolf*ck

11-16-2010, 03:27 PM	#1
Rathman55 Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 103	Sage The Dragon Turtle [STR-Scourge] Changelog 2/20/2010:Very large revisement contains: New Skills (Shell Knives)(Shadow Shell) New Ult/Reworked (Sea of Black Magic) New layout possibly coming soon 2/10/210: Large update... Notes added to spells Converted dragon rain to damage per second Made it so some effects of shell shock do not scale 2/5/2010: Major Changes Ult added ally regeneration. Might need to be nerfed in other areas Shell Shock massive update/works with spiked shell in a lot of ways Dragon Rain no longer Global Feedback please. 2/1/2010: Shadow Lock receives large buff. Turtling and Spiked Spell are now merged into "Spiked Shell" ( castable ) Dragon Rains slow has been nerfed drastically. Spell "Shell Shock" added Slow removed from dragon rain Shell Shock nerfed January 31st: New stats and fixed old stats Stories Updated Role Added Reduced Shadow Lock duration by 2 seconds November 16th 2010. New thread. __________________________________________________ Sage the (Illidari) Dragon Turtle __________________________________________________ Summon Dragon Turtle Scourge Story: Sage the leader of the Dragon Turtles embracing his shadow magic taught to him by the master Illidan. Matched with his manipulation of water and tough characteristics make him an unexpected force. Though his Leader Illadin died he remains with the scourge to this day and seeks vengeance on the slayers of Illidan. __________________________________________________ Stats I'm not the greatest with numbers so these may need to be revised. INT 17 + [2.1] STR 23 + [2.5] AGI 12 + [1.7] Range: 100 Starting Health: 524 Starting Mana: 221 Armor: 2 Movespeed: 270 Learns Shell Knives, Shell Shock, Shadow Shell and Sea of Black Magic __________________________________________________ Abilities Shell knives Sage is capable of breaking razorsharp parts out of his shell, which he fires at nearby random enemies. Theres a base of 4 shell knives and a max cap of 20, the higher his STR is, the higher is the number of shell knives. Every 0.25 seconds, a shell knife is fired, which deals the normal damage of Sage. Any enemy who stays in the AoE at the end of the skill duration gets stunned. Level 1 - Each 11 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 0.5s stun Level 2 - Each 9 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 1s stun Level 3 - Each 7 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 1.5s stun Level 4 - Each 5 STR the amount of knives is increased by 1. 2s stun Type: instant Active Duration is 1s minimal, 5s maximal Casting Range is Self AoE is 500 Casting Time is Instant Cooldown: 20 Mana Cost: 120 Thanks: Special thanks to JJE92 for this spell. Check him out View Profile: JJE92 and JJE92 Skill Colelction. __________________________________________________ Shell Shock Sage throws his shell at an enemy to damage and slows them. Can also be thrown at an ally to help save them. Sage loses 5 armor and gains 25% move speed. If Shadow Shell was activated before being thrown it deals 50% more damage, and holds the enemy in place for .5 second. If thrown at an allied unit with Shadow Shell activated they gain the effects of Shadow Shell Enemy Effects Level 1 - The enemy takes 50 damage and is slowed 20% for 2 seconds. Level 2 - The enemy takes 100 damage and is slowed 25% for 3 seconds. Level 3 - The enemy takes 150 damage and is slowed 30% for 4 seconds. Level 4 - The enemy takes 200 damage and is slowed 35% for 5 seconds. Ally Effects Level 1 -The ally gains 2 armor and reflects 7% damage for 3 seconds. Level 2 - The ally gains 4 armor and reflects 14% damage for 5 seconds. Level 3 - The ally gains 6 armor and reflects 21% damage for 7 seconds. Level 4 - The ally gains 8 armor and reflects 28% damage for 8 seconds. Type: Active Duration is --- Casting Range is 800 AoE is 200 Casting Time is Instant ( Maybe like .5 seconds ) Cooldown: 25 Mana Cost: 100 Notes: The Ally gains the effects of Shadow Shell The targeting works like Svens Stormbolt. It follows the hero and hits the hero and 200 AOE around the hero. Damage