Doctor Trankide (INT - SCOURGE)

[moon_strike]

Doctor Barbosa
Master of Alchemist




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MoveStopHold PositionAttack
PatrolAttribute BonusHero Abilities
Potion of ToxinPotion TrashSilence TouchRevolution Form

• Information
• Advance Statistics
• Test Map
• Changelog
• Credits

Doctor Trankide is carry he have very potensial to be carry , even he is intelegence hero , but with some his abilities you can see how deadly him .


Doctor Trankide is a alchemist , his work in Ice Crown Citadel where the LicH King stay .

Test Map : [attach]TestMap[/attach]

Made by : TestMapMaker

Changelog

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Credits

• NoThlnG - Making the Template
• Saguine - Making the Saguine's Hero Maker.

Potion ControlAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: No target
Ability Hotkey : X



Notes:

• when under effect target cannot be control
• silent to target
• if no units at aoe skill will not working

RadiationAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: No target
Ability Hotkey : T



Notes:

• Max is -3/4.5/6/7.5 armor

Poison TouchAbility Type: Passive
Targeting Type: No target
Ability Hotkey : C



Notes:

• (*)bonus damage when on Revolution form

Revolution FormAbility Type: Active
Targeting Type: No target
Ability Hotkey : R



Notes:

• bonus attack speed will be decrease every second by 2.5/3.75/5
• 20 sec duration revolution form
• *3sec duration slow MS at radius 600 around self
• If Doctor Trankide kill enemy heroes when on Revolution Form , he will gain 1/1.5/2 attack speed bonus permanent

Changelog :

• Change skill 1 2 and 3
• change bonus on ultimate
• remove bonus damage on ultimate
• remove slow effect on ultimate

please help me to find animation of Revolution Form

[moon_strike]

please review my hero

[Name Rater]

my review.

since i like damage dealing skills these skills are very very good for me..

1st-damage is too IMBA....please make it 100/150/200/250 instead..

2nd-slow and damage....this skill is already balanced.


3rd-silence and bonus damage...not bad..

ulti-bonus +300 HP +60 damage and attack speed to self and 20% slow MS to enemy at radius self....very good....

balanced hero but still need more balancing.

[moon_strike]

thanks for review before.
i glad my hero ideas get positive comment

for ulti what ur means about "too nice"? there are something too imba or it's really balance?

---------- Post added at 06:25 PM ---------- Previous post was at 06:24 PM ----------

thanks for review before.
i glad my hero ideas get positive comment

for ulti what ur means about "too nice"? there are something too imba or it's really balance?

[Name Rater]

I like this hero because he is scourge-int

[moon_strike]

hah? why you like it as scourge - int?

[Name Rater]

I think the name alchemist of Ice Crown is weird...

[moon_strike]

i am sorry , it should be title..
i was change it

[korzon3k]

I like his animation.

[moon_strike]

i get this from some website
it's not made by me

[amMHwannaSee]

wow this is amazing gj. Keep up the good work.

[Lord_Talron]

just doin this for my own enjoyment, dont expect reviews by me to be the usual again...

first off: do you have a friend that speaks better english? its readable, but its incredibly annoying. if you have such a friend, please ask him to translate.

Potion of Toxin
ok so it deals immense damage and then heals him back a portion? cool idea, but your skillset doesnt seem to support it. such a spell indicates that you want to kill your target quickly, before the damage gets healed. nothing else in your skillset really facilitates this, from what i can tell.

also: the numbers are way out of whack. 400 initial and then 40 hp healed per second? that only puts you down to 280 damage... thats still a really good spell. what you need to do is nerf the initial damage down to like 350 or so (i guess) and increase the amount healed but increase the duration over which it heals. this will give your spell the desired powerful burst damage, while giving you that sense of urgency that you must kill the hero fast. oh and increase the cooldown, wtf!?!?!

i dont really understand your notes on this. why would the damage be decreased when skill 2 is on cooldown? to what end?


Potion Trash: this spell is basically shrapnel with a pointless situational nerf. i can see you're trying to go for some wacky, odd synergy between the first two skills, yet i see no reason for it other than trying to balance them in a really bad way.
the name kinda sums it up, trash.


