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Old 10-30-2009, 01:03 PM   #1
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Venomous Heart

4600



+15 all atributes
+10 damage
+15 attackspeed
Venomous orb (active)





Ultimate orb (2100)


Blades of attack (500)


Gloves of haste (500)


Venomous Heart recipe (1500)


Venomous orb


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+20 all atributes.
+20 damage.
+20 attackspeed.
Venomous orb:

-Causes attacks to place a buff that slow the movement speed of the target by 20%, slow the attack speed of the target by 15% and damage the target by 15 damage per second.
-buff lasts 5 secs.
-buff placer.
-orb effect.
-Item become orb and buff placer only when activated.

-Activating has a 10 second cooldown.
-Has a 15% chance to cause the effect to the Hero wielder (There is a 15% chance on every attack to cause the wielder to recieve the venomous orb effect).


*-*The chance to makes the item to effect the caster is because its a strong item... a poison orb that can accidently hit the caster that is holding it... so the caster will recive the negative effect that is: -20% mov speed -15% attackspeed and will recive 15 damage per second for 5 seconds.

*****OFF: Working on iten Icon.

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-Ironwood Branch removed.
-Increased recipe cost.
-Attack speed reduction decreased.
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Old 10-30-2009, 01:05 PM   #2
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

First item i've ever made =)
please comment and give ideas..
sorry about my english ;D
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Old 10-30-2009, 01:14 PM   #3
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

did you intend to put viper's poison attack into this item? i say rejected.

re-reviewed for second time. What is the point of off-ing it if it gives +20 all atributes, +20 damage, +20 attackspeed AND lvl 2 poison attack. i think this is kinda off!

next is that "Has a 15% chance to buff caster" which means? has chance to cause venom effect onto the wielder of this item?

lastly, please put a name for your effect... as all auras, orb effects, and even proc effects have name
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Old 10-30-2009, 01:26 PM   #4
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

hmmm its cool but the ability is to strong work on it .. null
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Old 10-30-2009, 01:31 PM   #5
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It looks like you haven't put much thought into the buildup for this item, you've more or less taken random items and lumped them together. Bad recipe = fail item imo.
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Old 10-30-2009, 04:31 PM   #6
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

What means of 15 % chance to buff... ?

I think this item is nice one.
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Old 10-31-2009, 02:30 AM   #7
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

he means 15% chance on every attack to cause the wielder to recieve the venomous orb effect :=
"slow the movement speed of the target by 20%, slow the attack speed of the target by 15% and damage the target by 15 damage per second"

but you do not call it buff or debuff. it is just an effect. just say what the item skill does and that it has a chance to affect the owner as well.

a bit bad in the wording, sentencing but message could be seen by some ><
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Old 10-31-2009, 02:38 AM   #8
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Nice item but the ability is too strong.And the stats bonus ain't that good.
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Old 10-31-2009, 05:24 AM   #9
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

Could you at least straighten up your sentence construction?

sheeshh..

can't understand a thing..

all i know is that this is an imitation of viper's skill and it has a bad icon..

sorry pal..

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Old 12-05-2009, 05:40 PM   #10
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Whats the point? Already got 2 items with slows, SnY and Skadi. useless suggestion.
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Old 12-09-2009, 01:37 AM   #11
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

This suggestion isn't necessary or original, this is basically a weaker eye of skadi and I don't like the fact that it has a 15% change to hurt the user.

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Old 12-09-2009, 12:43 PM   #12
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sorry man t-down
not really needed
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Old 12-09-2009, 01:28 PM   #13
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cool!
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Old 12-09-2009, 01:42 PM   #14
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

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-Activating has a 10 second cooldown.
-Has a 15% chance to cause the effect to the Hero wielder (There is a 15% chance on every attack to cause the wielder to recieve the venomous orb effect).
Remove all these cause they are needless, nerf item if you think is needed for its cost.

I think you need to increase poison damage(18dmg?) and duration(8seconds?) and nerf rest numbers.
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Old 07-17-2010, 02:32 PM   #15
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Default Re: [ITEM] Venomous Heart

T-null,
I'm too lazy too say why did i vote for null.
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Old 10-29-2011, 08:21 PM   #16
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The icon scares me. Didn't read. :<
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Old 10-30-2011, 05:56 AM   #17
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The icon scares me. Didn't read. :<
And you still necro'd it... Good job...
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Old 11-03-2011, 09:07 AM   #18
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Too similar to Eye of Skadi
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