Sirius, the Templar

adityacakasana · 12-30-2010, 01:15 PM

Hi everybody! this is my latest hero suggestion. Just check it out!

Templar
Sirius

__Strength__

_Agility_

_Intelligence_

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_22 + 1.5_

_24 + 1.8_

_16 + 2.0_

Attack

Burning Battlefield

Sirius is exactly a tank, as well as a supporter and ganker. Looking at the stats, it is somewhat obvious that this type of hero is not made to tank. But, what makes him can do that job is the third skill Power Sap. Each time he is attacked he will gain Strength. This is helped by his ultimate, Burning Battlefield. When the ultimate is turned on, the changes made to the enemy will fit into what he need with the third skill. His second skill is very good for support, and allow him to cast his Ultimate at a right spot. At last, Mighty Swing is his trade-mark skill. He stuns enemy in AOE for a duration based on his Strength. This skill will fit really well with Power Sap.

Hundreds of years of study helped Sirius master the art of war. But his study was not only to be found in books, but also in the battlefield. He has gained mastery of his hammer and can hit as hard as his gigantic strength allows him to. In times of need, he can make a connection between him and his allies, allowing him to help them. Mastering the art of true defense, he can take away the life force of the evil beings attacking him. He can change the tides of battle as he takes advantage of his enemies' weakness. He can forcefully summon them and cause them to attack Sirius. Coming to the Sentinel's aid, the Lich King and his minions will fall under the hammer of this Templar, Sirius.

Mighty SwingAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: -
Ability Hotkey : W

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During an endless battle, Sirius can make a move that will change the condition thoroughly. He can swing his hammer, stunning all enemy near him as strong as he can. Additionally, he will use his remaining power to swing his hammer for a few attack after it, until he thought that the condition of the battle is good for him

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	120	24 seconds	N/A	275	(1.5% of base STR) seconds	Stuns and grants 100% Cleaving Attack for 3 attacks.
2	130	21 seconds	N/A	300	(2.25% of base STR) seconds	Stuns and grants 100% Cleaving Attack for 4 attacks.
3	140	18 seconds	N/A	325	(2.75% of base STR) seconds	Stuns and grants 100% Cleaving Attack for 5 attacks.
4	150	15 seconds	N/A	350	(3% base of STR) seconds	Stuns and grants 100% Cleaving Attack for 6 attacks.

Notes:

Example: if you have 100 STR, then Level 1 stun is 1,5 secs, Level 2 is 2,25 secs, etc.
Additional stats from items doesn't affect

Painstalking BondAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Single-Target
Ability Hotkey : D

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Mastered protecting abilities, Sirius know how to know when an ally is in trouble. When it happened, sirius can appear at that spot and manage the situation.

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	100	30	N/A	N/A	45	When buffed ally-hero recieves 400 physical damage or 500 magical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 1200 range, Sirius will gain an ability to appear at that place. Swapped ally hero loses buff.
2	100	26	N/A	N/A	50	When buffed ally-hero recieves 400 physical damage or 500 magical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 1500 range, Sirius will gain an ability to appear at that place. Swapped ally hero loses buff.
3	100	22	N/A	N/A	55	When buffed ally-hero recieves 400 physical damage or 500 magical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 1900 range, Sirius will gain an ability to appear at that place. Swapped ally hero loses buff.
4	100	18	N/A	N/A	60	When buffed ally-hero recieves 400 physical damage or 500 magical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 2400 range, Sirius will gain an ability to appear at that place. Swapped ally hero loses buff.

Notes:

Gains subskill: Holy ApparationAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Area target
Ability Hotkey : R

