Complete the Hero XVIII

[Denki]

HOW ABOUT YOU REVIEW THIS SO I CAN MAKE IT BETTER?

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[SECXIIKILLA]

Originally Posted by O_xD

weeee

I am open to reviews

dont copy me.

[Antonius_Block]

I've added hero introduction, background story and an in-depth explanation of challenges aimed. My entry is almost complete With maybe some balance issues.

Originally Posted by rafiiki

STILL EXCHANGING REVIEWS

[LysanderXonora]

Dear friends, you guys are lobbying for reviews a little too much to be doing anything worth doing. If your stuff is good, you wont need to beg for reviews, they will come, sometimes even necro-ed. Spend more time and review, tweaking your heroes based on feedback I and other good reviewers have given in past competitions. (eg CTH16) Dont just get a T-Down, emo, and just go do it all over again in another challenge.

[Denki]

Originally Posted by LysanderXonora

Dear friends, you guys are lobbying for reviews a little too much to be doing anything worth doing. If your stuff is good, you wont need to beg for reviews, they will come, sometimes even necro-ed. Spend more time and review, tweaking your heroes based on feedback I and other good reviewers have given in past competitions. (eg CTH16) Dont just get a T-Down, emo, and just go do it all over again in another challenge.

Google translate much?

Anyways, I asked for a review just this instance, obviously because this is my first time EVER to create a hero suggestion, let alone join CTH (I even mentioned that little bit of trivia on my post). So maybe I thought wiseguys like you could cut me a little slack, but I guess not.

[Antonius_Block]

Originally Posted by LysanderXonora

Dear friends, you guys are lobbying for reviews a little too much to be doing anything worth doing. If your stuff is good, you wont need to beg for reviews, they will come, sometimes even necro-ed. Spend more time and review, tweaking your heroes based on feedback I and other good reviewers have given in past competitions. (eg CTH16) Dont just get a T-Down, emo, and just go do it all over again in another challenge.

I think we all want early reviews to try and improve our heroes. You see, there are some of us who can't make a perfect hero out of nothing, so we need to constatly improve it, and I don't see it that bad that contestants help each other...

Oh, and I forgot:

Originally Posted by rafiiki

STILL EXCHANGING REVIEWS

[Strutter]

To Rafiiki -
Thanks for the review back. As you can see, I've reworked my hero and included some of your suggestions. I do disagree with a couple of the things you mentioned. First of all, the synergy with the first two skills is fairly obvious to me. You knockback units with ram, and if they had Trip cast on them, they all become stunned because they pass the range, giving you plenty of time to fight one-on-one. The old ultimate was Tiny's passive? I thought it was a blend of backtrack and new effects, but I changed it anyway. I guess now you could say "Oh it's just like Huskar's passive but defensive" You can say that about any skill though. Nothing will be 100% unique. Everything will have something in common with something else in DOTA. And while I agree that your hero should have a "niche" (which can be a mechanic or unique skill) to build around, I don't think every single skill necesarily has to be built around that one thing.

[Klagger]

http://www.playdota.com/forums/48929...i/#post2582718

Can someone review mine ??Change all those skills.

[KyonoRocks]

Finished the numbers for Virgo's skills. Apart from stats she's now pretty much ready. Any feedback would be lovely, I'll return the favour.

Virgo, the Celestial Warden

[menage0a0trois]

Originally Posted by KyonoRocks

Finished the numbers for Virgo's skills. Apart from stats she's now pretty much ready. Any feedback would be lovely, I'll return the favour.

Virgo, the Celestial Warden

Scales of Justice

Shouldn't it have an icon like or something?

Anyway, it's okay but I think it needs a bit of a nerf. Maybe use current mp/hp rather than max? or simply lower the numbers?

Neverending Judgement

How is this Support? it only affects Virgo.

Second, I think this needs a nerf too. Maybe just keep the heal a constant 20-25%?

Also, what's with the high casting range? again, it only affects Virgo, who is a melee unit.

