[Str - Sentinel] Queine, The Sasquatch Monk

Cobra_Kane · 10-09-2009, 03:45 PM

Hello everybody, i decided to post another of my notepad heroes, this one is Queine th Sasquatch monk, hope you like it ^^

CHANGELOG

Sasquatch Monk
Queine

Strength - 25 + [2.3]
Agility - 19 + [1.9]
Intelligence - 19 + [1.7]

Affiliation:	Sentinel
Damage:	37 - 48
Armor:	1.7
Movespeed:	300
Starting HP/MP:	625/247
Attack Range:	100 (Melee)

Palm Push - (Active)

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Uses your Palm to strike your enemy. The enemy will be Pushed several Units back and recieve Certain Amount of Dmg acording to the distance. If the next attack is HB, then it will deal an increased Dmg, if it´s DS, the Stun time will be increased.Pushed distance is the same as the Dmg. Combo Stance Lasts 6 Seconds.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 50 Mana 5 Seconds 150 N/A N/A Deals 25 Dmg. HB will deal +5% Extra Dmg. DS will stun an extra 0.5 Secs
2 75 Mana 5 Seconds 150 N/A N/A Deals 50 Dmg. HB will deal +10% Extra Dmg. DS will stun an extra 1 Secs
3 100 Mana 5 Seconds 150 N/A N/A Deals 75 Dmg. HB will deal +15% Extra Dmg. DS will stun an extra 1.5 Secs
4 125 Mana 5 Seconds 150 N/A N/A Deals 100 Dmg. HB will deal +20% Extra Dmg. DS will stun an extra 2 Secs

Notes:
PP Means Palm Push, DS means Dual strike and HB means Hand Blast

Dame Type is Pure

Extra Dmg from pushing it´s 1 per distance unit pushed (100 units push = 100 Dmg)

Skill Hotkey is "Q"

Hand Blast - (Active)

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Uses Your Inner Energy to Launch a small Blast from your Hand that Slows the enemy´s Attack Speed by 20%. Blast deals a % of your Base Atk Dmg. If the next attack is PP or DS, it will have a certain Chance of dealing Twice the Dmg. Combo Stance Lasts 6 Seconds.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 50 Mana 5 Seconds 600 N/A N/A Deals 100% Of your Base Dmg. PP and DS have a 5% Double Dmg
2 75 Mana 5 Seconds 600 N/A N/A Deals 150% Of your Base Dmg. PP and DS have a 7% Double Dmg
3 100 Mana 5 Seconds 600 N/A N/A Deals 200% Of your Base Dmg. PP and DS have a 9% Double Dmg
4 125 Mana 5 Seconds 600 N/A N/A Deals 250% Of your Base Dmg. PP and DS have a 11% Double Dmg

Notes:
Base Dmg also includes Bonus Dmg from items/auras

Damage type is Magical

Skill Hotkey is "W"

Skill range is 500

Dual Strike - (Active)

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Uses Both Hands to Dmg and Stun the enemy for a brief Moment. If the next Attack is PP, then it will Push even more. if the next attack es HB, then it will Slow an extra % and also Slows enemy´s mov Speed for the same %. Combo Stance Lasts 6 Seconds

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 50 Mana 5 Seconds 200 N/A N/A Deals 60 Dmg. 0.25 Secs Stun. PP will push Extra 25 Units. HB will Slow an extra 5%
2 75 Mana 5 Seconds 200 N/A N/A Deals 120 Dmg. 0.5 Secs Stun. PP will push Extra 50 Units. HB will Slow an extra 10%
3 100 Mana 5 Seconds 200 N/A N/A Deals 180 Dmg. 0.75 Secs Stun. PP will push Extra 75 Units. HB will Slow an extra 15%
4 125 Mana 5 Seconds 200 N/A N/A Deals 240 Dmg. 1 Secs Stun. PP will push Extra 100 Units. HB will Slow an extra 20%

Notes:
Dmg Type is physical

Skill Hotkey is "E"

Monk Spirit - (Passive)

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Increase the powers of your combo skills. Each time you use a Skill will have a % to recover the same amount of mana you used and reduces cooldown and mana cost by a certain amount.