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Appear at ally's spot

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	Mana	Cooldown	C. Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	25	N/A	1200	400	3 seconds	Appear at chosen ally's place, and release a wave that give effects on allies and enemies on AOE. Allies gain 750% HP regeneration and additional 10 armor. Enemies have their HP regeneration stopped and armor reduced by 10. Enemy heroes also auto targeting Sirius when he appears.
2	50	N/A	1500	400	3 seconds	Appear at chosen ally's place, and release a wave that give effects on allies and enemies on AOE. Allies gain 900% HP regeneration and additional 15 armor. Enemies have their HP regeneration stopped and armor reduced by 15. Enemy heroes also auto targeting Sirius when he appears.
3	75	N/A	1900	500	3 seconds	Appear at chosen ally's place, and release a wave that give effects on allies and enemies on AOE. Allies gain 1050% HP regeneration and additional 20 armor. Enemies have their HP regeneration stopped and armor reduced by 20. Enemy heroes also auto targeting Sirius when he appears.
4	100	N/A	2400	500	3 seconds	Appear at chosen ally's place, and release a wave that give effects on allies and enemies on AOE. Allies gain 1200% HP regeneration and additional 25 armor. Enemies have their HP regeneration stopped and armor reduced by 25. Enemy heroes also auto targeting Sirius when he appears.

Effects on Holy Apparation also affects Sirius
Holy Apparation targeting is slike Spectre's Haunt and Reality
Icon wil be changed soon!

Any comments will be helpful to make this hero more perfect.
PS: Sorry for my bad English!

SECXIIKILLA · 12-30-2010, 08:28 PM

3rd skill is too much slarky. btw im doing bg sory for ur hero right now.

SECXIIKILLA · 12-30-2010, 08:48 PM

1st skill: Not really imba at first, but when he gets really buff with STR items and steals stats, it will be ultra imba. Nerf the stun duration. It's unique, but it's a bit too imba.
2nd skill: Heal is too low, increase percentage. 1%/2%/3%/4% maybe.
3rd skill: As I said before, it is too Slarky. This is just essence shift in STR form. I like how they have to attack to steal stats, not the other way around. But it is very unoriginal.
Ult: This is like Berserker's Call from Axe, dude. Again an unoriginal skill. The nice part is that it doesn't add armor like Call does, but adds an attack reduction.
Overall, the first 2 skills were nice and original but the last two are just Slark's and Axe's bread and butter skills. But really good synergy with the STR steal and Stun though.

adityacakasana · 12-30-2010, 10:04 PM

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Originally Posted by SECXIIKILLA

1st skill: Not really imba at first, but when he gets really buff with STR items and steals stats, it will be ultra imba. Nerf the stun duration. It's unique, but it's a bit too imba.
2nd skill: Heal is too low, increase percentage. 1%/2%/3%/4% maybe.
3rd skill: As I said before, it is too Slarky. This is just essence shift in STR form. I like how they have to attack to steal stats, not the other way around. But it is very unoriginal.
Ult: This is like Berserker's Call from Axe, dude. Again an unoriginal skill. The nice part is that it doesn't add armor like Call does, but adds an attack reduction.
Overall, the first 2 skills were nice and original but the last two are just Slark's and Axe's bread and butter skills. But really good synergy with the STR steal and Stun though.

1st skill: I already have an idea to make it balance
2nd skill: Actually I wanna add the percentage of the heal, but i'm afraid it will be too OP
3rd skill: I don't know how should i change this skill because it is already fit well.. Any idea maybe?
Ultimate: Actually I took this from MMORPG but when i adapt it to this skill, i just realize it. Ok. I have an idea for this.
Thanks so much for your building critics. About the changes, i'll do it tonight as i'll be back in front of my computer

SECXIIKILLA · 12-31-2010, 12:47 AM

Hey dude, don't forget the hero background story I suggested for your hero. Here it is from the BG Story Request Thread.

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Originally Posted by SECXIIKILLA

Hundreds of years of study helped Sirius master the art of war. But his study was not only to be found in books, but also in the battlefield. He has gained mastery of his hammer and can hit as hard as his gigantic strength allows him to. In times of need, he can sacrifice his battle capabilities to help and save the lives of his fellow allies. Mastering the art of true defense, he can take away the life force of the evil beings attacking him. He can change the tides of battle as he takes advantage of his enemies' vagueness and cause them to attack Sirius. Coming to the Sentinel's aid, the Lich King and his minions will fall under the hammer of this Templar, Sirius.

Also I will review ur hero.

Here ya go.

adityacakasana · 12-31-2010, 03:42 AM

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Originally Posted by SECXIIKILLA

Hey dude, don't forget the hero background story I suggested for your hero. Here it is from the BG Story Request Thread.

Here ya go.

Ah yes.. Thanks a lot!! Maybe, can you change the story a bit as the ultimate is extremely changed??

kitchen · 12-31-2010, 07:32 AM

Imo you should really fill out the "hero introduction" part. It's probably the most important of all.