Celestial Embrace

An interesting concept.

Parting Gift

Yes, I do believe it is codeable to calculate damage taken by Virgo even when she is protected by Neverending Judgement.

As for stats and stuff, you could just straight out copy Mercurial's stats only with a bit less agility and a bit more intelligence(since your hero is mana intensive) or maybe Phantom Lancer.

[FallinDevast]

Primary Challenge - Taurus (yes, I'm a Taurus myself)
Bonus Challenge 1 - Raigor Stonehoof

Talos represents my zodiac, the Taurus, depicting its immense strength and frame, stubbornness, fickle and normally composed nature but is extremely volatile. His lore and background story hint his eons of slumber, this inanimate state captures Talos' and Taurus' placid aspect but is awoken in the midst of a crisis and so resumes his warmongering. His abilities deal hefty damage, a display of his immense power and he is most often seen charging into battle, knocking obstacles in his way which proves his unstoppable and stubborn nature.

The war golem is the closest unused model I could use to embody Taurus, it appears physically strong and its huge frame and pair of horns further accentuate the beast I am associating it with. The next closest candidate is the Orc Grunt but because orcs display intelligence, this sapient unit is at odds with Taurus' animalistic behavior.

I based Talos from Raigor's style of play, since firstly, both of them are attributed to bovines and the Earthshaker greatly benefits from Veil of Discord which fulfills the next bonus challenge. Veil of Discord is a core item since Talos is a tanker and a nuker at the same time, VoD's bonus armor and Hp regen further mitigate the damage converted thru Cogs of War and the bonus INT provided allow the Brazen Bull to consecutively cast Hulk Smash! and finally, Discord, cuts enemies' magic resistances rendering them defenseless from Talos' barrage of magic damage especially his ultimate, Outrage.

Here's a rundown:

Talos	Raigor	Veil of Discord
		VoD's bonus INT encourages the successive use of Hulk Smash! and Discord amplifies the damage dealt
		VoD's bonus armor and Hp regen help in the damage mitigation mechanism
		VoD's Discord spells destruction to enemies hit by Outrage, the more foes affected - the bigger the damage dealt akin to Echo Slam's concept

Brazen Bull
Talos

Etymology






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MoveStopHold PositionAttack
PatrolAttribute BonusHero Abilities
Bull RushHulk Smash!Cogs of WarOutrage

• Information
• Advance Statistics
• Synergy
• X

Talos in essence is played like Raigor for his last three abilities reflect the latter's own. He is a good initiator with Bull Rush because allies following him are granted zero collision, provided they walk the path he did. Hulk Smash! is Talos' staple and anchor skill, all his other abilities either boost its damage potential or provide a good set up (Bull Rush isolates your target and Outrage kills the lesser creeps to optimize Hulk Smash!'s damage). Cogs of war transform Talos into a mobile tank, soaking and mitigating damage from enemies. Lastly, Outrage gives him "that" destructive AoE ability which works so well when cast in the middle of a big clump of a pushing army and scales to late game, Frenzy also acts as a pseudo-disable.



Lore:
In an age when the world was at its infancy, the elements clashed for dominance over the elemental plane. To impede the ensuing turmoil, the Titans intervened and fashioned the machina to sever the discord. Twelve such constructs, likened to the twelve zodiacs that lit the primordial skies, sprung to action and sealed the elemental warlords into oblivion, ending the conflict. The victorious twelve parted into four groups representing each element to retain balance and sealed themselves away until the drums of war beckon them to rise again. Eons later, one fateful encounter involving a young tauren shaman unearthed an earth machina and so another chapter unfolds..

