[Sentinel - Int] The Illusionist

deathkidkun · 02-25-2012, 08:10 AM

Another one I've came up with.

Whyte Paladin
Illusionist

Typical squishy carry, support spellcaster except with skills used to mindrape foes. Teaches enemies to observe every freaking movement to counter this guy, and teaches players to be extra careful to stay hidden forever.

Whyte was one of the top graduates from his hometown to have mastered the art of magic in quite a short time. Specializing in illusions, he frequently plays pranks on the villagers, until a certain extent where he went out of control, severely damaging the village. He was then banished from his hometown forever. Taken in by a bandit crew, he then mastered the art of deception and trickery, eventually becoming a high-ranking villain among the lands. Sooner, the attack of the Scourge took everyone of his allies out, leaving him the only survivor. Despite having a notorious background, Whyte joined forces with the Sentinels, in order to avenge his fallen comrades.

Strength

Agility

Intelligence

15 + 1.9

24 + 2.3

26 + 2.8

Affiliation	Sentinel
Damage	46 - 59
Attack Range	550
Projectile art	Black Dragon Whelp
Attack Time	1.6
Missile Speed	600
Attack Animation	0.2 / 0.35
Casting Animation	0.4 / 0.25
Sight Range	1800/1200
Movespeed	290
Armor	1.5
HP/MP	435/338

Cloaked Fire

Ability Type	Active
Targeting Type	Unit
Hotkey	F

Whyte conceals a curse in his fire. He attacks normally to implant the curse in the target, only to have it activated a few seconds later, damaging and reducing the target's armor.

Level	Manacost	Cooldown	Casting Range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	80	15	550	N/A	3 seconds*	Enemy unit	3 seconds delay, 75 damage, -1 armor reduction.
2	100	13	550	N/A	3 seconds*	Enemy unit	3.15 seconds delay, 150 damage, -2 armor reduction.
3	120	11	550	N/A	3 seconds*	Enemy unit	3.3 seconds delay, 225 damage, -3 armor reduction.
4	140	9	550	N/A	3 seconds*	Enemy unit	3.45 seconds delay, 300 damage, -4 armor reduction.

Notes :
-*Duration of armor reduction.
-Damage type is magical.
-Casting animation and projectile art remains the same as the attack animation and attack projectile art, however the curse implanted is visible to the caster and his allies only.
-Deals damage and removes armor only after the delay.

Red Alert

Ability Type	Active
Targeting Type	Unit
Hotkey	R

Tricks the enemy by creating an illusion of dying. The target's HP will display critical life (red life) for a few seconds. During that duration, only the caster and his allies will be informed of the trickery. HP will return to normal after the duration. Any damage taken will be reduced.

Level	Manacost	Cooldown	Casting Range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	150	25	550	N/A	3.75 seconds	Enemy/Friendly heroes	Creates an illusion of red life.
2	160	25	550	N/A	4.5 seconds	Enemy/Friendly heroes	Creates an illusion of red life.
3	170	25	550	N/A	5.75 seconds	Enemy/Friendly heroes	Creates an illusion of red life.
4	180	25	550	N/A	6.5 seconds	Enemy/Friendly heroes	Creates an illusion of red life.

Notes:
-A 1.5 second delay for the target's life to go red on attack before it automatically goes red by itself.
-If the fake life should reach 0, it will remain at 1 HP.
-Caster and allies will have both their original life and fake life displayed.
-Should the target's actual HP really has depleted, it will die anyway.
-A buff will appear on the target only visible to the caster and his allies.

Feign Death

Ability Type	Active
Targeting Type	Unit
Hotkey	D

Whyte places an illusion of death. If during the duration of the spell the target was damaged, it will go invisible, having the animation of its death and HP depleting to 0 replace it. In the process of feinting, the target will block most of the damage taken.

Level	Manacost	Cooldown	Casting Range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	150	25	550	N/A	Up to 2 seconds	Friendly heroes/Self	Reduce single incoming damage by 30%
2	160	25	550	N/A	Up to 2.75 seconds	Friendly heroes/Self	Reduce single incoming damage by 40%
3	170	25	550	N/A	Up to 3.25 seconds	Friendly heroes/Self	Reduce single incoming damage by 50%
4	180	25	550	N/A	Up to 3.75 seconds	Friendly heroes/Self	Reduce single incoming damage by 60%

Notes:
-Kill message will appear in HUD. However, gold, XP and frag count will not remain unchanged.
-A few seconds after kill message appear, another message appears informing the attacker that he was tricked.
-Should the target actually die because the damage was overwhelming, a humiliating message will appear.
-A buff will appear on the target only visible to the caster and his allies.
-Target will only block the single damage and will continue to receive full damage while invisible.
-Will not trigger the feign if damage is lower than 30.

Concealment

Ability Type	Active
Targeting Type	Unit
Hotkey	C

Whyte copies the form of the target. Red Alert and Feign Death can be successfully casted while disguised, but attacking and Cloaked Fire will break the disguise. Deals x2.5 critical damage when breaking through attack. Grants Sub-Skill Feign Attack.