with shadow shell equals to 75/150/225/300 __________________________________________________ Shadow Shell Sage channels shadow magic onto the exterior of his shell. Every time Sage is hit it heals Sage, reduces damage, and reduces the enemies armor. Level 1 - Sage heals for 10% of the damage and reflects 7% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by 2 for 4 seconds. Level 2 - Sage heals for 15% of the damage and reflects 14% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by 4 for 6 seconds. Level 3 - Sage heals for 20% of the damage and reflects 21% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by for 8 seconds. Level 4 - Sage heals for 25% of the damage and reflects 28% back. Sage has a 5% chance to reduce enemies armor by 8 for 10 seconds. Type: Autocast Duration is Lasts 10 seconds, or until Sage is hit. Casting Range is Self AoE N/A Casting Time is Instant Cooldown: 3/2/1/0 Mana Cost: 20 Notes: Reflects all types of damage, but only heals back for physical damage. __________________________________________________ Sea Of Black Magic In Outlands, Sages mysterious homeland the Sea Of Black Magic exists. It's only known to Dragon Turtles. Sage pulls a large circle wave out of the ground, the wave comes in to Sage. The remaining Shadow Water on the ground transfers enemies health to Sage. Level 1 - Everyone in 500 AOE range is pulled towards sage by the wave. Every 100 range travelled on wave they take 50 damage. Sage steals 2% health of any enemy in 500 AOE range. Level 2 - Everyone in 600 AOE range is pulled towards sage by the wave. Every 100 range travelled on wave they take 100 damage. Sage steals 4% health of any enemy in 500 AOE range. Level 3 -Everyone in 700 AOE range is pulled towards sage by the wave. Every 100 range travelled on wave they take 100 damage. Sage steals 5% health of any enemy in 500 AOE range. Type: Active Duration is 15 ( Shadow Water ground length ) Casting Range is Self AoE is 500/600/700 Casting Time is Instant Cooldown: 60 Mana Cost: 200 Notes: It'd be a bit like Shivas gaurd in effect, but waves that pull the enemies in. __________________________________________________ FAQ I will answer a lot of the questions and concerns about this hero to the best of my abilities. You are aware that STR Scourge is full? Yes, but it's rather trivial. Not to mention it's been suggested for a while certain heroes got moved from their houses. I don't understand the story The story is mostly made up. While their is Dragon Turtles in Black Temple, that is about the most of it. I am up for the story being edited/changed Is there a test map? No. I'm not that great with the editor. However I am currently looking for someone who would be capable of making one. __________________________________________________ Thanks Special thanks to JJE92 for their spell. Check him out View Profile: JJE92 and JJE92 Skill Colelction. __________________ [STR-Scourge] Sage the Illidari Dragon Turtle [AGI Neutral] Serkan The Blood Assassin [INT- Neutral] Shi The Reality Master

02-10-2012, 08:20 PM	#2
Rathman55 Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 103	Re: Sage The Dragon Turtle [STR-Scourge] I still think this is a great idea by the way. __________________ [STR-Scourge] Sage the Illidari Dragon Turtle [AGI Neutral] Serkan The Blood Assassin [INT- Neutral] Shi The Reality Master

02-11-2012, 12:35 PM	#3
deathkidkun Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 413	Re: Sage The Dragon Turtle [STR-Scourge] The fcking heck!? No, I'm ok with the 1st, 2nd and Ultimate, but for the 3rd skill, seriously the fcking heck!? It's obvious what I'm going to do with it, buy a scythe and eul, (maybe orchid if I'm mad) autocast it and I'm pretty much immortal..... QuESTION TIM[SIZE=5]E [SIZE=2] Soo...... For the 2nd skill, does Sage remain naked forever, or does the duration of the effect applies to how long Sage loses his shell too? For the ultimate, does Sage keep that juicy stolen HP forever potentially making him the 2nd hero to be able to get HP, except faster than pudge? T-down at the moment, 3rd skill is seriously lolf*ck __________________ How bout helpin me review mine as well?