Background Story:
Fashioned by the Titans from the image of the celestial bull, Talos is a dauntless automaton engineered to wreak havok. He depict the earth's sudden violent outbursts, proving this unpredictable war machine is not to be trifled with for when aggravated, Talos channels his fury into one mighty blow followed up by another should he witness his adversaries succumb to his might. Run by an internal clockwork which tick periodically to mitigate external damage received into lapses and power his legs to shape the landscape in his wake. With Talos, escape is deemed futile, for he will chase you down unhindered so enemies are left with no choice but to raise their arms against him. He managed to establish a shaky allegiance with the Sentinels, courtesy of a young tauren who awakened him from eons of slumber but even so, he got worked up upon learning that the world is once again being rocked by war.

Skill Synergies:


Bull Rush synergizes with itself in ganking purposes; chase down your target enemy hero to hurl it back towards pursuing allies who are unhindered by trees and terrain because of the ditch trail.


Hulk Smash! refreshes its own cooldown upon killing an enemy, so you can basically cast this twice or even thrice against a clump of creeps, letting you farm easy and fast.


Cogs of War taunts enemies to attack you, but you need no worry since it also mitigates the damage received by Talos.


Isolate your target from the enemy group to optimize the damage from Hulk Smash!.


Cogs of War converts the periodic Hp cost of Bull Rush into dps, also since Talos will usually initiate with Bull Rush, the tanking prowess and taunt mechanic provided by Cogs of War aids you and your team.


Bull Rush is ideal for initiating in case you don't have dagger, your goal would be similar to Raigor suddenly appearing in a large group of enemies to unleash his ultimate, which in Talos' case is also devastating.


Hulk Smash! and Cogs of War really go well together. Cogs of War transforms burst damage into multiple instances of damage, increasing Hulk Smash!'s potency and its taunt mechanic allows a successive cast of Hulk Smash to be equally devastating.


Outrage rids the lesser creeps to concentrate all of Hulk Smash!'s damage into your primary target.


Outrage's Frenzy debuff and Cogs of War's taunt mechanic allow Talos to keep the enemies' focus on him, giving an opening for his allies to do their thing unhindered.


Frenzy and taunt work together to aid in the fast damage accumulation of Hulk Smash!.

• Bull Rush
• Hulk Smash!
• Cogs of War
• Outrage

Bull Rush - (Chase/Escape/Displace)



Notes:

• Damage type: magic
• Duration refers to the ditch's lifetime
• Toggleable, Talos can manually end the charge
• Talos and his allies can freely enter and exit the ditch
• On activation, Talos loses the ability to attack and suffers a turn rate reduction of 90 degrees per second

Hulk Smash! - (Nuke/Farm)



Notes:

• Damage type: magic
• Damage instance counter is reset after landing Hulk Smash!
• Any unit cannot take no more than 400 damage from this ability
• Final damage is calculated upon "initiating the next attack" meaning all damage instances received after casting this ability is accounted for

Cogs of War - (Tank/Disable)



Notes:

• Cooldown refers to the taunt mechanism
• Magic immune units are not forced to attack Talos
• n* denotes damage conversion duration
• n** denotes taunt duration

Outrage - (Nuke/Debuff)



Frenzy

Notes:

• Damage type: magic
• Magic immune units are not affected
• Does not damage self and allies, only foes
• n* corresponds to the spell's area of effect
• n** corresponds to the AoE of the generated shockwaves
• Framework would be each enemy affected by the skill releases a single instance nova tinted red
• Frenzy is like a pseudo-taunt, the affected unit is taunted to attack its next target for three hits and cannot disengage

[Klagger]

http://www.playdota.com/forums/48929...i/#post2582718

Can someone review mine ?? I sure will review back yours ^^

[menage0a0trois]

Originally Posted by Klagger

http://www.playdota.com/forums/48929...i/#post2582718

Can someone review mine ?? I sure will review back yours ^^

Fire Soul

What do the (*) and (**) mean? Duration has (*) at 4 and effects has it at 1.

Zodiac set

"Incoming 5 damage source is counted as magic damage" So does it deal magic damage? turn convert the damage taken by the hero into magic damage? What?

"5seconds/6seconds" What?

"Water element:Amplies 14%magic damage" and "Air element:Remove 20% base magic resistance" are redundant.