Level	Manacost	Cooldown	Casting Range	Area of Effect	Duration	Allowed Targets	Effects
1	325	130	1500	N/A	20 seconds	Enemy, Friendly, Neutral	Takes form of target.
2	375	80	1500	N/A	30 seconds	Enemy, Friendly, Neutral	Takes form of target.
3	425	50	1500	N/A	40 seconds	Enemy, Friendly, Neutral	Takes form of target.

Notes:
-Will not be auto attacked by enemies, friendlies or neutrals depending on the disguise.
-Gains vision of the disguised target.
-Will not be revealed on the minimap for enemies if disguised as enemy.
-Cancels casting animation for Red Alert and Feign Death.

Feign Attack

Ability Type	Active
Targeting Type	Unit
Hotkey	T

In disguised form, Whyte attacks a the designated target dealing no damage whatsoever.

Notes:
-Only can be used while disguised.
-Only can attack targets based on the disguise.
-Copies the projectile art if any. (Melee range if melee)

Subotai · 03-05-2012, 10:54 AM

Skill 1 : concept is good, however the -armor seems useless since the hero doesn't look like dps support oriented. I think another effect could be more interesting. To make it more simple, just make it an orb effect with same projectile.

Skill 2 : Instead of going red, I would suggest dealing 300ish fake damage. Concept is good

Skill 3 : Lore too similar to skill 2, even if it is very synergetic.

Ulti : nice concept as well

Overall : Nice illusions, but as a support hero this guy lacks a disable. I think you should replace the 3rd skill by a skill creating a shadow forest, with half real tree and half fake tree which you can go throught but still block vision to enemies. Allies gain vision (like sprout) and see which trees are fake (they are 75% faded).

ZipFile · 03-05-2012, 10:56 AM

I liked the red alert )

deathkidkun · 03-05-2012, 11:39 AM

I dunno, I think disable would be kind of OP for this dude, I mean basically his main role is to destroy ganks and ruin teamfights by scaring enemies and scouting using concealment as well as early game harass with the first skill.
I feel like keeping the 3rd skill mostly to save friendlies from single target powerful nukes, but your disable concept seems cool too.
Anyways thanks for suggestion and review, I'll think about it.

NIKITA13 · 03-24-2012, 04:27 PM

hi can give me a key Thanks in advance

deathkidkun · 03-25-2012, 01:04 PM

What key?

ShinImagine · 05-09-2012, 07:02 AM

nice concept but could be simplified and improved since there is little synergy.

t-up on concept. t-down to the rest.

you could make red alert into something like: making the target ally invisible while creating a n illusion of it with a random(10%<x>3%) amount but low, reddened health.

Loomdun · 05-09-2012, 09:00 AM

that would be cool if one of his abilities where 2 random effects.

the first effect being either Damages the target for X amount to 0 damage.

Then the second effect either showing there health not changing from the nuke, a lot of health missing from the nuke, or them "healing" from the nuke, and the actual results not appearing until X seconds. But has a number appear over there head for allies to tell them how much damage the nuke did.

Rangwan · 05-10-2012, 08:26 AM

Feigning death FTW!

It just make the enemy feels like wtf just happended and irritated when saw the disgusting message.

NexusBringer · 06-11-2012, 05:13 PM

fire ezalor

03-05-2012, 11:39 AM	#4
deathkidkun Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 539	Re: [Sentinel - Int] The Illusionist I dunno, I think disable would be kind of OP for this dude, I mean basically his main role is to destroy ganks and ruin teamfights by scaring enemies and scouting using concealment as well as early game harass with the first skill. I feel like keeping the 3rd skill mostly to save friendlies from single target powerful nukes, but your disable concept seems cool too. Anyways thanks for suggestion and review, I'll think about it. __________________ How bout helpin me review mine as well?

03-24-2012, 04:27 PM	#5
NIKITA13 Member Join Date: Mar 2012 Posts: 1	Re: [Sentinel - Int] The Illusionist hi can give me a key Thanks in advance

03-25-2012, 01:04 PM	#6
deathkidkun Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 539	Re: [Sentinel - Int] The Illusionist What key? __________________ How bout helpin me review mine as well?

05-09-2012, 09:00 AM	#8
Loomdun Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 714	Re: [Sentinel - Int] The Illusionist that would be cool if one of his abilities where 2 random effects. the first effect being either Damages the target for X amount to 0 damage. Then the second effect either showing there health not changing from the nuke, a lot of health missing from the nuke, or them "healing" from the nuke, and the actual results not appearing until X seconds. But has a number appear over there head for allies to tell them how much damage the nuke did.

05-10-2012, 08:26 AM	#9
Rangwan Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: The place where the sexiest school uniform exists. Posts: 222	Re: [Sentinel - Int] The Illusionist Feigning death FTW! It just make the enemy feels like wtf just happended and irritated when saw the disgusting message.

06-11-2012, 05:13 PM	#10
NexusBringer Member Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: Brazil Posts: 39	Re: [Sentinel - Int] The Illusionist fire ezalor __________________