[SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order

Lord_Talron · 08-10-2011, 06:43 AM

Titan of the Order
Mandevar

Intro here

A legend from the early days of the War; Mandevar killed many of the Scourge's greatest warriors, often against impossible odds. Unfortunately he was finally struck down in the last battle of those days. His parts were collected by the Sentinel to try to rebuild, however, they did not possess the skill with which to rebuild him. Until Boush came along, that is. Now once again, Mandevar rages into the midst of the enemy; his mechanical might unmatched, his metal body virtually impenetrable.

Strength: 34 + [3]

Agility: 13 + [1.2]

Intelligence: 16 + [1]

Affiliation:	Sentinel
Damage:	58-65
Armor:	1
Movespeed:	270
Starting HP/MP:	796/208
Attack Range:	128 (melee)

Pummel

Type: Active
Targeting: Target
Hotkey: E
Using his giant fist, the Titan smashes the targeted unit to deal the target damage and splash damage to surrounding units.

Lvl Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 110 10 seconds 150 285 N/A deals 25+25% str target damage, 10+25% str splash damage
2 120 10 seconds 150 295 N/A deals 50+35% str target damage, 25+35% str splash damage
3 130 10 seconds 150 305 N/A deals 75+45% str target damage, 75+45% str splash damage
4 140 10 seconds 150 315 N/A deals 100+55% str target damage, 125+55% str splash damage

Notes:
Splash damage affects main target.

Bullrush

Type: Active
Targeting: Aoe
Hotkey: R
Gears grinding in protest, Mandevar charges towards his enemies at an incredible speed. Due to the Titan's magnetic nature, any nearby enemies will be dragged along. Upon reaching his destination, Mandevar slams the ground, dealing damage and stunning depending on how many enemies are nearby.

Lvl Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 120 15 seconds 400 175*/315** .25 second stun + .25 per enemy Mandevar runs at current ms +40, deals 145 damage upon reaching destination
2 130 15 seconds 500 175*/315** .50 second stun + .25 per enemy Mandevar runs at current ms +60, deals 185 damage upon reaching destination
3 140 15 seconds 600 175*/315** .75 second stun + .25 per enemy Mandevar runs at current ms +80, deals 205 damage upon reaching destination
4 150 15 seconds 700 175*/315** 1 second stun + .25 per enemy Mandevar runs at current ms +100, deals 225 damage upon reaching destination

Notes:
Spell uses triggered movement, so Mandevar can move over 522 ms with this spell.

(*)Unit grab aoe.

(**)Damage/stun/stun count aoe.

Units grabbed will get dragged 150/200/250/300 units.

Resonate

Type: Passive
Targeting: Aoe
Hotkey: N
Whenever the Titan is damaged, his armor resonates sending minor damage in a small area around him.

Lvl Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 N/A N/A N/A 500 N/A 8
2 N/A N/A N/A 500 N/A 15
3 N/A N/A N/A 500 N/A 22
4 N/A N/A N/A 500 N/A 29

Notes:
Damage type is pure.

Resonate deals damage whenever ANY damage is taken.

Tremorsteps

Type: Passive/Toggle
Targeting: Aoe
Hotkey: T
The Titan's massive steps cause violent tremors that, when combined with his unknown magnetic capabilities, can cause enemies to be moved either towards him or away from him. When Mandevar casts a spell or moves a certain number of units, all nearby enemies will be moved depending on how the spell is toggled.

Lvl Mana Cooldown Range AoE Duration Effects
1 N/A 5 seconds N/A 700 0.8 seconds/0.7 seconds Every spell cast moves nearby enemies 200 units, every 800 units traveled moves nearby enemies 100 units
2 N/A 5 seconds N.A 800 0.9 seconds/0.7 seconds Every spell cast moves nearby enemies 300 units, every 600 units traveled moves nearby enemies 100 units
3 N/A 5 seconds N/A 900 1 second/0.7 seconds Every spell cast moves nearby enemies 400 units, every 400 units traveled moves nearby enemies 100 units

Notes:
Toggling this skill reverses the direction that enemies get moved. if toggled "on" they will move towards the titan as described. if toggled "off" they will move away from him as described.

Based on the distance the affected unit moves, it takes 0.7/0.8/0.9/1 second to move the full distance.

Does not break channeling and does not prevent any action besides movement.

The cooldown is only for toggling between "on" and "off".

Toggling this skill does not make units move.

Unlocks subskill: Magnetism

Mono · 08-11-2011, 02:48 AM

Pummel - nothing to say, classic titan and it fits

Bullrush - a little too much like mag's skewer? Though I suppose the unlimited units and target make it different enough. Obviously this is his most important spell besides the ultimate. Maybe it isn't necessary for him to run forward, maybe it should be a straight blink with increasing cast range (600/700/800/900) that picks up anyone that was in that path.

Resonate - kind of like dispersion but with a defined, pure damage. seems like it could get really powerful with a lot of creeps around or against low dmg / high attack speed heroes.

Tremorsteps - I like it, force everyone into the aoe of resonate and set up bullrush / pummel.
There may be a few problems, such as only having 2 spells to cast. If he has to cast those to bring them in, then they'll be on cooldown when he wants them the most - maybe the walking should bring them closer.
The other issue is that if you are trying to run away, you'll be pulling in enemies and helping them catch up? maybe not an issue depending on how it pulls them, but this could be solved by making the skill toggleable

overall, i like this hero because it is simple yet effective, something most new heroes seem to be lacking.