Also, "• The magic resistance reduction is actually a 6% / 14% / 20% / 26% amplification of magical damage." so "Remove 20% base magic resistance" actually means 26% amplification of magical damage.

Mastery fire

"Increase the power of each skills" but it only increases Fire Soul.

Leo battle style

Can't comment. Too many questions about the first 3 skills.

Overall:

Why are you still using "[hero]" when you already have a Leoter as his name? You have a lot of spacing issues in your descriptions. Other than that, I can't really comment because there are too many things I don't understand about his skills.

[Klagger]

Originally Posted by menage0a0trois

Fire Soul

What do the (*) and (**) mean? Duration has (*) at 4 and effects has it at 1.

(*) mean the fire barrier lasts. (**) the burn damage damage lasts.
Zodiac set

"Incoming 5 damage source is counted as magic damage" So does it deal magic damage? turn convert the damage taken by the hero into magic damage? What?
Yes !!

"5seconds/6seconds" What?
Wrote wrong sorry...3seconds use to search the area while the effects lasts for 6seconds.
"Water element:Amplies 14%magic damage" and "Air element:Remove 20% base magic resistance" are redundant.
OIC...i will change the effects later ....thx ^^
Also, "• The magic resistance reduction is actually a 6% / 14% / 20% / 26% amplification of magical damage." so "Remove 20% base magic resistance" actually means 26% amplification of magical damage.

Mastery fire

"Increase the power of each skills" but it only increases Fire Soul.

Sorry wrote wrong too...==
Leo battle style

Can't comment. Too many questions about the first 3 skills.

Overall:

Why are you still using "[hero]" when you already have a Leoter as his name? You have a lot of spacing issues in your descriptions. Other than that, I can't really comment because there are too many things I don't understand about his skills.

I think now you can comment ?? Sorry for so many misunderstanding parts
cause i rushed to finish just now...

[menage0a0trois]

Originally Posted by Klagger

I think now you can comment ?? Sorry for so many misunderstanding parts
cause i rushed to finish just now...

If '(*)' refers to the duration of fire barrier, why does "Trap 1seconds(*)" have a '(*)'?

What do you mean "Yes !!"? Yes, it simply deals magic damage like a DoT spell? Yes, it somehow converts all the damage taken by the hero into magic damage?

And again, why are you still using "[hero]" when you already have a Leoter as his name?

No, I can't comment. Reading your suggestion leaves me confused. I can't tell what his role is suppose to be. I can't see how his skills work in a combo.

[Klagger]

^ Really ?? So sorry about that ... i will re-do some description...nvm and sorry about that ...i will review your hero tmr ^^

[SECXIIKILLA]

Denki:

Model:

Hero Icon:

Stats: Idk why he's agility when he's a spellcaster. But ok whatever.

Damn. I looked at the bstory and I was like: Mind. Fucking. Blown. Good job!


Bolt: Hmm, okay. I see the synergy with celestial sphere. This hero is also very teamfight dependant eh? So if an enemy hero collides with an allied hero, will both get stunned or only the enemy? Damage and knockback scaling look pretty well. Gj

Sphere: Okay, synergy with first skill, since it's a collidable unit. Increase the slow after implosion, it seems a bit weak IMO. Make it scale from 15 or 20%. Can it only implode once or can it implode multiple times? DPS looks ok, gj

Atrocity: Hello, mana-based berserker's blood w/o damage! You should increase the stacks to 9 or something, since he has low damage and attack speed would really contribute. Also, since he's a ganker type hero, he really needs to move faster, since he might be one of the first targets in a teamfight. Other than that, it scales good and it has good synergy with the rest of your spells. gj!

Equinox: I like this skill, it makes your hero even more of a team ganker. good skill. nothing needs to be changed here.



To everyone: Improve your english. I will tell yuo now that Lysander will judge you on that, a bit. Seriously, I see some heroes with improper English. Ask around. We won't bite. It will improve your score if you have better English. Juss sayin.