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Mana Cooldown C. Range AoE Duration Effects
1 N/A N/A N/A N/A N/A 10% of Mana Regain. -10 Mana Cost, No Cooldown reduction
2 N/A N/A N/A N/A N/A 20% of Mana Regain. -20 Mana Cost, -1 Sec Cooldown
3 N/A N/A N/A N/A N/A 30% of Mana Regain. -30 Mana Cost, -2 Sec Cooldown

Notes:
Self Buff Aura

NOTES:

Combo Stance for each skiLL will be replaced with the combo stance from the next skill.

This means that if you use HB and them DS, the HB bonuses will dissapear and be replaced by the DS bonus as soon as you use DS.

If you use a same skill twice on 1 same combo stance, it will deal Half Dmg.

This Means that if you used PP for example, an then you use it again (while PP Combo Stance still active), Dmg will be reduced -50%.

Well hope you like this hero and remember to review and comment about him.

Good Luck to everyone

FlamingFist · 10-09-2009, 03:52 PM

nc concept of skills

i dont review i just give comments ehehe

forced synergy eh

Cobra_Kane · 10-10-2009, 03:02 AM

Bump!!! D:

Cobra_Kane · 10-10-2009, 01:39 PM

Bump again u.u

DGAPwarrior · 10-10-2009, 01:44 PM

Forced sinergy and only it.

T-down

†GodKing† · 10-10-2009, 01:50 PM

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Originally Posted by DGAPwarrior

Forced sinergy and only it.

T-down

It's actually good, the only problem is that Sasquatch never becomes a monk especially with those claws, they prefer to rake than push! Ya know what I mean CK!

Cobra_Kane · 10-10-2009, 02:04 PM

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Originally Posted by DGAPwarrior

Forced sinergy and only it.

T-down

Yeah, it´s forced synergy but, why T-Down? you didn´t even said what´s so bad about them ¬¬

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Originally Posted by †Reichführer†

It's actually good, the only problem is that Sasquatch never becomes a monk especially with those claws, they prefer to rake than push! Ya know what I mean CK!

xD Yeah i know, but that´s the point, it´s sort of "funny" that a big beast like a Sasquatch be a Monk

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DotaGirl · 10-10-2009, 03:29 PM

the model looks like a tank & str type.. but,, the concept is good..

Cobra_Kane · 10-11-2009, 08:47 PM

BUMP!!!. I want reviews plz >_<

Travice · 10-11-2009, 09:04 PM

I don't get why people don't like forced synnergy. I think this hero sounds amazingly fun.

Big T-up for me.

I love the switching between stances and combos and whatnot.

I think you need a different model though, or make him str type. That model definately reflects a strength-type hero.

Cobra_Kane · 10-12-2009, 03:03 AM

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Originally Posted by Travice

I don't get why people don't like forced synnergy. I think this hero sounds amazingly fun.

Big T-up for me.

I love the switching between stances and combos and whatnot.

I think you need a different model though, or make him str type. That model definately reflects a strength-type hero.

Me neither .
Thx for the Support

And ok, il changed the main Atributte to STR. ^^

also BUMP!
i want reviews T___T

pongpongcool · 10-13-2009, 02:59 PM

this hero looks fun, lvl 16 2cd on all skills, crazy comboing

he might need mana items to do his combo, wat a bout his skill build, max 2, or all 3 then max each one individually

HellCraft · 10-13-2009, 09:08 PM

I'm thinking that Phase Boots and Blink Dagger will be core on him since all his spells are melee.

