[AGI-NEU] Brenda, the Tormentor (Nightelf Sentry)

[khaivubui]

CHECK THE CHANGE LOG

March 15 2012:
Rebalances all skills

Oct 12:
Replaces Alpha Shackle with Greed
Replaces Omega Shackle with Alpha Shackle
Omega Shackle is now a sub-skill
Modifies Alpha Shackle and Omega Shackle

Oct 11:
Replaces Wrath with Pride.

Oct 10:
Replaces Torment with Wrath.
Replaces Punish with Sloth.
Greatly modified Omega Shackle.
Modified Stats.

Brenda, the Tormentor

Ganker/Support



Model: Nightelf Sentry



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Background Story: Armed with the weapons of hurt, she seeks out to punish those who sinned.

(If anyone comes up with a better background story, PLEASE reply in the post )

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Str - 24 + 2.1
Agi - 20 + 2.7
Int - 17 + 1.8

Base HP: 556 (with base str calculated)
Base MP: 321 (with base int calculated)

Base DMG: 50 - 56 (with base agi calculated)
Base Armor: 1.9 (with base agi calculated)

Move Speed: 300
Sight Range: 1800/1000

Attack Range: Melee

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Skill 1: Greed

(active) (single target: enemy)

The Tormentor expresses her hatred explicitly towards those who commit Greed. She stabs a target unit in melee range, dealing damage depending on how many items that target unit has.

LVL4: Deals 20 x the number of items that unit has.
LVL4: Deals 30 x the number of items that unit has.
LVL4: Deals 40 x the number of items that unit has.
LVL4: Deals 50 x the number of items that unit has.

Manacost: 80/85/90/95
Cooldown: 8 seconds

Note: Cast range is melee. This is basically a minor nuke with a low cooldown and mana cost.
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Skill 2: Pride

(Passive)

The Tormentor expresses her hatred explicitly towards those who commit Pride. If she attacks a target and it does not move until her next attack, her next attack will do more damage.

LVL4: Deals 15 extra damage if the target hasnt moved since her last attack.
LVL4: Deals 25 extra damage if the target hasnt moved since her last attack.
LVL4: Deals 35 extra damage if the target hasnt moved since her last attack.
LVL4: Deals 45 extra damage if the target hasnt moved since her last attack.

Note: Each attack will place a buff onto the target that grants extra damage to the Tormentor's attacks. Buffs do not stack. If the target moves, this buff will disappear immediately.

Explanation

This skill works well with Alpha Shackle and stuns from other allies. It's also good for farming, since creeps usually remain still during battle.

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Skill 3: Sloth

(Passive) (affects enemies only)

The Tormentor expresses her hatred explicitly towards those who commit Sloth. Nearby enemy units take damage for every second that they dont move.

LVL1: Deals 10 damage every second that the unit doesnt move.
LVL2: Deals 15 damage every second that the unit doesnt move.
LVL3: Deals 20 damage every second that the unit doesnt move.
LVL4: Deals 25 damage every second that the unit doesnt move.

Note: This aura has an AOE of 1000.

Explanation

This skill works well with Alpha Shackle, Omega Shackle, and stuns from allies.

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Skill 4: Alpha Shackle

(active) (single target: enemy only)
(animation: Entanglement)

(This skill creates and upgrades Omega Shackle accordingly)
(This skill and Omega Shackle shares the same cooldown)

The Tormentor doesn't like her prey moving around too much. The Tormentor chains down the target with her Alpha Shackle, preventing the target from moving or casting escape spells (blink, invisible, etc) for a short period of time, dealing minor damage every second.

LVL1: Deals 25 damage per second. Lasts 3 second.
LVL2: Deals 25 damage per second. Lasts 4 seconds.
LVL3: Deals 25 damage per second. Lasts 5 seconds.

Manacost: 115/130/145
Cooldown: 25 seconds. (cooldown will be triggered if Omega Shackle is casted)

Note: Cast range is 800. Target may attack or cast most spells.


Sub-skill: Omega Shackle

(active) (single target: enemy only)
(animation: Entanglement)

(This skill is created and upgraded by Alpha Shackle accordingly)
(This skill and Alpha Shackle shares the same cooldown)

The Tormentor doesn't like her prey moving around too much. The Tormentor chains down the target with her Omega Shackle, preventing the target from moving or casting escape spells (blink, invisible, etc) for a brief period of time, dealing major damage every second.

LVL1: Deals 150 damage per second. Lasts 2 seconds.
LVL2: Deals 175 damage per second. Lasts 2 seconds.
LVL3: Deals 200 damage per second. Lasts 2 seconds.

Manacost: 130/145/160
Cooldown: 25 seconds. (cooldown will be triggered if Alpha Shackle is casted)

Note: Cast range is 800. Target may attack or cast most spells.

Explanation

The Tormentor's ulti is a very spammable single target entanglement skill. But she has to choose between the 2 Shackles, since she cant cast them both at the same time (they share the same cooldown).

Alpha shackle lasts longer but doesnt deal as much damage. Omega Shackle lasts only 2 seconds but deals tremendous damage. The Tormentor must choose wisely since this skill has a 14 second cooldown.

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[Roger Black]

skill1>ensnare with damage..nice
skill2>cant possibly b an anti-carry skill cos it only fully affects those who have less str then she (btw the skill and the notes are contradicting >.<")
skill3>love it..works very well with 1st skill
skill4>basically its a stun >.<"..not lovin it

[TribunXIII]

One word: Overpowered! Tone down numbers.