As for other comments, I'll say that the stat passive is overpowered if only because of the numbers. Level 1, he gets 76hp every time a hero attacks him which basically makes him immune to attacks. I know this is a number thing but it's a bit ridiculous. To fix this, perhaps the amount of STR should scale, rather than the duration.

The ult is pretty cool

blackra1n · 12-31-2010, 08:11 AM

no, 3rd skill (which resembles Slark) is IMBA.
this attribute steal + absorb is only for heroes with A VERY low HP like him (SLark)
If any other hero carry this skill it would be very IMBA, especially high-HP heroes.

adityacakasana · 12-31-2010, 10:37 AM

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Originally Posted by kitchen

Imo you should really fill out the "hero introduction" part. It's probably the most important of all.

Actually I want to, but i'm afraid there'll be a mistypo

Quote:

As for other comments, I'll say that the stat passive is overpowered if only because of the numbers. Level 1, he gets 76hp every time a hero attacks him which basically makes him immune to attacks. I know this is a number thing but it's a bit ridiculous. To fix this, perhaps the amount of STR should scale, rather than the duration.

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackra1n

no, 3rd skill (which resembles Slark) is IMBA.
this attribute steal + absorb is only for heroes with A VERY low HP like him (SLark)
If any other hero carry this skill it would be very IMBA, especially high-HP heroes.

Got the point. I'll make it cooldown based. about the HIGH HP heroes, this hero only have 1.8 STR growth. Should I reduce again?

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Originally Posted by kitchen

The ult is pretty cool

Thanks

gamerinboxers · 12-31-2010, 11:04 AM

Hmm... Anyone noticed its 2 self active skills(Skill 1+Ulti) and 2 passive skills? Kinda boring gameplay don't ya think?

Personally, I feel the theme of STR is not really new to DotA. Naming a few, we have Undying that does a good job at that, and Centuar Warchief that relies greatly on STR.

Just my 2 cents.. No offence =P

blackra1n · 12-31-2010, 11:11 AM

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Got the point. I'll make it cooldown based. about the HIGH HP heroes, this hero only have 1.8 STR growth. Should I reduce again?

Its better

Quote:

Hmm... Anyone noticed its 2 self active skills(Skill 1+Ulti) and 2 passive skills? Kinda boring gameplay don't ya think?

Personally, I feel the theme of STR is not really new to DotA. Naming a few, we have Undying that does a good job at that, and Centuar Warchief that relies greatly on STR.

Just my 2 cents.. No offence =P

Nope, doesn't seem to be totally boring, dude. Its no matter active/passive, the concept MUST BE TOTALLY ORIGINAL and also must be interesting, bringing something new to the game, thats all. Well most of the STR heroes has two passive skills, why not??? Bara, Brad, etc, and its not boring after all right?

gamerinboxers · 12-31-2010, 11:21 AM

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Originally Posted by blackra1n

Its better

Nope, doesn't seem to be totally boring, dude. Its no matter active/passive, the concept MUST BE TOTALLY ORIGINAL and also must be interesting, bringing something new to the game, thats all. Well most of the STR heroes has two passive skills, why not??? Bara, Brad, etc, and its not boring after all right?

Well, just a personal opinion. =P

Anyway, since we have that number of STR heroes that make use of 2 passive, why bother having more? Wouldn't it be better to make way for something more "interactive"?

Anyway Bara has a 2 targeting active and Bard has 1 targeting active. This hero, none. That's why its gameplay is boring to me. Its almost like Naix before its got redesigned, which had 3 passive and 1 self active.

I mean, if the passive require some form of "gameplay" that would make it more interesting. And when i mention "gameplay" that does not mean standing in battle. =P

Not trying to get you to agree with me, but this is just how I believe heroes should not be.

Edit: Forgot to mention something, The hero concept is Original alright. Just not Interesting enough for me to play. =P

blackra1n · 12-31-2010, 11:50 AM

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Originally Posted by gamerinboxers

Well, just a personal opinion. =P

Anyway, since we have that number of STR heroes that make use of 2 passive, why bother having more? Wouldn't it be better to make way for something more "interactive"?