[GenocYda]

No review for me? How sad!

[js_striker]

Work in progress. Still need to add icons/images and clean up the post a little but it's pretty much done skill-wise.

My hero's chosen constellation is Virgo, with a dash of Libra added in.

Having a Night Elf Priestess background, she is related by proxy to both Luna Moon Fang and Miriana Nightshade, the two sentinel heroes that wield the power of Elune.

The Veil of Discord would be a core item for this hero given the fact that she can deal magic damage on a consistent basis from multiple sources. Even though she has her own magic-damage increasing mechanisms, the Veil of Discord would compliment these perfectly either by using them in tandem or serving as an alternative for when they are in cooldown.

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Celestial Guardian
Astraea Nightstar

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MoveStopHold PositionAttack
PatrolAttribute BonusHero Abilities
[img][/img]Celestial Wrath[img][/img]Celestial Flame[img][/img]Celestial Maiden[img][/img]Celestial Attunement

• Information
• Advance Statistics
• Test Map
• Changelog
• Credits

The best way to describe the Celestial Guardian would be a "Magic Damage Spam Machine".

Both her direct damage spells deal low damage, have a low manacost and a short cooldown. Her summon, Celestial Maiden, deals magic damage as well. It also has it's own set of abilities that can increase the magical damage inflicted on a target.

All these little sources of magic damage can add up quickly. However, this steady stream of magical damage can become a flood when the Celestial Guardian activates her Ultimate: Celestial Attunement. For its duration, each one of her spells power up each other exponentially with disastrous results for her opponents.


Like many night elves before her, Astraea Nightstar began her training as a young novice at the Temple of the Moon. However, unlike her fellow Sentinel warriors Luna Moonfang and Mirana Nightshade, she chose to focus her studies on the lesser known aspects of the night sky, instead of Elune. Now, armed with the powers of the stars themselves, Astraea is able to join her bretheren in the neverending battle against the Scourge. She can call upon the magic of the constellations to burn away her enemies or take the form of a familiar spirit to aid her in battle. Also, in times of great peril, Astraea can fully attune herself to the power of her patron constellation in order to destroy her opponents under an increasingly powerful barrage of stellar fire.

Test Map : [attach]TestMap[/attach]

Made by : TestMapMaker

Changelog

• DD-MM-YYYY
  • Changelog
• DD-MM-YYYY
  • Changelog

Changelog

• DD-MM-YYYY
  • Changelog
• DD-MM-YYYY
  • Changelog

Credits

• NoThlnG - Making the Template
• Saguine - Making the Saguine's Hero Maker.

Celestial WrathAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Unit
Ability Hotkey : C



Notes:

• Damage Type: Magical

Celestial FlameAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: Unit
Ability Hotkey : F



Notes:

• Damage Type: Magical

Celestial MaidenAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: No target
Ability Hotkey : N



Notes:

• You can only have one Celestial Maiden summon at a time.
• (TODO: Create detailed tables for Celestial Maiden's skills/stats)
• The Celestial Maiden damage type is magical (melee).
• Judicator's Blessing: 900 AOE friendly aura that grants 2 hp regen on units with lower hp% than mana% or a .5 mana regen if their hp% is higer than the mana%.
• Judicator's Brand: Reduces the magic resistance of enemy heroes by .5% per hit to a maximum of 10% for 6 seconds.
• Judicator's Wrath: When the Celestial Maiden is destroyed, she deals magic damage to enemy units in a 600 AOE equal to 50% of her attack.
• Judicator's Seal: When the Celestial Maiden is destroyed, she reduces the magic resistance of enemy units in a 600 AOE by 10%.

Celestial AttunementAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: No target
Ability Hotkey : E



Notes:

• While under Celestial Attunement, each cast of her skills will grant her a charge of Celestial Power.
• Celestial Attunement itself grants a charge of Celestial Power.
• The Celestial Power charges stack with each other and remain active for the duration of Celestial Attunement.
• The Bonus damage over time of Celestial Flame is determined when it is placed on the target.
• The Bonus to the Celestial Maiden's Attack is applied when she is summoned.