Lord_Talron · 08-13-2011, 07:53 PM

added some changes, tell me what you think

su_ · 08-13-2011, 07:58 PM

i miss this model from roc dota lol

One.More.Game. · 08-14-2011, 01:15 PM

Ahhh, brings back good old memories when I was a kid.

First hero I actually used.

A small review dedicated to you!
1st Skill: Now I understand why his STR is so high. Good Skill and synergies could be found with other skills.
2nd Skill: To make it an even better challenge, why not make it non-targetable? It could add more thrill to his gameplay, but, neat skill.
3rd Skill: Somewhat like Spec's Dispersion. Only with a set amount of damage, right?
Ulti: Like the concept, so you gain some form of "charges" for every spell cast and every x unis traveled?

Also, please change the "mysterious" parts in the skills, it's sounding too much like magnus

That's All!

damn internet keeps on making me double post

Lord_Talron · 08-14-2011, 03:20 PM

you dont gain charges. they just move when you cast a spell or move the required distance

Mono · 08-15-2011, 03:51 AM

love the toggle with ult
sub-skill seems good as well, not too powerful by any means and really useful for getting closer as it is a spell and pulls them in, makes it so you don't have to use your damaging spells too early.

still conflicted about how bloodrush works
and also possibly think resonate might be too powerful

Antonius_Block · 08-19-2011, 05:50 AM

Okay, a few things:

1st is like Lich's Frost Nova, only with some numbers tweaking. It seems really weak at first place, with that mana cost and that damage. Not very original actually.

2nd instantly reminded me of Magnu's Skill. It's too similar and you don't use the positioning for initating or anything so this one's a no-no.

3rd... The only real trouble this hero brings is his ultimate, I guess... and you won't be focused too much because I really don't see him as such a threat.

Ulti is kind of cool, but anti-synergetic also. You see, if you toggle to push enemies away and use 2nd... The skill will fail miserably... There's good potential on this skill but you should play with positioning just a bit more.

Lord_Talron · 08-21-2011, 11:39 PM

it toggles so you dont pull enemies towards you when you try to gtfo back to the base. thanks for reviewing

tiagops · 10-20-2011, 06:07 PM

Very nice

08-11-2011, 02:48 AM	#2
Mono Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 105	Re: [SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order Pummel - nothing to say, classic titan and it fits Bullrush - a little too much like mag's skewer? Though I suppose the unlimited units and target make it different enough. Obviously this is his most important spell besides the ultimate. Maybe it isn't necessary for him to run forward, maybe it should be a straight blink with increasing cast range (600/700/800/900) that picks up anyone that was in that path. Resonate - kind of like dispersion but with a defined, pure damage. seems like it could get really powerful with a lot of creeps around or against low dmg / high attack speed heroes. Tremorsteps - I like it, force everyone into the aoe of resonate and set up bullrush / pummel. There may be a few problems, such as only having 2 spells to cast. If he has to cast those to bring them in, then they'll be on cooldown when he wants them the most - maybe the walking should bring them closer. The other issue is that if you are trying to run away, you'll be pulling in enemies and helping them catch up? maybe not an issue depending on how it pulls them, but this could be solved by making the skill toggleable overall, i like this hero because it is simple yet effective, something most new heroes seem to be lacking.

08-13-2011, 07:53 PM	#3
Lord_Talron Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Not-doing-hero-reviews-requests land. Been there a while. Posts: 5,482 Blog Entries: 20	Re: [SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order added some changes, tell me what you think __________________ Current Suggestions In Progress [BUFF] Mortred: allow butterfly\Storm Spirit Aghs\ Buff KotL\Buff Troll Battle Trance Buff/remake Medusa\Doom/neutral tweak\ Check out my IN PROGRESS suggestions!

08-13-2011, 07:58 PM	#4
su_ Member Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 75	Re: [SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order i miss this model from roc dota lol

08-14-2011, 03:20 PM	#6
Lord_Talron Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Not-doing-hero-reviews-requests land. Been there a while. Posts: 5,482 Blog Entries: 20	Re: [SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order you dont gain charges. they just move when you cast a spell or move the required distance __________________ Current Suggestions In Progress [BUFF] Mortred: allow butterfly\Storm Spirit Aghs\ Buff KotL\Buff Troll Battle Trance Buff/remake Medusa\Doom/neutral tweak\ Check out my IN PROGRESS suggestions!

08-15-2011, 03:51 AM	#7
Mono Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 105	Re: [SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order love the toggle with ult sub-skill seems good as well, not too powerful by any means and really useful for getting closer as it is a spell and pulls them in, makes it so you don't have to use your damaging spells too early. still conflicted about how bloodrush works and also possibly think resonate might be too powerful

08-21-2011, 11:39 PM	#9
Lord_Talron Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Not-doing-hero-reviews-requests land. Been there a while. Posts: 5,482 Blog Entries: 20	Re: [SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order it toggles so you dont pull enemies towards you when you try to gtfo back to the base. thanks for reviewing __________________ Current Suggestions In Progress [BUFF] Mortred: allow butterfly\Storm Spirit Aghs\ Buff KotL\Buff Troll Battle Trance Buff/remake Medusa\Doom/neutral tweak\ Check out my IN PROGRESS suggestions!

10-20-2011, 06:07 PM	#10
tiagops Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Brazil, MG - Uberlândia Posts: 39	Re: [SENT-STR]Mandevar, Titan of the Order Very nice __________________ Att, -- Tiago Peres da Silva thy4go.info@gmail.com Cel.: 55 34 9906 7368