Anyway Bara has a 2 targeting active and Bard has 1 targeting active. This hero, none. That's why its gameplay is boring to me. Its almost like Naix before its got redesigned, which had 3 passive and 1 self active.

I mean, if the passive require some form of "gameplay" that would make it more interesting. And when i mention "gameplay" that does not mean standing in battle. =P

Not trying to get you to agree with me, but this is just how I believe heroes should not be.

Edit: Forgot to mention something, The hero concept is Original alright. Just not Interesting enough for me to play. =P

Oh yeah, sorry almost forgot
Now, point your mouse to the Heroes section and click at Io - The Guardian Wisp, which is the hero I most hated. He had 4 active skills, and he's an STR!!! It doesn't make sense, really. He had INT MUCH higher than his STR, but why he's an STR hero? I never use that crap even since it first released in 6.67-6.68 (forgot). People say that he's a supporter, well thats right. Something which gone wrong is he's displaced into the STR Tavern thats all.

And well, this hero is also a supporter eh? If yes, then it should be an INT hero.

adityacakasana · 12-31-2010, 12:00 PM

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Originally Posted by gamerinboxers

Hmm... Anyone noticed its 2 self active skills(Skill 1+Ulti) and 2 passive skills? Kinda boring gameplay don't ya think?

Personally, I feel the theme of STR is not really new to DotA. Naming a few, we have Undying that does a good job at that, and Centuar Warchief that relies greatly on STR.

Just my 2 cents.. No offence =P

Quote:

Originally Posted by blackra1n

Its better

Nope, doesn't seem to be totally boring, dude. Its no matter active/passive, the concept MUST BE TOTALLY ORIGINAL and also must be interesting, bringing something new to the game, thats all. Well most of the STR heroes has two passive skills, why not??? Bara, Brad, etc, and its not boring after all right?

Quote:

Originally Posted by gamerinboxers

Well, just a personal opinion. =P

Anyway, since we have that number of STR heroes that make use of 2 passive, why bother having more? Wouldn't it be better to make way for something more "interactive"?

Anyway Bara has a 2 targeting active and Bard has 1 targeting active. This hero, none. That's why its gameplay is boring to me. Its almost like Naix before its got redesigned, which had 3 passive and 1 self active.

I mean, if the passive require some form of "gameplay" that would make it more interesting. And when i mention "gameplay" that does not mean standing in battle. =P

Not trying to get you to agree with me, but this is just how I believe heroes should not be.

Edit: Forgot to mention something, The hero concept is Original alright. Just not Interesting enough for me to play. =P

What should i do, then?? Any suggestion?

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Originally Posted by blackra1n

Oh yeah, sorry almost forgot
Now, point your mouse to the Heroes section and click at Io - The Guardian Wisp, which is the hero I most hated. He had 4 active skills, and he's an STR!!! It doesn't make sense, really. He had INT MUCH higher than his STR, but why he's an STR hero? I never use that crap even since it first released in 6.67-6.68 (forgot). People say that he's a supporter, well thats right. Something which gone wrong is he's displaced into the STR Tavern thats all.

And well, this hero is also a supporter eh? If yes, then it should be an INT hero.

What? Turning this hero into an INT? Seems interesting as the damage will not be OP, but i need to think more.
Io is launched in 6.68 (lol)

gamerinboxers · 12-31-2010, 12:12 PM

@blackra1n
Well, I actually like playing Io. Not getting why Io was brought up for discussion thought.. LOL.. As far as I know understand, Io game play replies on movement, which is more "interactive" that standing in battle and adds a new gameplay to DotA. One of the reason I can think Io is STR is that it (maybe its a she, LOL) requires the HP to support with tethering and guardian spirits when runing into enemy units. Hence, I think there is nothing wrong with Io or STR supporters.

Bro, lets take this somewhere else, hehehe. =P

@adityacakasana
I like the concept.. gimme some time to think about it.. currently in works on another hero suggestion.. taking up too much brain cells... LOL

SECXIIKILLA · 12-31-2010, 01:40 PM

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Originally Posted by adityacakasana

Ah yes.. Thanks a lot!! Maybe, can you change the story a bit as the ultimate is extremely changed??

