Complete The Hero XV

[Lotus V Eater]

anyone in needs of a review? i feel really boring right now. wanna kill some times.

p/s: i don't review the one that i edi reviewed... hahaha

[Antonius_Block]

[QUOTE=SECXIIKILLA;2099325]

1st skill: A new unique stun. I like.
Thx!!
2nd skill: This is a good buffing skill. But is there a chance to apply the buffs? I didn't see.
You will get a buff for sure, but there's a chance to get BOTH buffs.
3rd skill: Just your average put-abuff on an enemy. Nothing really special. But good syenrgy IMO.
Thx!
ultimate; How long is DPS? you only put the damage, not the duration.
DPS is for as long as it is toggled on, that's why 36 damage is tops. Ther's also another toggle on ulti... did you read that one? What do you think about it?
It's a good hero!Thx!

Thx for your review!

[Antonius_Block]

P_L[Maniac] plz take a look at my hero I've changed many things...

[dreamcatcher0]

Originally Posted by P_L[Maniac]

p/s: i don't review the one that i edi reviewed... hahaha

[Antonius_Block]

Yeah, I just though I should try

[Lotus V Eater]

hahaha...nice try...i edi read the review about your new remake hero...nothing really amused me though....XD

maybe just change your current 2nd skill icon. the color doesn't that match...

[Antonius_Block]

^Thx for the suggestion, I will look for a more fitting one

[Naumnaum]

Can someone review mine entry? And I got the bonus challenge?

[manafusion]

nope. i even felt that you dont actually cleared the primary challenge... but you did, with the minimum of 2 chance-based skill.

[Naumnaum]

@rafiik about Baluzar.
I didn't understand right or Viciousness don't have any cost like mana/sec or something like that, is like getting +25 stats on lv3 and plus ms/as? Something like traxex ultimate? And it recalculate every time u got a buff or only when toogled?

[gamerinboxers]

Hmm... i can't PM moderator... Help for registration?

The following link is my previous hero suggestion.
http://www.playdota.com/forums/38818...h/#post2013845

[Kouganei]

http://www.playdota.com/forums/40033...v/#post2092758 fap

MOD DOES MY ENTRY CLEAR ALL CHALLENGES?

[dreamcatcher0]

Originally Posted by Tezca Tlipoca

http://www.playdota.com/forums/40033...v/#post2092758 fap

MOD DOES MY ENTRY CLEAR ALL CHALLENGES?

I wanna ask this too if all my skill fulfilled the primary challenge and if my entry really fulfilled 2 bonus challenges

[Antonius_Block]

Originally Posted by Naumnaum

@rafiik about Baluzar.
I didn't understand right or Viciousness don't have any cost like mana/sec or something like that, is like getting +25 stats on lv3 and plus ms/as? Something like traxex ultimate? And it recalculate every time u got a buff or only when toogled?

Viciosness doesn't cost mana/sec, it gives you a random amount of agi and ms/as for each buff you have. It also deels DPS to enemy heroes in an area. It recalculates everytime you or enemy heroes get buffs.

[manafusion]

Originally Posted by dreamcatcher0

I wanna ask this too if all my skill fulfilled the primary challenge and if my entry really fulfilled 2 bonus challenges

you fufilled the minimum requirement of 2 chance-based skill... your accuracy and arrow shower are the ones.

fyi, you dont need to ask. PLEASE go back to the first post and read on the minimum requirement. the WHOLE thing. it is stated there.

[SimplyCrazy]

added some more spells and need better icon for 2nd spell. maybe someone want to check it out? ill try to counter-review ofc

[Nevfigalo]

Originally Posted by SimplyCrazy

maybe someone want to check it out? ill try to counter-review ofc

Sure.

1. Model
Well, model isn't the best (too similar to venge), but I really like your iconset. Purple is making me calm.

2. Intolerance
I am intolerant of skills which are automatically levelled at level 1. DotA doesn't need it. Heal/Self Damage is not amazing in any way.

3. Throwing Blade
Skill based on distance. Low missile speed, low damage, medicore effects and long cooldown. I would buff it somehow.

4. Vanish
Temporary ms and evasion buff... Transparency in this case is not helping at all. This skill is just boring and underpowered.

5. Shadow Master
<100% chance for dust be bought by enemies>
Wait... it is 3rd skill in the row which is underpowered...
This skill is not bad, I like the concept, but 2 seconds of invi is too weak.

6. Ultimate
Single target damage. Well made nuke, except "miss" part. Seriously, remove that self-damage. I know you wanted to fulfil bonus challenge, but in this case it will make whole skill broken due to its unreliability. Nobody would pick something like this.

7. Overall
Ganker. You write that your hero is a ganker.
I don't find enough ganking potential. 3rd skill is useless in ganking, second provides ms buff. Ulti is a solid nuke and 1st skill has some kind of slow... but there are much better gankers in game.

Your hero has some potential.
I would suggest you mixing 2nd and 3rd skill into one. <triggering on damage taken>
Give her also some kind of disable. Tweak 1st and 4th skill (add Intolerance effect to ulti?).

Good luck.

[SECXIIKILLA]

REViEW MINE PLEASE! In my sig.

[SimplyCrazy]

thx very much, starting to rework...

[Antonius_Block]

Could someone review my hero? will review in return