This is actually the 4th version of this hero.

The original idea I had was a 12 constellation mess with each skill having a "Zodiac Allignment" every time it was used. The "Zodiac Alignment" of each spell would cycle in a pre-determined order so that when you had your spells aligned with the same sign, they would power each other up. Her Ultimate, "Constellation Alignment" would temporarily force all her spells to be of the same sign and stop the sign rotation.

I tried to simplify it by reducing the constellations to the four Mutable ones, but I was still unsatisfied with the results. It felt too clumsy and if it were ever to be implemented, it would've been a nightmare to code.

I was about to give it up and just try to make a non-contest hero, when I decided to give it a try with only one constellation. Virgo, the Maiden, seemed like the most fitting one for a hero with a background as a Night Elf Priestess.

Strangely enough, I had already picked out the name "Astraea" (sounds like "Estrella" which means "Star" in spanish) while unaware of its connection to the Virgo constellation. What are the odds, huh?

At the moment, I feel pretty comfortable with the current concept and skill set. Regardless of if I actually win this competition or somehow get this hero added to the roster (the dream of any contestant of a CTH challenge I figure), Its been fun.

[gamerinboxers]

This will be my entry for CTH XVIII.
Hope you enjoy it. =)

• Hero Introduction
• Attributes
• Skills
• Synergy

• Hero Model
• Introduction
• Background Story
  

Centuar Astronomer Hylonome

This is my hero entry for CTH XVIII. My chosen constellation will be Sagittarius.

As for the bonus challenge, my take is that this is the sister of Bradwarden, and one of the skill has a resemblance to the original one. In addition, Veil of Discord can be used to enhance damage dealt by Skill 2.

Skill 1 is one of the signature of this hero. It allows the hero to chase and attack at the same time.
Skill 2 is version 2 of Hoof Stomp, which requires the hero use her kinetic energy from gallop to perform it.
Skill 3 is nice orb passive that gains MS base on enemies' movement!
Ulti will introduce chaos damage back into the game of DotA! Woooot!

Thanks for reading! Enjoy!

Despite sharing the same bloodline as Bradwarden, Hylonome always felt like she was a different breed from her brother. When the female's centuar was young, her heart has been filled with love for her freedom, also often staring and chasing after the stars. Her infatuation for the Archer's Constellation grew without bound and Hylonome found herself with more knowledge about the astronomical sign. Becoming the first Centuar Astronomer in her tribe and with the coming of age, she nows supports along side with her courageous brother in the heat of the battle with her astronomically-enhanced bow and arrows, her speed and skills taught to her from Bradwarden.

• Statistics
• Advanced Statistics
  

Strength Agility Intelligence 26 + 2.6 18 + 1.9 18 + 1.7

Starting HP/MP: 644/234 Base Stats: 62 Stats Gain: 6.2 Primary Role: Chaser/Semi-Tank

Affiliation:	Sentinel		Attack Animation:	0.5 / 0.3
Damage:	48-56		Casting Animation:	0.001 / 0.51
Armor:	1.2		Base Attack Time:	0.2
Movespeed:	300		Missile Speed:	0.3
Attack Range:	550		Sight Range:	1800 / 600

• Gatling Trot
• Hoof Gallop
• Euphoric Chase
• Archer’s Constellation
  

Type: Active Targeting: Enemy Hotkey: T

With her frequent hunting trips in the wild, Hylonome is able to concentrate her aim on her prey while moving.

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	75	14	600	0	4.5	For every 450 distance traveled, an attack will be fired at target.
2	80	14	600	0	5.0	For every 410 distance traveled, an attack will be fired at target.
3	85	14	600	0	5.5	For every 370 distance traveled, an attack will be fired at target.
4	90	14	600	0	6.0	For every 330 distance traveled, an attack will be fired at target.