Oh sure, here it is:

Hundreds of years of study helped Sirius master the art of war. But his study was not only to be found in books, but also in the battlefield. He has gained mastery of his hammer and can hit as hard as his gigantic strength allows him to. In times of need, he can sacrifice his battle capabilities to help and save the lives of his fellow allies. Mastering the art of true defense, he can take away the life force of the evil beings attacking him. He can change the tides of battle as he takes advantage of his enemies' weakness. He can forcefully summon them and cause them to attack Sirius. Coming to the Sentinel's aid, the Lich King and his minions will fall under the hammer of this Templar, Sirius.

Not much changed except in the last 2 sentences or so.

Review mah hero! In my sig. The water elemental.

SECXIIKILLA · 12-31-2010, 01:42 PM

Wait....what if Slark attacks him? How is that? Who steals that stats? O.o

adityacakasana · 12-31-2010, 02:58 PM

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Originally Posted by SECXIIKILLA

Oh sure, here it is:

Hundreds of years of study helped Sirius master the art of war. But his study was not only to be found in books, but also in the battlefield. He has gained mastery of his hammer and can hit as hard as his gigantic strength allows him to. In times of need, he can sacrifice his battle capabilities to help and save the lives of his fellow allies. Mastering the art of true defense, he can take away the life force of the evil beings attacking him. He can change the tides of battle as he takes advantage of his enemies' weakness. He can forcefully summon them and cause them to attack Sirius. Coming to the Sentinel's aid, the Lich King and his minions will fall under the hammer of this Templar, Sirius.

Not much changed except in the last 2 sentences or so.

Review mah hero! In my sig. The water elemental.

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Originally Posted by SECXIIKILLA

Wait....what if Slark attacks him? How is that? Who steals that stats? O.o

Thanks! Your hero(Water elemental)? already.. check 'em up. About Slark vs. this hero, I still doesn't know who will win. Slark will get STR decreased but increased AGI. Sirius got increased STR but decreased AGI and INT

gamerinboxers · 01-03-2011, 03:39 PM

@adityacakasana
Hey, got your msg and here i am. Here is suggestion for skill 2 and Ulti:

Skill 2: Remain as passive, but no longer heal since heal is not really "unique" in game, but its up to u, the concept is below:
Name: Protection Prayer

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	0	0	500	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +0.50 armor and +1.00% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.
2	0	0	550	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +0.67 armor and +1.33% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.
3	0	0	600	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +1.00 armor and +2.00% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.
4	0	0	650	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +2.00 armor and +4.00% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.

Note: Basically, it takes 40/30/20/10 seconds to max out the benefits.

Ulti: Changing it from Toggle to Target Ally buff
Name: Painstalking Bond

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	26	300	0	0	60	When buffed ally-hero recieves 300 physical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 2000 range, Sirius will swap places with ally and forcing attacking enemies to attack Sirius 3 times or 4 seconds chase before regaining control. Swapped ally hero loses buff.
2	18	450	0	0	60	When buffed ally-hero recieves 300 physical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 2500 range, Sirius will swap places with ally and forcing attacking enemies to attack Sirius 4 times or 4 seconds chase before regaining control. Swapped ally hero loses buff.
3	14	600	0	0	60	When buffed ally-hero recieves 300 physical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 3000 range, Sirius will swap places with ally and forcing attacking enemies to attack Sirius 5 times or 4 seconds chase before regaining control. Swapped ally hero loses buff.

Note: With that cooldown, the number of allies you can buff is 2/3/4 per level.

Feel free to edit it =)

Give me some time on your skill 1... need to think and sleepy... Skill 3 can stay as i believe its your hero signature.

adityacakasana · 01-08-2011, 01:43 AM

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Originally Posted by gamerinboxers

@adityacakasana
Hey, got your msg and here i am. Here is suggestion for skill 2 and Ulti:

Skill 2: Remain as passive, but no longer heal since heal is not really "unique" in game, but its up to u, the concept is below:
Name: Protection Prayer

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	0	0	500	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +0.50 armor and +1.00% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.
2	0	0	550	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +0.67 armor and +1.33% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.
3	0	0	600	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +1.00 armor and +2.00% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.
4	0	0	650	0	0	For every second Sirius does not move, all allies including himself gains the following: +2.00 armor and +4.00% magic resistance. Maximum of 20 armor and 40% magic resistance.

