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-Ironwood Branch removed. -Increased recipe cost. -Attack speed reduction decreased. |
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First item i've ever made =)
please comment and give ideas.. sorry about my english ;D |
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did you intend to put viper's poison attack into this item? i say rejected.
re-reviewed for second time. What is the point of off-ing it if it gives +20 all atributes, +20 damage, +20 attackspeed AND lvl 2 poison attack. i think this is kinda off! next is that "Has a 15% chance to buff caster" which means? has chance to cause venom effect onto the wielder of this item? lastly, please put a name for your effect... as all auras, orb effects, and even proc effects have name |
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It looks like you haven't put much thought into the buildup for this item, you've more or less taken random items and lumped them together. Bad recipe = fail item imo.
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he means 15% chance on every attack to cause the wielder to recieve the venomous orb effect :=
"slow the movement speed of the target by 20%, slow the attack speed of the target by 15% and damage the target by 15 damage per second" but you do not call it buff or debuff. it is just an effect. just say what the item skill does and that it has a chance to affect the owner as well. a bit bad in the wording, sentencing but message could be seen by some >< |
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Nice item but the ability is too strong.And the stats bonus ain't that good.
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Could you at least straighten up your sentence construction?
sheeshh.. can't understand a thing.. all i know is that this is an imitation of viper's skill and it has a bad icon.. sorry pal.. T-DOWN
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Whats the point? Already got 2 items with slows, SnY and Skadi. useless suggestion.
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This suggestion isn't necessary or original, this is basically a weaker eye of skadi and I don't like the fact that it has a 15% change to hurt the user.
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sorry man t-down
not really needed
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cool!
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I think you need to increase poison damage(18dmg?) and duration(8seconds?) and nerf rest numbers.
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The icon scares me. Didn't read. :<
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And you still necro'd it... Good job...
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Too similar to Eye of Skadi
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