• Must be in hero’s attack range for spell to proc.
• The spell damage are basic hero attacks.

Type: Active Targeting: Self Hotkey: G

As the sister of the great centaur warchief, Bradwarden, Hylonome was tutored to perform the Hoof Stomp. However, due to her smaller built, Hylonome was not able to perform a full execution. However, by adding her galloping capability into the equation, she created the Hoof Gallop.

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	100	18	0	235	8	For every 3 seconds of movement, an AoE Stun is released. Damages for 35 and Knockbacks for 40 units.
2	110	18	0	235	9	For every 3 seconds of movement, an AoE Stun is released. Damages for 55 and Knockbacks for 50 units.
3	120	18	0	235	10	For every 3 seconds of movement, an AoE Stun is released. Damages for 70 and Knockbacks for 60 units.
4	130	18	0	235	11	For every 3 seconds of movement, an AoE Stun is released. Damages for 90 and Knockbacks for 70 units.

• Timer resets once Hylonome stops moving.
• Total potential damage at lvl 4 = 90 *3 = 270.

Type: Passive Targeting: Enemy Hotkey: -

With the freedom of the wind in her hair, Hylonome enjoys the feeling of the chase. Once she has attacked her fleeing target, Hylonome will use her mighty legs to catch up. (Orb Effect)

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	0	0	0	0	4	Gains 0.8% * total distance traveled by target as MS per attack. Last 4 seconds.
2	0	0	0	0	4	Gains 1.2% * total distance traveled by target as MS per attack. Last 4 seconds.
3	0	0	0	0	4	Gains 1.6% * total distance traveled by target as MS per attack. Last 4 seconds.
4	0	0	0	0	4	Gains 2.0% * total distance traveled by target as MS per attack. Last 4 seconds.

• Works like Blood Seeker's Ulti, but the effect provides Hylonome with MS gain.
• MS gain is stackable per attack.
• If target is not moving, no MS gain.
• The MS gain is base on the movement of target affected with the orb effect during duration.

Type: Active Targeting: Self Hotkey: R

Calling on the powers of the constellations of the archer, Hylonome’s bow and arrow draws the ability to pierce through armor and brightly mark her target.

	Mana	Cooldown	Range	AoE	Duration	Effects
1	140	60	0	0	8	Attacks resembles a shooting star and become 75% chaos damage. Gains vision and visibility of attacked target for 3 seconds. MS increase by 20.
2	200	60	0	0	12	Attacks resembles a shooting star and become 85% chaos damage. Gains vision and visibility of attacked target for 5 seconds. MS increase by 40.
3	280	60	0	0	16	Attacks resembles a shooting star and become 95% chaos damage. Gains vision and visibility of attacked target for 7 seconds. MS increase by 60.

• Invinsible units marked with debuff will be revealed for duration.
• Note 2.

• Skill Synergy
• Hero Synergy
• Item Synergy
  

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Set a target using skill 1 and bluff self with skill 2, start running towards target!

+
Skill 3 will increse MS base on distance by target, and hence increase the number of time skill 1 will fire. Skill 1, counted as a normal attack, will in turn boost hero more with skill 3.

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Use the speed in skill 3 to chase targets into AoE of skill 2. When stun procs, hero is able to attack as much as possible to have MS gain again.

+ +
Shoot, Chase, Stun, MS Boost, Shoot, Chase, Stun, MS Boost................

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Chaos damage will be added to Skill 1. The lock-on skill also helps with any invinisble hero from escaping skill 1.

+
Perform stuns and attack the target with chaos damage without losing sight of it.

+
Improved chase and damage output! Ouch!

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As for the bonus challenge, my take is that the hero suggestion will be the sister of Bradwarden, Centaur Warchief. In additional, I've tried to design a skill that has some resemblance to what Bradwarden is using. See Hoof Gallop. =)

In addition, Veil of Discord can be used to enhance damage dealt by Skill 2, which is an AoE nuke.