Note: Basically, it takes 40/30/20/10 seconds to max out the benefits.

Ulti: Changing it from Toggle to Target Ally buff
Name: Painstalking Bond

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	26	300	0	0	60	When buffed ally-hero recieves 300 physical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 2000 range, Sirius will swap places with ally and forcing attacking enemies to attack Sirius 3 times or 4 seconds chase before regaining control. Swapped ally hero loses buff.
2	18	450	0	0	60	When buffed ally-hero recieves 300 physical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 2500 range, Sirius will swap places with ally and forcing attacking enemies to attack Sirius 4 times or 4 seconds chase before regaining control. Swapped ally hero loses buff.
3	14	600	0	0	60	When buffed ally-hero recieves 300 physical damage within 3 seconds and Sirius is within 3000 range, Sirius will swap places with ally and forcing attacking enemies to attack Sirius 5 times or 4 seconds chase before regaining control. Swapped ally hero loses buff.

Note: With that cooldown, the number of allies you can buff is 2/3/4 per level.

Feel free to edit it =)

Give me some time on your skill 1... need to think and sleepy... Skill 3 can stay as i believe its your hero signature.

Sorry taking time so long to revise. I've take your ultimate idea to be his second skill. So how? is it good enough??

12-30-2010, 08:28 PM	#2
SECXIIKILLA Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Over there.....you see it? NO! OVER THERE! OGMOGGMOGM CAN'T YOU SEE IT?!? Posts: 5,853	Re: Sirius, the Templar 3rd skill is too much slarky. btw im doing bg sory for ur hero right now. __________________ Signature Anime I Claimed Credits to hotSnow for the awesome sigpic! Want a good laugh? Have a look at this: Quotes Portfolio 2.0 Oh, and I'm a dude btw, so fuck off. Credits to Subway for my Santa Avatar! Beta Key Draw! Free Beta Key Giveaway Here!

12-30-2010, 08:48 PM	#3
SECXIIKILLA Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Over there.....you see it? NO! OVER THERE! OGMOGGMOGM CAN'T YOU SEE IT?!? Posts: 5,853	Re: Sirius, the Templar 1st skill: Not really imba at first, but when he gets really buff with STR items and steals stats, it will be ultra imba. Nerf the stun duration. It's unique, but it's a bit too imba. 2nd skill: Heal is too low, increase percentage. 1%/2%/3%/4% maybe. 3rd skill: As I said before, it is too Slarky. This is just essence shift in STR form. I like how they have to attack to steal stats, not the other way around. But it is very unoriginal. Ult: This is like Berserker's Call from Axe, dude. Again an unoriginal skill. The nice part is that it doesn't add armor like Call does, but adds an attack reduction. Overall, the first 2 skills were nice and original but the last two are just Slark's and Axe's bread and butter skills. But really good synergy with the STR steal and Stun though. __________________ Signature Anime I Claimed Credits to hotSnow for the awesome sigpic! Want a good laugh? Have a look at this: Quotes Portfolio 2.0 Oh, and I'm a dude btw, so fuck off. Credits to Subway for my Santa Avatar! Beta Key Draw! Free Beta Key Giveaway Here!

12-31-2010, 07:32 AM	#7
kitchen Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 2,537 Blog Entries: 1	Re: Sirius, the Templar Imo you should really fill out the "hero introduction" part. It's probably the most important of all. As for other comments, I'll say that the stat passive is overpowered if only because of the numbers. Level 1, he gets 76hp every time a hero attacks him which basically makes him immune to attacks. I know this is a number thing but it's a bit ridiculous. To fix this, perhaps the amount of STR should scale, rather than the duration. The ult is pretty cool __________________

12-31-2010, 01:42 PM	#17
SECXIIKILLA Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: Over there.....you see it? NO! OVER THERE! OGMOGGMOGM CAN'T YOU SEE IT?!? Posts: 5,853	Re: Sirius, the Templar Wait....what if Slark attacks him? How is that? Who steals that stats? O.o __________________ Signature Anime I Claimed Credits to hotSnow for the awesome sigpic! Want a good laugh? Have a look at this: Quotes Portfolio 2.0 Oh, and I'm a dude btw, so fuck off. Credits to Subway for my Santa Avatar! Beta Key Draw! Free Beta Key Giveaway Here!