Silence Touch: why does this doctor hero have a "silence touch" it doesnt seem to fit in with his other skills or with what id imagine a hero called a doctor to do and i get the idea its a spell you just wanted to have here and left your thoughts at that. its a nice idea, but it certainly doesnt seem to fit in with your other skills


Revolution Form: slows every unit nearby for 20% for the entire duration? or is that just upon transformation? isnt very clear at all. also i cant help but feeling this spell is out of place, just as a feel the rest of the hero is kinda jumbled together from several odd parts.


overall: in oder to get an overall positive review from me, you must satisfy only one criteria, but it is probably the most difficult to satisfy. Would i want to see this hero in dota? The answer is: a confident no. i would not like to see this hero in dota

and now i read its not made by you. kindly GTFO and come back with material you made yourself. dont plagiarize other peoples hard work, even if it is trash.

[moon_strike]

sorry bad english and i know that

1st skill = thanks for your comment nice idea ,,,, why i decrease damage when 2nd skill in cooldown , can you see 1st skill have 400 damage , it's really big and only 6 sec cooldown , if you use it first , you can kill enemy quickly , but the consequent is 2nd skill to be weak with only slow MS 25%, instead with 2nd skill with 75% slow MS , it's really annoying to every enemy units (you know that) , because it's really big slow , i add little damage to 1st skill ...

both skill is situational , can you feel it?

3rd skill = silence touch , why it's really need? because
1). you not have stun
2). you have ultimate that increase attack speed really potential to silence enemy with this and kill quickly
3). my synergy is when enemy on potion trash it's slow . you hit them (Revolution Form) , then maybe enemy get silence ... you hit them again .. and kill enemy

ultimate : slow just make shock therapy to every units , slow only 3 second , give u more damage and AS but consequent is your attack to be melee , and i know really hard to kill enemy with melee hero without some effect skill , so i add 2nd skill with slow , it's really help you

[kidnguyen1412]

First, change the model of ur hero, because i know there is an Ice Troll model in war3. Why? Because the title is Alchemist of Ice Crown but i cant see any frost or frozen part of the current model. About the skill, the first skill is imbalance. 280 nuke damage for 6s CD? (i have minus the heal so this is a real damage). Plz balance his CD. His ultimate seems not very fit with his skill set. Why do he need AS and melee form? He isnt a damage dealer or a carrier. Instead of AS increasing, replace it with the heal aura will be better (consider he is a supporter). And instead of changing to melee form, let just make his skill set have bonus when active his ultimate with the bonus from the current ultimate. If u cant understand what i said, it is my poor English.

[Lord_Talron]

Originally Posted by moon_strike

sorry bad english and i know that

1st skill = thanks for your comment nice idea ,,,, why i decrease damage when 2nd skill in cooldown , can you see 1st skill have 400 damage , it's really big and only 6 sec cooldown , if you use it first , you can kill enemy quickly , but the consequent is 2nd skill to be weak with only slow MS 25%, instead with 2nd skill with 75% slow MS , it's really annoying to every enemy units (you know that) , because it's really big slow , i add little damage to 1st skill ...

both skill is situational , can you feel it?

3rd skill = silence touch , why it's really need? because
1). you not have stun
2). you have ultimate that increase attack speed really potential to silence enemy with this and kill quickly
3). my synergy is when enemy on potion trash it's slow . you hit them (Revolution Form) , then maybe enemy get silence ... you hit them again .. and kill enemy

ultimate : slow just make shock therapy to every units , slow only 3 second , give u more damage and AS but consequent is your attack to be melee , and i know really hard to kill enemy with melee hero without some effect skill , so i add 2nd skill with slow , it's really help you

you dont add skills just because you "need" them. bloodseeker could really use a stun to keep his enemies from tping away, but ice doesnt just give him a stun. use your damn brain.

also: you cant explain away that pointless "synergy" between skill 1 and skill 2. if you have to have it, it means the skills are already broken or you are trying desperately to make unoriginal skills more original.

but seeing as, like you said, this isnt your hero... why not either take a crack at making your own hero suggestion or please just stay out of the hero suggestion forums if all you can do is copy other peoples hard work.

[moon_strike]

who say this isn't my hero? me? u wrong it's mine

bloodseeker already have a ability Strygwyr's Thirst , it help him to provide his another ability

my bad english maybe make our misunderstood

about synergy , if u understand my heroes , and what the point with his ability , u should know about synergy

[Name Rater]

I think that gif is already in dota....
wanna use this model:


hope you like it.

[Name Rater]

I think the name Alchemist if ice crown is weird..
wanna change it to Apprentice Sorcerer?...LOL

[moon_strike]

are u seriously?
that's funny gif lol

[kidnguyen1412]

Yeh, i think the name look weird. And doesnt fit with his skill. May be Poison Master or Toxic Witch?