Skill one: root with 4 sec and 300 dmg and 10 sec CD?
skill two: ist an ulti? no? the whole difference is freaking too much!
skill three: basically the effect of troll warlord but stronger and a higher cap.
skill four 750 dmg, 3 sec stun and a 45sec cd? serious?

also it would be synergize not synchronises

[khaivubui]

The description of skill 2 is messed up. I will fix it immediately

Skill one allows the target to attack and casts most spells. 300 dmg = normal for a single target spell. Ill increase the manacost

Skill 3: yea kinda... there is some significant difference though.

Skill 4: WIll be nerfed immedietly.

[beganovicc]

ok here Is how it rolls.
1st skill and ult wont go.. to disables.. rename from "shackles" to "Excesive Pain". makes enemy moves in RANDOM direction NOT where he clicks you click up he moves čleft or down or right.. . dmg stays lasts 2,3,4,5 sec
2nd skill toooo owning int mages, toooo little cd. nerf it nice idea really
3rd skill. tooooo powerfull, remake it: like shes crazy for hurting people, makes criples.. every attack while not movin err in battle we never move. make it something like this
"you name it" passive skill: her blows make painfull wound, best not to move! BUFF placer, lasts 2 second after attack, 10/15/25/40 phisical dmg'per'sec' if target is moving
soo lvl4 i hit you if you run you get 2sec x 40dmg=80dmg before armor. could be nerfed

Ulti. not original... rhasta like... rmk to something really painmaking.. suggestion

String attached... target nemy hero only. 160/140/120cd 220MCa
Brenda ataches sharp string into her targets soul and puls it away from her body dealing extreme dmg.
2 ropes each dealing dmg based on distance betwen soul and body lasts 3
3 ropes each dealing dmg based on distance betwen soul and body lasts 4
5 ropes each dealing dmg based on distance betwen soul and body lasts 4 sec
dmg dealt in % of distance betwen sould and body multipld by the number of sring
target is able to move free, brenda can move as well CHANELLING works well with 1st skill...
animation: number of strringed "ropes" is attached to enemy hero, spawn (soul)
or "ghost enemy" at same position. as brenda moves she pulls ropes and moves soul, enemy hero moves freely, if enemy is close enough 100 to his soul when end, he recives little or no dmg. works great with first skill (he click forward to follow and hero moves some othern way hahah), with vaccum, with rasta's hex and shackles, with stuns OOO and great with bloods rapture. bodyn is disabled and you run away with soul.. DAMAGE IS DEALT AT SPELL END. Chaneling, can be stoped for less dmg...
Imagine this you cast lvl4 first skill on centaur and ult lvl3. Then blood casts ult. ahhaha
he tries to come closer to his soul but hero runs "randomly" down same lenght he clicked forward. rupture sprays and dmg rapes, your first skills dmg rapes, you run 1000 units from him with soul and he moved down or left 500 units. Ulti ends and BOOOOM no more kent. ehheeh
pm me...

[LimitbreaKer]

Female Carry Hero! T-up, t-up!

Now serious:
1st - fine.
2nd - this cannot exist. Crap. When I get some time I'll maybe suggest something else. But this is just bad.
3rd - Fine, but change the immidietate buff loss after moving to lose eg. 4% IAS per 100 units moved. Really good besides that.
4th. Bad, bad, bad. Copy of 1st skill.

[khaivubui]

to beganovicc:
Your reply is a mess dude. I cant understand what you're saying.



to LimitbreaKer

2nd: Obsidian Destroyer has a skill that takes away 8 inte (stacks up to 3 times) and it lasts 30 seconds dude. Read the description again, you're probably missing something. This skill is only painful against str heroes. I'll nerf it anyways, since too many people complained

3rd: Good suggestion. Though that makes this skill a little bit more similar to Troll's Fervor. Ill think about it.

4th: Its a stronger version of 1st skill that doesnt last as long. I've never seen any hero that has an ulti as a stronger version of one of his skills so i wanna try something new (and maybe extreme). I guess thats not so wise of an idea cauz apparently, simply the fact that it copies 1st skill makes it "bad, bad, bad" :-S

[beganovicc]

well like it or not i reviewed it and if you made a good job i wouldnt have to write as much,,, read it again its good stuff really

[khaivubui]

I said "i cant understand what you're saying", not i didnt read it. >.< i tried, trust me, i tried really hard. I just cant understand what you're saying. (except that most of my skills need changes)

[beganovicc]

they need nerfing or remakes... go read dota mechanics first then post hero suggestions, what other hero you know off with 2 3+sec stuns with dmg??? hahaha kentaur?

[khaivubui]

its actually entanglement... skill 1 allows the target to attack and cast most spells. I fixed the ulti now it allows the target to cast most spells. A lot of heroes have skills that damage and stun 2 or 3 (or even 4) seconds too (most are single target, some even area). But this is not the case here, its entanglement. Single target entanglement.

Where's the link for dota mechanics? i never read that stuff before, i only play dota a lot O.o

ps. As far as i can remember, stun is the most used secondary effect in dota, not counting mini-stun of course.

[beganovicc]

mini stun is bash, i know only 1 hero with 2 dmg stuns, kentaur. or earthshaker and stuns are <3 sec

[khaivubui]

Just realized you said TWO stun skills. I fixed the hero, re-review it if you want. This time i make sure entanglement stays entanglement, not stun.

[Siegfried]

I like the idea but your hero has to be nerfed.

[beganovicc]

Perfect perfect

[Reverse_435]

the first skill has pontential to kill a overfarmed carry at late game