Concept:
I see that he is a nuke spammer type guy, I made a hero like this long back, except that my hero had a 7/7/7/4 skillset like Invoker and had 20+ combos(meaning more than 20 castable spells), the problem was that my hero failed due to extreme complexity.
Let me tell you one thing though, if you want this hero to successfully spam all those 125 mana, 5 cooldown spells in proper combos you need to increase his mana drastically.

Increase his Int and Int gain.

Balance:
Some number changes can be done:

Remove(or reduce) the cooldown reduction from the ultimate. It reduces the cooldowns by 60% which is alot. 2 second cooldown is extremely low and is only used on weak spells(like arc lightning and sticky napalm).

HB is kinda weak, compare this to Weaver's Passive.
Every 4 seconds, weaver does double damage.
Every 5 seconds, you do 150% damage and lose 125 mana.

Good Luck on the hero.

Cobra_Kane · 10-13-2009, 09:26 PM

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Originally Posted by HellCraft

I'm thinking that Phase Boots and Blink Dagger will be core on him since all his spells are melee.

Hand Blast is Ranged, but i forgot to write it

. Thx xD

Quote:

Originally Posted by HellCraft

Concept:
I see that he is a nuke spammer type guy, I made a hero like this long back, except that my hero had a 7/7/7/4 skillset like Invoker and had 20+ combos(meaning more than 20 castable spells), the problem was that my hero failed due to extreme complexity.
Let me tell you one thing though, if you want this hero to successfully spam all those 125 mana, 5 cooldown spells in proper combos you need to increase his mana drastically.

Increase his Int and Int gain.

Balance:
Some number changes can be done:

Remove(or reduce) the cooldown reduction from the ultimate. It reduces the cooldowns by 60% which is alot. 2 second cooldown is extremely low and is only used on weak spells(like arc lightning and sticky napalm).

HB is kinda weak, compare this to Weaver's Passive.
Every 4 seconds, weaver does double damage.
Every 5 seconds, you do 150% damage and lose 125 mana.

Good Luck on the hero.

The low int gain is to balance the hero and prevent people to do a lot of combos in a short time. With this players must choose between increasing hero´s Max Hp and abse Dmg or increase his mana to deal more combos.
About HB, you´re right ill increase the Dmg values. thx ^^
And about ultimate, you re right, the combos CD will be decreased to 0/1/2 instead of 1/2/3.

Thx for the comment, it was really helpfull ^^.

and to everyone else i still want some comments and reviews >_____<

good luck

king_james · 10-14-2009, 11:34 AM

Review as per request. Sorry for the delay. Btw, your spoilers seem to be malfunctioning.

Skill 1 - The concept is groovy (who the fuck says that word

) . The ability to start a combo is rarely seen but is quite hard to pull off. I like the way that you've done this, but isn't it quite forced? Palm Push does nothing but initiate. This part of the combo isn't that great.

Skill 2 - Good. The creativity of this skill is at utmost present. I like the effect of the minimalized double damage on your next combo hit.

Skill 3 - So-so, I liked the skill 2 the best, but this grants you a debuff on your enemy and a chase, a simple yet effective slow. I like the cooldowns of the skills to be quite low at 5, but don't you think the damage is way to high? You can deal over 450 damage at one run of the combo, and doubling a damage of one of the skills will further it up to 550+.

Skill 4 - Simple Witchcraft/Synergy (Krob/Bear). I don't like this skill at all, it creates forced synergy (as if the 1st 3 skills aren't already), but creates a unique gameplay and style of playing the hero.

Overall - I really don't know how he'll be placed in DotA. He's pretty complex in a way to which combo to use (similar to Invoker, but without those hectic invoking). Definitely not newb-friendly, but he can do the job well if you've learned to micro the hot-keys and used him right with the fitting items. Great hero you've got here, you've improved a lot from your suggestions CK, I'd really like to see more of them, its fun to see users who create more and more spectacular heroes.

king_james

Cobra_Kane · 10-16-2009, 03:50 AM

Defense time

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